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Reviewer: gtslove Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 6:53 PM Title: Tess

Woah! Made an account to comment on this chapter. Great chapter and I love sam!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, yep, Sam is definitely a sexy girl!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 6:48 PM Title: Tess

Next chapter?

"Wham! Bam! Thank you, Sam!"

Author's Response:

More or less, but don't mess with Tess

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 9:55 AM Title: Hand Off

Oops. I meant to type Tess, but guess I accidently wrote Sam. And that, my friends, is why you don't go through life with 5 hours of sleep a day.



Author's Response:

"All work and no play makes Homer go something, something, something,"

"Go crazy?"

"Don't mind if i do!"

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 7:04 PM Title: Hand Off

Alright, still going strong this one is. Very good. I must say I did kinda enjoy Lina asserting her dominance over Tom when he tried his same old anticts again at the end of the last chapter. Sometimes a cocky tiny guy has to remember his position even with gentle giantesses xD

 

Also this was a good chapter. Though I wanna go on record here and see if I'm gonna be right or not:  Tom isn't in that eye-glass container.

Nope, I'm pretty sure that somehow during the hour interval after the phone-call, Jannie probably swiped Tom from his hiding spot. Maybe did some switcharoo? : d
I'll have to wait and see xD 



Author's Response:

And now the new chapter reveals the answer...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 6:22 AM Title: Hand Off

@Giantesslover: that was Tom's sister Tess who met Lina at the rendezvous. Not Samir.

Author's Response:

Thanks for clarifying for giantesslover Samira is Tess's roomy.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 6:37 AM Title: Hand Off

Oh fuck. Sam is definitely pissed right now, but I do feel that Tom had it coming.

Great chapter as usual.



Author's Response:

Tess is unhappy conversely Samira may be excited by the prospect of Tom's return - if he is indeed in the case

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 12:14 PM Title: Tom's Story

Wow! I got to give credit to stargate for pointing out that there is a chance that Tom could not be in the case.

I never even thought of that! Good catch.

Now everyone is thinking about the case too. Haha.

I agree, I hope he is not in there too. Janine and Lina have built up quite a reputation to be great hosts of Tom so any of them would be great over Tess and Sam.

This case issue opens up so many possibilities! Is Tom in Lina's purse? Is Tom in the house still? Did Tom just hide in Lina's room? Did Tom jump into Lina's cleavage and she doesn't know?

Basically, every woman will be disappointed except Janine that Tom did NOT got to Tess. Sam wants her plaything, Tess wants her brother, and Lina wants him to stay away for a bit. Janine is the only one who benefits if Tom never left.

Duggernaut, if he wasn't in that case, then you fooled me big time. That would be the last thing I expected until I read Stargates review. Another thumbs up.

Now I really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lol the uncertainty is helping spark conversation which is good. Consensus seems to generally be against Tom actually returning to Tess. Time will tell :)

Reviewer: cxwaves Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 12:01 PM Title: Tom's Story

Please don't let him be in that case.

Please let Janine have him !

 



Author's Response:

Never ever ever count Janine out ;)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 9:55 AM Title: Tom's Story

Plot twist: Tom is not inside. 



Author's Response:

A few reviewers seem inclined to think perhaps he is not. We shall see.

Reviewer: raleighluke Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 9:30 AM Title: Hand Off

Why do I get the strangest feeling Tom isnt in the case?



Author's Response:

Tom sneaking out isn't out character is it?

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 9:05 AM Title: Hand Off

I hope Janine has him, they never opened the case.



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They never did :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 7:04 AM Title: Hand Off

A very nice chapter. I only have two questions, though.

1) Will Tess punish Tom with solitary confinement inside one of Samir's unmentionables?

2) And would Tom even regard that as punishment?

Author's Response:

Given Janine as a frame of reference there probably isn't much Tess could do he would deem as punitive.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 7:30 PM Title: Hand Off

Wow, and just like that Tom is back with Tess. Tom is back at square one now. His mission was to get to Janine, then it was Lina. So, I can't tell if the mission was a success or a failure because of the strange outcomes of his mission.

It's amazing how clam they both were during that exchange, you would expect something like Tess wondering if Lina did anything bad to Tom, or if Lina is anxious to know what Tess is going to do with Tom. After all, I'm sure Tess has a lot of questions that she'd prefer Lina to answer and I think if Lina expects Tom to return, she should ask some questions. This was a good moment to do that, because future phone calls are risky with Janine and Francis around.

Speaking of Janine, she probably thinks that her mother is selfish, keeping Tom to herself and probably never considered Lina giving Tom back to Tess. I bet Janine will keep searching the house for some time.

Francis is coming home. But for what? Does he actually have a purpose, or is going to be that guy that distracts Lina so Janine can search the place? Since Lina is a MILF, you know Francis and Lina are going to do it when he comes back. The question is whether Lina will feel satisfied with him or was the experience with Tom significantly better.

I can't wait for Tom to tell his story. (Next chapter: Story time with Tom!) Haha, it would be funny if Sam joins Tess as the audience.

I bet Sam will get kinky ideas after those tales. Tess might feel disgusted but happy that he is safe now.

I really wonder how angry Tess is and how will she punish him. We know what Janine would do, but now we have to take away the sexy aspect since they are siblings. Perhaps, Tess will feel aroused by letting Sam play with Tom. Or, maybe his punishment is to let Sam punish him. I have a hunch that Tess will feel to ashamed of her brother and will let Sam take care of him.

