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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 3:23 PM Title: Lina and Tom

@ Tom Speedy:

Or, more likely, Lina's husband gets made...and the maid gets Tom! ;-D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 11:52 PM Title: Lina and Tom

You are right. I don't like this at all. Sure it makes this a challenge, but now things got really complicated.

I've seen a similar situation to this. Husband comes home. Wife not too happy. Husband becomes horny. Wife more nervous than horny. Husband upset wife not horny. They have sex, husband disappointed. Then wife disappointed about not making husband happy. Wife comes up with idea. Wife uses little man to get herself horny. Wife then seduces husband. Husband gets horny. They have sex. Both are happy. Little man gets jealous. Little man leaves. Teen girl finds little man. Little man now scared. Wife forgets about little man and begins enjoying time with husband. Teen girl now happy. (Now I am sad.)

That's my prediction.

I would love to be stuck in some panties for a 10 kl jog. Wow! Then they have sex afterward! That's a long arousal period to get themselves horny.

I don't think my prediction will be right, so I wonder how will Janine get Tom.

I think this is the first story that a full grown man is involved in your story that won't shrink. (He's not shrinking right?) (ok, the contract has grown men, but usually all men shrink in your stories.)

This is the point where I have no idea where you are going with this, except that Lina is about to lose Tom somehow. If her husband comes on Friday, what day is it today? (I want to know how many days are left before the "problem" arrives.)

I have also seen some stories where the shrunken guy is crazy enough to volunteer to be in the pussy while the couple have sex. Like he really loves that place even if another man is using it. In my book, that's not Tom, but I won't be surprised if he's that addicted to pussy.

Maybe Lina will only allow her husband to perform anal, and leave Tom inside her. That could happen, but I doubt it. I bet her husband is super horny by now.

You know, maybe they will divorce or something. (Now I'm just thinking randomly.)

It's too early to judge, but I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 1:51 PM Title: Janine

OOPS! My bad; that should have read "...he'll come home."

Where's the embarrassment icon when you need it?

Author's Response:

Either works, though obviously not for his little princess, hmm, awkward...

Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2015 11:56 AM Title: Janine

Very good!

Tom could return to his sister, being punished for her and her friend.

Looking forward to continuing.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, somebody's been reading my mind...

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2015 6:33 AM Title: Tom's Story

Still wondering when Tess will realise he is with Lina and not just missing. Janine knows now, so Tom better be living on Lina for the rest of his time there if he wants to remain safe. 



Author's Response:

It's starting to come apart at the Lindholm residence and things are going to change, soon

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 11:17 PM Title: Janine

I hope that phone call doesn't make the person on the other end arrive too quickly. We want more Lina and Tom time.

Janine's getting too impatient. She went into her mother's room, and was searching for Tom. She even went into her mom's bathroom to look for clues. And unfortunately she did. Now she knows.

Well, that's one way to skip a phone call. "Let's make a phone call, call complete." Haha.

Lina needs to fuck the shit out of Tom before Janine gets him. Actually, I think it's better if Janine snatches Tom, uses him, then Lina makes her move and steals Tom back and uses him. We could go back and forth, and possibly have an agreement where they take turns or if Tom misbehaves, he is sent to Janine, and if Tom becomes useful(sexually) he is given back to Lina.

I think a day where Lina goes to work/shopping would be cool. She puts Tom in her panties and orders him to please her, and during the day she goes to various bathrooms to let Tom know of his progress and gives him further instructions.

In response to your response of my review: wow, 10 km! Tom may have second guesses after this jog. I feel like Tom is a little too happy and I thought he would be scared of vaginas by now. Guess not. But I think he should be scared soon, because Karolina might seem sexier if she demands him to please her rather than asking.

The main point we learned is that Lina can't make more excuses, Janine knows, and when Janine knows, things can get ugly.

I still wonder how does a phone call separate Tom and Lina. It's not like 2 people. (Ok it's 2 people.) But not 2 fully sized people. Tom literally lives almost inside Karolina and to me, that's pretty hard to separate. I wonder what Janine is thinking. I can't even predict anything. I don't see a possibility unless Janine calls a doctor to inspect Lina's vagina. (what I'm trying to say is, I got nothing.) Well, I guess it's another time to surprise me.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

The big bomb is coming and you'll see why one call changes it all, the chess matcvh continues, you're not going to be happy, at first, but trust me, it'll all come together in the end.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 6:04 PM Title: Janine

Oh Tom, I almost feel sorry for you, almost. Can't wait!

 

I'm wondering though, just how much Tom will still enjoy being in Linas panties after a jog, might not be all he thought it would be ;)



Author's Response:

You would think it might get a little off putting being trapped for a 10k jog, but Tom is a true poon hound, maybe too much...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 4:44 PM Title: Janine

Let me guess: she called Daddy-kins. Which means, he'll come; want to make love to the fully aroused Lina; and Janine will thereby have access to the one set of drawers she couldn't open. ;-)

Author's Response:

When the next installment comes, you're right on the money, daddy. Flush the prey out of the bush and wait. We've already established Janine's capable moriarty like intellect. Clever girl.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 8:11 PM Title: Tom

Lina is so sexy! I love how she toys with Tom and even mentions taking her back to Janine as punishment.

Lina might use this to her advantage and get what she wants since Tom fears going back to Janine. This was his warning, next time, Lina will punish him sexually, or she will hand him to Janine.

One thing that I wonder is how long until Tom doesn't like insertion. I mean, sure it is fun at first, but what if he's not careful or what if Lina is not careful. She might get carried away as well as Janine. I think Karolina should take more control over this situation and reduce Tom's control.

