[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 12:23 AM Title: Tom's Story
Poor Tom, if he listened his sister last night that would never happend.
If Karoline is kind enough, maybe she will let him get back to Tess :)
Author's Response:
Well shall see how poor Tom fares in the next few chapters...
[Report This]Date: August 08 2015 3:38 PM Title: Sunday Morning
Seeing as how Janine regards him to have been a birthday gift, I don't see Tom being given back to Tess, at all.
Author's Response:
Only time shall tell...
Date: August 08 2015 1:05 PM Title: Tom's Story
Even though it is my request, I like to review it as if I dont know what to expect. I cant really explain it. It just seems more fun like that.
Also, my predictions when I say "I want to see" or "I hope to see" are like mini suggestions.
So far the story is beyond my expectations since I pictured it to be quite simple. However, by including many details and more characters and plot, the story feels more well rounded and on its way to a masterpiece!
This is probably that one story that when I say "I cant wait for the next chapter!", I really really cant wait. Im just that excited.
And as always, I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks alot Tom, i appreciate it, after all this was your orignial idea and I'm glad it has exceeded your expectations. :)
[Report This]Date: August 08 2015 12:54 PM Title: Sunday Morning
Loving the detail! Most giantess stories dont even consider food, or hunger as necessary to be included, so Im glad you put it in this chapter.
I have always liked the 'tiny guy is cold, so lets warm him up with something from my body." The tiny man then embraces the warmth despite where it came from, and its sexy becuase we know the guy doesnt like being warmed up like that.
Janine going for a drive? Is this because of what Tess asked? Seems like it. Perhaps Janinie left Tom in her room, so Tom wont try to get Tess's attention.
I wonder what will happen to Tom while Janine is away. This could be a perfect transition for Karolina! While Janine is away, Karolina is here to play! In addition, Tom said that Karolina is a MILF. Tom could focus on loving Karolina now that Janine has be different than he expected.
Karolina could act like Sophie from your other story and become gentle yet horny. Also, she should maintain her control on him. She can lure him to trust him by using sweet talk, and then take advantage of Tom while he becomes dependent on her.
What I like about this chapter, is that its not that predictable. Sure Janine left, but we dont know what she is going to do. Tom is left alone but we dont know what he will do. The next chapter feels so open that anything can happen, and I hope Karolina shows up. She might give Tom a glimmer of hope.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Janine got a brand new car for her birthday, not quite as cool as a little man, but it is only proper she show her appreciation to her parents for the gift. Karolina is still a few chapters away, but I won't let you down ;)
Date: August 08 2015 10:08 AM Title: Tom's Story
Guess Tom will be so over Janine by now!
Author's Response:
Torn between the danger and the satisfaction, almost like being married, oh wait, was that my outside voice?
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 9:21 AM Title: Tess
Can you say "Top-secret Federal facility," Tess?
Insert X-FILES theme, here.
Author's Response:
"There is no such facility," says the faceless man half concealed in the shadows, tendrils of smoke crawling off the end of his cigarette as he fades back into the gloom,
Date: August 06 2015 9:00 PM Title: Tom's Story
Tom's grandfather suffered the same fate, does that mean the process is irreversible? If so, then Tess better run over to Janine's place immediately! Tom needs saving.
Author's Response:
Will be looking into the grandfather stuff but only on the periphery. the well gets deeper.
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 7:09 PM Title: Tess
Whoa! So this must be the twist that you were adding to this story! A shrunken grandfather as well?!! Hmm. Does this mean that Tess's grandpa is under the care of some women at a nursing home? That could be interesting, unless it's just speculation from Tess.
So Tess wants answers and decides that the best way is to spend time with Janine and secretly get some answers without Janine knowing. It would be funny if Tom was "with Janine" when Tess talks to her.
Also, if Tess does in fact spot Tom, she might think that Tom is enjoying himself, and won't bother taking him. Perhaps she wont see Tom's fear in his eyes and instead sees joy. Surely, then Tess will let Janine keep Tom. (I hope Tess doesn't take Tom back.)
I wonder why the grandpa was so worried and said it was urgent. Is there a side effect to the shrinking or is the shrinking part that makes it urgent. I hope it's just the shrinking that got her grandpa worried.
Don't worry Tess, Tom will definatley survive in Janine's house. Besides, what could go wrong in a house with two lovely women such as Janine and Karolina? Nothing, becuase this story is about to have its fun!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 5:35 PM Title: Tess
Oooh...
Lovin' the suspense!
