[Report This]Date: March 21 2016 4:45 PM Title: The Scarlett States of Utopia
I would love seeing a sequel to this story. The idea of some poor college kid desperatly needs money and takes in some medicine/science testint job and is shrunk to nano size is awesome, of coruse him totally have no clue what he signs for, totally thinks it's just an ordinary testing job for new medicine or vitamine products. The ironic twist could be that at the same time, the facility takes testers for new products which on the other hands get paied too, though they just have the "ordinary" testing for new eating products, and the micro kid lands in their meals. The irony would be them both meeting before in the waiting room, and the girl maybe even walking in him and be like cant you watch where you step, hope you have a shitty day, just literally...
[Report This]Date: August 15 2015 4:09 PM Title: The Scarlett States of Utopia
Couldn't she just have wirelessly reprogrammed his brain to _make_ him her willing foot-slave? If not,...
...that could be a potential means of liberating America from Scarlett's dictatorship!
Author's Response:
She could, however, despite how smart she is, she's cocky. She would rather have fun with people, rather than simply control their minds. And this could lead to her downfall. Of course though, you'll have to wait and see what I have in store xD
[Report This]Date: August 15 2015 11:50 AM Title: The Scarlett States of Utopia
I wonder where are all those women that "love" their husbands. Did they just go 'oh well, I guess I will have fun too' or are they in hiding so they don't get shrunk?
What about kids, teens, or even babies? Do male kids shrink while little girls stay big, or does this shrinking only happen once they reach a certain age or something?
Loving the idea of women giving Scarlet ideas. It could lead to many new possibilities.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Part of them are playing along, part are in hiding, and part failed and became tiny themselves.
As for younger males, they too have been shrunken. Even babies. She's a cruel, cruel woman.
There will be some interesting chapters coming up, that is for sure xD
I'll hope to have one up come Monday. C:
[Report This]Date: August 14 2015 6:40 PM Title: What Goes In, Must Come Out
Looks like more than 90% of the male population will shrink.
Not sure what Nathan will do now. If he escapes, no one can help him besides a woman or one of these few unshrunken men.
I don't think anyone can stop her. She is just too powerful. It will take a miracle to put an end to it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
She may be extremely powerful, but her one flaw is Nathan. I won't give too many spoilers, but let's just say, she'd be wise to dispose of him, or at least, keep him far away from her haha
[Report This]Date: August 14 2015 2:13 PM Title: What Goes In, Must Come Out
Where are Gru and the Minions when you really need them (to save the day)?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, I imagine they'd be shrunk too. Well... I don't know about the minions as she was targeting human males xD
[Report This]Date: August 14 2015 12:31 PM Title: Need Money?
This story seems to be getting a lot more interesting now.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've got a good idea where I'm going for now, so I'll try and keep things interesting, as well as still giving the good stuff.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2015 3:05 PM Title: Mayo, Ketchup, Pickles, Tiny Man
WHOA! This chapter was like "Word Processor of the Gods" (with vore).
Author's Response:
Let's just say that memories is the smallest thing it can do. In fact, I won't spoil too much, but it will most certainly be used in a future chapter for something a little more major.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 11:56 AM Title: Need Money?
I hope you add more butt and gas content than just one chapter!! Cause that chapter was the fucking best chapter ever!! Please add more booty?? 😍. Al I love this story and I hope you don't quit or leave it anytime soon. This story is a freakin 11/10!!!!
Date: August 12 2015 9:03 AM Title: Well... That Escalated Quickly
Hmm...
Not bad...
Author's Response:
Thanks c:
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 7:00 AM Title: Well... That Escalated Quickly
As hypocritical as Nicole the Landlady sounded, what Dr. Scarlett did to her proves the not-so-good doctor is a closet sociopath.
Author's Response:
Yep, and this puts Nathan in a dangerous situation. Before, to him, she was only a little crazy. But he's seeing the even darker side of her she his so well.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 2:32 PM Title: Why Did it Have to be a Chick Flick?
I seriously half-expected he'd die from gas-phyxiation in this chapter (thereby negating any hope of a fifth one).
Obviously, I was wrong. ;-)
Author's Response:
Haha, she did make sure he was resilient. But, I also saved it from being fart upon fart, because that seemed to be done too often. Don't worry though, I'll say this much, you can expect plenty more chapters coming, and I'm sure there'll even be a return to the butt before long c;
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 2:50 PM Title: Field Tests
Enjoying the story so far and looking forward to seeing what tests he will be subjected to in the future.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've got many plans, and we'll possibly even have an escape at some point. X3
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 2:13 PM Title: Field Tests
So, Dr. Scarlett is conducting experiments in unaware giantess/teleported shrunken man interactions?
Innovative!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm not yet sure where I'm going with her character, but I've got a feeling that she may even work on other size experiments. ;)
Date: August 07 2015 6:25 AM Title: In the Hands of Science!
I have to agree the chapters are a little short. Other than that this story sounds interesting and I hope you continue it.
Also, contrary to what zol said, the (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers) tag is correct (1 cm is about 0.39 inch so less than half an inch)
Author's Response:
Well, to be honest, I don't have any place to save chapters to save them up before posting, so I do daily uploads, just so it's a little easier on me, than having to try and make a super long chapter all at once. I'm glad you like it though, and I do plan to continue. I hope to have this story go on for a long time.
I thought it was in the appropriate tag, but just to make sure that I was doing everything proper, I did adjust it to be safe. Thanks for letting me know though c:
Date: August 04 2015 10:06 AM Title: Need Money?
1cm isnt between (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers), and it's too big to work with those tags, which are of course choosen good, though I doubt it will lead to anything, chapter is too short, but surprise me better. Maybe wait a little bit and combine two or three chapters into one. 6xx words is just too short for a chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for pointing that out, although, the next chapter is going to fix that problem. This is the starting chapter only. The chapters are on the shorter side, but I'm intending to have daily updates, to compensate.