Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's a nice story although you should have split the different chapters into separate chapters on giantessworld. There should also be a proper summary too. Also here:

“SORRY BUCKO, BUT THE TABLES ARE TURN

You mean turned and there might be other errors but to be honest I wasn't paying that much attention as the story was quite enjoyable.

At the start of part 7 the formatting suddenly changes and the lines become the half length of the previous parts. Other than the issues I noted, I felt it was a good story so don't be discouraged.