Date: November 29 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
If you do get your own server and create your own website, send me an email. I want to post my stories there :)
Great to hear you will be finishing the story here and I really hope there are more additions to the site's features.
Date: November 26 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
I love this story, would love to see you at least finish it here. I wouldn't mind the new layout if the most recent, featured sections were still here. Not to mention the top 10 lists, its all gone! Hopefully this layout is not the final version. I got to say though I'll miss the shoutbox. Wonder if stories will be read more now that the front page is missing the most recent display.
Author's Response:
If you would like to know who the top ten most prolific reviewers are/were, I was sad enough to create a spreadsheet for that. All you'd have to do is update it regularly by going to each of the ten profiles of the people listed on it. I might even have an old screen shot somewhere, and the page might still exist even though all links to it have disappeared. You can e-mail me for that. One of these days, I'll have to buy myself a server and start my own website, and I'll make sure improves upon Giantess World, for a brief period my favourite website.
I've had a change of heart about this story, and I will not disrespect the reviewers by removing it from this website. I had hoped to have it completed by the New Years, but it now looks as if it will run into 2016. Fifteen chapters was a gross underestimate. I expect at least another four more chapters.
Date: November 26 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter Forteeen
I completely agree with you on the new giantessworld look. The old one was convinient and easy to use. This one is much more difficult, and God help me, I can't find the shoutbox. Wondering if they took that away.
But about your story, I liked the chapter. Not too much action, but the psychological aspect makes up for that.
Author's Response:
Yeah...why is there is suddenly German in the story navigation. And what happaned to the table of contents? So many issues. But thank you for your kind words.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter Forteeen
Jeez most women in this story are crazy, Sidney really has a lot to deal with. I think Sid should explain WHY he agrees with Wayne and the doctor in a way that flatters Persophone. Theres just no way a process like evolution would ever concieve beings like angels, they are simply too over the top powerful. It makes sense to think they were created as weapons or something. Now of course thats if Sidney is even given the chance, Persophone doesnt seem to want to listen to reason in any way. I suppose deep down the angels are just fragile women and id understand why they wouldnt want to agree with something as screwed up as: they were created as weapons by humans. Great chapter though, this is definitely one of the lowpoints in tjis story for Sidney. Im interested to see how he gets himself out of this one.
As for your note, I really hope you decide to at least finish this story here, Im too used to this site and have too much to keep track of in my life so I doubt Id remember to go to a new site looking for this story. I dont like the new layout either but Im sure ill get used to it just like I got used to all the previous layout changes.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. I'll see what I can do, both in terms of the next chapter and this story. I believe Sidney has been down the flattery route before, and it's worked.
When you say you'd doubt you'd check other websites, I hear you. That's my fear. I do aim to complete this story. If I do ultimately decide to remove it I could always keep you updated by e-mail.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
I read the chapter, Althea is a creepy woman. She's has this childlike innocence to her but that same innocence is what allows her to say and do such brutal things with no empathy or remorse. I suppose being raised by a sociopath like Persophone was another factor. Persophone IS the most well adjusted angel, no doubt but that doesn't mean she isn't a human-eating sociopath with a god-complex...I can certainly see why Althea came out the way she did. And despite it all there IS a nugget of truth to what she's saying, these people DID attack them and probably deserve some consequence. But what she (and Persophone) AREN'T seeing is everyone else near the attackers that are completely innocent in all this!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Sorry I took so long to get back to you. The new Giantess World has left me in shock (I'm considering moving to a different website; I am in negotiations with Giantess Fatale about opening a store there, but am planning to also offer my stories for free there). Hopefully the next chapter will be satisfying, but I'm not sure how many more will be posted to Giantess World.
Date: November 12 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great to see you back and once again, we end off with an exciting cliffhanger! How will Sidney convince Persephone to spare the outpost? Honestly,we're currently going through a period on the site these past few weeks where the really good authors are not really posting updates or starting new stories.
