Date: July 30 2022 11:58 AM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.2
Also kicking ur maybe wife in her small toe is too mean. Tickling would gave the same result and could be more fun.
Date: July 30 2022 11:58 AM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.2
Also kicking ur maybe wife in her small toe is too mean. Tickling would gave the same result and could be more fun.
Date: July 29 2022 8:50 PM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.3
Elf is clearly superior to others. Beauty - check barefoot - check cute - check, personality is really better than others you can find
[Report This]Date: January 24 2021 1:54 PM Title: The List
I'm glad you decided to continue this story. A bunch of potential suitors to a small prince is a surprisingly good way to introduce many different characters in short stories. A bit disappointed with Princess Elrina Myssia would've been pretty interesting to see what else she could've tried doing to the prince. Like try putting him inside her shoe or trying to be a bit meaner to him by making him clean her feet (Sorry into feet). Anyways hopefully you continue this amazing story. (Please add another chapter to Elrina's story).
Date: January 07 2021 9:16 PM Title: The List
Hey, I really like your story, it inspired me to do something similar about a prince. I'll put what I have done on deviantart here (https://www.deviantart.com/dudeduderson2000/art/A-Prince-s-Adventure-Part-I-Jasmine-855344395). I put a link on the da page to your story, anyway keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Heyo, left a comment on the DA page there. Always happy to hear when my stuff inspires folks!
Date: January 01 2021 1:14 AM Title: Prospect #9 Duchess Iona Vastar Pt. 2
I'm glad you continued the story. My only complaint with the chapters is that I wish Erik was used as a footstool for the fairies longer.
Author's Response:
Happy to hear you enjoyed and thats fair I'd say, probably could have lingered a bit there.
Date: December 31 2020 11:10 AM Title: Prospect #9 Duchess Iona Vastar Pt. 2
Great chapters focusing on Erik and Iona here.
It was interesting seeing him with an older/mature woman. That definitely shook the dynamic up a bit. As well as the fact she shrank him even smaller than his normal height, so he was truly a bug before her.
You handled her character well, she really viewed him as a plaything or toy for her amusement, the way she cut him off by flexing her toes and with that action alone proved her dominance over him so completely to the point he realized he had no choice but to clean her toes and that his arguments meant nothing to her, his words having no effect or consequence.
The inshoe description and scenes were also well done, you really described the scene well.
I am so happy you're once again writing for this story, I hope your muse keeps up :D
Author's Response:
Thanks! Happy to hear you enjoyed it and yeah, I'm one that has grown to appreciate more confident and mature ladies in size. Certainly has a lovely spice to it.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2020 7:28 AM Title: Prospect #8 Princess Travi Silvermoon Pt.3
YES!! Welcome back Trial and Error.
Love that you're writing more for this story once again, and this chapter was great XD
Erik can't catch a break even around fairies, and I love that he wound up as a foot rest here.
Once again, as mentioned in my previous reviews, I still put my vote up for Eva Redfist as his endgame for marriage, there was something about her that just stood out and I really loved their interaction.
Another fantastic chapter to a great story :)
Author's Response:
Erik can't catch a break around anyone really, even the nicer ones haha. Ah well, what doesn't kill you and all that.
Ironically the most violent of his suitors was also the most least likely to smug him for amusement. Funny how that works. Happy you have enjoyed the story though!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2020 7:20 AM Title: The List
It's back °-°
Author's Response:
Surprised people would still follow this one of my older works. Please to know people are still enjoying it though!
Date: April 18 2020 8:38 AM Title: Prospect #8 Princess Travi Silvermoon Pt.1
I was very pleasantly surprised by this story being updated. Glad to see it continue.
Though I'm wondering, are we going to see more stories in the Humanity's Downfall universe? I would like to see more of that setting.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2020 3:53 PM Title: The List
So glad to seeing this continued. I'll take this chance to finally put a review here.
This story is so well-written that it's an incredible pleasure to read. It's one of the most original stories I've seen in my ten years of being here and this way of story-telling synergizes so well with the size-fetish that it never gets old. You've done a wonderful job on making each character feel unique and different. I in particularly like the backreferences to the previous characters the protagonist visited in the past.
I hope that we also occassionally get to see or hear from old characters. For example, I'm wondering if the twins ever realized what Erik had done, given that they'd probably scheme against him if they ever found out.
But anyway, good job, the only way I can sum up this review is that it has been an absolute pleasure to read and I hope you don't get burnt out so soon writing this.
Author's Response:
I'm happy to be continuing it. Its easily one my most can be picked up and continued whenever stories since by its nature, the visits can be wildly different from one another. Helps when you've been away from it for a while.
Oh I'm certain older characters will be making appearances here or there, there are a couple that will most certainly pop their heads up in future.
Anyway, thanks for the review and glad you are enjoying!
