[Report This]Date: September 20 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter Eight
So is she mad at Nyx or Wayne? To me seems like Nyx didn't do anything. Could it be that Persephone is angry at Nyx for not killing the guy for acting all high and mighty? If that's the case she's a lot more vindictive than I thought, but then again all Angels have bloated ego's so even if she's the "nicest", I wouldn't put it past her...She still kills/eats humans that disobey her or aren't useful to her and she still sees humans as inferior creatures just like every other Angel we've been introduced to so far in the story. Anyway this information about Angels being created by humans seems to make sense.
I don't think such powerful beings could be created naturally through processes like evolution, it just doesn't add up, such a powerful entity is overkill in the cogs of evolution. If I WERE a human and created such powerful creatures, I'd put a killswitch or failsafe incase they ever turned on humanity, I'd wager that Wayne knows something about such a failsafe. If that's the case then maybe keeping him alive is dangerous to Angels, maybe that's what Persophone is worried about...If that's the case then even getting involved with him could put Sidney at risk himself.
I wonder if Sindney would destroy all angels if there were a failsafe and he was the one deciding? Would he destroy Persophone? Like I said before, Persophone "seems" nice, because she likes Sidney and so far, we only have his perspective on the matter, but what about other people? Does she treat all her subjects decently or is it only a select few? And of course, she's not so nice to the people she eats...Anyway, great chapter!
Author's Response:
Obviously Persephone hates Eris much more than both Nyx and Wayne. If Persephone wanted, I'm sure she could forge a new life in a distant part of the galaxy/universe, away from both humans and Angels, as was mentioned in the chapter There are hundreds of billions of stars in the Milky Way alone, many of them with multiple planets orbiting them, and many of those planets will have moons of their own.
I think she's just angry at the suggestion that, in her view, simple humans, could have designed her. Keeping Keeping Wayne alive is a Faustian Bargain for the Angels who know. It can help them defeat Eris but they wouldn't want the secret to get out of course.
I have put some thought into how Eris is ultimately confronted. I think Wayne hates Eris as much Nyx or Persephone. Could it be guilt that drew him?
True Persephone eats humans. But I must correct you something. She has alluded to being lonely several times so I don't she would eat humans simply for not being 'useful' (e.g. her 'adopted' daughter, Althea, was once a baby and therefore not useful to her), unless a shortage of food forced her to perhaps. But yes, she does eat humans that succeed in sufficiently annoying her (i.e. refuse pledge their allegiance to her).
Date: September 17 2015 8:05 AM Title: Chapter Seven
I wonder what happens next between Persephone and the main characher :? I really like this keep moving. Also are the other gts/angels on the ship tall as the main character or taller?
Author's Response:
Maybe Persephone and Sidney will have more sexy time? Or Maybe she'll him? Who knows? She seems like the most reasonable Angel right?
As a general rule there is one Angel (giantesss) per flagship. All of the gianteeses in the story are about the same height. Therefore, Sidney is always about twice as high as an Angel's big toe
Date: September 17 2015 7:38 AM Title: Chapter Six
WOw :O
Author's Response:
What's so fascinating? I can guess you enjoyed Sidney's fighter being abused. Thanks for your review.
Date: September 17 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter Five
I like where this going :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. Anything in particular you like about the story? I'd love to know.
Date: September 16 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter Seven
Great chapter! Some steamy scenes in this one! Also, I don't know if this has been answered yet but do angels need to eat in order to live? Do they need to eat humans to live? They CAN die as proven in this chapter with Nike dying, I wonder what it would take to kill one of them, I'm assuming it would have to be by another angel, but then who would kill Nike if Eris was upset about it and Nyx knew her?
That implies that an outside party killed Nike, maybe humans? Also we haven't seen male angels, and Persephone has the hots for Sidney, does that imply that angels need to mate with human males? This is a speculation on my part but I DO like Persephone, despite her lustfulness she seems like the most reasonable of the angels. She eats humans and DOES look down on them but in my opinion whereas Eris and Nyx see humans as roaches, Persephone sees them as cute little gerbils or hamsters or something like that...I wonder if my comparison made sense?
Anyway, great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your extended review. I have sent you an e-mail with answers to all of your questions. If anyone else has questions, or would like to see the answers I gave to gadgetmawombo, I will gladly provide answers.
