Date: October 09 2015 9:30 AM Title: Hand Off
Why do I get the strangest feeling Tom isnt in the case?
Author's Response:
Tom sneaking out isn't out character is it?
[Report This]Date: October 09 2015 9:05 AM Title: Hand Off
I hope Janine has him, they never opened the case.
Author's Response:
They never did :)
[Report This]Date: October 09 2015 7:04 AM Title: Hand Off
A very nice chapter. I only have two questions, though.
1) Will Tess punish Tom with solitary confinement inside one of Samir's unmentionables?
2) And would Tom even regard that as punishment?
Author's Response:
Given Janine as a frame of reference there probably isn't much Tess could do he would deem as punitive.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2015 7:30 PM Title: Hand Off
Wow, and just like that Tom is back with Tess. Tom is back at square one now. His mission was to get to Janine, then it was Lina. So, I can't tell if the mission was a success or a failure because of the strange outcomes of his mission.
It's amazing how clam they both were during that exchange, you would expect something like Tess wondering if Lina did anything bad to Tom, or if Lina is anxious to know what Tess is going to do with Tom. After all, I'm sure Tess has a lot of questions that she'd prefer Lina to answer and I think if Lina expects Tom to return, she should ask some questions. This was a good moment to do that, because future phone calls are risky with Janine and Francis around.
Speaking of Janine, she probably thinks that her mother is selfish, keeping Tom to herself and probably never considered Lina giving Tom back to Tess. I bet Janine will keep searching the house for some time.
Francis is coming home. But for what? Does he actually have a purpose, or is going to be that guy that distracts Lina so Janine can search the place? Since Lina is a MILF, you know Francis and Lina are going to do it when he comes back. The question is whether Lina will feel satisfied with him or was the experience with Tom significantly better.
I can't wait for Tom to tell his story. (Next chapter: Story time with Tom!) Haha, it would be funny if Sam joins Tess as the audience.
I bet Sam will get kinky ideas after those tales. Tess might feel disgusted but happy that he is safe now.
I really wonder how angry Tess is and how will she punish him. We know what Janine would do, but now we have to take away the sexy aspect since they are siblings. Perhaps, Tess will feel aroused by letting Sam play with Tom. Or, maybe his punishment is to let Sam punish him. I have a hunch that Tess will feel to ashamed of her brother and will let Sam take care of him.
I forgot how old and how Sam looks. Is Tom even attracted to Sam? He fancied her thong, but a thong is a thong and most tiny men will fantasize about climbing in one.
This is what I call a transition chapter. Lina handing the tiny man Tess. This initiated the start of Tom's relationship as a tiny man with Tess and Sam. Lina is done for now, but now Tess and mostly likely Sam will get a turn.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
;)
[Report This]Date: October 03 2015 8:07 PM Title: Fallout
I don't care if it's Janine or Sam but someone needs to knock that smirk off Toms face and put the fear of giant women back in him! Insolent pup, lol.
I don't think Lina will be winning any mother of the year awards, lying and deceiving her daughter. Whole family is dysfunctional but at least Janine is my kind of giantess ;)
Author's Response:
He is pretty insolent isn't he? Hmm, fancy that. There is a chess game going on between mother and daughter, both are equally complicit in perfidious behavior to keep/get what they want in an attempt to outmanuever the other. We'll see where it goes and who manages to capture the little prize in the end. Pun intended.
[Report This]Date: October 03 2015 5:07 PM Title: Fallout
Just got back and read your 2 last chapters and they were amazing as usual,,I like tom's sleeping situation..best place to be in My opinion Thanks for the great chapters :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you are still enjoying. Got to admit, that would be one hell of place to spend a night or thousand.
[Report This]Date: October 03 2015 5:02 PM Title: Fallout
So his name is Francis. Interesting name. Sounds like a gentlemen. However, most men in your stories are horny brutes so I think we are all going to hate him.
She doesn't know why Francis is coming? Isn't that what you are supposed to ask when you have a phone call? I mean, what did they say during it? Lol.
Yeah, Lina better hide Tom. Tom is that kinda guy that will probably run his mouth at Francis bragging that he can please Lina. Tom wants Francis to be jealous.
I really like the change in Lina and Tom's relationship. The way she is serious and that Tom is still cheerful shows that Lina is going to get upset soon. I like this.
So Tess is the new option to hide Tom? Oh man. That means Sam is going to show up. I thought the mention of Sam was just a way for the readers to imagine a scene with Sam. Instead, you actually are heading in that direction. I did not see this coming.
Haha, Tess might grumble a little. Tess might just hand him Tom to Sam so she doesn't have to carry the burden. Sam, on the other hand will enjoy his company. We learned that at the party, Sam and about every girl fantasized about Tom.
In addition, that scolding will be fun. She probably doesn't even trust Tom anymore. Now what I wonder is, will Tom tell Tess the entire story? Will he tell Tess about Janine and especially Lina? We know Tess will be asking lots of questions.
