[Report This]Date: December 15 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please please please PLEASE write a sequel to this... even if it's only like two chapters that explain her backstory and their time after this story takes place just PLEASE don't let this story just end.
Author's Response:
I am actually working on a parallel story to this one called Fan Boys
[Report This]Date: December 02 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
An egotistical hard rock band gets taken down (quite) a few notches, both emotionally and literally. And only the front man gets to remember. I love it!
I'm confused by one thing, though. Did Vogel really suffer permanent damage? Or was that just a misprint?
[Report This]Date: December 02 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
I really liked this chapter, but I think it's too soon. I think there should be one more chapter with Amanda should've finished her sex scene with Pete, then she says something like "sweet dreams little one" to end that chapter. Then this chapter should be after that.
Good ending, but it felt random. Did not expect the ending that soon.
I can't wait for your next story.(or for more progress on your other stories.)
[Report This]Date: November 04 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
Holy Amanda!
This is the confident milf I have been waiting for. I hope Lina, Miss Addison, and Ms. Mackenzie have similar ideas.
Please don't give Pete up yet! Amanda is awesome!
Her creativity was even smart. Using her finger as a false sense of security to put him inside her, and then she lets him get stuck inside her which is incredible!
I also love her eagerness to play with him and her clever remarks. "Cat got your tongue". Even though it's such a simple joke, it seemed sexy when she said that. I think I'm starting to like women with good word play. Hopefully the other milfs have similar vocabulary.
Anna is too greedy. I don't care that she is considered the cherry of the group, she already has Eddie. No need for another.
On a side note: I like the thought of the bus driver being reserved for Angeline. Just that sentence sounds hot. Getting reserved or shrunk for someone. Imagine: "TomSpeedy is reserved for Lina". Now my mind is bending.
This is an unusual chapter because of the little things that make it amazing. The words, actions are sexy and beautiful.
Please continue this Amanda scene! I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
@Tom Speedy:
Keep working at it. ;-D
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm pretty sure some other girl in some other story was going to do this.
Sounds like some Janine work right here. Janine used a hairbrush, while Celeste uses a drumstick.
For the drumstick, I was thinking of the chicken drumstick. And that kinda made sense for some time. I didn't expect the instrument piece until I took a second to think about it.
Part 2 coming up? She hasn't used the candle yet.
I can't wait for the next chapter, but I absolutely can't wat for the Amanda scene!
Date: October 29 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
@carycomic, Like song, like drummer. Both stuck inside her.
Date: October 29 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
@carycomic, Drumstick, drumstuck, drumsticky.
Author's Response:
Drumsitcky, made me laugh, :)
Date: October 29 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
@Carycomic, The drummer will play her to the beat of her heart, increasing his pace as he adjusts to her rhythm.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Insertion with a drumstick?!
Can you beat that. ;-)
Author's Response:
This locks like a good place for a stick up!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
Charlie has been caught! Only Pete left! (And the bus driver.)
No Anna! You cannot take seconds until Amanda plays with her toy.
That cliffhanger!!!!!! Amanda has to get Pete! Please let it happen. Also, I hope she actually keeps Pete and doesn't give him away to a little girl. All the girls have their toys already. It's time for the real woman to have some fun!
Karli is already backing off, meaning, she is not interested in playing yet. However Amanda is, and Angeline is nowhere in sight.(unless she has to bus driver.) Wouldn't it be funny if the buss driver was Angeline's husband? Haha. This would be a great setup hosted by Karli.
Ok, now I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter! ("Reallys" mean give this story priority.) I can't wait!
Date: October 21 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter! Right now this one is my second favorite of your stories, Bang your Head would be first, but this story is still really good!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2015 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
The hunt is almost over. Three down/one to go!
Which reminds me...I feel tempted to say these girls should form their own rock group: The Berkshire Hunt Club! But, I don't think your British readers would appreciate the joke. ;-)
Date: October 18 2015 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
Were you paraphrasing the moral of "Amok Time" in your response?
[Report This]Date: October 13 2015 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Alright, I'm very much enjoying this story mate. It's great to see that it's still going strong :)
I'm probably more taken with this one because I think the set up reminds me a lot of your previously completed story: 'Double dog dare' Another story where a group of four (five if you count the driver) are caught playing an epicly proportioned game of Cat & Mouse ^_^
I'm also enjoying it because it includes a range of distinguished shrunken cast members too with respective personalities. My favorite I'd have to say so far is Charlie, the smart guy with his head on straight. Here's hoping he gets an enjoyable experience despite being the not-so-popular drummer ^_^;
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, there have been a few others that link this story to Double Dog Dare. I think with multiple characters with different personalities can keep it fresh and appealing. the cat and mouse is always a favorite, heightens the sense of playfulness. I wanted Charlie to be the laid back dude, we'oll see how he fares in forthcoming chapters.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well, since those two are done, the other girls will come in.
I wonder who will get who. I can't wait for Amanda's turn.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Amanda may have a lot of pent up frustration, might have to demonstrate that when she, if she gets her hands on one of the little guys, :)
[Report This]Date: October 12 2015 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Be careful what you wish for, Aedin. You might get it.
Author's Response:
Wanting and having, two entirely different realities
[Report This]Date: October 08 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well, I like to keep them (my reviews) short and sweet, Tom. As I'm often paranoid that I'll be over-analyzing why I liked the latest chapter of this-or-that. Which, of course, can kill somebody else's enjoyment of same!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Eddie and Aedin down. 2 or actually 3 left. We still don't know anything about the bus driver.
Karli is patiently waiting as well as Amanda. I bet Amanda really wanted to use Aeiden as well. It must have taken guts to give him back. Sure, she promised him to Daphne, but I have a feeling Amanda will have her turn.
How about Angelica? What about her. Is she with the bus driver? Is the bus driver Angelica's husband? Does Angelica have like 10 little men in her room? She seems like someone who stashes men.
You know that feeling when you see a woman, sometimes smiling, and you wonder, what if there's a tiny man inside her panties. Then you look down, you see no bump, then you wonder, is the man completely inside? Then you reconsider this, and think, no, it's just a fantasy. But you wish....
I get that feeling when I pass some women here and there. Sometimes I feel like there are unusually happy like they have a secret, a sexy special secret.
Anyway, before I get carried away, I can't wait for the next chapter!