I forgot how old and how Sam looks. Is Tom even attracted to Sam? He fancied her thong, but a thong is a thong and most tiny men will fantasize about climbing in one.

This is what I call a transition chapter. Lina handing the tiny man Tess. This initiated the start of Tom's relationship as a tiny man with Tess and Sam. Lina is done for now, but now Tess and mostly likely Sam will get a turn.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 8:07 PM Title: Fallout

I don't care if it's Janine or Sam but someone needs to knock that smirk off Toms face and put the fear of giant women back in him! Insolent pup, lol.

 

I don't think Lina will be winning any mother of the year awards, lying and deceiving her daughter. Whole family is dysfunctional but at least Janine is my kind of giantess ;)



Author's Response:

He is pretty insolent isn't he? Hmm, fancy that. There is a chess game going on between mother and daughter, both are equally complicit in perfidious behavior to keep/get what they want in an attempt to outmanuever the other. We'll see where it goes and who manages to capture the little prize in the end. Pun intended.

Reviewer: Shrinkstoryfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 5:07 PM Title: Fallout

Just got back and read your 2 last chapters and they were amazing as usual,,I like tom's sleeping situation..best place to be in My opinion Thanks for the great chapters :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you are still enjoying. Got to admit, that would be one hell of place to spend a night or thousand.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 5:02 PM Title: Fallout

So his name is Francis. Interesting name. Sounds like a gentlemen. However, most men in your stories are horny brutes so I think we are all going to hate him.

She doesn't know why Francis is coming? Isn't that what you are supposed to ask when you have a phone call? I mean, what did they say during it? Lol.

Yeah, Lina better hide Tom. Tom is that kinda guy that will probably run his mouth at Francis bragging that he can please Lina. Tom wants Francis to be jealous.

I really like the change in Lina and Tom's relationship. The way she is serious and that Tom is still cheerful shows that Lina is going to get upset soon. I like this.

So Tess is the new option to hide Tom? Oh man. That means Sam is going to show up. I thought the mention of Sam was just a way for the readers to imagine a scene with Sam. Instead, you actually are heading in that direction. I did not see this coming.

Haha, Tess might grumble a little. Tess might just hand him Tom to Sam so she doesn't have to carry the burden. Sam, on the other hand will enjoy his company. We learned that at the party, Sam and about every girl fantasized about Tom.

In addition, that scolding will be fun. She probably doesn't even trust Tom anymore. Now what I wonder is, will Tom tell Tess the entire story? Will he tell Tess about Janine and especially Lina? We know Tess will be asking lots of questions.

I like it. Lina getting smart. Like mother, like daughter. We know where Janine's wits came from. Removing Tom from the picture might be the best solution.

When Tom goes back to Tess, and her husband, I'm assuming will eventually leave, will Tom want to go back to Lina? Will he hitch a ride on Tess, sneak into Janine, backpack or something and then sneak back into the house? I can see Tom becoming eager to return again.

Since we also can guess that Sam will get Tom, what kinda girl will she be? Gentle, teasing, controlling, cruel, or a fusion of multiple charactersitics? Do I get a hint? :)

Absconded? Now that's a new word for me. I love writers with good vocabulary. Usually I know most of them. Glad to see an unfamiliar word. "You learn something new everyday".

Tom said tomorrow or Thursday. I guess tomorrow means Wednesday and that means that today must be Tuesday. I asked in my last review about what day it is. Not bad of an answer. I like the puzzle.

Tom asks for the bra? I would never do that! Haha. Seems like this was an opportunity to show who was boss and by Lina declining his option really emphasizes that.

Janine trying to get clues by asking Lina how are things after the phone call. Clever girl.

Wow, those last 3 paragraphs! Now that's what I wanted to see! Too bad it was their "last" night. But still, I'm glad they moved into a Lina controlled relationship where she gets to assert her dominance. Funny part is that Tom is probably licking her anus as well. He probably doesn't care. Haha. Excellent punishment choice. Cruel enough to touch her butthole, but gentle enough to not insert him completely into it. Great mix.

Last paragraph had me drooling. "Pushed him deeper into her panties" "wedging his head" "tight and pinning him in place" "dominance reasserted" "choosing to leave him there for the night". Holy shit! That was freakin sexy!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Figured you might like to see Lina exert her authority, sassy little guy Tom is needs to be reminded just who wear the pants, or panties as it were. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 4:10 PM Title: Fallout

If you'll forgive the pseudo-Ebonics: "It do like Janine ain't gonna get her way. Word!"

Author's Response:

And the word was good.

Reviewer: cxwaves Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 2:14 PM Title: Fallout

Damn :( I really hoped Janines plan would work out. Was looking forward to some mean and extended torture and humiliation sessions.

I really hope you're writing something similiar to the Janine Chapters soooon. One of the best sadistic gts scenes out there right now



Author's Response:

Don't count Janine out yet, she is devilishly clever and not about to give up on HER little prize. oh the things she wants to do to him will make the previous chapters seem tame by comparison.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 11:31 AM Title: Fallout

Hot chapter and I think its good they are moving towards returning him to Tess, they should be back again. 



Author's Response:

There is a game afoot, and despite Tom's happy go lucky panty hopping, he does need to be schooled a little.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 3:43 PM Title: Tom's Story

@carycomic,

I totally forgot about the maid. I hope she does not get Tom. I prefer Lina, Janine, Sam, and then the maid.

I prefer the maid to be oblivious to this whole situation.

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