[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sleepy Headaches
So he has finally begun to see that something is very wrong. The doctor dosed him good. Seems like things are gonna pick up from here on. Can't wait!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sleepy Headaches
An initially unaware shrinkie? How innovative! :-)
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 16: Pessimism
The plot thickens...and the slow shrinking quickens.*
*Sorry! Couldn't resist. ;-)
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 15: Shocking Mark
So, Dr. Hiroshi could be mind-freaking him? If so, she's doing a better job with Our Hero than Criss Angel's Supernaturalists did with me at Foxwoods.
They got no stars. This chapter gets five!
[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 14: Reassurances
A very sweet interlude, indeed. :-)
[Report This]Date: August 08 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 13: Setting Up for a Closer Look
Suspicion Number Three raising its ugly head: this doctor longs to keep Our Hero for herself (once the slow shrinkage is complete). And Becky is not a co-conspirator, at all.
[Report This]Date: August 08 2015 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 12: I'm Worried
Hmmmm! Is Becky-Wecky starting to have second thoughts?*
*Sorry! The "girly girl" comment made me do it. ;-D
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 12: I'm Worried
You're keeping it very interesting. We can still only guess. We know very little and you let as asume a lot of things.
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: Doctor, I Have a Question
Ahhhh, I see. The doctors motives possibly aren't as malicious as I originally thought.
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 11: Doctor, I Have a Question
Hmmmmm! Is the allegedly good doctor already crushing on Our Hero?
Date: August 06 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 10: You're Shorter!
Good slow pace. We can only guess now about all possible outcomes. Carycomic and the Shrunken Scholar theories are interesting. I wonder if the intentions of Rebecca and de doctor are the same.
Date: August 06 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 10: You're Shorter!
Very well written. I like the slow pace and the effort you put in the suspicious atmosphere you convey in this story.
A few inches less would make things interesting!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 10: You're Shorter!
I wonder how long it'll be before our protagonist realizes that something is going on. Maybe after a couple more cups of tea? And it seems my previous guess of the receptionist looking out for him might be true.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: You're Shorter!
Hmmmmmmmmmmm! Something tells me that the shrinkage will start to become a little bit faster, now. Not as fast, perhaps, as the blonde receptionist's fate (if my first guess from the previous review proves true)! But, fast enough that the shrinkage of Our Hero will become more noticeable, a whole lot sooner, to him.*
*Perhaps even by the cliff-hanger of the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 9: I'm Looking for Someone
Two possibilities: the frigid blonde receptionist was either an undercover Federal agent, out to get this corporation for abusing its shrinking technology.
Or, she was a ghost. Sort of like one of those phantom hitchhikers! Only the site of the tragic death she's linked to is her desk.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 9: I'm Looking for Someone
Liking it so far. I would prefer if the chapters were just a bit longer, but the frequent updates makes up for that. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I'm working on getting them a bit longer. Hoping that overtime they will continue to get long. I know Chapter 8 was a bit short, even for me.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2015 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Job Ad
Fully agree with Carycomic and The Shrunken Scholar. This story sounds interesting. Slow Size Change is also very interesting. Rebecca's favorite size sounds like baby size.
What's interesting in this is how the characters will develop. What their true character is ultimately like and their behaviour on this journey at every size difference. Are their motives the same, etc.
[Report This]Date: August 03 2015 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 8: Rebecca's Sneak Attack
Yep! She's definitely in on it.
That poor schnook!
[Report This]Date: August 03 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 8: Rebecca's Sneak Attack
Very ominous. It seems all three of these ladies are playing mind games with our clueless protagonist.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2015 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 7: Feeling Alienated
Ah-ha! It's going to be slow shrink.
Cleverly done variation!
Author's Response:
It's something I've not gone into much in the past. Figured it was a good a time as any to give it a go