Date: March 22 2020 12:00 PM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.3
I definitely didn't expect to see this continued but I'm glad it has been! Great to see this story again. Fantasy giantess stories are the best and I love the concept of this one. Elrina's timidity was a very funny contrast to her size advantage over Erik. The vision he received in the baptismal bowl was an interesting twist too.
Author's Response:
I didn't honestly expect to be continuing it, but have recently come into a lot of time on my hands so I got inspired to keep it going.
Date: March 22 2020 10:09 AM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.3
Does anyone feel like attempting to interpret the prophecy?
Date: March 22 2020 10:08 AM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.2
You won the bet, here's your 0.00$ I owe you.
But really, it's great to see you're back to working on this story, I thought you had decided it wasn't cruel enough by your standards and abandoned it.
Author's Response:
Not that it wasn't cruel enough, more just hadn't had the time or inspiration for it. Still, happy folks still like this!
Date: February 13 2020 3:26 AM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.3
I know this story hasn't been updated in quite some time, but I really love it. I've read it several times over the past two years, but regretfully never reviewed till now.
(I have read all the chapters, so this suggestion/vote for his final choice/wife does not come from merely reading up to this chapter, but the entire story as a whole)
I've got to say out of all the bridal prospects, Eva Redfist has got to be my favorite.
Love her dominant and strong attitude and body, she's a perfect 'woman in charge' and isn't shy about letting others know about it.
I also feel that she and Erik would be great together with time, they have a good raport going, and I feel like she would love and protect him once they develop true feelings for one another, she'd be ready to massacre anyone who tried to hurt her husband XD
Plus she would not be shy in the bedroom, as shown, and while desiring her own pleasure I could see her also reciprocating, plus your description off her makes her sound rather attractive, even if she is considered plain, her personality combined with her looks, make her appealing.
She seems like behind all the fighting and violence, she is a lot more down to earth and not as stuck up or demanding, and how she and Erik actually converse and talk to one another.
So yeah, this is me just hoping you do return to this story one day, and putting my vote and desire in for Eva to be his bride and final choice, let him have a sexy warrior princess at his side....or above him XD
Date: June 09 2017 7:34 AM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.2
Much as I've enjoyed the stories I've read from your catalogue, this one is by far my favorite. I hope you'll come back to it some time.
Date: January 22 2017 9:00 AM Title: The List
Well, at least you were honest. Brutally honest, honest nonetheless. I completely understand your reason for protecting the rights your own work.
Of course, it would be nice to know when you'd restart it. I actually wrote a fan chapter, during the time I was waiting for your reply. And I understand if you can't give me a specific answer, but it would be nice to know.
Date: January 17 2017 7:36 PM Title: The List
Ok Hi!
Listen, it's been a while since I've been on your page but I am begging you: finish Toxicity.
It's gotten really intense and I cannot bear it to be left open-ended. And when I say finish, I mean proper resolution, either through liberty or death.
If you lost all interest, could you possibly surrender the rights to me or someone who wants to finish it? I know that is asking a lot but if you have any idea as to how this was going to end I could write up a draft and email it to you. If not, that is fine... sort of.
I mean no disrespect. I really just this to be concluded!
Author's Response:
Heyo. So. Didn't quite expect people to like probably one of my worst stories haha.
I am a tad strapped for time in recent days. Like. A lot. So writing, when it happens is sporadic if blissfully glorious. Its also on things I'm generally feeling at the time. I do things, because I want to do them. I also write things because I want to write them. No real obligation or 'or else' to it. Not being paid to do it after all. Its simply a hobby.
Toxicity, I could see myself finishing if for no other reason than resolution, but it wouldn't be quick. I also can't promise satisfaction with the ending I've in mind. I'm not a happy endings kinda guy. Should be obvious reading most of my stuff.
Now that also said, in the vein of me possibly finishing this I'd not want to surrender the rights. Last think I want is someone to just butcher the whole thing, yeah its not my best. But its something I wrote. Now that said, Toxicity is in the Shadowrun verse, so not as though I can claim to own it haha. Since its essentially fanfiction. But no, couldn't see myself granting my blessing to someone continuing it. I also can't say for certain that conclusion would come in a timely manner.
But hey, nothing stopping ya from doing it anyway despite what I say. So if you want to write fanfiction of fanfiction, that is your choice there. I don't mean to sound rude if I do, just giving you my honest and complete answer.
Date: December 14 2016 3:06 PM Title: The List
Amazing story, INWTB please continue it.
Date: December 13 2016 9:53 PM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.2
No, I didn't expect to see this continued but I'm very glad that it was! Nice to see this back. Erik seems to be taking the rudeness a little far in this chapter. That's no way to win a potential bride or, you know, avoid being squashed to death for that matter. Elrina could use some more confidence but that could very easily backfire on our homunculous hero.
Author's Response:
Erik? Win a bride? Haaaaaaaa.