[Report This]Date: August 13 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
This woman wants to get laid. Angeline might sound nice, but she is going to use them to her advantage somehow. Being alone for all these (I'm guessing) years would make anyone feel delighted to have guests, especially when her eyes longer on the men.
Karli used to be the one in control. Now the power has shifted to Angeline.
Strong grip? Is she someone familiar? Does she happen to have yellow eyes? I'm beginning to suspect some things.....
Haha, Eddie's bunk bed idea. Also, he really wants Anna. He even is openly telling everyone that he likes her. Even Amanda, her mother, knows it.
This chapter Daphne wrapped around Aedin. So Aedin has two followers. Hmm. Wonder who gets him when he shrinks.
Aedin-"we are in a band"
Angeline-"tsk tsk, unbecoming of a young gentlemen" . Angeline thought: "He should be serving me instead."
I'm pretty sure that's what she was thinking.
Similar to Double Dare story, we got another random archaic house that our characters have ventured into and no help is likely to arrive. Although it's repetitive, I enjoy these isolated areas becuase then we know that no bs will interrupt the story. No random dude will go to this house. There won't be neighbors peeking inside. Just a groups of men(or in this case some girls too) and a creepy house with no where to run to.
Looks like this house will be the setting for a while. Now I wonder what will take place in it. Let's find out.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
There are certainly similarities between the dare story and this, but I've got a bit of a twist lined up to separate them. :)
Date: August 11 2015 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
P.S.---to any and all lurkers in Louisiana. I apologize if my explanation seemed over-simplified.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
To answer Pete's question: A Louisiana Creole is anybody descended from one of the original French settlers of the Pelican State. While "Cajun" is the linguistically corrupted term used for those Louisianans of Acadian descent. Acadia having been the name for eastern Canada when it was still a French colony. However, when England finally won the colony from France, after one of the many early 18th century wars between them, hundreds of Acadians were forcibly deported to Louisiana. And, by the Civil War, the two social classes had been more or less typified for all time. Cajuns, as fur trappers and fishermen of the bayou country; and Creoles as wealthy plantation owners and/or city-slickers.
Author's Response:
As always, you sir are a veritable font of information. I did research it but decided to explain the distinction, but you're description is essentially bang on and a wonderful resource for others who may themselves be curious. :)
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loving the history in the beginning. Hurricane Gertrude from 1974, the real highways from the state of Lousiana, and the cities that were included. I was trying to find the graveyard where the bus stopped, but I couldn't. (Am I the only one who looked it up?)
Wow, those questions escalated quickly. Amanda is not pleased. She probably doesn't appreciate the profanity either.
These dudes are stupid. I'm with Karli. Why would you drink something in a graveyard, and in the middle of nowhere? (Well, they have to shrink somehow). These guys remind me of the 4 kids from the Double dare story. "Drink it, I dare you" "Go into that house, I dare you, no I double dare you!" Similar premise.
Moral of Duggernaut's stories: Remember kids, just say no.
Celeste is horny. It makes it more interesting that she wants Aedin and he is a virgin.
Karli's control over the group is starting to make her more attractive. She acts like their mother. It's quite hilarious actually, their exchange of words before they boarded the bus.
So let's get this straight. 5 dudes, 5 girls. All 5 dudes will shrink and each woman gets a guy. I like it.
Match ups prediction:
Aedin-Celeste
Eddie-Anna
Pete-Karli
Charles-Daphne
Driver-Amanda
Well, it looks like the fun is about to begin.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Aedin was lying about being a virgin being cocky. He's like twenty seven. I'm going to upgrade Gertrude before this story is over, in '74 she was only a category one, here i think she's going to be at least a 4 or 5, that way when the action starts, everybody is stuck together, muwahahaa.
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Go West region! I'm rooting for Anna and her mother, Amanda. But seriously, why do all the mothers in your stories are a few inches shorter than her daughters? Perhaps in 'Tom's story' Karolina could be a bit taller. Just a trend I noticed.
This is hilarious. The super hot girl is the one who is under 21 and is followed by her mother. It's like the mom is there just to prevent something sexual. I bet one of these band members will try to isolate Anna and get in touch with her.
Hmm. I guess it won't be a 'Spend a day with Injustice' even after all. A day is too short. Unless, this was supposed to be a short story, but I doubt that.
Let me guess, this 'meal' that they have together; Does this have anything to do with the band shrinking? It seems convincing.
I can't wait for this band to shrink, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hmm never noticed that mother daughter trend though in the Contract Clarissa is taller than both her daughters. I always want to find entertaining and inventive ways for the shrink. The one for this story is almost written and it's one of those "oh you probably shouldn't have done that" moments. Soon as you read it you're going to recognize the play. Eddie is already trying to get to Anna while Daphne is super hot for Aedin. We'll see how long this group remains together intact. Should be fun.
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Heh! I was half-expecting one of them to be Little Miss Blue-hair. But, I suppose that would've been _too_ predictable.*
*And, no gts/sm tale, worth its salt, should be that.
Author's Response:
Agreed :)
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
LOL! That joke is told by both genders. Only the sound effect, used as punch line, differs.
When men ask if a blind date is pretty, and the person replying says "They have a nice personality," the traditional response is to howl like a dog. Whereas if women ask if a blind date is handsome, and get the same reply, they oink like pigs!
Author's Response:
Absolutely
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Highly interesting! Is this a real-life band...or a semi-fictionalized one (to keep from being sued)?
Author's Response:
All fictitious and easter eggs threaded throughout a bunch of my other stories. I wanted to give them exposure through tom's Story before posting this one.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Of all the characters in this story, I like the random fan girls that showed up. Every man either seemed boring or rude and I wouldn't mind them being shrunk.
I really want Aedin to be shrunk. Passed along from girl to girl as a toy, and perhaps they will force him to sing to them or something similar.
This guy is popular, and I think a size reduction is in order. That ouughta straighten things out.
Another interesting setup. I bet this guy is going to wake up all tiny!
I can't wait for the next chapter!