Giantess World
Reviews For The 250 foot girl
Reviewer: tinykev49 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2017 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 2. Lindsey takes action.
Date: August 18 2017 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 2. Lindsey takes action.
I love the worship from the tiny ones and the giant goddess Lindsey clenching up her butt cheeks and jiggling them!!! More of that please!!!
Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 3. Scared to death
Date: September 02 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 3. Scared to death
Just a grammar mistake I noticed:
"I was just admiring you butt cause its nice,"
The you should be your.
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed 
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Date: September 02 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 2. Lindsey takes action.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 2. Lindsey takes action.
Liked the photo.
However, many incongruities in the story.
For example: Why would no one call the police when Bill assaulted and kidnapped Max?
And what's a "tang top"? : )
Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 2. Lindsey takes action.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 2. Lindsey takes action.
So far I like it but a couple of critiques:
-Your dialogue seems a bit choppy in places.
-You seem to rush through the action a little too much, give it some time and build up the plot instead of directly jumping into there.
But some nice things too:
-Long chapters.
-Characters seem decently developed.
So 8 stars.