Date: October 04 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 9: Bottom of the Class
I hope Ms. Evans keeps him down there for the entire day. Perhaps keep him for detention. If he doesn't learn, then take him home to punish him. Surely his family will understand.
There is no way that Ms. Evans will let her skirt fall down. She wants to punish him, not make him horny. Then again, Ms. Evans could have her own ideas and make Tom please her.
Hmm. Tom drooled. Could she feel it. Maybe he does deserve to be punished again!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hehe. She won't be keeping him down there for the whole day, but she will be making another appearance nearer to the end of the story.
Date: October 04 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bottom of the Class
I could be wrong. But, I think Ms. Evans is independently having the same dream.
Author's Response:
Very very possibly, though she wouldn't ever dare admit it even to herself.
Date: September 30 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
It also sounds like he won't be able to walk on his own when the punishment is over(At least not right away), since he mentions his limbs going to sleep.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Probably not.
Date: September 30 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 8: Under Pressure
Sounds like tom doesn't exactly hate the situation, besides the discomfort anyway.
I wonder what will happen if he starts regrowing while under her.
By the way, is she being careful not to hurt him too bad or is she too angry with him to care?
Author's Response:
He'd at least have more room to wriggle around if he started growing. She knows how to use just enough pressure that she won't cause permanent damage; she's definitely done this before.
Date: September 29 2015 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 8: Under Pressure
Finally! This is exactly what I was waiting for!
Every teacher should be as sexy as Ms. Evans. And creative as well.
This punishment is fantastic! I wonder if he shrinks down there, that could be fun. If he grows, soon it will look like a lap dance. Either way sounds awesome.
She said she would give him time. Does that hint at a lot of time with her, or something else, because I would love to see Tom spend time with her.
You know, I just realized as I was writing this sentence that I should've used my first person perspective to review this chapter, because so far, this is the best one yet! Even Tom himself said thank you.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
It means she'll keep him down there as long as his body makes a good cushion. Glad to hear you liked the chapter.
Date: September 29 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 8: Under Pressure
First postscript: "Stretching" is a shrunken man's favorite exercise. ;-)
Second postscript: How much you want to bet that when she asks him if he learned his lesson, he lies and says "no?"
Author's Response:
Assuming he gets the chance to speak again, that's a decent possibility.
Date: September 29 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 8: Under Pressure
Great stuff, we now know that much like the teens that the adults in this universe are also pretty terrible...well it's you writing it so who is complaining really.
Author's Response:
There is no shortage of assholes in this world.
Date: September 29 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 8: Under Pressure
Love it. I hope he shrinks more for Ms.Evans.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Definitely a possibility, if he gets the chance to talk again.
Date: September 29 2015 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 8: Under Pressure
Heh! If Ms. Evans was a drama teacher, conducting a Little Theater version of FIDDLER ON THE ROOF, I could just imagine her singing "Detentionnnnnnnn! Detention" (to the tune of "Tradition")!
Author's Response:
Man, you had to stretch to reach this one, didn't you. ;)
Date: September 18 2015 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 7: Unexcused Absence
Well, since this whole story takes place in this one day, we have no idea what happened last night that makes Tom so nervous about telling his teacher.
He also said it couldn't be made known, does he not want to let her know that he was just a few inches tall or something? That doesn't sound that bad to tell her. Much better than lying and shrinking in front of her.
He could also say he was spending time with his family. Then again, I don't know what happened last night, but that could be the case.
When I began reading this chapter, I thought I skipped something. I was surprised to seem Tom full sized again. I thought the growth process took a lot longer than that and since you mentioned that this story will happen in one day, I thought that meant that Tom won't be full sized in this story because there is too little time.
If my teacher saw me chewing gum, I would have to spit it out. These kids are lucky. Just do your homework, and you're good.
He panicked and swallowed the gum before she yelled "Baker"? Shouldn't that be switched? It seemed like he panicked from something else instead.
What's more important than the work in this course? Um, survival, obeying parents, doing the right thing, spending time with friends and family, making sure everyone is safe, working on a job, helping parents out. I felt like Tom could've made some shit up and it doesn't have to be a lie. I don't know why this question is so difficult.
Then Tom blew his chance by asking "what do you mean?" and then his teacher asked him about last night which now makes it personal. Therefore the 2nd question became harder, but the first question wasnt that bad.
I totally agree with your racecar crash analogy. I too find the crashes a pleasure to watch even though it's downright awful to hope for. In any car race, I find the crashes the most entertaining. Guilty pleasures.
Hmm. I guess we will find out what happened last night soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We'll learn later why it's so important for Tom not to explain himself. The growth process speed changes depending on the speed at which the shrinking happened; try not to think about it too hard, it's not really something the story will address closely enough to make it worth analyzing. He panicked because he suddenly realized he still had the gum in his mouth, which grossed him out. And yeah, he may have dug his own grave with that question. He's an awkward kid.
