[Report This]Date: November 11 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 15: Liars for Pick-Up
Looks like Ms. Evans is about to perform some after school detention on Tom. Perhaps a round 2 of what happened earlier. Maybe this time, she actually puts him in her pants or even panties. I doubt she would got that far, but you never know. Ms. Evans has to step up her lessons.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Your guesses are partially right. Next chapter will show which part.
[Report This]Date: November 11 2015 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 15: Liars for Pick-Up
I'm beginning to extremely dislike Mrs. Evans. And I feel safe in assuming I wouldn't shrink if I said so to her face!
Author's Response:
She probably wouldn't have much of a class if students could choose based on teacher rather than subject.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2015 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 14: Put to Work
I wonder how Heather keeps from accidentally swallowing him.
Author's Response:
70% practice, 30% plot convenience.
Date: November 03 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
Great chapter man.I love heathersplayful but devious nature.Will we see more of her in the next chapter and will she be putting tom anywhere besides her mouth?
Author's Response:
Thanks. There will be a little more Heather to come, though she won't be putting him anywhere else in this particular story.
[Report This]Date: November 03 2015 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 14: Put to Work
You seem to like writing about mouth play. 3 chapters of it back to back to back.
It also feels like the majority of the day has been in Heather's mouth with all these mentions of periods passing by.
Will there be more mouth play, or will someone else or something other body part play with Tom?
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I definitely get a big kick out of mouthplay. In the upcoming chapters though we'll see Tom interacting with other characters in areas other than their mouths.
[Report This]Date: November 03 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 14: Put to Work
I honestly don't see Tom and Heather's relationship going anywhere, but south, after high school.
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, Tom lies too much to be choosy about who his friends are.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Mouth is Never a Home
Heather? You definitely put the "miss" in "misguidance counseling." :P
Author's Response:
She definitely puts the misguidance in anything, really.
Date: October 30 2015 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
That aside about being crumb sized and trapped in saliva-laden gum under an unaware girl's shoe was phenomenal! Would love to get more of that!
Author's Response:
Hehe. Maybe in a future story.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
I have to say, this is an incredibly unique and well executed concept. I love your work dude, and this has got to be one of my favorites, so I'm excited for more to come!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks. More is coming soon.
Date: October 23 2015 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
Excellent chapter, I kinda hope Heather takes him home to "hangout" and have more fun *wink wink*
Author's Response:
Possible, though there are other people who'd prefer to take Tom home instead.
Date: October 23 2015 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
What a frustrating end to this chapter - Just when it was getting to the good part!
Author's Response:
The good part will be carried on in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
Great stuff my good man.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
Who needs enemies with acquainances like Heather?
Author's Response:
Tom's probably just grateful to have people calling him a friend.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
Why do I have the feeling that he is going to die? I don't want him to, but it just has that feel to it.
I wonder if she can feel Tom on her tongue. Seems like some thick pudding, and she might not tell where he is.
This is tricky, because Heather needs to use more force from her tongue to move the pudding, but she has to be gentle with Tom.
Maybe Tom grows inside her mouth. Perhaps that is how she will find him.
Gooey chapter, talk about a tasty treat for Heather.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I guess we'll find out by the end of this. You're right that it's probably tough to find Tom in there, but Heather knows what she's doing.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 12: Proof in the Pudding
With friends like Heather, he's better off with just acquaintances.
Author's Response:
Probably true.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2015 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
Absolutely amazing!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: October 18 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
Lol! I was referring to Heather.
Author's Response:
Hehe. I figured. Heather is well aware they'd prefer she shut up, but has no intentions of doing it.
Date: October 18 2015 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
The emotional sadism in this story just keeps getting... better? worse?
I love it, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I like to think it's a combination of better and worse. Thanks for reading!
Date: October 17 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
Excellent chapter, I'm interested to see what Heather has planned ofr the little liar.
Author's Response:
We'll see quite soon. Thanks for reading.
Date: October 17 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buddy System
I literally made an account just to say how much I like this story so far, great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for doing that. Glad you're liking the story.