[Report This]Date: March 06 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story I especially like how much power they have, please continue
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review I am at an impasse with this story but haven't closed it out yet as I intend to write more.
[Report This]Date: December 15 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
So Veronica gained Anna's power?
This leads to many new possibilities. What if all girls had the power of Anna? Would there be peace, or war?
What of the men? I think they will become the lesser sex.
In war, they can heal each other. More people like Anna with healing can double heal or triple heal someone to get healed faster.
Then there is their sexual appetite. Veronica is already into controlling Jim. Would she feel this horny for men that are evil? How does a bad boy sound for these girls?
This chapter shows how much this power can change society, but I think now it's time to focus back on Anna.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
@Duggernaut. I like your type of stories. The killing and torture is mostly justified by lead giantess character and your characters don't turn into stupid one dimensional characters. She punish each one in an appropriate way. Anna is a person who can handle power, that's refreshing.
Author's Response:
Thanks Barrowman, I appreciate the input and hope to try to create some sense behind what character will or wont do as opposed to mindless mayhem, though, that can be fun once in a while too, :)
[Report This]Date: November 07 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
Meanwhile, the class is thinking "wtf just happened."
Mr. Collins is shrunk. Will Anna give him to the girl? I think that would be sweet. After all, he loves her. A perfect way to go.
Vance died, just like that. I'm not sure if that is considered lucky or not.
I wonder how everyone will react. I guess only time will tell. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm torn with this story. On one hand I can end it fairly abruptly or I can develop Veronica as Anna's apprentice not sure yet. Mr Collins may factor in here as may Jim. We'll see.
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, Darlene is stupid. She actually thinks that the goddess didn't arrive and it's still Anna. What she doesn't realize is that the goddess is actually Anna and she in fact does have all the power. She can shrink people at her will and has her own control of their sizes and can heal others as well.
You can tell the entire goddess is within her because Anna is not fighting for her body anymore. The goddess has consumed it and Ianna and Anna are now one, together in one body.
Darlene is very unaware of the whole situation and just laughs at Brenda's remarks.
She even tells Brenda this lie that the goddess will show up soon just to comfort her. It's like telling a dying person that they will be alright when they are obviously not.
I'm so ready for Anna to beat the crap out of Darlene.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2015 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
Let me guess, Brenda calls the cops and an all out massacre happens. Nah, too complicated, but I think Brenda will still alert someone.
Veronica was there for the little girly Anna, not this goddess. I think Veronica should leave Anna alone before she gets hurt.
Not much else to say, except great chapter, and it's interesting to see her regrow someone.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
What are the cops going to do? didn't pan out so good for Vance, in the end.
[Report This]Date: October 21 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hottest chapter of the story yet! Now I bet that's the giantess action that people were waiting for.
Anna matured greatly. She was confident in her behavior and sexuality. She wanted him and he wanted her, but in the end, only 1 got what they wanted.
Hey, perhaps Vincent can find Caleb in there!
Great stuff. Good break from all this drama.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
She is coming into her own, but still fairly naive to the influence of the power
[Report This]Date: October 12 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, she removed his old age! That's amazing! For a second I thought 25 would be ideal because it's old enough to do certain things that a teenager couldn't do.
Imagine if Jim tried to do something that he needs to be 21 and older. He would miss that. People would not let him do stuff. I bet Jim will miss those activities. Maybe 17/18 is too young?
Anna might as well turn everyone around her into someone attractive. Imagine walking in a city, and everyone is attractive. (Reminds me of college.)
I wonder what Anna plans to do next. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I had her reduce his age to mirror her own, given that would be her logical frame of reference. Being 17 or 18 with driver's licence thats says 70 might be difficult to pull off. Anna is struggling with her ability to control her impulses, be they angry, libidinous or otherwise, the challenge for her will be to refrain from zapping anyone who tries to meddle with her
Date: October 10 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
@vgiv, I think you are right about the doctor.
As for the my dark story comment, Duggernaut once mentioned earlier that this story is "darker than his usual" stories. His other stories have a of more frequent reviews which made me wonder maybe this story is a bit too dark.
Then again, nothing too dark has happened yet like something very cruel, but with many deaths do in fact make this story one of Duggernaut's darker tales. Perhaps it will be even darker with Anna's sadistic side coming up. Usually dark stuff sounds fun to read, so I can't wait!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your point of view. The doctor was the one who treated her when she was recovered from her father
Date: October 09 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty sure the doctor was that man Anna had shrunk. The one with cancer who helped her father. Possibly.