Date: September 16 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Seven
Haha, what on Mars!
I guess its a natural evolution of our slang as humans spread out across the galaxy.
Author's Response:
The first instance of the phrase "What on Mars" was in chapter three (I just checked). You make it sound as though you've only just noticed the phrase. Anyways, thanks for the review.
Author's Response:
The first instance of the phrase "What on Mars" was in chapter three (I just checked). You make it sound as though you've only just noticed the phrase. However you touch upon an intersting point: People don't often consider slang in their stories. A giantess comes along and she starts speking exactly like an English human would and no consideration is given to slang terms.
Date: September 13 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter Six
Stop writing so amazing-ly. You're making everyone else look bad!
Just kidding. Don't stop writing. :D
Author's Response:
Well, I wouldn't say that, There are many great authors on this website. I don't get what's so amazing about my writing,
Date: September 13 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter Six
Wow, Sidney just grew a pair, and all it took was a destroyed ship. If Sidney is really useful to the giantesses and he dies I wonder how easily they'd be able to replace him. The fact that they scouted him makes it seem like replacing him wouldn't be easy. All he has to do is not care if he dies, with that, the giantesses will probably have nothing to leverage on him.
If that happens they will have to WIN him over to their cause instead of just giving him an ultamatum of live or die. I don't think too many gts stories on this site have characters just don't respond to threats like that. Then again I guess that makes sense since a big part of this fantasy for men is being dominated by a woman and being the submissive one.
Author's Response:
Let me assure you, he will be won over willingly. That will come soon. Hopefully Persephone is in the mood for some Sidney, as Nostory said and he won't have to fear for his life (for a while).
And yeah, Sidney is not your typical make character on this website. Since I'm more into gentle stories myself, I tend not to get 'turned on' by being dominated (though I do like a maternal giantess) so you could say there a little of me in Sidney. Having said that, I want the story to be believable so I wanted Sidney to behave like an average man.
Date: September 13 2015 7:37 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
If we're lucky, she might be in the mood for some Sidney.
Author's Response:
You mean like, have sexy time with him? If I were in his situation, I'd be hoping for some compassion. Let's hope Sidney isn't used and abused.
Date: September 13 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter Six
Best not question their eyesight but focus on surviving!
Execellent chapter and of course, excellent scene with Nyx there!
I cannot wait to see what you've planned for Sidney and Persephone.
Author's Response:
And I am sorry for the 'cliffhanger' again. I knew where I wanted to end the chapter and, as I like to write at least 3,000 words for a chapter in this story, I felt the need to add more detail where I could. The additional detail doesn't hurt of course. I don't want Persephone to be as evil as Nyx or Eris. But who knows what she could be in the mood for?
Date: September 08 2015 2:01 PM Title: Chapter Five
If Sidney didn't care about dying I wonder if he still would have switches sides? How bad is Eris? Can she really be that much worse than Nyx or Persephone, all of these giantesses seem to not care about humans that much and are super egomaniacs. If Nyx were to ascend to the ruler would humanity be better off I wonder? Anyway, good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your interesting review, Gadgetmawombo.
Well you'll have noticed that in chapter five, Nyx claimed Eris had something that she wanted. As Giantesslover122 said, this story has lots of "twists and turns" so you can never be sure what to expect. Perhaps in Sidney's mind anyone has to be better than Eris so it wouldn't matter if Nyx is only slightly better, or just as bad – but he might refuse to accept this because of confirmation bias.
Given that Nyx wants to be in charge, and will attempt to kill Eris, that would obviously cause conflict between the giantesses and maybe Sidney can use this to this advantage. Remember, Persephone also wants to be in charge so there's potential to pit giantesses against each other if he's clever/careful. Any infighting would weaken the giantesses.
My plan all along was to blur the lines between good and evil. You're right that the giantesses are all "super egomaniacs" though. But I hope I've shown enough subtle differences so it's clear that each giantess as a unique personality. These differences should become more apparent as the story progresses.
Date: September 08 2015 7:17 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
I checked out Giantess Love, and I noticed that Subiectum, an author here, had already posted one of his stories over there. Personally, I feel like I like the interface more than I like the one of giantesscity (I made an account) but giantessworld is still my favorite site, seeing that I'm more into the reading than the imagery.
