Date: October 07 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
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[Report This]Date: October 07 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Gives new meaning to the term "aria-ola."
;-D
Date: October 07 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Its a little odd how Aedin was desperately running away at first and then all of a sudden switched to horny gentleman mode. Not that I'm complaining about the fanservice we're getting but the transition here was abit jarring.
Author's Response:
Daphne tricked Aedin by engaging his passion singing which in turn made it more personal for him unlike Anna who simply slammed Eddie. That was kind of my thinking as I was writing it. I might have to retool the chapter to try and express his feelings a little more clearly. Thanks
Date: October 02 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
Reading this, among your other stories. I dunno when you got started Duggernaut but you're an awesome addition to the Size writing community. This one is awesome so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for your generous praise, it is very validating. I'm not sure what got me started either, hmm, two passions, one forum perhaps, :)
Date: October 01 2015 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Kinda short and not much happened but I did enjoy the conversation! I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read, just a little bridge. This one is starting to heat up though, :)
[Report This]Date: October 01 2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
Better and better, with each chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 01 2015 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
GOOD ONE! :-D
Author's Response:
Not bad I must admit. I thought of myself as particularly clever in another stroy where the lead character (pothead) is stalked by two young females in that i entitled the chapter, two birds, one stoner. tee-hee
[Report This]Date: October 01 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well, look at that. I'm not the only one playing the match ups game. Charlie is thinking this out too.
This chapter showed me that Charlie is more like the Dustin of the group. He shows more intellect unlike Pete who can't seem to grasp this situation.
I don't even think Eddie knows what's going on despite being fucked like a dildo.
Charlie makes a good point. What happened to the bus driver and Angelica? Did get together because we hanvent seen them for while?
My bet is that it's Celeste that shows up to these guys. She's the girl who wasn't with Anna when she found Eddie. Daphne and Amanda went to search with Karlie, Angelica is with Gus(I think) so that leaves Celeste. Makes sense, right?
I think so, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Charlie is in survival mode, 2+2= guys out of there depth, :-0
[Report This]Date: September 27 2015 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
The old adage, about being careful what you wish for, might be over-used, Eddie. But, that doesn't make it inaccurate.
Author's Response:
It's was all fun and games for Eddie until she got it in the end! Oh, was that cheeky?
[Report This]Date: September 26 2015 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Near the beginning, you said "supporting his head with a head". I think you meant hand. I was tempted not to point it out because it sounds funny.
Goodness, Anna is aggressive. She went on overdrive or something. Wow.
Haha, Eddie was like "the things I'm going to do to you", like what? What can you do against Anna, she can barely feel you. Like Amanda said, you better beware of Anna. Well, this is the reason.
Amanda knows that her own daughter is experienced in sex and aggressive despite her cute, timid behaviour. If Anna was this powerful, I wonder why did Amanda even show up to assist her. Anna could defiantely take of herself on her own. I bet Amanda is just here for the fun. I would love to see her get a tiny.
If Anna gets Eddie, and Daphne gets Aedin, who gets the rest. We got Celeste, Amanda, Karli, and Angeline. Also, we have Pete, Charlie, and the bus driver. 4 girls, 3 guys? How does this match up? Also, what happened to the bus driver? Is he already caught?
For anal insertion, I noticed you always make the guy go 90% in and never completely inside. (Exception was the one guy from Double dare story.) I would love to see Eddie go fully immersed, but at least he went in head first, so it's alright.
This reminds me of the hunt from the contract and a hunt from that other story when Hilde told a guy to hide. (You have a lot of stories now, that I'm starting to forget some.)
My favorite woman is still Amanda so, I will cheer once she gets her man. I know she might not get hers until the girls get theirs, but until then I cannot wait!
I also cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Knowing what was coming was only serving to get these girls hot and wet. Eddie has been playing into it and she just had to have him. The others in the house will begin to pair off.
Date: September 26 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Methinks that Eddie got a lot more than her bargained for!
Author's Response:
Yes he did, :P
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
And, now the real fun (???) begins.
Author's Response:
Fun is probably a matter of perspective I suppose. We'll see how fantasy and reality aren't necessarily always aligned.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
Now this I partly expected. I knew the girls were in on it, but I never knew that Karli was the one who shrank her. I also knew that Karli would reveal her playful side and she also has an interest in Aedin.
Now about that shriek. My bets on Eddie. He wanted to be caught and now is his chance. Time for the fun to roll in!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Trying to 'set the stage' as it were. Karli is an intermediary who facilitated this scenario. Depending how it turns out we'll see if she mixes business with pleasure.
Date: September 21 2015 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, and here I thought Karli was actually kind of a nice person, strict, but nice. But then she goes and takes advantage of people that trusted her for financial gain! What a horrible woman. And did she just say "if you survive"? Of course nobody will ever believe them if they somehow managed to grow back and call the authorities. Then again, if the band were to be killed or kept by the women I'm sure after enough time passed, it would arouse suspicion in them, after all they were the last people who had contact with them and this IS a popular band we're talking about here. I wonder if the woman that lives in this house was also in on it? Anyway's at least the explanations are out of the way and we KNOW for a fact that the women were scheming this all along. Now we can get to the good parts!
Author's Response:
Hurricane makes for an easy way to get rid if the band :O
[Report This]Date: September 17 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG man what a great chapter a bit of a tease where you left off but an awesome way to add suspence.. Thanks for another great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Band on the run :)
[Report This]Date: September 17 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Charlie's right about the potential sell-out. I've always told anyone who would grudgingly listen that I would gladly VOLUNTEER(!) for the life sentence Jeannie Brunette wanted to give Major Nelson in part three of "Genie, Genie, Who's Got The Genie?".
Author's Response:
Yep
[Report This]Date: September 17 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ok, I think all the women know. There's a little too many mentions of tiny and toy going on.
I'm with Eddie now. (Usually I'm against him.) I would take advantage of this whole situation.
I like the laid back Karli. She seems so peaceful and controlling. I also like the eager Amanda. It makes this whole even exciting.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: September 17 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
It's hard to tell whether the girls know about the shrinking or not. You've been kinda vague with the way they are speaking, they haven't said the key word "shrink" yet. They DID say "toy" but then again a woman can say that about a normal sized man too.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2015 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm as floored as Aedin. All three older women were in on it?! This makes me wonder if they belong to the same "social circle" as a certain "marriage counselor" in another of your stories. ;-)
Author's Response:
This was the veer to take it in a direction different from the Dare story.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
You know what's interesting? Karli and these women have their own little secret going on, but I have a feeling that they did not mean playing with the tiny band members. They never once mentioned "a shrunken man" or "hold man in hand" etc.
Amanda just said "little Eddie" but I don't think she meant 2-3 inch guy, but that's what us readers are thinking about.
They may not even be in on it! Perhaps it's a dance or something that these women were preparing.
There are so many hints going on in these last few chapters that I still have no idea what is actually going on and who's involved in what plot. A few chapters ago we wondered how they shrunk. Was it Angeline or was it the rum? We still don't know. How about the bus driver? We don't know if he's even alive. Haha. Karli said to let him sleep, so I'm guessing these women had an even to match up these girls to the band members. If they knew that the guys were shrunk, then they would include the bus driver. Therefore, the women are not in on it.
Good job on trying to convince me that these women have a part in the band's shrinking. Nice try, but I'm not buying it. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter! (Glad you are back!)
Author's Response:
Lol, next chapter will be full of revelations that'll help clarify what's going on