The story is far from the darkest I've seen, TomSpeedy. Other viewers may either have been busy, or me personally, have been dedicated to our own stories. I've been following this story but haven't gotten around to reviewing each chapter just yet.
Author's Response:
The doctor was the one who treated her when she was recovered from her father. Thanks for sharing your insight. I concur while darker for me this is far from some other stories here. Glad you are still enjoying
[Report This]Date: October 07 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Who is the doctor? I don't remember any doctor.
Yes! You finally made a giantess put a man all the way inside an asshole. And not only that, but Anna put him deep inside! Thank you!
Ooh! Nice punishment for Brenda. Making her confess to her daughter about her horrible deeds.
Anna doesn't know why she is aroused? She's a goddess, and she doesn't know. Teenage girls would know. Of course it's the little man in her anus! Yes, it's the power of dominance too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: October 01 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Am I the only reviewer for this story now?
I guess this story is a bit "too" dark for the viewers.
Author's Response:
Or not dark enough...
[Report This]Date: October 01 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wish Anna had some electro radio wave death pulse that she can send to her mother. I bet she called just so she can try to convince her to calm down. Yeah right! She's a target now!
So she can cure cancer? Wow! Now that's impressive.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 28 2015 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Let the rate flow! Love seeing her get revenge on these guys.
Short review again. But Keep it up. It's awesome!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
she is exacting some revenge that's for sure
[Report This]Date: September 26 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Totally agree with that. Biting on Vance is nothing. She has to toy with him, make him suffer, that's the guy you put in your butt because of what he did.
And Vance killed Adam with no mercy, which is interesting because in this chapter Anna questioned him "what do you know of mercy?" (I love that line).
I don't really care what happens to Brenda. Sure it shows that Anna is kind of nice, but she needs to teach her a lesson.
Speaking of teaching a lesson, where is her mother. Of all the people I want to see Anna get her revenge in is her own mother. She is the one responsible for getting Anna to be the goddess. She accused Adam for horrible things. And worst of all, she made Anna believe her! She has got to go. Anna must find her, shrink her, and kill her. No mercy! Just like how Vance did.
Her revenge will be swift.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey tom, yeah Darlene and Mr. collins are the two people yet to encounter the new and improved Anna. Have no fear, there will be a reckoning.
Date: September 26 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
All I can say an astounding story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read and share your opinion. :)
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
All I can say about this chapter is WOW!!!
Serioulsy you once again outdid yourself! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Trying to keep it fresh without following formulaic patterns that get repetitive and boring. :)
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ohhhhh! So Innana is like a badass Anna. It's still her, but like after she went to the military and then prison and came back to get revenge on this who put her in the horrible situation.
Yes! She is crazy! I love this crazy Anna. She is aggressive, fearless, and powerful, unlike her last self.
Hey, does she still look like Anna, or do her eyes glow so it's like a new person? Brenda called her Anna instead of Innana, so do they think it's Anna getting revenge or do they see Ianna unhappy with with everything.
I keep forgetting the spelling of Ianna. Is it Ianna, Inana, or what? I'm too lazy to check, so I'm just curious which is the official name. I like Ianna the best. Has a nice ring to it.
I remember the sweet Anna that accidentally killed her step dad and step brother and then accidentally slit some kids wrist. Now she is ruthless, a monster(some might say), but now she is a goddess. I give you goddess Ianna!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi Tom Anna will see herself and we'll talk about her appearance next chapter. She is certainly a bad ass of biblical proportions Inanna is a babylonian goddess. Lol I think I just mispelled her name answering another review, curse you Tom :)
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
The fact that Adam did not panic upon capture to badly, implies he prepared and anticipated all this years in advance. He accepted shame and hate instead of love and honor, all to save someone when nobody would understand. He loves Anna more than she can possibly know.
So, Anna is a Goddess now. I wonder what she intends after she wreaks revenge?
Author's Response:
Indeed Adam is the tragic figure in this story being misunderstood by everyone except Anna who never blamed him. She is now something better who she was and the darkness of inanna. If her humanity deteriorates she may succumb to darker impulses. The fact she's kept Brenda alive is testament to her morality for now.
Date: September 21 2015 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Think tnhis Cha[ter belongs with Botched.. but it's a good chapter though :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the heads up, guess I 'botched' this one!