@TomSpeedy: I thought sure this chapter was going to be ANYTHING but talk.

If you know what I mean. ;-)

Obviously, we were both wrong. Still it's kind of refreshing when both of those clichés can be deftly (I've ALWAYS wanted to use that word!) avoided.

Author's Response:

Very adroit use of deftly nicely done. Glad I was able to provide a fresh infusion to avoid the suspected mother and daughter union. 

Wow! I just can't believe that happened. I thought this chapter was going to be the "talk" chapter where they discuss who gets Tom and stuff. (I'm glad that didn't happen.

Only a good writer like yourself could pull this off.
I was 100% sure that Janine figured it out, but then you used some sort of misdirection thing that totally made Lina more crafty improving her rep and my approval of her. I didn't like how Lina was always so revealing about her time with Tom and how Janine knew how to keep it a secret like she was the expert. Lina should be the expert. And this just proved it.

Basically Lina just pulled the "you think he's in there? Well, here take a look" move. Lina couldn't tell Janine he want there, she had to show her so she could believe. "Seeing is believing."

I thought for sure Janine knew that her mom had Tom. Well, she thought that if did have Tom, he would be in her panties in front of her crotch. What Janine didn't know is that how deep Tom was in her vagina.

Janine was looking for a bulge, usually something she would see on herself as she would carry Tom in her panties. Lina exploited that thought by proving "hey, he's not in where you think he is". And Janine believed her. We also can't forget that Lina's pussy is probably much bigger than Janine's so it could hide Tom more easily that Janine could.

When Lina said "well you can help me then" and Janine said "help". That's when I bet things were turning around. See, when Janine heard that, she was thinking that her mother wanted help with orgasming with Tom and Janine was thinking "well this is weird." Then Lina exposed her crotch to Janine, making an effort to give Janine as much evidence as she needs to deny that Tom was never inside her. It also erases that deep inhale on the end of the last chapter.

Good move by Lina to use "Janine's school time" to make excuses over what she does while she is gone. Janine can't prove that wrong, she has no idea. Also, she can't deny her mother is beautiful so the workout makes sense.

Thank you Tom for not blowing this shit up. However, he practically blew it and Lina had to save his ass, literally. She just saved him from going back to Janine. I bet that toilet scene at the end is a sign for punishment. After all, he should be after that stunt he just pulled off. I think it's time for Lina to have a little more control over Tom. He wouldn't mind, because it's much better than serving Janine.

Haha, now Janine is playing to lying game to cover her interruption and curiosity. She was wondering about seeing the doctor. I have to give credit to her, the excuse is not bad. Both these women are playing their sneaky sides perfectly and this was a good clash.

Another good move by Karolina was once she figured out that Janine fell for her excuse, she decided to punish Janine with her own excuse. She used her sickness as a means to go outside the house and leave her with some privacy with Tom. Hmm. I would love to see a jogging scene with Lina and Tom. We know it's essential that Lina take Tom with her since Janine is going to search her mother's room.

Ok, so Janine believes that Tom is not on Lina's person. Now she is going to check her mother's room. When she discovers that Tom is not in her room, and not on Lina's person, then Janine probably would stop questioning Lina about Tom. At least for some time. Surely it will give Lina enough time to play with Tom until Janine gets suspicious again.

What a turnaround chapter! I thought Tom was caught. He should be punished now, but it's all good in the end.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom glad you're surprised. I definitely wanted to keep you off balance. Don't count literary Tom out yet (this story or the other) it is about to take a turn but you'll have to wait and see where this goes. As always thank you for your enthusiasm and support hope you're still delighting in this tale.

Oh Janine, now you know what it is like to have something forcefully taken from you. 

Wow! Lina is on the verge of having what was referred to, in Dean Martin's "Matt Helm" movies, as a real B.I.G.O. (Bureau of International Government and Organization). And, in front of her own daughter, yet!

Looks like chapter 25 will be featuring a shrunken man-age a trois. ;-)

"...Tess didn't get HIS brother back?"

Does Takuoni know something, about your upcoming chapters, that we don't?

Author's Response:

Um,no. Tess is definitely all girl.

And, with all due respect to Maximus, Tom might find Lina too much woman for him, even at normal-size!

So, there. :P

Author's Response:

Quite possibly, from a girl to a woman who has the experience of life to teach the naive Tom in ways he never could have imagined, we shall see how the dynamic shifts now that mother is involved and has access to resources far beyond Janine.

Apparenty giantesslover missed the fact that Tom is enjoying his time with Lina and doing this willingly. Lina is the complete opposite of Janine and although his time with Lina has been titilating, I can't wait for Janine to get him back, because unlike carycomic, I find theres no such thing as too much of a devilish girl *weg*

I kind of had a hunch that Tom would want to spend all the next day "in bed." And, he probably required little (if any) encouragement from Lina!

Either that; or, she's decided to "adopt" him...against his will.

Author's Response:

Again I'll reference your story about wishing :) from frying pan to slow cooker!

Thanks a lot,like a loot!
I can wait man but please dont forget it at the end,i really like your stories.

Make up your own "eating" puns, here.