Date: August 18 2015 5:06 PM Title: Tom's Story
There are writers that update a story once a week. There are writers who update a story every other day. Then you have people like Duggernaut who update 6 stories every other day.
There should be a top ten for most consistent updating authors or something.
Author's Response:
I didn't realize my updates were out of the ordinary. I could slow down...just messing
Date: August 18 2015 11:27 AM Title: Tom's Story
Yeah, I was wondering the same thing as @Nostory's review below me. How are you so fast at updating. Every 1-2 days there's a nw chapter out! How?!
Author's Response:
Red Bull just kidding just trying to share my stories and hope people enjoys. :)
Date: August 18 2015 8:28 AM Title: Tom's Story
I got to ask though, how do you update so quickly and not for this story but all of your stories? You're so prolific that it amazes me.
Author's Response:
Lol 20 words per minute stories come in bursts and then I just dole them out. Sometimes I go too fast and miss some things. Great reviewers help keep me on track, my thanks to them :)
Date: August 18 2015 7:41 AM Title: Tess
I can only hope Tess knows what she is doing or Tom will be stuck with Janine until she crushes him by accident.
Author's Response:
I thinking it's like butterfly wings once touched will Tom figure it out before Janine does damage he won't be able to walk away from? Will Tess be there to catch him before he falls? Thanks for the read and review :)
[Report This]Date: August 18 2015 7:21 AM Title: Tess
Another update!
[Report This]Date: August 18 2015 6:33 AM Title: Tess
Sorry, Grandpa Wentworth. But, Samira most _definitely_ needed to know. After all; Tom can't be rescued from his current predicament with a simple, single-handed snatch-and-grab! ;-)
Seriously, though; I love it when these stories half-seriously include a little spy-fi action. Thanks for doing that!
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 7:17 PM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
"Be careful what you wish for..."
You know, come to think of it? That'd make a great title for my next story!
;-)
Author's Response:
Absolutely. For anyone reading this review be sure to check out Carycomic's 'BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR' it's an excellent read!
Date: August 17 2015 2:35 PM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
Tom's a pet. Wonder what Tess would think if she read this.
Author's Response:
Be careful what you wish for... :P
[Report This]Date: August 16 2015 7:48 PM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
This story is fantastic, Janine is such a sexy giantess, love her attitude and treatment of Tom. One small critique, I think Tom would have been a little worse for wear after spending all day in her panties, would have liked to seen some descriptions about that as well as his time spent in there and being orgasmed on repeatedly. But you've already churned out 15 chapters and written a ton so I get why you may not have wanted to do that, lol.
Just being greedy because this story rocks!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read the story and give it a review. I appreciate your input and have tried to make up for overlooking all day in the panties and being baby fresh. I sometimes get ahead of myself and miss some of the minutia that gives the story the extra pop. Thanks keeping me on my toes!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2015 2:31 PM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
This ring and chain just showed Tom that he is just a mere slave to Janine as she can do what she wants with him.
This chain could be used in many ways. She could just lift and lower Tom to any place on her. She can let him fall inside her, and take him out. Then let him fall, and take him out. Then again and again.
She could also use the chain to 'chain' him up to some place in her room so he doesn't escape.
Of course, if she doesn't want him to escape, she can just carry him inside her. She will always feel him so no need to use a chain.
Not sure what else she can do with a chain and collar besides humiliate him. I prefer him taped up and gagged instead of being chained. That way Tom is more helpless and the tape won't get in the way of some activities like a long chain.
The chain is a great symbolic way of breaking Tom down. Now he looks at Janine as an evil sexy cruel goddess and wonder if there is anyone or any hope that can save him.
This stuff is getting intense. I like it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Janine is still playing, trying to figure out what she wants to do next - wait for the hairbrush scene :-O
[Report This]Date: August 16 2015 10:06 AM Title: Monday Afterschool Delight
Well, Tom is now finding out just why such adolescent feelings are called "crushes."
The ones having them feel "crushed" when their affections aren't reciprocated (which is often the rule rather than the exception).
Author's Response:
Too very true,, unrequited love or objectified obsession, lethal mix.
