[Report This]Date: September 04 2015 7:24 AM Title: Tom's Story
Hello,
Very nice stories with detailed descriptions and emotions which i like to see a lot along with teenage bratty girls terms.
I know many people enjoy your stories already and i feel like im gonna get flamed to death cuz of feet hate but would you mind writing a long story filled with cruel teenage girls,stinky cheesey,feet,enslavement,converse/sneakers,toejam etc...Some people like me in here like nasty stuff on this website,i tried to write my own story but ended up failing cuz my main language isnt english.I hope you take dont turn down my request and write a foot oriented story.Please man,your writing is just brilliant,i wish i could spin events like you could do.
Thank you,
Lolwat111-
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Although not my cup of tea I will see if I can't come up with a story with those parameters but please bear in mind it will take some time before i put anything out as I currently have several 'active' stories on the go and all I ask is for some patience as I bring some of those to resolution.
Date: September 04 2015 5:05 AM Title: Tom's Story
This is nice, I always like the gentle giantess. If you want Tom to sleep with his giantess then I recomend the story Close on this sight the last 2 chapters. It is just more intement in my opinion. Let me know if he is going to do this sort of thing with his sister because it is kind of implied in it. This is just recomended have fun writing your story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review. The original request for this story came from TomSpeedy who asked for the daughter to be like Janine and the mother to be gentle. I think I would prefer gentle well most of the time :)
Date: September 04 2015 5:05 AM Title: Tom's Story
This is nice, I always like the gentle giantess. If you want Tom to sleep with his giantess then I recomend the story Close on this sight the last 2 chapters. It is just more intement in my opinion. Let me know if he is going to do this sort of thing with his sister because it is kind of implied in it. This is just recomended have fun writing your story.
Date: September 04 2015 2:24 AM Title: Tom's Story
After so much shit, finally Tom gets his break with Lina.
Author's Response:
And then makes it sexual... he has both the libido and wisdom of a teenager :)
[Report This]Date: September 04 2015 1:07 AM Title: Pushing the Envelope
Wow! Just wow! This is by far the best chapter in the story in my opinion! That was hot! I did not expect them to be so intimate right away, but damn. That was incredible.
I think Karoline has now become the sexiest giantess in this story. I know it's only 1 chapter, but wow, look what happened in just this chapter: Tom licked, pleasured, then they had sex, then a bath, then he got food, then he got to sleep with her, literally, in her panties! Fantastic!
Now imagine 5 or more chapters of this....I can't! It's like a dream come true. I hope it never ends. I have a feeling that everyone will prefer Karolina soon, becuase we just saw a glimpse of her. Janine is that giantess you like to read about, but don't want to experience in real life. Karolina on the other hand seems gentle enough, and in real life, you want to spend time with this giantess.
Soda pop to red wine. Haha.
I just realized something. Janine never had feelings for Tom. She just saw him as a toy. She never said that he was cute, handsome, or gave him a compliment, really. When Tom pleasures Karolina, she is like "ah that's it", but with Janine, she is like "don't stop or I will crush you!"
Janine is creaking sexy, but I think Tom needs a breather. Tom wanted to fulfil his dream, shrink himself and spend time with a tiny. It looks like he is finally able to fulfill it with Karolina. And the best part is that Karolina is on the same page as him.
Well, I don't think Janine can steal Tom during the night, haha. Karolina has got him tucked away in what I believe is the best spot to put him in. It gives both of them pleasure and hides him from Janine. Could there be a better solution? Nope. And that's why I love this relationship. I look forward to more. 22 chapters and it has come! Totally worth it!
I really, really, really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
You are absolutely right there is a huge difference between mother and daughter (as you requested) and how they interact with Tom.Janine will be like the terminator she won't just quit and will Lina always have him close enough to keep him safe?
Date: September 04 2015 12:47 AM Title: Tom's Story
Am I the only reviewer rooting for Karolina to keep Tom? Everyone seems to want Janine, Sam or Tess. No love for Karolina.
