[Report This]Date: September 16 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Did I just see a force field? Lol. What is this magic?
Wow, Adam died just like that. No mercy from anyone, they regarded him and even Anna as filth.
Wow, Anna literally fought herself. She was punching, thrashing and even scratching herself till she was bleeding. However, the weakened body only makes Anna suffer and the goddess will likely rise and that's exactly what happened.
Blazing green eyes. So now people know it's a goddess. If she walks on the street, anyone can see her eyes and be scared.
What I wonder, is that is Anna really gone? Adam told her to remember what he taught her, but that's not important anymore if she is dead. Also, Anna lost this battle so I bet Anna will do something surprising later on which means that I don't think she is completely dead.
I hope that smile from the goddess means that she can destroy all these "servants" of her.
Now that would be awesome.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
I just want to see the goddess rip everyone up except Adam. I know that Adam was preventing the goddess' arrival to save Anna, but all the other adults are the bad guys and justice Should be brought down to them.
Also, I love how fast and entertaining the plot is. The main event, the climax seems like it's next chapter, when we shall see the awakening.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
So very soon
Date: September 02 2015 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh fuck. Holy fucking god(ess).
Author's Response:
Some shit gonna go down.
Date: September 02 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I had to re-login again after that review. Whew! Glad i finished it.
Also, at the end, I meant, I haven't used the "really's" in any other story other than "Tom's story".
So yeah, that was a wicked chapter. Good stuff, good job, etc. The plot is fabulous!
You know how to makes things deep without screwing it up. So many people involved that it seems realistic.
Such a good story! I think this one is going to be special. I don't know how, but it's going to break some barriers, get some achievements, perhaps some recognition from lots of people. Somehow there is something in this story that just feels powerful. Like wow, impressive writing.
Ok, I'm done with the compliments for now. I really, can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
So far this story should not be called "Anna's awakening". More like "Anna's downfall". We got glimpses of this goddess, but it seems like Anna is going to die soon. (Of course she isnt gonna die, but u know what I mean.)
The story has been covered up in lies. Who is going to unravel the truth?
We got a lying mother that lies not just to the world, but to her own daughter. Serves her right for her new husband Jerry to get destroyed. That's right, no more fun for you Darlene.
Next we got this community that accepts the sacrifice of a girl. You would think that this would be some strange community in a cave or something, but no, these are parents and a freaking school principal! Like wtf! These role models for children are sacrificing this girl.
Next up, we got these stupid camera crew that I just wanna slap em and steal their cameras and record them instead. Like they are so nosy and it bugs me that this could be any celebrity instead. I mean, isn't there other news going on in this neighborhood? Sure Anna got scars, but that's all the public knows. They just witnessed domestic abuse, and it's the top story in this town? No robberies, hostage situations, missing people? Man, this town is boring. And why didn't they film Anna as they left the house with her mom and Brenda? They decided it wasn't important anymore?
Now the police. So we got all these guys in uniform that are ordered to take Adam to jail and now that he is freed, they can go back and get him? I know there is some proximity rule after coming out of jail, but wow, someone calling 911 already! Damn. It would've been funny if a famous prisoner got out and walked to reporters like "Yo, I'm back" and scare the crap out of everyone. And now the cops are going after the man trying to save Anna and not after the mom who wants to kill her.
Basically, this is one big mess and only one thing can stop it. Ianna. Why? well, she is a goddess and is basically invincible. She can then roam out and soon people will understand why Adam is cutting Anna. In addition, Darlene is not completely aware of Ianna's power. She and Brenda were stunned at the death of Jerry and Caleb.
I kinda wish Anna made up a lie to Darlene. She could've said "oh, the dark thing inside me told me a message." "What is it darling"? her mother asked. "Well, the dark thing said that I must not die this year, or else the thing will come out and...." Anna's voice trailed off. "What is dear? Tell me, please! I can help." Darlene asked. Anna nodded her head. "....and kill you" she finished. Darlene took a step back and a moment of silence filled the room.