Author's Response:
I'm inclinded to agree that the standard of liturature has fallen recently, However, what's good and what isn't is enitrely subjective, of course. I'm certain things will pick back up again. I would hope that stories such as this one can inspire as well as entertain.
I've begun the next chapter already and I have several idea to remove the tension. Writing a story is complex, as I'm sure you're aware. But I can't wait to have this story done so I can move on to other things. Obviously, though, I want to make sure valued readers get a decent conclusion.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
These chapters are written so well. I love is story so much.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2015 11:19 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
This story is amazing so far. I haven't been reading and reviewing lately. But I'm enjoying your story alot with the time that I have. You have always been one of my favorite writers.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. I noticed I am in your favourites list. It's so heartwarming to see comments like yours. Hopefully you'll have the time to read the upcoming chapters.
Date: October 17 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Wait so Wayne created the Angels? Does that mean Angels are a fairly recent thing? I got the impression from this story that the Angels have been around for a long time, but if Wayne created them then it must all be fairly recent. And like I said before, why wasnt some kind of killswitch implemented? I would think that would be one of the top priorities when developing such powerful weapons that have minds of their own. Anyway good chapter!
Author's Response:
Q: Wait so Wayne created the Angels?
A: Not exactly. Not alone is what I mean. There are others who collaborated. More on this in the next chapter.
Q: Does that mean Angels are a fairly recent thing?
A: This will be elaborated upon in the next chapter. In short, no. That's if you class a couple of decades as 'recent'. I can't remember if I mentioned how many years the humans have been fighting them. Just because Wayne created created then that doesn't mean that they are 'fairly recent', as you say. Wayne is approaching old age.
Q: Why wasn’t some kind of kill-switch implemented?
A: You have to remember Wayne is withholding information, at least until he gets what he wants. They may be a kill-switch or they may be a different way to kill them. Or Wayne could simply be lying about knowing how to kill Eris.
Date: October 17 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Althea is childish but dangerous, very dangerous! Wayne and Tom have some sibling issues there, wonder if it will be covered?
Author's Response:
I plan to cover sibling issues. But to what extent I don't know. I suppose Althea is dangerous. But she's fun!
Date: October 10 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Sorry for taking so long to review, busy with school tests. I think it doesn't matter how many people you seem to be writing for as long as those people give feedback, as long as you enjoy it.
Persephone and Althea were fun to read and that cliffhanger puts our hero in a very precarious situation.
Author's Response:
The dreaded cliffhanger strikes again. You know, when I first added this story, I was worried I'd get bored of it. But I have not, and that amazes me. A couple more chapters, and it will be the longest story I've ever written.
I think about this story a lot. I cherish it. I've thought about it more than any other story I've written. I'd say give it another month and I'll have this story completed.
Date: October 08 2015 6:59 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
I am soooooo sorry!!!
I was really caught up with offline life, but I came back on today and saw this on the Most Recent page, so naturally I jumped in.
I like the interaction between Persophone and Sidney, and I hate the cliffhanger, but I'm striving for more.
Author's Response:
With all the talk of mass shootings recently, I was worried. Welcome back. Hopefully you enjoyed the previous chapters just as much. The goes on regardless of you being there to see it or not.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
I'm glad you took what I said to heart, you didn't really need to change anything and the story would have been fine but now that you've introduced elements of actual danger for Sidney to overcome, it'll make his triumps that much more impactful! And as I said, with any luck, he'll be able to prove his skills!
I also want to say that I really dug that moment of self reflection that Sidney had on his way over. So he really DID think Persophone might be too dangerous to keep alive. Like he pondered, Persophone is a walking contradiction, and probably the most complex character in this entire story to be honest. Nyx and Eris are more typical, "I'm bigger are better than you puny humans so obey or else", type characters.
Persophone has elements of that in her character but like Althea said, she seems to want more out of her life than just subjugating humans and ruling with an iron fist. But at the same time she eats humans by the dozens and even has threatened to destroy an entire base of humans should they defy her in the slightest. I hope she gets some character development, I really think she's the most interesting character and probably the character most likely to evolve as the story progresses.
