Reviews For Highscool Fun
Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: August 12 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
very rough! you need to do some edits to clean up the mistakes!
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: August 12 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
A lot more separation of character dialogue and narrative text is needed.