Date: September 09 2015 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! This is starting to get interesting!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read things are just starting to get going
Date: September 02 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Pretty good, I'm eager for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hmm. So they found each other.
They also realized that only they shrunk. Also, we wonder what happened to Jeb and if he began searching for Karli as well. (I have a feeling that Jeb is going to die soon.) just a thought.
All 3 dudes afraid to go to Karli. If she splatters me with her body, I would say that's a great way to die. I was surprised that Eddie was able to resist going with Aeidn and used caution rather than desire.
I wonder how Aedin will wake her up.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
"Four Mouseketeers"
Super-LOL!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
It would seem Amanda's mother's intuition was right on de money (as dey might say down in de bayou).
Seriously, though: Mr. G was worried about _me_ burning myself out before Labor Day? Your computer must have asbestos padding!
[Report This]Date: August 29 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
These dudes are stupid, haha. Just because they say that it was the rum, I'm not buying it. It still could've been Angeline.
Eddie is on to something. Amanda did give Eddie a warning, and it did seem suspicious when he mentioned it. I'm not sure if Amanda is secretly a goddess, but I wouldn't be surprised. She is a headstrong woman, and is not afraid of men like Eddie.
Shy girls aware the most dangerous. Don't let their timid behaviour trick you. The Amanda-Anna combo is one pair to keep an eye on.
Well, now it's the journey to Karli!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Next chapter or two will have some bombshells
Date: August 29 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I did like however how there were like 3-4 different ideas for how they were shrunk dangled in front of us. I wonder if it's going to be like a mystery to find out what actually shrank them or if whoever did it is just going to come out with it...
Author's Response:
We'll see...maybe
[Report This]Date: August 29 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Kinda short and not much happened but I'm glad for the update nonetheless. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Filler I know but it's about to get real...soon!
[Report This]Date: August 25 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
You know what? I can't tell if it was the bottle or Angeline. Only the men drank it, and Angeline rested her eyes on each guy when they met.
I'm pretty sure Karli is still normal sized, but that doesn't mean it was the bottle. Angeline could've just purposely shrunk the men. So it still could be either the bottle or Angeline, no conclusions yet.
So I wonder what happens when the get to Karli? Do they climb her while she's asleep? It's funny, because Karli doesn't mess around and if she sees to little guys, she might overreact and kill them. Then again, Karli is smart enough to think before acting but she probably would panic when she sees them.
Or Karli will laugh at Aedin and Charlie telling them, "this is what you deserve for drinking that stuff" or something like that.
I don't see Karli becoming one of those horny giantesses but I won't be surprised if she does become one.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I want to keep you guessing :)
[Report This]Date: August 25 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Gymnastic scoring?! Biochemical lingo??
How many other talents is Aedin hiding?
Author's Response:
A mna of many talnets, not the least of which is drinking
Date: August 25 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yay! GTS content! I'm eager for how things will play out from here!
Author's Response:
I know! Finally! now lets get down to business...
Date: August 21 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
@Carycomic, that was pretty darn good.
[Report This]Date: August 21 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
"What happens when you're dum
Enough to drink graveyard rum?
You start to feel real down
All the way to the ground,
Windin' up no bigger than a thumb."
Thank you! I'm here all week.
Author's Response:
Yep
[Report This]Date: August 20 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Is Anna one of those girls that can physically beat up someone despite their pretty face. That's what it seems like.
What if Anna is a ninja, and Amanda is warning Eddie of it. Amanda didn't even seemed bother that Eddie was staring at Anna. She seemed more concerned for Eddie than her daughter.
Or was it the other kind of warning, like "if you touch her, I will destroy you" kinda thing. There are two kinds of warnings here. It's either, she's deadly, and you might get hurt, or she's my precious and I won't allow you to get her.
The rum is kicking in! Can't wait till they shrink! I can see that Amanda might be interested in a shrunken Eddie. Might have to change my match ups.
Prediction: I bet the boys wake up tiny.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
That time is very very near. Didn;t you find Amanda's warning a little odd, almost as if she knew what was coming...
Date: August 20 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
Nice chapter! Still no GTS content, but the content we did get was enough to tide me over. Eddid and Amanda together was of special note, for some reason I thought that was gonna be a LOT more awkward than it ended up being.
Author's Response:
GTS ETA very quickly. Look at the interaction between Eddie and amanda, isn't it just a little off, she's warning him about what? Almost like she knows what's in store, maybe?
Date: August 18 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very intriguing.
Your wide variety of characters, and in turn, their variety of personalities and agendas is rather entertaining to watch. I agree with other posters that Aiden is...interesting. I fear for his future.
Nice writing style. Keep it up, man.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading the story and sharing a review. I think it might be wise to be concerned for Aedin I have feeling his life is about to take an interesting turn for the smaller :)
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really great story so far! For some reason most stories that take this long to get to the GTS content lose my interest but you have a good cast of characters here that helps keep me drawn in. Aedin especially seems like a good man despite his flaws, he doesn't look down on women, he doens't think with his dick, and he's willing to set aside his pride and listen to other people. But at the same time he's got a bit of a mean streak in him, so far, he's my favorite characeter! I'm glad I decided to give this story a try, I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the inevitable GTS content to come!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to hang in there and share a review. We are getting close to the GTS part of the story now, so hopefully it was worth the wait, ;)
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Night seems to be approaching. The group getting all cozy.
You said that "Amanda and her mother get a room". Well, I think you made a typo as it should be Anna.
Well, Aedin is going to have some fun, that's for sure. Every girl likes him.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Things are getting ready to go. Thanks for the catch on Amanda and Anna - I get turned around sometimes with too many stories abd repeat character names, but it is all fixed
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, Aedin might not be as considerate as Karli. But, he does have the saving grace of being a pragmatist. So, I guess he's not all bad, after all.
Author's Response:
He's just trying to shake off the hangover is all
[Report This]Date: August 13 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Shades of Simonetta!
;-)
Author's Response:
For now, :P