Great chapter, I really did like this one! The cliffhanger I could have done without but it's a necessary evil when writting a story chapter by chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
This chapter was going to happen eventually regarldess. I have notes for all future chapters written now. I think Persephone has no choice but to eat humans given the circumstances. She would need to find a planet with an atmosphere suitable for growing things to live any other way. When you say chararacter development, do you mean her becoming more benevolent?
Date: October 06 2015 3:32 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
It's cool, there nothing wrong with fanservice, like you say, this IS a fetish site after all.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter Ten
I wonder if Persophone would carry out that threat if he died? She's shown to not kill humans for useless reasons and to me killing humans to somehow punish someone who's dead is not a good reason to kill them. Anyway, the rest of the chapter was pretty good, although it kind of seems like you're stalling with the mission, every time I think: this is the chapter where he's going on it, it's pushed back by another fanservice/character chapter like this one...
Not that I don't aprechiate these chapters, mind you, but I just think that Sidney needs a chance to do something awesome to prove himself first so that Persophone's attention is more realistic. Right now, it's as you say: they barely met and he hasn't done anything for her cause yet. Also, and I guess I can't blame him, but Sidney really does think with his dick sometimes doesn't he? At least break up with you're GF or something if you want to be with Persophone in that way, you know? Then again, she's not really giving him much choice, is she?
Great chapter then, I'm eagerly awaiting the next one, and also awaiting the chance to see Sidney really prove his worth!
Author's Response:
A few points:
Persephone like Sidney pysyically, although already knows Sidney is competant because she mentioned humans she and Nyx have cpatured in the past talking about Sidney. And also he was reccomended by Wayne. But remember, Persephone could be using her body to get what she wants out of Sidney. It's not as simple as her giving him attention just for the sake of it. He's male and she's female and she can, and will, use his penis against him.
Whether or not it's fanservice is debatable. Well to me anyway. I want to develop the relationships. Maybe there are elements of fanservice but I wouldn't say it's just purely for fanservice. I don't view any of the characters as fanservice characters as they are all necessary for the story. Even if I had giant men, there's no guarantee I wouldn't use them for fanservice too. But the overwhelmingly male audience at Giantess World wouldn't appreciate it I'm sure. “It's called GiantESS World therefore no giant males” is a lame thing to say in my opinion.
Nostory assured me having more interaction (you refer to it as fanservice) would get more people reviewing. That hasn't happened so far, but that's fine because I enjoyed writing this chapter. I'm not saying you, or anyone, should blame Nostory though. Nostory has been valuable to this story. But this is a fetish story after all. I assure you the next chapter will what you want. Sidney will prove himself, I assure you.
Date: October 05 2015 8:47 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
So much fun, Perspehone seems more accessible in this one, probably because her adopted daughter is with her and her toy Sidney, who probably won a lot of points wit Perspehone for his last words to her.
Author's Response:
I hear you. Hopefully he won big. He just needs to keep stroking that massive ego of hers and eventually she *might* think more of him. There next chapter should have some more action in it.
Date: September 27 2015 1:32 PM Title: Chapter Nine
Reading your paragraph at the beginning made it seem like this chapter was gonma be boring but I didnt think so.
Author's Response:
Well look, I didn't think there was enough going on in this chapter. But apparently there was just enough. I should probably remove it, seeing as you're not the only person to comment on the chapter notes. Glad you like it.
Date: September 27 2015 6:26 AM Title: Chapter Nine
It wasn't boring, we got more things to think about like: Why doesn't Perspehone capture mining ships? Will Sidney be getting lucky tonight?
Author's Response:
Maybe Sidney will get lucky, but it might be a faustian bargain If he accepts. We'll just have to wait and to find out Persephone's reasons for ignoring some ships and not others. I wish I didn't know what was going to happen! It sucks that I'm the author.
Date: September 20 2015 7:45 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Wayne is one mysterious guy, he is now a key player in the fight against Eris and Nyx.
Date: September 20 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)
Yeah I forgot about Persophone's daughter, she wouldn't have been useful for a good chunk of time.