Author's Response:
One advantage Giantess City has over other websites is that its content is not indexed by search engines. Search engines and the Internet Wayback Machine cannot get past the "Warning Page" that appears if you haven't signed in. This is handy for people who would like to publish their work, since posting your literature to the World Wide Web counts as it being publish. You can freely publish portions for review but never the entire thing.
I signed up to Giantess Love myself and one thing that annoys me is that I can't find a "sign out" button/hypertext. Apparently is was built from scratch but how can you miss out something as basic as a "sign out" button. Fortunately, I have my web browser delete all session cookies upon close.
Date: September 08 2015 7:11 AM Title: Chapter Five
Holy fuck. I can't tell if Persephone will crush the ship?! Usually I'm good at predicting what comes next, but this story has so many twists and turns, I can't!
And Nyx realyy doesn't seem too different from Eris.
Just one quesiton: what's the size difference between Nyx and Persephone?
Author's Response:
I hadn't planned to have any size differences between the giantesses, including Eris. Nyx may not seem too different from Eris, but what about Persephone? Then again, with all of the 'twists and turns' it must be hard to say for sure...
Date: September 08 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Your cliffhangers are superb! I could definitely learn a thing or two from you when it comes to that. Endings are not my forte. Now we'll have to wait a week to see what happens to his ship.
Author's Response:
Well, I already discussed what's going to happen with you so you have an advantage. I'll try and get back to you with the next chapter as soon as possible. I generally find clifferhangers annoying since I hate having to wait, but I understand their value.
Have I really bene that goold with cliffhangers though? I can't recall having one at the end of every chapter. I'll take your word for it of course.
Date: September 04 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter Four
This is a pretty cool story too, I might get into this one...
Date: September 04 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
@GiantessLover122, you can still join. Its good for 3D renders and 2D drawings but not so big on stories. However, you can gain a new audience.
As for this, loved how sexy you made Nyx and when Sidney realised how much bigger she was, it was the perfect ending for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Well now there is a new website, apparently, known as Giantess Love. Me personally (I'm somewhat stubborn), I'll be sticking to the old ways. Maybe I'll create an account, maybe I won't. Plus, I'd need to change my DNS to access it. Thanks for your feedback. The next chapter is in progress so I'll work on it over the weekend.
Date: September 03 2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter Four
I was interested in joining giantesscity, but seeing the convo between you and nostory made me decide against it.
Great chapter, I loved the surprise that our protagonist (sorry, I can't remember names too well) got when he realized she's bigger than he thought she was.
Author's Response:
At Giantess City people seems to be really suspicious of each other. Many members seem to think that most giantesses are actually a male pretending to be a female. Females get driven away from the website by people who think their penis is more important than good manners. I go on Giantess City out of habit. I actually hate the website, but I don't feel that there is a better forum for macrophiles. Giantess Love is a new website, apparently their forum is finally up and running, so maybe you could try that website. Let me know what you think of it if you do.
Date: September 02 2015 3:50 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
I still have yet to read the other chapters of your story, however, I am intrigued by the interaction of your characters and enjoy what is in this first!
Author's Response:
Well that's good. Let me know when you've read the next chapter! Hopefully you'll like them just as much.
Date: September 01 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
I'd love to hear how the story does there, was always curious to know how the giantess stories would fare outside of fetish sites.
I agree that City can be a frustrating experience, The Escape got a lot less reviews there except for a dedicated few whom I salute for following it to the end.
Author's Response:
Well a quick search reveals BlackNaptune/Solar Crimson is present at Fiction Press, as are The Big Friendly Giantess series of stories. There's a page worth of stories thta include the word giantess in either their title or their description. Obviously, that would not give the full picture because this story (Gems of the Sky) would not show up by typing in the word "giantess" into the search.
Date: August 31 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Thats the site for you, only a small percentage of authors will take an action to show they like your work, be it a review or favouriting you. Better than City though. Getting some response is better than none.
Author's Response:
Yes, at the City I got even less attention; I regret sharing my stories there as they have been tossed aside. And then people wonder why most authors don't conclude their stories. A view is meaningless because it doesn't tell an author if their story was liked or not.
I might create an account on Fiction Press just to see if I'm recieved any better on there. Would be a good experiment - even if not a scientific one. They allow stories up to M, so I should be fine. I would assume this story is a 16+ (not 18+) though.