I think everyone loves those characters a lot but they haven't seen much of Karolina to like her compared to the girls. I think after these next few chapters, hopefully Karolina does things to Tom that will make everyone root for her.
Duggernaut, your writing is too good that every character you write about gets some love from everyone.
Now I'm putting my faith in Karolina to be the star character, so I can't wait to see what she has in store.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise Tom there are several incredibly talented writers on this site who's stories help me elevate my own.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2015 12:40 AM Title: Tom's Story
Okay.. First of all, I want you to excuse me if I make grammatical mistakes, because I am French :)
I just wanted to add a new review to your awesome story.
I've read it all in only two days, I swear it was so interesting !! I swallowed it, litterally ! I enjoyed it so much.
You've got to know that usually I'm not fond of mean/violent stuff, and I'm more about feet that anything else, but... Wow ! Even if your story didn't contain I like most, you succeeded in make me love everything about it ! The shrinking is quick to happen, and the way his sister acts with him... This really gets me crazy you know... *~*
The interactions with Janine are really interesting considering the direction of the story, but I have got to admit that I only wait one thing, it is that his sister gets him back :3 I know she seems to like more and more strange things about him, but I hope she won't lose her mind and stay careful with him.
Lina seems lonely in her life, and I'm affraid she will maybe just want to keep the little guy for herself, and this isn't a good thing at all :S Plus Tess's friend, Sam, seems also very interested in the little guy.
Added to what their grandfather told them via email, I'm wondering if the device not only shrinks the subject, but makes him also absolutely irresistible ! This is true, look at it this way : All the girls who've been in contact with the "andsome little guy" seem to fall under his charm... Really strange...
Anyway, even if my review is short, I just want to let you know that I'm really enjoying so much !! Your work is awesome, and the universe you created is completely wonderful... I'm just waiting so much the reunion of the sister and the brother... *~*
P.S.: I saw that the story has been last updated yesterday, amazing !! I hope you'll continue to add more chapters, really your work is magnificient.. Thank you for sharing it with us :3
I'm in love with Tess.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read this story and share your praise. Not sure yet how or if Tom and Tess will be reunited but we will see :)
Date: September 03 2015 11:51 PM Title: Back at the School
seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeex
[Report This]Date: September 03 2015 11:35 PM Title: Home for the Holidays
human dildo, vore, and anall 4 days :D
Date: September 03 2015 11:35 PM Title: Home for the Holidays
human dildo, vore, and anall 4 days :D
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 6:23 PM Title: Tom's Story
Just wanted to jump in and add my contuned support for the author. Simply put great story. Please continue. I love it.
Now I also want to comment on the specifics of the story at this point although now that I read previous comments I see I'm not the only one on many of these points. I guess great minds think alike or maybe it's small minds!
It kills me that Tom can't learn a lesson from his time with Janine. He meets Karolina and instead of playing the pity card, he tells her he watched her naked and that she looks like a Godess. What is he thinking?!?
I see this going three ways, all which are good. 1. Fun and games with Karolina - maybe gentle or maybe mother like daughter. Maybe she'll design a necklace that will actually work. 2. She reunites Tom back with his sister but then we will have the curious Sam who we all know can't wait to get her hands on little Tom. 3. Karolina gives Tom back to Janine. This one gets my vote! After all Karolina is the overindulgent mom who got a mainstream rock band to play at her daughter's birthday party. She isn't going to deny Janine her favorite little plaything. All three choices are good and I can't wait to see where this goes next.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your continued support. Tom is still young and blinded by his libido which means pussy. You make some astute observations and your ideas all have potential but let's us not discount another possibility - the existence of Marta the housekeeper she may yet play a more significant role...maybe :)
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 11:11 AM Title: Karolina
You forgot the rest of that quote (to Alman) from "Amok Time."
"It is not logical! But, it is still often...true."