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 2:00 PM Title: Janine
Finally got to reviewing this. Loved this chapter, wonderful how she found him and did all that! hopefully there will be some sex toy or anal stuff. Looking forward to a little more play here, what kind of situtaion will he awake too. I am also looking forward to tess reaction to her brother situation when she is told. Hopefully janine sticks to thinking tess gave him to her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, just srtarting to get into the meat of this story, we'll see how it develops
Date: August 05 2015 11:27 AM Title: Janine
P.S.---I would've preferred giving a more elaborate review. But, I can't possibly improve on TomSpeedy's analysis.
Author's Response:
No worries, :)
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 11:24 AM Title: Janine
"Come, Tom."
A pun worthy of Colin Mochrie. SUPER-LOL!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 11:01 AM Title: Janine
Once again you've out done yourself! :)
I hope this is leading to another great panty scene and maybe some awesome interaction in the butt area..
Keep up the awesome work and look forwards to the next updates to all your stories..I;ve been hoping the book gets updated and the house keeper and the Russian thug have some more interaction too..
Author's Response:
There is an amazing panty scene coming up in a couple of chapters, at least I think so, however, my opinion is probably subjective :P
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 12:41 AM Title: Janine
I loved so of it. Please sir, may I have some more?
Author's Response:
Why certainly, :)
Date: August 04 2015 9:13 PM Title: Janine
Wow! Did you read my mind?!!! This is exactly how I envisioned Janine to act, and it was even sooner than I expected, meaning the good parts are about to get started! :)
I love Tom's reaction to Janine's behaviour: fear. The fact that he can't resist makes it even sexier! He was so distracted by her beauty that he didn't realized of the worst that can happen.
Saliva water boarding? Now that's some next level torture right there! Soon, I can picture Janine tying Tom up with tape, dental floss, string, something to make him stay with her.
Janine probably is also thinking that it's alright to treat Tom this way. After all, he was spying on her, got a peek at her while being naked, and that fact that he has a crush on her makes her think that her acts are sexy in his eyes.
I was pictured Janine to be this girl that closely resembled "Lily" from "The contract". Sexy girl with evil tactics. In addition, I picture Karoline to be somewhat like "Sophie" from the story "Sophie". Sexy woman who horny and gentle. So far, Janine is exactly what I expected, in fact, I think she was beyond my expectations. I hope Karoline exceeds them too.
Well, Tom got his wish. He had sex with Janine. Not what he expected, but I bet it was defiantely worth the experience. The question is how long he can last with Janine being this abusive. Part of me never wants it to end. It's entertaining to read. Maybe some butt action from Janine could be nice. It suits her cruel demeanor.
I really like how you handled the Tess situation. You wrapped it all up quite nicely with Janine's last statement this chapter. If Janine sends Tess that text, then Tess will assume that Tom has got his wish and she won't bother on retrieving him back! Janine is going to say 'best present ever'. I think the best present for any giantess in any story is a tiny man taped to the inside of a pair of panties. That's my opinion, since the girl/woman then knows where to keep that man, and they will know that their present won't leave them.
We know Janine will want to keep this present for a while. She is going to have some fun. Tom.....might....have some fun. For a while. Soon, what he thinks is sexy, is instead going to be scary.
So far the best chapter in this story! I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Glad you approve Tom, after all this one is the one you requested, :)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2015 7:55 PM Title: Janine
There goes the happy ending I was hoping for. But then again, i can't help but like this a bit more. Excited for what's to come!
Author's Response:
She got a happy ending
[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 4:14 PM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
Two words: UH-OH!
Author's Response:
Um yeah this could be a long night.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 1:25 PM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
Love the erotic-ness! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Things heat up next chapter. I think creating a little foreplay can help get the story smoldering some. Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 11:40 AM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
My heart is pounding as well! Unaware just has this sneaky, sexy and dangerous feeling that makes every move seem like a thrill.
Tom may be clever, but I think his lust for Janine is distracting him from his survival instincts.
Rarely does my heart rate increase while reading a story without sexual content. I have a feeling that that's about to change soon.
I can't for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom glad you're still along for the ride. It's about to get crazy...
Date: August 01 2015 9:10 AM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
And that Tom, is when she finds out a tiny man has been fondling her in her sleep! I would run if I were you.
By the way this: She was lying on her side, back to him, strands of her long unkempt golden hair strewn about the landscape, her weight creating a gravity well in the soft mattress
Gravity well is a very unique way to describe the scene. I like it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I appreciate the comments it helps me develop my writing voice. I thought defining her weight in those terms would convey a sense of size. My thanks for the recognition of it :)