Date: August 15 2015 12:06 AM Title: Monday Morning, Detention
gets very good
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read this story and provide a review, hope I can continue to keep you entertained
[Report This]Date: August 14 2015 3:05 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention
Excellent
Continuar...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the thumbs up, :)
[Report This]Date: August 13 2015 11:05 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention
Damn, Janine is sexy!
The way she took Tess's hand and brought it down to her underwear was amazing. I didn't even expect Tom to be there.
Also, the way that Janine said "where he wants to be" just made me cheer. It's true, he wants to be there. I wish I was Tom. The girl of your dreams keeping you in her panties. Wow!
And yes Tess, Tom does want to be there. No need to rescue him. Just enjoy the show that Janine is giving you.
Wow! How attractive is Janine? She can even lure Tess? Now that's seduction at its finest. Seduction to get what you want. However, I'm not sure what Janine wants to do with Tess. This is not one of those stories where Janine could shrink Tess. However, Janine can convince Tess to stop worrying about Tom. I think that's Janine's reason.
That kiss was just a tease. Janine is just sending an invitation to a second party. And this time it's private. 1 on 1 with a special tiny guest. I would feel a bit weird if Tess got intimate with Tom, so I do wonder where is this going.
Janine wants to share Tom? No way! I thought she wanted Tom for herself. Perhaps it's just a way to get Tess off her back. I'm not sure. I just hope Janine knows what she is doing becuase I don't want her to lose Tom to Tess. I like Tom as Janine's pet, or even Karolina's pet. But Tess, hmm, I wonder what Janine has in mind.
I love Miss Addison's reaction. And also Janine's reply was fantastic. It made it so awkward that Miss Addison didn't want to talk to them anymore.
Great stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Janine is damn sexy, and the queen of manipulation, she's just finding her groove, or at least Tom is...
[Report This]Date: August 13 2015 8:45 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention
Amazing ! Janine is so hungry for sexy times.
The threesome is such a good idea, it has to happen !
(And the best way for Tess to take his brother back)
Author's Response:
Janine is flush with adolescent hormones, poor girl is a slave to her own body chemsitry, she...just...can't...help...herself!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2015 7:19 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention
So, "lesbian" clear about this: Tess is about to come out of the proverbial closet?
Author's Response:
Teenaged confusion and angst, uncertainly and indecision marked by a fledgling need for autonomy, not necessarily a resident of Sapphos
Date: August 13 2015 6:15 PM Title: Monday Morning, Detention
*gasps*
Looks like Tom's in a BIG problem!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!
Author's Response:
Big but still very tight, oh my
[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 3:34 PM Title: Sunday Evening
The prefect definition of sexy and cruel! That is how Tom views Janine.
I love this combination because while Tom gets aroused by Janine and her seductive behaviour, he becomes more willing to do what she pleases even though it is downright cruel. He is mentally battling his emotions whether these situations are sexy, or horrible. Its up to him to decide.
Its funny. I was watching some clips with women dripping hot wax on their partners and it just looks painful. So with that background, it helped me picture that scene as the wax landed on Tom.
In addition, I enjoy how you describe the anus closing around his neck. The fact that he cant move his limbs that much, and she has control on his body just by squeezing her cheeks is just awesome.
I think that her ass is the best place to keep Tom for Janine. For Karoline, its the front of her panties. Both of these places keep hidden from view and bring these women pleasure. Also, they know where Tom is at all times and no one has any idea that he is there.
Janine is sexy and cruel. Her ass is sexy and cruel. (For a tiny guy like Tom). Being inside an ass is hell and thats what I imagine Tom to be in. So I like where this is going.
Hot chapter 10/10.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom,
You asked for sexy and cruel, ;). Soon it will be Karolina's turn, we'll see what kind of ginatess she will be
[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 9:14 AM Title: Sunday Evening
That candle wax scene reminds me of something similar from an early Daryl Hannah film co-starring Edward Albert and Valerie Quennesen.
Author's Response:
Summer Lovers - Daryl Hannah played Carly Featherstone (I didn't see it, I looked it up :P)
Date: August 11 2015 5:41 AM Title: Sunday Evening
Okay its really bad, Tess needs to break in and get Tom out pronto!
Author's Response:
He certainly is out of his element, butt...