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Reviewer: Tinyman345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2018 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! Love the casualness and carelessness of her rampage. She's not really there for any reason other than to cause death and destruction just because she can. Love the cruelness she shows smashing people under her bat and stomping the city under her cleats.

Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is a regression from your previous stories. that is sort of to be expected though since this might be unfamiliar territory to you, stylistically.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

*admits he was hoping for a tiny ladies tortured under bigger ladies fresh from softball feet but still a good read*

Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't know if the ump was watching the same game I was. 

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