Date: September 18 2015 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
I agree with Carycomic. This school is not for Tom. He needs to find people who are suitable of helping him.
Author's Response:
In this world, school choice won't really help him; no matter where he goes, he's basically a pariah to at least someone.
Date: September 18 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 7: Unexcused Absence
That's why I never became a professional school teacher. Even the ones who start out all altruistic, like the ones on TV dramas, seem to become more concerned with not being seen as failures in the classroom (for any reason) by their peers.
Which, to me, is one of the worst forms of vocational narcissism.
Author's Response:
Definitely a fair criticism to have against this teacher, though you won't see her being penalized for it in the least.
Date: September 14 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 6: Sister's Backpack Buddy
Mint gum is good for her breath so he should be happy.
Author's Response:
Gotta look on the bright side
Date: September 14 2015 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
short but sweet.
Author's Response:
Like Tom himself
Date: September 14 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 6: Sister's Backpack Buddy
Not much happened in this chapter; Emma and Tom went to a class or two. Tom grew a bit so he's cramped, and Emma is making a second gumball for Tom.
Couldn't Tom just shrink any time he wants? He could just repeat, "I love your gum, Emma" multiple times and for each time he says it, he shrinks. I find it odd how he can't do it. Is there something preventing him from lying like that?
Regained another 12 inches? Wow, that must be one big backpack! Makes me wonder if Emma is going to have a struggle carrying Tom soon.
"Backpack positioned on the floor between Emma's legs." That almost sounds sexy. Just curious, there won't be anything sexual between these two, right? Just fun and games?
Wow, dunking kids into iced coffee! Torture on the next level right there. (Is that what detention is in this school?)
Another piece of gum? I like the idea, but Emma needs to get a bit creative soon. Otherwise I'm going to associate Emma with gum as her method of dealing with Tom. I thought the gum was just a warm-up for something else. Maybe she could color on him, dress him up, make him a puppet, something playful that only Emma could think of.
Tom claims that he has had worse mornings. I really want to know what happens during those worse days. This seems like an average day and Tom is comparing it to his worst days. Naturally, people complain about an average day because they compare it to a good day.
In addition, when Tom said that he had worse mornings, I still can't believe that this all took place in not just one day, but one morning! You do a good job adding lots of detail into this morning, but I think a quicker pace might be better.
Otherwise, good chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
He would need to say that statement to someone for it to count as a lie, though technically he wouldn't want to in this instance, because he wants to regrow enough to go to class. There won't be anything sexual with Emma in this story. We'll see her use some alternate tactics for playing with Tom later in the story. The slower pace is intentional; the whole story is only going to cover one complete day for Tom.
Date: September 14 2015 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: Sister's Backpack Buddy
Again, he could have simplified matters by just saying something like: "You better believe I want first dibs on that second piece of used gum!"
Presto! He's back to a less cramped size.
On a more positive note; I appreciate the frequent updates. :-)
Author's Response:
It might be temporarily convenient to fit better, but ultimately he wants to grow enough to leave for class. Thanks!
Date: September 11 2015 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 5: Hand-Me-Down Hygiene
Like Barrowan, I think Emma and Tom are "cool" with the current situation. Atleast Emma does care about Tom unlike others siblings. I also espect one other character to be shrunk.
Author's Response:
Emma is definitely very ok with Tom's shrinking, but she also cares about him.
Date: September 10 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hand-Me-Down Hygiene
Emma still the playful one I see. I agree that Tom could've fit if Emma just asked him a simple question. At this rate, he is bound to lie to anything.
I bet that is one big gumball in his mouth. Will he be able to spit it out? Or will it stick to his mouth forever and he can't talk, meaning that he can't lie, and boom, problem solved. Nah, that would be too easy.
Hmm. She stores him in her backpack? Some people might bump or sit on her backpack and they can crush Tom. I think might like that. Could provide her with a cushion.
The whole 'brush teeth' thing just seemed like an excuse for Emma to put some use with her gum. I said she was probably careless and lazy and this time, I think she was lazy to throw her gum away so she stuck it into Tom's mouth and at the end of the chapter she said "I guess it yours now" meaning that now she doesn't have to throw it away.
Can't wait to see what Emma has in store for Tom and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yep, Emma's definitely the most playful one. Spitting it out may be difficult until he's regrown a little. And that's probably an accurate guess about her wanting to get rid of the gum.
Date: September 10 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hand-Me-Down Hygiene
I love Emma.
Author's Response:
And who wouldn't?
Date: September 10 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: Hand-Me-Down Hygiene
I hated this.
*shrinks 10 inches*
Is that a big enough shrink?
Author's Response:
Not nearly enough.