Date: August 31 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter Three
I wasn't aware of the email receiving function if I fsvorite someone, but I check the site multiple times a day so I don't really think I need the emails.
Phoneomal chapter by the way.
Shall I beg some more for you? :P
Author's Response:
You can beg if you wish. I'm not sure that this chapter was phoneomal. There wasn't really any action.
Date: August 31 2015 9:17 AM Title: Chapter Three
Boobies, the ultimate in psychological warfare!
Author's Response:
Well, unless you're a strictly hetrosexual woman. This story has been fun to write so far. I hope it can inspire new writers. Feels like I'm just writing it for two or three people though. Ten people have me as a favourite author and I've heard nothing from them.
Date: August 29 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Last part I didn't see*
Overall I really enjoyed the dogfight, it had tension and now we get to the part where Sidney must choose his next move carefully or end up dead.
Author's Response:
Ah yeah, there will be more life changing decisions to come I'm sure. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hopefully Nyx is sexy too.
Date: August 29 2015 4:42 AM Title: Chapter Two
Okay that last part I did not part, even as the guy helping you with the story.
Author's Response:
Any comments on the part you didn't see? Gaintesslover122 seems to have really enjoyed the chapter. If you have any suggestions on the part you didn't see I'd love to hear them.
Date: August 28 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Okay, so things I love about this story...
1. The plot building in the prologue.
2. An actual, legitimate reason for the giantesses/goddesses.
3. The long chapters.
4. Though I hate to say this, the cliffhangers.
5. The main character doesn't seem flat.
Author's Response:
Sounds reasonable. I will hopefully keep you interested with chapters to come. I noticed you haven't actually added any stories to your favourites list on Giantess World though. Did you know that if you do that you will get e-mails as soon as new chapters are posted? If you add favourite authors you'll get e-mails each time a new story is posted.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2015 11:01 AM Title: Chapter Two
Oh. My. Fucking. God. This is currently my most favorite story on giantessworld. But why the hell would you leave us at such a cliff hanger?!?!
Please continiue. I beg of you.
Author's Response:
I don't understand. How can you have decided this is your "most favorite story on Giantess World" so soon? What is it, in particular, that you like about the story?
I don't really like cliffhangers myself. because I'm impatient, so I guess that makes me a hypocrite. You know, I would love to be able to experience this story as a reader and not know what's going to happen. I'm actually rather jealous of your position. Your begging, although drastic, pleases me. It makes me want to write more. If only more people were as enthusiastic as you apparently are.
Date: August 27 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
The way she acts, the power she wields on top of that beautiful gigantic body. The kind of girl who knows how hot and sexy she is and thinks she can get the boys to do anything but likable to not make you hate her. You know its wrong but you kind of hope she'll notice you so that your existence will be acknowledged by her. That kind of sexy.
You can mention my name unless its to discuss unreleased work by me, stuff that should remain confidential until stated otherwise.
Author's Response:
Confusing, but I think I understand. I'll try and built upon that. Hopefully other giantesses can be as sexy as Eris. I'm not sure I would describe Eris the way you have though. She doesn't need the humans on the ship to do anything for her and is, I would say, bullying them. But the beauty of art, especially writing, is that it is open to interpretation. However I do see your point that she would be hard to truly hate by many.
Date: August 27 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
I think I was the one who said Eris was unbelievably sexy, it was the vibe I got despite seeing so little of her.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was you. However I didn't want to mention you by name in that context, without your permission. What is it that makes her sexy? Anything in particular? I'm not exactually sure since I've just writing about the sort of character I planned.
Date: August 26 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter One
I don't know too much about Eris yet though, so I won't say anything on whether she is sexy or not.
Author's Response:
Well, we'll be meeting other giantesses before we return to Eris. Rest assured, she will return. But not for a while I suspect. Hopefully you find at least one of the giantesses in this story sexy.
Date: August 26 2015 6:45 PM Title: Chapter One
Wow! This chapter is as good as the other one, if not better! And the fact that the godesses think they're so much better makes it even more realistic. Well, at least as realistic as a giantess story can get. But I can imagine this happening in the future.
Probably wouldn't be too good though.
Author's Response:
I try to make my stories as realistic as possible, where possible.Only Eris considers herself a goddess by the way. The rest are not goddesses (only giantesses).
What can you imagine happening in the future? If you mean the giantesses, there is for the existance and it's not natural selection. It will be explained later why the giantesses exist. If you want some spoilers (and this will enable you to give feedback on the plot) you can e-mail me.
Date: August 23 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
I like the plot building. Hoping for another chapter as good as this one.
Author's Response:
The next chapter is much longer and I can inform you that there are giantesses in that chapter. Whether or not it will be a good as this one is hard to say. But people here like giantesses, so my guess is yes.
Date: August 23 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Not a bad setup! I look forward to a more action oriented story like this and I'm really glad to see you've started writing your story. Anyway I don't have much to comment on the plot thus far, I'll wait and see what else is to come first. Anyway keep it up the good work!
Author's Response:
It's so nice to hear from you. I've been discussing the plot with the wonderful Nostory. We've had a healthy debate on the story and it's been very helpful. Once I've written chapter three I think I'll feel ready to post the next part. I was always afraid to post this story in case I ever get bored of writing it, but if you like it then that's an incentive to keep going.
Date: August 23 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Got the email you sent, will reply when I've digested it.
Date: August 23 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Prolific reviewer yes, writer not so much but I'd love to help out. You can send me the chapter whenever you're ready.
Author's Response:
I have used the contact button on your profile here to send you a message. Hopefully you will recieve an e-mail. Thank you for your interest.
Date: August 23 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Oh sorry, I meant shouldn't go but wanted to say stay. Got it all mixed up. Reviews definitely do help, its nice to see people leaving comments. Hope you finish it, this one feels like it is going to be great.
Date: August 23 2015 10:06 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Also would like to say you're right, you shouldn't stay because of a few dubious stories.
Author's Response:
Don't you mean, "you shouldn't go because of a few dubious stories". The website had so many anomalies it feels like it's slowly crumbling. However, Giantess City doesn't appeciate literature as much as the members here do. There's a lot going on in my life right now, and I'm trying to learn Daz3D too, but hopefully I'll be able to conclude this story. I always used to shy away from writing multiple chapter stories because I was afraid I'd gradually lose interest in them. I guess getting lots of nice reviews would be a motivation though.
Date: August 23 2015 9:09 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Eris, Greek goddess of chaos up to no good here. Sidney seems to know she is a giantess and I can't wait to see her and know what makes this self-proclaimed goddess tick.
Sidney seems fleshed out and good thing too since he'll be carrying the story for a bit. Great to see you writing again!
Author's Response:
I've potentially commited myself to a new story. I haven't actually done that much character planning but if you think Sidney is "fleshed out" then thank you. Maybe I can blurr the lines between good and evil with this story.
Eris is the name the woman has given herself. She is not actually the Eris of the Greeks. All of the giant women in this story are named after Greek goddesses. Their origins will obviously become apparnt as the story progresses. We briefly encounter Eris in the next chapter, which I am curently editing, but after that she dissapears again. Seeing as you're a prolific writer and reviewer, and you appear to have a great interest in this story, I could send you the chapter for analysis/feedback (before I upload it) if you like.