Date: October 07 2015 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Oy vey... you ever gonna fix the tagline to your story?
Hint: (defet)
Author's Response:
Thought I already changed it but I'll do that ASAP. Thanks for letting me know.
Date: October 07 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 7: Showdown
Thrilling end to the story, does this mean Omega will come back?
Author's Response:
Maybe he will, maybe he will.
Date: September 30 2015 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Ouch, so small but so deadly! Hang in there Jessica!
Author's Response:
Yep size isn't everything.
Date: September 23 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
So it starts, Omega's evil plan and already our heroes are trapped.
Author's Response:
INDEED!
Date: September 16 2015 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Jessica's first encounter with Omega only she doesn't know it yet. Dawn will be starting school soon and I hope it goes well.
Author's Response:
Everything will come to pass soon
Date: September 09 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: Buried Treasure
I'm waiting in anticipation for that action! Really nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I'm guessing the fact that there was a sex scene didn't sway your opinion.
Date: September 09 2015 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 3: Buried Treasure
Roleplaying? Cool scene between the two and now I guess we know how Tucker catches up on Earth entertainment.
Loved this chapter so much!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you did. Hopefully others did too.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 2: Riot!
I admit to not having read the other accounts of your story series, however, this is quite intriguing and very enjoyable!
Author's Response:
You really should read the original series at least
Date: September 02 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 2: Riot!
Ultron...in the flesh.
Author's Response:
Not so much the flesh.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
I wonder if Dawn is a difficult child? Because if she is then leaving Tucker alone with her could be dangerous, just saying. I've met little kids that would destroy their parents during a tantrum if they had the strength to, and Dawn goes far beyond just "more strength" in comparison to her normal human father. Anyway, I'm looking forward to this one, it's not a prequel so I have no excuses not to read it.
Author's Response:
Well Dawn might be relatively well behaved, we'll have to see. Prequels aren't all that bad.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Just a quick question-
How long will it take for you to update another chapter?
Also I forgot to rate in the previous review.
Author's Response:
It'll be a week before the next chapter is released. That's the rate that I write and thanks for the rating.
Date: August 26 2015 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Wow. I loved it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you do.
Date: August 26 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day
Nice start, a lot of catching up and it seems Jessica is only getting stronger too!
Author's Response:
Well intense training will do that to a girl.