Date: June 21 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 40
This story seems far from over. Some questions:
1) How did Imogen survive without any warding?
2) What happens now that Rachel has discovered a shrunken man?
3) How does Anna get to the state she's in in the first chapter? She doesn't seem that sadistic yet.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the questions. I did leave this tale with a few loose threads and could certainly have continued it but chose this point as my exit. To address your questions. 1. Imogen survived with Anna’s and Veronica intervention though she was greatly damaged by Inanna. Further Imogen's resistance while far less than Anna’s assisted the others in helping defeat Inanna. 2. In my mind Rachel discovered Valen and that could a whole other story. :) 3. The Anna we see in chapter 1 is unleashed at the end of chapter 9 when drunken Jerry tries to force himself on her. At that point Inanna's influence over Anna is very strong. We see elements of that same kind of influence in Imogen affecting her dreams though the second gathering hastily preempted their preparations to perform the rite so the influence was lessened plus Inanna was still weakened from the attempt to inhabit Anna.
I hope I have adequately addressed the very valid concerns you've listed. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 40
I liked this story. It was a fun read about taking revenge on very horrible people. But alas, it is not really finished. Anna and Veronica still aren't safe yet. Hope they can defeat all their enemies for good, so they can enjoy their powers without having to battle the goddess inside of them. They deserve some happiness after what they've been through. Veronica even managed to get a fun pet out of it.
Author's Response:
Lol no they're never really finished though I did want some measure of closure. Rachel going to the house and finding a litthe one (Jim, Valen, and Trent were all there) left an opening. Darlene and her next attempt. I never clarified veronica mother's fate or Imogen's parents. Where do they go from here? So yeah I left a lot on the table and found myself attracted to other projects. There about a half dozen others works on the go and I'm still trying to rework Mo's Story. Hopefully one of the new ones catches your interest. :)
[Report This]Date: June 20 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 40
What an epic conclusion! Much better than Hell Hath no Fury's conclusion. This one did not feel rushed and it end beautifully.
I'm not sure where did a tiny person come from, but it does leave me imagine all sorts of possibilities.
Bravo!
I can't wait for your next story!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom. Please let me reiterate how much it means to have you along as the story unfolds. I love your input and look forward to the next one as well!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 38
Guess that even some bullies repent from their actions at the face of death. Seemed sincere, maybe. Veronica is more merciful than Anna, not sure that she would keep him alive. Also not sure how long she will keep Trent. One thing is to hold in check the hunger when the little one is a loved one, like Velen, but if it was Trent probably won't have second thoughts about giving herself into pleasure as his life certainly would means nothing to her.
Author's Response:
Veronica is not nearly as affected as Anna so her threshold is higher. You are absolutely right about the difference between how she feels towards Valen compared to Trent. When messing with Trent grows boring she'll have no reservations about sliding him down her throat.
Date: June 15 2016 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 39
I have this feeling that this is a trap for Anna. Rose knows a lot of this ritual and I think Rose wants the goddess to destroy Anna.
Darlene assumes that her meeting was performed correctly and thinks that Rose's ritual is the same. Hopefully, Darlene is just saying these things just to give Anna a chance to arrive on time.
So Veronica is coming and Veronica's mom is already there. I think Veronica is the trump card here. She is the unexpected powerful girl since everyone just thinks it's just Anna.
What if Anna finds Imogen and has some lesbian fun before the ritual contaminating her body and therefore preventing the goddess from taking control. Nah, that would be too easy. I expect some supernatural fight going to happen.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom as I respond to this review I have already completed the story and glad you liked this better than some of the others.
Date: June 15 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 39
I skipped this over for a long time. I figured that I wouldn't like something that's very violent. A few days ago, I read the first chapter on a whim, with a bit of trepidation. Good in medias res start. I got curious about how things got to that point. I read on, and I really liked it, and I can see why. It is violent, sure, but it comes out of interesting characters. I was able to enjoy that, whereas in a porn without plot story, there is no character development to do that. I also like the Sumerian elements and this story's approach to magic. It reminds of things I read about a long time ago, and haven't touched in ages. Keep going, I like this current direction, and I want to see what ultimately becomes of Anna and Veronica, and everyone around them.
Author's Response:
I very much appreciate the fact you were able to overcome the initial intro for this story to find the currents layered within it. I am often times conflicted on justification for action, why would someone do that? I wanted to show sacrifice and betrayal with damaged elements that keep you guessing. While I write this I have essentially wrapped this story up though like most others there are lingering questions. Again thank you for taking the time to read this story and share a review. :)
Date: June 14 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh!! I thought Mr. Collins and Trent were the same person. Like I thought Trent was Mr. Collins's first name.
Now that makes sense.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2016 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 37
You know, I wish it was like the beginning of this story where it was Anna vs everyone. Like where she is hunting those that have harmed her.
Now it's like this story is getting out of control with all these new vessels. The felt like it ended, but now it started again as if you began a sequel mid-story.
Also, what happened to Anna's mom and the others that have tried to use her as a vessel?
Not sure I like where this story is going, but I still can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
This one is coming together nicely and all will be revealed in the next couple of posts. Hang in there....
[Report This]Date: June 11 2016 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
Ok, it's making sense now. Imogen is the vessel that doesn't have scars which means that she will die and a goddess will be born.
I sense a clash between Anna, Veronica and Imogen. Not sure what will go down.
Looks like the villian in this story is society and how everyone seems to be striving for power. Anna and Imogen are victims to society.
I agree with Valen. Hard not to be scared when these girls with superficial glowing eyes are giantesses and staring at you right after they swallow another guy.
