[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 9:21 AM Title: Prospect #2 Amelia Valendris Pt. 1
You think he'd _happier_ that she only wants them to be the "breast" of friends. ;-)
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 9:02 PM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.2
Intresting how the most severe looking women have turned out to be the friendliest. While the fair and proper women have been cruel and airheaded. This is certainly your most lighthearted and comical story so far. Its been a treat to say the least. I laughed at Lucina's comeuppance in the last chapter. Is this story really going to have 100 prospects. If so this will be an epic of all epics.
Author's Response:
Well, 'friendly', compared to the others at least. With a possible exception for Lea.
I'll certainly be trying to shoot for that, I'm just updating as it comes to mind!
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 2:37 PM Title: Prospect #1 Marie Delacour Pt. 2
One down; ninety-nine to go.
LOL!
Author's Response:
Its going to be a looong path ahead lol.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 2:33 PM Title: Prospect #1 Marie Delacour Pt.1
X-D
This chapter reminded me of that scene in COMING TO AMERICA, where Eddie Murphy semi-rhetorically asks Arsenio Hall: "So, you would share your bed--and your fortune--with a beautiful fool?"
And the best answer Arsenio can give is: "It is tradition!"
Author's Response:
Never watched Coming to America, though I get what you mean there! XD
Date: August 09 2015 9:35 PM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.1
The chapters with the twins were extremely sexy yet disturbing at the same time. Loved the mouthplay scene. I also liked how seeing the one sister betrayed made Erik examine his own opinions on love.
Eva Redfist seems like she's going to be a good one. That "bite sized princey" line was indeed a classic.
Author's Response:
The twins were rather twisted fun to write. Just kind of popped into my head and wrote itself onto the page. Very good fun.
[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 8:27 PM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.1
Ooooh...
The suspense is real :D.
"I'm here because I heard some bite sized princey was here to try and work his way into my panties. Is that him?"
F***ING LOVED THAT LINE!
Author's Response:
Ha! I rather enjoyed writing it as well.
[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 3:29 PM Title: The List
Wonderful story as always. I don't see how this is going to end up well for Erik. Hopefully we see some gentle or mini giantess action soon.
Author's Response:
Oh, I'd say either one or the other should be occuring sooner or later. ;)
[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 12:57 PM Title: The List
Politics does, indeed, make strange bedfellows.
Author's Response:
Very, very strange.
Date: August 08 2015 5:15 PM Title: Prospects #4&5 The Liolis Twins Pt. 3
I'm continuing to adore the work you're doing here. There was a great mix of really satisfying action that ultimately led to a surprising moment of character reflection. It was nice to see the prince actually succeed over one of his suitors for the first time, as much of a jerk as he can be.
It might just be that I've read enough macro fiction on the site that I'm semi-jaded, but I'm more or less at the point where any new stories have got to really grab me immediately to make me want to keep going along further than a few chapters, and this is one of the few that I immediately want to read the new material when it's posted. Again, very strong show.
Author's Response:
Thanks again, Jack! I'm just really writing them as they come. Writing smaller self contained stories within the scope of a larger one is actually rather fun honestly, lets one focus more on the action since you've got to keep each encounter to at most 3-4 parts to keep things fresh consistantly.
Glad to know its grabbed you, hopefully the chapters to come keep you just as invested!
[Report This]Date: August 08 2015 12:51 PM Title: Prospects #4&5 The Liolis Twins Pt. 2
Two sisters with different personalities! A gentle one and a cruel one! Let's see what happens in the bedroom!
Author's Response:
So many possibilities!
Date: August 08 2015 7:15 AM Title: The List
Thats not sibling love, that is Lannister level!
Author's Response:
I did consider having them be a pair of pasty blondes actually... Before the same comparison smacked me in the head.
Date: August 07 2015 6:32 PM Title: Prospect #3 Knight-Princess Lea Silverhand Pt.3
Fun little story! Its interesting to see how each princess handles and behaves around Erik. My favorite princess so far was this third one. The second one was sexy but too overwhelming, and the first one was too airheaded. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next princess!
Author's Response:
Lea is certainly a popular one it seems, glad to see her parts were enjoyable! I'll try to keep things as fresh as possible. Got quite a bit of material to work with after all!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 5:57 PM Title: Prospect #3 Knight-Princess Lea Silverhand Pt.3
Loved this princess. Intelligent, and quick-witted as well. Out of the 3 so far, she seems the best choice!
Author's Response:
I'd certainly go with her over what Erik has encounted thus far!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 12:18 PM Title: The List
I'm really loving this concept, and all of the lovely ladies introduced so far. To be honest, I was a bit turned off when you called our hero a narcissist to begin with, but I'm glad he's more of a kid at heart who's in over his head than a pompous ass. Not to say I don't find pompous asses getting what's coming to them unsatisfying, but how you've written him is wonderful.
When it comes to suggestions, how about a non-human suitor as a change of pace? I may be cutting the feet lovers short here, but I'd love to see a lamia princess under the spotlight. They're known to be very passionate about their feelings, after all. Perhaps she has a cute accent and little concept of human culture, and our little hero gets up close and personal with her race's traditions.
In any case, keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Narcissist might have been a tad much on my part though he certainly has his moments. I figured having him be completely unsympathetic would make the story less enjoyable.
Hmm... I actually hadn't thought of a lamia but I think it might be interesting to work with! I'll add it to the list as a possible future encounter. Could actually be fun to write him dealing with a snake woman.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 10:27 AM Title: Prospect #3 Knight-Princess Lea Silverhand Pt.2
Lea is definitely my favorite princess so far. It'll be fun waiting to see who takes the title from her and so on.
Author's Response:
There should be plenty of suitors to come that could very well do so. That said I'm enjoying writing her as well.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 9:40 AM Title: The List
There is so many different combinations that you could use with the remaining 94 princesses. It's going to be interesting to see where this ends up going. Hopefully we get to see some mini giantess action going on when he meets a princess who is two to three times bigger than him because of a curse or something.
Author's Response:
97, Erik still has a looong way to go before he's even past the ten mark. As to the rest, guess we'll see further down the list!
Date: August 07 2015 9:07 AM Title: The List
Love your stuff. You do a wonderful job with characters, and hit all the right buttons. Really enjoying Lea so far especially. It's a good approach as well, and I'm really enjoying the creative framing device you're using here. I'm more of a growth guy, but I'm having a lot of fun with your stories which is a very good sign.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It makes for an interesting project I can just pick up and roll with, glad others are enjoying it!
Date: August 07 2015 6:54 AM Title: Prospect #3 Knight-Princess Lea Silverhand Pt.2
Love it. The variety in these chapters is excellent. I do hope we see one last chapter with this lady to carry out that victory decree of hers, but even if not, this is shaping up to be one of the stronger fantasy stories I've seen here in a long while. Very good show.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and not to worry. We aren't quite past Lea just yet.
Date: August 07 2015 5:26 AM Title: Prospect #3 Knight-Princess Lea Silverhand Pt.2
Well this isn't as bad as the others one, Erik can at least take heart from that. Plus Lea is an intelligent woman who at least respects him.
Author's Response:
Hey, I figure out of a list of 100 highborn women at least a few have to be halfway decent to him. Halfway.
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 4:38 PM Title: Prospect #2 Amelia Valendris Pt.3
A great chapter! This story has nothing but potential and I'm excited to see what you do with it. I can only wonder what the future princesses have in store for our tiny prince.