Reviewer: DontHaveAPenName Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2016 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

Are you going to continue writing these? Also if you do are you going to do any F/f I noticed the F/m at the top and was just wondering? Also these are great so far. I gave it an 8 for the rating. ^_^

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 2: Nourishment

I like Sharon. Strong character who doesn't act like a totall jerk because the government says, it's ok.
“They’re smaller than us. So they’re not humans.”. What a stupid way of thinking by the sheep people.

Author's Response: I completely agree with you. Sharon was my favorite character, and just because the people are better doesn't mean they're better. But thanks for showing interest in my story! :P

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

Well done

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

Great job! Though, I love writing the more sadistic things, I know people have wanted to see a gentler side to this universe. I think this is a good start! You do a great job of maintaining the essence of White Smite while making it gentle.

The only complaint I have would be with the mechanics of the shrinking virus, but that's just being nitpicky.

Keep up the good work!

 

Author's Response: Thanks! You don't know how much this review from you means to me! I've admired your work for a long time, and it has motivated me a lot!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

I like this, delving into the gentler side of the White Smite universe.  Would have loved it if you described the giantess in greater detail. 

Author's Response: This was more of a test chapter to see if people would be interested in the story. My following chapters should be a bit better.