Man, Darlene is just too confident. I wish Anna would've said something like that to her.
Wow, rarely do I get pissed off of characters. Good job. It's been a while since I became connected to a story like that. I want to fix it asap!
I haven't said this in any other story, but I'm going to insert the "really's" in this one.
I really, really can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
It's awesome to hear a character has stirred an emotional response in a reader means I'm doing something right. There is still a fair bit left to this story and there will be more surprises along the way. As always thanks for tracking not just this story but pretty much all of them. It's rewarding and gratifying when people take the time to share their thoughts ideas as the story unfolds.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
As always, good story, Duggernaut.
A few typos. Could have used a little more proof reading.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the heads up, cleaned up the typos. It's funny, I go through them, seems okay, then I'll give it a read and WTF? Thanks for reading the story and sharing a review. I shall endeavor to be more vigilant - sloppy writing detracts from an otherwise good tale, :)
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
In the second sentence, you said Barley when I bet you meant barely.
Hmmm. Lots of planning going on. Looks like a showdown coming up.
You know, this story is kinda reaching that 'complicated' stage. Now we got all these people and this goddess, a mother who doesnt care for her daughter, a father who does but is seen as the enemy, we got these friends of Anna that have parents that know about this. Man, all this is going on and Anna is the pig ready to be slaughtered.
"Yo Darlene, your daughter is going to be bound and will die, tonight". Darlene's response "Yes!"
Lol wtf Darlene.
Sometimes I like to picture Anna is a kid with a nuclear device inside her. Her father is trying to dig inside her trying to find it without killing her. Her mother and her goons want to capture Anna, kill her, and get this device.
Reminds me of some batman stuff. Adam is batman, the detective is robin, and together they hunt down....um Darlene(Selene(cat woman)) with her pawns. Now this story sounds more fun. :)
Good stuff, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Next chapter GTS action a whole of cat and mouse all during a tense standoff!
Date: August 31 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
Holy fuck. That was intense!
Author's Response:
Only going to get tense! ? More tense?
Date: August 29 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just thought of something, how has Inanna been going from host to host? I mean, Anna herself was born in the 20th century, not during the Neolithic era, so the orignal Goddess could not go into her directly first.
I like how Anna smiles at Jerry's demise. She feels closure not guilt.
I hope there is away for Anna to keep that power. Would make for a powerful new Goddess.
Author's Response:
Inanna could have been a spirit body hoping for millenia moving from person to person throughout the ages. We'll see who comes out on top in the end
[Report This]Date: August 29 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
So what her father did actually worked. The body's scars affected the goddess and she didn't like it.
I'm not sure if the goddess is waiting for Anna to get better (the scars) or is she going to strike at some random time.
Going back to that one scene where Anna cut that boy's wrist....so how did that happen now that we have seen the goddess? Did the goddess do it, or did Anna do it? We know that whatever happened led to pain in her stomach.
Well, Anna now has learned that her father is a good guy. She now knows the truth. Can she convince others? Or will she be resented and the goddess will take revenge? Many possibilities!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
The power was responding without direction just based on Anna's emotion and without her direct intent. As inanna Getz stronger her will is trying to battle Anna for control of the body.
Date: August 27 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
@TomSpeedy
Well, the goddess can shrink people... and is a female... and is attractive...
Well, we are officially under servitude of Inanna. All hail the goddess. Blasphemers shall be like Caleb.
Sorry, inner macrophile speaking. :)
Author's Response:
Lol no worries
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
But........we want the godess to come out...right?
I mean, this story just got a lot more interesting. I don't know who to root for.
Is it Adam, Anna, the goddess, or who? I'm sticking with the goddess because it's entertaining to see what she does to people.
I'm starting to like Adam, but did he really have to put giant scars on Anna just to try to prevent the goddess from arriving? Like there was no other way?
He might as well kill her and let her die as little Anna, and not let her turn into a monster (in his eyes).
Now that I think about it, killing Anna would probably not be a good idea, especially with all this media. They hate him for the scars, now imagine a death. Yeah, I guess killing her is not an option.