I like it. Lina getting smart. Like mother, like daughter. We know where Janine's wits came from. Removing Tom from the picture might be the best solution.
When Tom goes back to Tess, and her husband, I'm assuming will eventually leave, will Tom want to go back to Lina? Will he hitch a ride on Tess, sneak into Janine, backpack or something and then sneak back into the house? I can see Tom becoming eager to return again.
Since we also can guess that Sam will get Tom, what kinda girl will she be? Gentle, teasing, controlling, cruel, or a fusion of multiple charactersitics? Do I get a hint? :)
Absconded? Now that's a new word for me. I love writers with good vocabulary. Usually I know most of them. Glad to see an unfamiliar word. "You learn something new everyday".
Tom said tomorrow or Thursday. I guess tomorrow means Wednesday and that means that today must be Tuesday. I asked in my last review about what day it is. Not bad of an answer. I like the puzzle.
Tom asks for the bra? I would never do that! Haha. Seems like this was an opportunity to show who was boss and by Lina declining his option really emphasizes that.
Janine trying to get clues by asking Lina how are things after the phone call. Clever girl.
Wow, those last 3 paragraphs! Now that's what I wanted to see! Too bad it was their "last" night. But still, I'm glad they moved into a Lina controlled relationship where she gets to assert her dominance. Funny part is that Tom is probably licking her anus as well. He probably doesn't care. Haha. Excellent punishment choice. Cruel enough to touch her butthole, but gentle enough to not insert him completely into it. Great mix.
Last paragraph had me drooling. "Pushed him deeper into her panties" "wedging his head" "tight and pinning him in place" "dominance reasserted" "choosing to leave him there for the night". Holy shit! That was freakin sexy!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Figured you might like to see Lina exert her authority, sassy little guy Tom is needs to be reminded just who wear the pants, or panties as it were.
[Report This]Date: October 03 2015 4:10 PM Title: Fallout
If you'll forgive the pseudo-Ebonics: "It do like Janine ain't gonna get her way. Word!"
Author's Response:
And the word was good.
Date: October 03 2015 2:14 PM Title: Fallout
Damn :( I really hoped Janines plan would work out. Was looking forward to some mean and extended torture and humiliation sessions.
I really hope you're writing something similiar to the Janine Chapters soooon. One of the best sadistic gts scenes out there right now
Author's Response:
Don't count Janine out yet, she is devilishly clever and not about to give up on HER little prize. oh the things she wants to do to him will make the previous chapters seem tame by comparison.
Date: October 03 2015 11:31 AM Title: Fallout
Hot chapter and I think its good they are moving towards returning him to Tess, they should be back again.
Author's Response:
There is a game afoot, and despite Tom's happy go lucky panty hopping, he does need to be schooled a little.
Date: October 01 2015 3:43 PM Title: Tom's Story
@carycomic,
I totally forgot about the maid. I hope she does not get Tom. I prefer Lina, Janine, Sam, and then the maid.
I prefer the maid to be oblivious to this whole situation.
[Report This]Date: October 01 2015 3:23 PM Title: Lina and Tom
@ Tom Speedy:
Or, more likely, Lina's husband gets made...and the maid gets Tom! ;-D
[Report This]Date: September 30 2015 11:52 PM Title: Lina and Tom
You are right. I don't like this at all. Sure it makes this a challenge, but now things got really complicated.
I've seen a similar situation to this. Husband comes home. Wife not too happy. Husband becomes horny. Wife more nervous than horny. Husband upset wife not horny. They have sex, husband disappointed. Then wife disappointed about not making husband happy. Wife comes up with idea. Wife uses little man to get herself horny. Wife then seduces husband. Husband gets horny. They have sex. Both are happy. Little man gets jealous. Little man leaves. Teen girl finds little man. Little man now scared. Wife forgets about little man and begins enjoying time with husband. Teen girl now happy. (Now I am sad.)
That's my prediction.
I would love to be stuck in some panties for a 10 kl jog. Wow! Then they have sex afterward! That's a long arousal period to get themselves horny.
I don't think my prediction will be right, so I wonder how will Janine get Tom.
I think this is the first story that a full grown man is involved in your story that won't shrink. (He's not shrinking right?) (ok, the contract has grown men, but usually all men shrink in your stories.)
This is the point where I have no idea where you are going with this, except that Lina is about to lose Tom somehow. If her husband comes on Friday, what day is it today? (I want to know how many days are left before the "problem" arrives.)
I have also seen some stories where the shrunken guy is crazy enough to volunteer to be in the pussy while the couple have sex. Like he really loves that place even if another man is using it. In my book, that's not Tom, but I won't be surprised if he's that addicted to pussy.
Maybe Lina will only allow her husband to perform anal, and leave Tom inside her. That could happen, but I doubt it. I bet her husband is super horny by now.
You know, maybe they will divorce or something. (Now I'm just thinking randomly.)