I think a sexier approach could be Lina "wanting" Tom in her panties, but Tom begins to reconsider his desires. Lina then says its for safety and Tom reluctantly obliges. While I like Janine's "You please me now! No mercy!" I also think Lina's "You must stay in my panties for your own good" is also awesome. Both women are in control but on different levels.

Some boob play with Lina could be nice too. It fits her caring personality. I love what you are doing with the mouth scenes, especially when she "cleans" him up. Overall, the focus on her panties is excellent.

I wonder how this run will turn out. Will it be like for a few minutes just so Lina can prove her point to Janine, or will she go for an hour jog or longer to make Tom suffer. (Well, I don't think Tom will suffer, but he might get a bit irritated, which is good because he should be punished for almost making Lina orgasm in from of her own daughter.) Or is Lina actually jogging to some place where she wants to spend time with Tom.

This ending was open ended, so many possibilities can happen soon.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lina is the ideal gentle giantess, but still quite capable of exerting control should she need. It was a 10 kilometer jog.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 7:36 PM Title: Tom's Story

I agree with both Shrinkstoryfan and Cameron.

First, panty entrapment is also my favorite thing to read about I honestly find that more exciting that insertion itself.

Second, I agree that this is also my favorite story on this site. (For obvious reasons.) :) yeah, I think Janine, will get Tom soon, but not yet. It's Lina's fun time. However, when Janine does get him back, I'm pretty sure I would love to see some anal insertion.

Author's Response:

Patience Tom, this story is about to twist, just make sure your seatbelt is properly fastened, :)

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 6:56 PM Title: Tom's Story

Easily this is hands down my favorite story going on the site since you seem to be done with The Book, which I was really into. Admittedly I'm not as into it with the Mom as I'm not as attracted to older women but it is still great.I do hope for three things in the future. One, I do want to see Janine get him back and see what she'd do. Two, I'd love to see a good foot worship chapter, though that doesn't seem to be much your thing so I wouldn't be upset if it isn't included. And three, my most desired thing is a legitimate anal insertion chapter, as that is my favorite thing period, and you've teased if a few times. I'd rather that be with Janine, or even his sister, but would still love to see it with the mother if that's your plan, just want to see that become a large focus, him fully shoved up there



Author's Response:

Hi Cameron99, while i am not done with the book, I am certainly at an impasse, I am in the process of ripping it apart and putting it back together, minus the Harald thread and the awakening of Freya. Anal insertion may be coming sooner than later (I just included it in my story Fan girls, and there was an episode of an overnight stay in Double Dog Dare) - thing is, in this story, it probably wont be with either Lina or Janine (well not the first time) :-O

Reviewer: Shrinkstoryfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 6:29 PM Title: Tom

Thank you!!!! Tom is right where he should be while she jogs,,I'm a big fan of the panty entrapment :)  Can't wait for the next update to this story..



Author's Response:

Panty entrapment is awesome :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 4:43 PM Title: Tom

For some reason, this chapter has reminded me of the rock & roll classic, "Insatiable."

;-)

Author's Response:

When you mentioned insatiable my mind went Marilyn Chambers, my bad

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 6:28 AM Title: Misdirection

Alright! That explanation/coverup was spectacularly clever! :)
Lucky for Tom that Lina's such a quick thinker, otherwise his daft idea to hide and squirm in her panties  of all places would have been totally screwed xD

Of course I'm still waiting for Lina to become an impediment to Tom's ambitions, once he finally gets bored of playing around with her and starts missing home etc.
It wouldnt' surprise me if Lina becomes clingy enough to not wanna let Tom go home so easily ^_^; 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read review and praise on how to throw Janine off the trail. I wanted everyone to think oh oh jigs up and pull a quick one. That said the dynamic in the house is about to change.

Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 1:30 PM Title: Misdirection

Very good!

- Lina could have crushed Tom inadvertently stuck to a folder, it would be funny.

- Tom fainted breathless.

- Tom be fine, and Lina torture him in some way.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the props yeah wouldn't that have put a quick end to the story if Lina had crushed him with her vagina

Reviewer: Shrinkstoryfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 5:09 AM Title: Misdirection

Another Great chapter!!! I do have to wonder if Lina is going to actually go jogging with Tom in his current position? That would be pretty epic if I do say so myself but how ever this pans out I'm sure you won't disappoint.. You haven't so far :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review I will endeavor to not disappoint; )

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 9:57 PM Title: Lina

Correction, Max. He wanted to BE PRESENT FOR HER BIRTHDAY. NOT A BIRTHDAY PRESENT! Janine was simply and deliberately misinterpreting.

"That's my theory and I'm stickin' to it."

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 7:58 PM Title: Misdirection

Damn it, thought Lina was going to relent. This is where Janine should have been keeping Tom at all times, why the heck did she ever bother putting him in a glass. I almost want Janine to swallow Tom like she thought about for running away on her like this. 

 

Cary, if Tom didnt want to be a present, shouldnt have been in Janines room on her birthday molesting her breast. ;)



Author's Response:

Hang in there don't count Janine out yet she's not one to relent.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 4:29 PM Title: Misdirection

@Tom Speedy:

Oh, catfight scenes can be sexy, too! But, even they should be done in moderation...in order to avoid unintended yawns.

Too much of a good thing, and all that jazz.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 3:59 PM Title: Tom's Story

@carycomic, Oh you meant something sexual was going to happen in this chapter.

Nevermind about the cat fight thought.

Author's Response:

Lol

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