Well, if dark magic put the goddess in Anna, then some dark magic must reverse it as well, right? I take that back. Adam seems to know everything, so he must have considered my ideas. (Hard to criticize smart characters).
Well, the goddess is free, so let the games begin!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Holy fuck.
I usually don't give ratings, but...
Author's Response:
Thanks ;)
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
So her father loved her after all? Unexpected turn! Nice. Though I want to see this... Inanna wreck stuff for a bit first. She is certainly interesting. Whether she is a malevolent goddess who tortures for glee, or if her brutality with Caleb and Jerry is due to her vessels primal hate I would like to know. For all I know, Inanna is actually a powerful, benevolent, or at least considerate and civil deity. In the body of a sexy teenage girl.
You never know. She may lead us to better times. Just a fan theory.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
I felt like I just arrived at the middle of a movie...like wtf just happened. It was awesome, but I don't get it. Maybe the fact that I don't get it makes it awesome. I don't know but this was one hell of a chapter.
So let's slow this down and recap here. Anna wakes up as her step dad feels her up. She resists, but Jerry pushers her to the point where "Anna awakens".
All of a sudden, this goddess shows up and sees Jerry feeling her up, and I began chuckling because we all knew he was going to be sorry then. Then she shrinks him, doesn't give a shit that Caleb is watching and she shrinks Caleb too! She is unstoppable. Now she has these two tiny guys at her disposal.
In short, Anna became a female hulk and took control. Yep, that's pretty much it.
But it was kinda cool to see Anna get her revenge on these guys. They deserve it.
Whatever this purification stuff is, please don't do it! I love Anna like this! Dominant, forceful, powerful, godlike!
Anna has surely awakened and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom,
Yes the dark force in Anna is unleashed and find Jerry rubbing her crotch, now reefer back to the first chapter, it fits right after this last chapter. the ritual of purification is to destroy Anna and release the darkness within her, keep reading :)
Date: August 25 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
Please excuse my swearing, but...
HOLY FUCK THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING. I can't wait to see what happens next. Well worth the wait for this giantess action!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review GiantessLover122 - glad the story was worth the wait!
Date: August 22 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
youre my slaves review reminds me of something. In chapter 1, Anna seemed to forget Caleb's name, and seemed to have no remorse, neither take pleasure in hurting him. So possession, I assume. Anna is no longer in control at all, as it is this Goddess who is in full control. The real question is if Anna consented to it. Or if her father has to do with any of it.
Are the scars still on her back? You mentioned they healed but could that explain why she did not receive grafting, if they still are on her, I assume they are fragments of what they once were.
Author's Response:
You are correct, it would appear as if there is a disconnect between whatever was in chapter 1 and Anna - all shall be revealed fairly soon. Thanks for the input. i re-tooled chapter 4-8 to address the issue of skin grafting, hopefully making the sotry stronger.
Date: August 22 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
I know the scars are necessary to plot which is why a hand-wave is justifiable but I find it odd that none of the doctors offered Anna any possibility of a skin graft given the severity of her scarring. They just stitch her up and go "LOL sorry your dad strapped you down and cut radical religous symbols into you but you're just gonna have to live with it kid."
I'm just so glad Caleb dies. I know that usually in order to be a dick it's just misplaced anger but goddamn this kid's a class A fuckboy. Going back to chapter 1, it makes me wish he'd suffered more.
Author's Response:
I've re-tooled several chapters to include skin grafting, your feedback was excellent and hopefully now the story is stronger - starting with chapter 4 "The Blade and the Damage Done" through chapter 8 "Homecoming". The next full update should be soon, very soon, the teasing has begun.
[Report This]Date: August 21 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
*moans lustfully* God, this plot is all I need in my life...
Author's Response:
Lustful moaning will only encourage me to tease as long as humanly possible before getting to the climax, just an FYI, ;)
Date: August 21 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it!
Still waiting for the gts content though, but I like the plot-building.