It's too early to judge, but I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: September 29 2015 1:51 PM Title: Janine
OOPS! My bad; that should have read "...he'll come home."
Where's the embarrassment icon when you need it?
Author's Response:
Either works, though obviously not for his little princess, hmm, awkward...
[Report This]Date: September 27 2015 11:56 AM Title: Janine
Very good!
Tom could return to his sister, being punished for her and her friend.
Looking forward to continuing.
Author's Response:
Hmmm, somebody's been reading my mind...
Date: September 27 2015 6:33 AM Title: Tom's Story
Still wondering when Tess will realise he is with Lina and not just missing. Janine knows now, so Tom better be living on Lina for the rest of his time there if he wants to remain safe.
Author's Response:
It's starting to come apart at the Lindholm residence and things are going to change, soon
[Report This]Date: September 26 2015 11:17 PM Title: Janine
I hope that phone call doesn't make the person on the other end arrive too quickly. We want more Lina and Tom time.
Janine's getting too impatient. She went into her mother's room, and was searching for Tom. She even went into her mom's bathroom to look for clues. And unfortunately she did. Now she knows.
Well, that's one way to skip a phone call. "Let's make a phone call, call complete." Haha.
Lina needs to fuck the shit out of Tom before Janine gets him. Actually, I think it's better if Janine snatches Tom, uses him, then Lina makes her move and steals Tom back and uses him. We could go back and forth, and possibly have an agreement where they take turns or if Tom misbehaves, he is sent to Janine, and if Tom becomes useful(sexually) he is given back to Lina.
I think a day where Lina goes to work/shopping would be cool. She puts Tom in her panties and orders him to please her, and during the day she goes to various bathrooms to let Tom know of his progress and gives him further instructions.
In response to your response of my review: wow, 10 km! Tom may have second guesses after this jog. I feel like Tom is a little too happy and I thought he would be scared of vaginas by now. Guess not. But I think he should be scared soon, because Karolina might seem sexier if she demands him to please her rather than asking.
The main point we learned is that Lina can't make more excuses, Janine knows, and when Janine knows, things can get ugly.
I still wonder how does a phone call separate Tom and Lina. It's not like 2 people. (Ok it's 2 people.) But not 2 fully sized people. Tom literally lives almost inside Karolina and to me, that's pretty hard to separate. I wonder what Janine is thinking. I can't even predict anything. I don't see a possibility unless Janine calls a doctor to inspect Lina's vagina. (what I'm trying to say is, I got nothing.) Well, I guess it's another time to surprise me.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
The big bomb is coming and you'll see why one call changes it all, the chess matcvh continues, you're not going to be happy, at first, but trust me, it'll all come together in the end.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2015 6:04 PM Title: Janine
Oh Tom, I almost feel sorry for you, almost. Can't wait!
I'm wondering though, just how much Tom will still enjoy being in Linas panties after a jog, might not be all he thought it would be ;)
Author's Response:
You would think it might get a little off putting being trapped for a 10k jog, but Tom is a true poon hound, maybe too much...
[Report This]Date: September 26 2015 4:44 PM Title: Janine
Let me guess: she called Daddy-kins. Which means, he'll come; want to make love to the fully aroused Lina; and Janine will thereby have access to the one set of drawers she couldn't open. ;-)
Author's Response:
When the next installment comes, you're right on the money, daddy. Flush the prey out of the bush and wait. We've already established Janine's capable moriarty like intellect. Clever girl.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2015 8:11 PM Title: Tom
Lina is so sexy! I love how she toys with Tom and even mentions taking her back to Janine as punishment.
Lina might use this to her advantage and get what she wants since Tom fears going back to Janine. This was his warning, next time, Lina will punish him sexually, or she will hand him to Janine.
One thing that I wonder is how long until Tom doesn't like insertion. I mean, sure it is fun at first, but what if he's not careful or what if Lina is not careful. She might get carried away as well as Janine. I think Karolina should take more control over this situation and reduce Tom's control.
I think a sexier approach could be Lina "wanting" Tom in her panties, but Tom begins to reconsider his desires. Lina then says its for safety and Tom reluctantly obliges. While I like Janine's "You please me now! No mercy!" I also think Lina's "You must stay in my panties for your own good" is also awesome. Both women are in control but on different levels.
Some boob play with Lina could be nice too. It fits her caring personality. I love what you are doing with the mouth scenes, especially when she "cleans" him up. Overall, the focus on her panties is excellent.
I wonder how this run will turn out. Will it be like for a few minutes just so Lina can prove her point to Janine, or will she go for an hour jog or longer to make Tom suffer. (Well, I don't think Tom will suffer, but he might get a bit irritated, which is good because he should be punished for almost making Lina orgasm in from of her own daughter.) Or is Lina actually jogging to some place where she wants to spend time with Tom.
This ending was open ended, so many possibilities can happen soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lina is the ideal gentle giantess, but still quite capable of exerting control should she need. It was a 10 kilometer jog.