Date: September 01 2015 12:25 PM Title: Tom's Story
Congrats on reaching 100 reviews on a story!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom it is due to a fair number of people taking the time to support the story (your story my words) and share a review yourself incised thanks to everyone!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2015 3:56 AM Title: Karolina
Well it's sure nice to see Tom get a brief reprive from his earlier days of 'torment'
Though I reckon he seems very much like a self-destructive protagonist, exposing himself like that but more importantly, refusing or denying a phone-call to his sister to come rescue him Xd
Eventually he or Lina is gonna go one action to far leading to circumstances where that Phone-call home may no longer be an option for him xD
Author's Response:
Hindsight is 20/20 and sometimes the wanting is better than the having...sometimes
Date: August 31 2015 9:26 PM Title: Tom's Story
Awww, Karolina and Tom sitting in a tree!
Author's Response:
Um yeah its about to take a turn seeing as she is the tree :P
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 8:41 PM Title: Karolina
i'm afraid Maximus and I will have to agree to permanently disagree. All of us readers, here, have an inner masochist we embrace to varying degrees. Otherwise, we wouldn't read these stories in the first place! But, there is _undeniably_ such a thing as too much of a good thing. And, that includes masochism!
Hence, to paraphrase Sean Connery at the end of HUNT FOR RED OCTOBER: "Sometimes, a little gentle giantess-interaction, every now and then, is a healthy thing."
And, to quote his favorite aphorism in THE UNTOUCHABLES: "Here endeth the lesson."
Author's Response:
"He pulls out a knife you pull put a gun. He put one of yours in the hospital you put one of his in the morgue. It's the Chicago way of doing business."
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 8:37 PM Title: Karolina
Yessssssssss!!!!!!
Finally!!!!
I love it! Nice and slow and the best part was the mention of her husband! We all know what's coming soon.
I rarely say this, but I don't want any super sexy stuff in the next chapter with Karoline (panties) (nipple play) (mouth play). I prefer more talk with Karolina. Let's develop this relationship a bit more. We could have cleavage, a kiss, and perhaps some sexy talk, and then in the later chapters she can escalate it a bit.
I agree that Tom should be passed back to Janine, but not yet! Maybe after 8 chapters of Karolina! Man, her words are just seductive even though the dialogue is not sexual at all.
So you went with the Karolina doing her own thing and Tom getting her attention. I like it, especial Lina's response.
Oh yeah, good move by nicknaming her to Lina. It rolls off my tongue better. Lina is easier to type than Karolina anyway. (I bet that's why u changed it.) Ha!
Peeping Tom! Beautiful! I didn't even expect that! Good one.
We start off sexy and gentle and finish off sexy and sort of gentle. (Of course we expect Karolina to get naughty soon, as she realizes what is in her possession).
I feel happy...............yep. I don't know why. The sexy stuff hasnt arrived but I just feel good about this chapter. That's the power of Karolina.
I really can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Told you :P I'm not done yet
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 7:43 PM Title: Karolina
Knew that was going to happen, was hoping it wouldn't and that Janine would get him back first but figured you'd have interaction between Lina and him. Not my cup of tea, I hate gentle but still very well written.
I'll just have to hope Janine is clever enough to get him back! Curious to see where you go with this, still have something cooking with Sam too I think.
Author's Response:
Janine is very clever and now motivated. We'll see if Sam gets a shot to play with tiny Tom.
Date: August 31 2015 6:35 PM Title: Karolina
Yay for Tom!
Author's Response:
For now...the eye of the storm
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 5:11 PM Title: Karolina
That was very well written and, in my opinion, exactly what Tom needed. Lina seems very understanding and wasn't mad he saw her change but seemed to take his compliments in stride. I really hope that we see more of her in future chapters. Even though I think she's neglected by her husband I don't think she'll abuse Tom sexually for her own gain, at least not with him all bruised up. How he fell asleep was very sweet and actually didn't seem sexual at all even though he is currently sleeping on her giant tits. The 'worst' thing I see her doing is pleasuring herself while he's asleep. At any rate I'm really interested to see what Lina has in store for Tom.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback on the writing Tom is the author of his own circumstances so we'll see how things develop between Lina and Tom as he embraces his new situation.