Date: August 10 2015 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
You have a really nice set up here. Now I'm interested in how much he will shrink and how his wife will react.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm still working out the second chapter of this story and attempting to work on WHITE SMITE at the same time.
Never knew that updating multiple stories could be so hard.
It also doesn't help that I've got writer's block. D:
Date: August 07 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think setting some context is always beneficial to help flesh out characters before the giantess makes an appearance. Let's see where you take this one
Author's Response: Thanks for showing interest in my story :D! Hope I please you!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
So, basically, he gets touched by Angel, every night?
Sorry! I just had to get that out of my system. So, now, I can get more serious (sort of).
I like that the opening chapter is set on a Friday evening. Because, on the off-chance that he shrinks by sunrise of Saturday morning, he and his wife basically have the whole weekend to try and figure out how it happened! And, more importantly, how to un-do it (if such is possible).
More often than not, the shrinkage in other stories occurs during the first half of the week. And, yet, for some reason, the husband is never missed by his boss, or the school doesn't call looking for the absent son, etc. etc.
So, thanks for the refreshingly different opener. And, rest assured, I will be here for chapter 2. :-)
Author's Response: Whoa. Not too sure how to respond about the touching part. :P
But in all seriousness, I wanted the whole weekend for the story to take place in, to make it seem as realistic as possible.
And thanks for not giving up reading after the first chapter. :)