At the end of this chapter, it was a little confusing and I thought she actually swallowed Trent and I was going to review saying that Veronica should have played with him. It was only the last 2 lines that made me realize that he didn't die.
I thought she swallowed him because in the same paragraph Verocina "sucks him into her mouth" and then I thought he was swallowed. Then somehow he was in her fingers and that's when I wondered, did she spit him out? I thought he was still in her mouth. Might have to clear that up.
Anyway I'm glad that Trent is still alive. If your dying wish is to be with thisgiantess, then I would be dissapointed if I got swallowe right away. He deserves some playtime and I'm glad he will get that wish.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Veronica swallowed the teacher mr collins putting fear into Trent. His fate will be revealed next post. You will like it.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 34
This is the most random chapter I have ever seen! I mean, how is this related?
Don't get me wrong, I like this chapter, but what does it have to do with anything. It felt like another story.
Quite a detour. I wonder how you will connect the dots on this one.
I can't wait for the bent chapter!
Author's Response:
I'll bring together shortly then it will make better sense :)
[Report This]Date: June 06 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 33
Poor lamb. So silly, innocent, fool and helpless. Can't take care of itself neither choose what is best for its own. No wonder its need guidance from a shepherd, otherwise it would simply jump out of a cliff without even realizing the danger. Now we have two wolves protecting and loving their precious little lamb, separating it from the rest of others that are just food, their little best friend they love it so much and so dear. This one is special... The silly lamb just need to realizes that. Silly, foolish humans can't even see the truth before their eyes.
Author's Response:
Very astute and keen understanding of this chapter as the 'girls' try to educate their small seemingly irrational friend. "You don't need to be afraid so why do you tremble so lititle one?"
[Report This]Date: June 03 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
Well, this is quite a transition chapter. Valen wakes up and understands his position.
The whole chapter was the girls explaining what happened. It was very nice, but I felt like a little more could've been added this time.
Still, I envy Valen. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I wanted to demonstrate the widening gap between the girls and everyone else. They think nothing of their fun with him and he is becoming more and more afraid of them. The story is about to take shift very quickly
[Report This]Date: May 30 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 32
Lucky Valen!
Author's Response:
Yep, only that he wasn't conscious to enjoy it... poor guy
[Report This]Date: May 28 2016 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
Glad you mentioned the wrist slit scene. Otherwise I wasn't sure who was this guy. We met him like a year ago.
Damn, Anna. "We will humiliate you, then shrink you, then we play with you, then torture you, then fuck you, then we eat you, then we shit out you, then we fuck you again, then we kill you, then we ressurect you, then we fuck for a 3rd time, and then we kill you again". Lol, that's how Anna sounded like. Nonstop ideas of fun.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
I was going to give this an 8, but then I read the last paragraph, so now it's a 10.
This seems to be a random upload. Usually, you upload multiple stories at a time. Curious why the change.
Still, great chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
I was also going to add Michael and Tom, but I had an issue with my computer, :(
[Report This]Date: May 26 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 29
You have provided us with a story so intriging that since my previous comments, I have not been able to move away from the story. Now, I can only wait for the next chapters, hoping they are not too long in coming!
Author's Response:
Wow, it looks like you powered through this whole story is fairly short order. Thank you very much for providing insight and thought along your read (the drug/dragged was very helpful). I had stepped away from this story for a while unsure of how I wanted it to proceed but have since returned with more chapters coming very soon. Please continue to share your thoughts and opinions as we delve deeper. :)
Date: May 26 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm sorry to have to mention this, but you have used this non-verb too many times:
drug -- is a noun only for medical and recreational materials;
dragged -- is the correct form for the verb 'drag', as in drag, dragged.
Author's Response:
You are absolutely correct and thank you for bringing this to my attention. I have fixed this one and have also discovered the improper usage of the same in two other of my stories. thanks :)
[Report This]Date: May 26 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is not the type of story I usually find of interest, BUT, I find it the type of story that needs to be told more frequently. You have incorporated several different themes that are currently among the sadly, but highly publicised and media-broadcast problems in our society. Please keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
This story is atypical of my usual prolonged and character building chapters before we encounter any giantess. It is a very dark and brutal intro and the hope was to provoke readers into finding out why. Using sensitive subject matter to bond my protagonists gave them a commonality beyond the routine teenage drama and allowed them to find others who had endured horrible things.
Date: May 25 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 29
Well, this was quite a return. For some reason, I actually remember these characters and I didn't have to read prevoius chapters about it.
Interesting to see Veronica all aggressive like Anna was.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
the adage power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely. The seems to be nothing to stop these girls...seems :o
[Report This]Date: May 25 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
So surprised, and incredibly happy, to receive the e-mail notification of new chapters from this story! Really, really like the details on feelings described. Especially for Anna now that she has this absurd amount of power and superiority compared to all others. I feel frightened for those she loathe now, like Trent, which already has a doom clock on their lives; and also can't help but to tremble, feel a mix of awe, 'safe fear', love and protection for those she likes/loves/craves, like Velen or Jim. Things that Veronica seems to also be learning and experiencing now. Wonder how long the humanity will last, or if all she will crave will be the feeling on its own and what they can give to her, like a product, treating others as nothing more like precious 'treasures' of feelings to be harvested and consumed. Without any real feel for them.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review LJin, sorry it's been so long (vgiv gave me a nudge and reminded me there was still some unfinished business here). The real battle coming for Anna and Veronica will be not distancing themselves from humanity or the human condition because once they are able to objectify human beings, they lose he ability to empathize making it easier to do whatever they want. You may see some of that put to the test very soon...