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Reviewer: ThickBeast Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2023 6:01 AM Title: A Tasty Meal

Damn Jessica is one cruel mastermind. Her, Jennifer, Marissa, the Softball and Basketball girls all have their own personal foot boy. For me this'll be great, for Adam really feel bad. 

Should have begged Ms. Pritchard to stay with her, under her foot and that you'll change under her guidance lol. If you made a compelling genuine argument she'd agree. Better the crazed school girls 

Reviewer: Upbeatblackops Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2021 10:17 AM Title: School of Feet

Someone doen’t use there brain to figure out adam couldn’t have stolen the panties at his shrunken size

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2017 7:25 PM Title: School of Feet

It's a very boring story just some kid every body hated there's nothing to the plot oops sorry there was no plot



Author's Response:

There are some who want to read action. I'm such a person. Not one to be bored by endless monotony. 

Reviewer: crissis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2016 8:04 AM Title: School of Feet

I like your stories a lot and I hope you continue to write till end of ethernity :) 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2016 4:15 PM Title: School of Feet

Lucky little guy.



Author's Response:

He's living the good life. What an ingrate. 

Reviewer: Drex Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 6:08 AM Title: A Tasty Meal

Oh cool! Was pleasantly surprised when I saw the new reviews for this and checked it out! Poor, poor Adam. Nice to see Jessica back again for round 2!

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2016 8:09 AM Title: A Tasty Meal

Glad to see you came back to this story, keep it up!

Reviewer: Seabee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2016 8:05 AM Title: A Tasty Meal

Great work, and extremely well-written!  I love this story!

Reviewer: Gtsbootlover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 10:14 PM Title: A Tasty Meal

Glad you continued this! great read!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 7:30 PM Title: A Tasty Meal

Excellent.

 

The only way I'd change is make the tiny a girl and possibly have the team torture the teacher too.

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