[Report This]Date: March 30 2016 6:17 AM Title: Trust Your Instincts- Naomi
One of the best on the site.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 3:36 AM Title: No More Waiting - Lorelei & Naomi
I waited till 1am to read a ch of this...its now 3 and i work in the morning but i could not dare stop.
holy hell this story was amazing.I cant think of the right words atm but WOW, I can only be left wanting more.
Author's Response:
That's what you get for trying to read a Silent-One/TheChoreographer collaboration without proper preparation. XD
Thanks, though. Choreographer and I worked on this one intensely over a little over a week. Best work I've ever done, and he agrees that it was a step up for him, as well.
If you want more of our goodness, try the rest of the "Silent Dance" series!
[Report This]Date: August 14 2015 8:58 AM Title: No More Waiting - Lorelei & Naomi
Such a sweet ending!
Too bad the story had to be over. :(
Author's Response:
Well, we have world building to do.
This story is part of a much larger series that we're working on together, that will go between sweet and bitter, sadistic and fluffy, et cetera.
As it was said, Naomi, Lorelei, and everyone else will return in some of the other stories, so if you want to see them again, you can.
Date: August 13 2015 11:10 AM Title: Absolution -- Naomi, Lorelei & Gloria
Ooooh...
Time for fun :D
[Report This]Date: August 13 2015 4:14 AM Title: Approval- Lorelei, Gloria, Naomi
Woah damn! This has been one rollercoaster of a story so far!
You guys make a good colaborative story :)
I figured I should pause and comment here as the surprise twist of Lorelei actually listening and restoring Gloria's size etc I didn't see that coming :D
Also wanting to take a break so that cliff-hanger has more of a dramatic impact! xD
Date: August 12 2015 5:20 PM Title: Approval- Lorelei, Gloria, Naomi
Hey guys! Sorry about the lack of reviews from me, its just that I've got a summer job that has me waking up at 5:30 AM and not getting to my computer until 6:30 at the eailrst. So I don't have a lot of time to be on-line and I'm usually exhuasted while there. But since this story has gotten a criminally short amount of reviews, I'll add another.
I'm really liking the direction that this story is going in. Lorelie won me back over to her with this chapter. I say "won me back over" because I'm not a huge fan of cruel giantesses who make the tiny people under there power suffer as brutally as she did. I'm much more into gentle stuff and cruel giantesses who use tiny people sexually but don't brutalize them otherwise. However, I'm still really enjoying this story. Anway, this chapter offered some much needed humanization towards her charatcer. I'm hoping in the future that nice, tiny charatcers like Lucy don't get that brutally effected by her. Will that be the case?
Author's Response:
Heh, no need to apologize. We've got 7k views, it's pretty clear people are reading it...though reviews are nice =)
It depends on who they are. Lorelei's anger issues towards the tinies is a large part of the story, as I'm sure you're aware. Though gentle Lorelei might become a regular thing, pissing her off generally results in the advertised effect. In comparison to Sammi, she's been pretty damn good to Lucy XD
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: August 12 2015 9:30 AM Title: Approval- Lorelei, Gloria, Naomi
Ahhh...
Nothing like sitting back with popcorn and reading an amazing, long-ass story.
Keep the updates comin"!
Author's Response:
Detailed as we may be, we're no Jacksmith.
B-b-baby, you just ain't seen nothin' yet.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 11:51 PM Title: Games- Everyone
I just finished reading all 11 chapters in one sitting, so that should be a good indicator as to what I think. An absolutely fantastic story so far, great job by both of you.
Author's Response:
Indeed it is.
We are highly proud of what we've wrought, and it's almost sad that the story is more than halfway over. That's not to say you won't be seeing more of Naomi, Lorelei, and everyone else- I can't predict the future, and I can't predict crossovers- but let it be known that PCKR won't last much longer.
[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 5:35 AM Title: Trust Your Instincts- Naomi
God mother of this fabulous story,
I bow down to kneal before thee.
I shake and tremble in thy sight.
Marvellously done. I would communicate constructive criticism if I had any. I wish I could write like that. Continue this please!
Author's Response:
Heh, thanks. We do what we can. Having a skilled partner to write with is an excellent motivator, so the story will indeed continue.
Thanks for the review!
Date: August 08 2015 4:06 PM Title: Trust Your Instincts- Naomi
I am amazed at this story so far! It looks like its going to be hitting so many of the bases that I've been wanting out of a giantess/shunrken woman story but never get! I'm really enjoying the character dyamnics and look forward to seeing more. Is there going to a kind of orgy between the normal sized girls and the shurnken ladies? Also, are there going to be more shurnken ladies added to Naomi and Lorelei's pet collection?
Author's Response:
Good questions.
In that order:
Maybe
Maybe
Also, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 6:22 AM Title: Trust Your Instincts- Naomi
Love it!