[Report This]Date: December 13 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rub a Dub Dub
I can't help but think about it too hard. You make this particular world too easy to get involved with! ;-)
[Report This]Date: December 13 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner-By-The-Foot
Ugh! Gives new meaning to the term "corn mash."
Author's Response:
That it does.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rub a Dub Dub
Always good to see a Jacksmith updated.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rub a Dub Dub
I don't think I am going to like the next chapter. Emma seems like an annoying preteen, but at least she is creative unlike her siblings. Also, my dislike for feet doesn't help either.
I do however, like this thought of the dinner table and the thought of everyone eating together unaware of where Tom is.
Maybe they will ask Tom some questions. "So Tom. How was your day?" Tom replies. "I was in a mouth, gym bag, under an ass, in a bra, and now under she toes. Linda answers "sounds like a normal day".
I don't think Tom is a stranger to this treatment. I hope something exciting comes up and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Emma's really just being more teasing than airheaded like she might seem. The dinner scene won't go quite like that, but hopefully it's still enjoyable.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rub a Dub Dub
If Linda is anything like Alaina, she's probably going to serve Tom-tom some chicken-fried crow. ;-)
Seriously, though: this parallel-Earth is becoming more and more of a drag to vicariously live on. If people automatically shrink at the telling of even little white lies, how do parents preserve their children's innocence at, say, Xmas time?
Author's Response:
Tom's mother isn't nearly as vindictive as Alaina, though she's not opposed to some casually demeaning play, as shown earlier. The world definitely isn't meant to be an attractive place to live for readers. The answer to your question is: don't think about it too hard. ;)
[Report This]Date: November 24 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
Since it's established that anyone can shrink if they lie, any chance we'll see someone besides Tom shrink? I can't help but hope Alaina gets a taste of her own medicine at some point.
Author's Response:
Tom is the only one who will shrink in this story, but I plan to make this into a series.
Date: November 23 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
This is an awesome piece of work I truely have none I prefer at this point in time, excellent job
Author's Response:
Good to hear! Glad you like.
Date: November 23 2015 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
You're doing amazingly well, it's got simple yet descriptive language; some really strong plot development (in terms of how characters feel and interact with Tom).
My biggest question if i had any qualm with this, is that i can't see where it's going; it might still be too early in the story, but it seems to be very repetitive in terms of how all the angrier characters are like "you're small, that angers me" and then proceeds with otherwise great depictions of punishment; so i guess what i'm asking is what are your plans for this story? will we see this godess of truth?
Past that, it's one of the best stories i've read.
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it. We're actually much closer to the end than the beginning here. I hope it doesn't seem too repetitive; every character has a slightly different reaction to Tom's actions, even if they all enjoy playing with him to some extent. The last chapter will give a better picture of the point of all this.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
A pleasant surprise to see you write one of my favorite aspects. Though my pity and sympathy for our protagonist in this peculier context didn't make it easy to enjoy this chapter. Humiliation is one thing, but blatant disregard is another. Something about skewed senses of justice that go unpunished really grinds my gears. If that's what you were shooting for, you did a terrific job.
I am a little confused as to where you're going with this story, however. Is Tom supposed to learn the error of his ways through these tortures, or is everyone else? Or is it simply his fate to endure these fetishistic activities for good, as that is his place in this bent universe?
Great chapter as usual.
Author's Response:
You're definitely not meant to feel affection for Alaina. I like frustrating readers with the tiny's treatment. Admittedly this story is servicing the fetish more than the narrative, but the final chapter will help explain the point of all this (and give a hint at where things are headed in later stories).
[Report This]Date: November 23 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
Ah, poor guy...
Author's Response:
Poor guy indeed.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
With an older sister like Alaina, he's better off falling out of her armpit and fending for himself. :-(
Author's Response:
It's possible that crossed his mind.
[Report This]Date: November 19 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 16: Purest Way Possible
Another great chapter!
Though i wonder, doesn't Ms.Evans realize he might not find being squished by her bare ass completely unpleasant? Or is the victim been turned on by it something she just doesn't consider?
Author's Response:
She might've considered it, but she intends to do it in such a way that he can't really enjoy it.
Date: November 18 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 16: Purest Way Possible
So disappointed we won't see Ms Evans get to play out her little threat!
Author's Response:
Gotta save some of the crazy stuff for the sequel.
Date: November 18 2015 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 16: Purest Way Possible
One of my favorite things about your writing in particular is that you give me world where the rules are completely different, and a character, in this case Ms. Evans, who has world views that would seem bizarre to someone from our reality, and you make me completely believe and get into their reasoning. She is such an interesting character because she is so dignified and has the resoning to justify her actions and motivations. It's something that I rarely see on this website, and it makes it such a treat to read your writing.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you feel that way! I love exploring bizarre psychologies in macro worlds.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 16: Purest Way Possible
Poor Tom, such punishment.
Author's Response:
Much fetish.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 16: Purest Way Possible
I'm not sure if her rear end is the purest way possible. I would've thought that the front of her panties would have been more pure.
Either way, I love the little threat. And the best part is that Tom is likely to lie again and will end up down there.
Will they meet again before this story ends? I hope so. Ms. Evans is my favorite character so far.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Well, the rear end probably makes the most sense if she's using him as a mini throne.
We won't be seeing Ms. Evans again in this story, but I plan to write more in this universe later on.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 16: Purest Way Possible
HER truth??? And what "truth" might that be? That all shrinkees are lying masochists who are just testing her patience and/or faith?
I'm sorry. But, even in this NWO, what she's doing (or even threatens to do) is just plain criminal abuse. Physically, mentally, emotionally, and undeniably .
Author's Response:
You're definitely right.
[Report This]Date: November 11 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 15: Liars for Pick-Up
Great stuff looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks man
Date: November 11 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
100th review!
Well, the first part of my review seems more likely to be true so I believe that will happen next chapter. He is getting an after school lesson in detention, but probably not by being sat on. (That would be awesome if she sat on him again.)
Author's Response:
Maybe, maybe not...