[Report This]Date: October 17 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
The old saying "With friends like these, who needs enemies?", comes to mind when looking at how Heather treats Tom.
Seeing as she's the first in this story to make him shrink so much and intentionally.
I'm wondering what he gets out of this friendship is all i'm saying.
Anyway, another great chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response:
Part of it is that he enjoys not being degraded by Heather. She enjoys playing with him, but not telling him he's a lesser person. There are still some character details being withheld on Tom though that we'll get later on.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
Love the story but hoping there is girl liar at some point as well.
Author's Response:
Maybe in a future story. ;)
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
This chapter seemed so sick to me at the end, where Heather pretty much shrunk Tom down to 1/4 inch herself. It just seemed so... wrong.
Phonomeonal chapter though.
Author's Response:
There's plenty in this world that would probably seem incredibly sick and wrong to anyone in ours. And we'll definitely see even more later on. Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
Some beeyotches just don't know when to shut up. ;-)
Author's Response:
He'll learn eventually. Or maybe not.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
I really like the way you write. And I draw a distinction between that and saying that I like your story (though I definitely do like it!): even outside of the fetish aspect, I think you've got a good style.
As for the particulars, the latest chapter is great! I've been eyeing those micro and nano tags and wondering when they were going to kick in. I'll definitely be impatiently keeping an eye out for the next chapter (what I'd give for Ms. Evans to find him now!).
Author's Response:
Thanks very much; I'm glad you like my writing. And yep, the micro/nano tags are finally coming into play.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
I accidentally hit submit.
Continuing off that. Instead of stating another false truth, he could say "this is not a good time". "I shall not discuss those things" "that was private", or some thing similar.
We know Tom is a consistent liar, but does he have to be that bad at it?
You know, I want to see a scene where someone questions Tom, and Tom says the truth, so accurately, that others think it's a lie. They wait for Tom to shrink, and then Tom is like "told ya". I think that will be a good addition to this story.
So Tom is a quarter inch. Can't do much now. How will he get to his next class. Jordan or Heather? Who will be ride with?
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
He's able to do those things on occasion, though most of the time the lies come as a bodily impulse, so he can't really control it. It's like a reflex. Heather may have some ideas about how to transport Tom around.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
I agree that Tom is an idiot, because he should know how to redirect a question and say things that do not necsarily answer the question, so that way he cannot lie.
Instead of
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
Man, the offhand recollections of suffering under sweaty gym clothes etc would make a fine chapter itself. Would love to see more of that,maybe even at a tinier size. The mention of in-shoe is also exciting :)
Author's Response:
Hehe. We might see those offhand recollections, though part of what makes them interesting to me is that such events make up those casual conversations. But there will be more unpleasant situations to come, either way.
Date: October 16 2015 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
In a world like this, you'd think people would understand the importance of just shutting the fuck up. Don't want to lie? Then don't fucking talk. Tom's an idiot of the highest caliber. Like "in the corner with a dunce cap on" level of idiocy.
Of course if he isn't an idiot, then that just reinforces my theory that he just really likes being small.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Well, it does have to be remembered that Tom is a compulsive liar. So saying these things is a bodily impulse. We'll hear more about the reasoning for all this though later on.
Date: October 11 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 10: Respect the Word
Well... this brings back really awkward fantasies about my self rightous English teachers. Anyways, good stuff as always.
Author's Response:
Heh. War flashbacks. I'll get around to commenting on your story's end too one of these days.
Date: October 11 2015 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
Ms Evans is interesting....
Author's Response:
She certainly is.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2015 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 10: Respect the Word
Ms. Evans is quite wonderful.
Author's Response:
She certainly tries her best.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2015 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 10: Respect the Word
@ TS: it certainly ain't a good thing!
;-D
[Report This]Date: October 11 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 10: Respect the Word
So Ms. Evans is teacher for English and history. Her personal history that is. She can teach Tom a lot of things.
We also can tell that this is not Ms. Evans first time don't this especially when she mentions that they are part of her "throne."
Tom is right. Why stand up when you are just going to get embarrassed? If everyone sees you, then they make fun of you. Tom likes his position anyway. Might want to sleep there too. Ha.
When Tom said "snapped like a twig", was he referring to his boner, or his whole body? If it's his boner, that just sounds awful. Not that snapping his body is any less awful, but snapping a boner in half just sounds more cruel.
Wow, Tom must have good taste buds! He tasted fabric softener, leather, and perfume-enhanced sweat all from just one lick? That's talent.
So what exactly DOES Tom do during lunch? If he can't do certain things and needs for help, does he actually do it on other days, or is he making fun of what he could do?
I really like her passion for language and reasons for teaching English. She likes to read and I assume writing as well and it suits her.
Most important tool is our word? Hmm. That's debatable, but since she is an English teacher, it makes sense.
That truth part came out of nowhere, but I can tell that this "word" and "language" thing had to connect to Tom's current position. That connection seems to be: Word-truth-liars-Tom.
She takes this word thing way too far. It's the "world around us", our "sacrament", "gifts". She defiantely got carried away. Tom probably didn't understand it.
Ms. Evans molests people who molest the truth. That's sound accurate. And she protects the truth by sitting on them? This is kinda funny. I think she's making all this stuff up just to scare Tom. Also, she probably sits on them for other reasons....yeah.
That second to last paragraph was awesome. The way she tugged on his feet so his head gets dragged under her butt. That's a creative idea.
Good chapter, it shows us Ms. Evans intentions on smothering Tom. We learned about her past and how often she uses this method of 'teaching'.
I guess lunch time is next chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
He was referring to his boner. Not literally, of course, but it was a though that crossed his mind.
Tom can normally avoid lying enough at least to get his own lunch, but today he's not doing so well.
Regardless of whether or not Ms. Evans has gone too far, she definitely believes everything she's saying.
Thanks for reading. Lunch is next up, yep.
Date: October 11 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
@Carycomic, haha. Don't make it sound like a bad thing. :)
[Report This]Date: October 10 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: Respect the Word
What does she plan to do? Sit on him until the end of the school day? And then what; take him home with her if he still hasn't re-enlarged enough?
New World Order or not, that's still kidnapping. And, that's just plain wrong!*
*Good Lord! I've contracted Tomspeedyitis.
Author's Response:
She can't necessarily kidnap him, you're right, but there's still plenty of gray area here that her colleagues or students would be willing to turn a blind eye to.
Date: October 10 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 10: Respect the Word
Ms Evans trying to wear the mask of a decent intelligent human being.
Author's Response:
In this world, she's not much different than the standard of decent.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 9: Bottom of the Class
Love this story. You're still my top author.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2015 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 9: Bottom of the Class
Good to know he's getting some enjoyment out of this.
By the way, what incentive does she and the other teachers have to not harm those that shrink via lying too badly? Besides them not being needlessly cruel i mean.
Author's Response:
Eh it's still up to her discretion. Sort of a case where people are willing to look the other way for punishments that don't leave lasting marks, but if he's actually been badly hurt and can't function then there's a problem even though he's a liar.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 9: Bottom of the Class
Great stuff as always
Author's Response:
Thanks!