Date: October 26 2015 3:59 PM Title: Tom's Story
Hey man,
Just wanted to say congrats on your first story with 200 reviews!
Author's Response:
Woot, thanks Tom, lets see where this little story takes us eh?
Date: October 26 2015 3:27 PM Title: Ground Rules
You HAVE to implent that hot candle wax torture you implied in one of the earlier chapters pleaseeee. Tom needs some serious punishment for "leaving" his handsome Goddess. ;)
Author's Response:
Lol, Tom is definitely going to experience some new things very very shortly, :)
[Report This]Date: October 26 2015 3:25 PM Title: Ground Rules
Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Janine <33 Trouble <333
Got the biggest boner already lmao
Author's Response:
Lol, time to set the night afire, :)
Date: October 26 2015 5:23 AM Title: Ground Rules
Pls tell me it's a plot twist and it won't be Janine :D
Author's Response:
Maybe, maybe not
[Report This]Date: October 25 2015 2:17 PM Title: Ground Rules
Ok, now this is funny. I was expecting this long term situation with Sam and Tess, especially when they lay down the ground rules like the group meeting just started.
However, Janine just shows up and takes him. I mean, already?!!! Ha, I didn't expect it to be that fast but alright, Janine has always been sexier than both Sam and Tess and if being with Janine means a chance to get to Lina, then I'm all for it.
Good point about Tom's fears of Sam and how her sexual attitude reminded him of Janine. Initially, that was the effect I wanted Lina to give Tom, but I guess Tom saw her approach as gentle. First thing Sam did was insert him inside her. Definatley sounds like Janine, so it makes sense.
At the end, you might as well should've wrote Janine. I mean, who else would it be that gives him "a whole world of trouble". Yep. That's Janine. Then again, the use of pronouns does give a little more of a suspense feeling.
The most interesting part of this chapter is that these "ground rules" don't want Tom to wander around. When Tom is found to be absent, Tess and Sam will immediately think he wandered off. Janine couldn't have found a better opportunity. It was as if she was listening to the conversation earlier. Tess and Sam won't even think that Janine took Tom and they won't even look for him there, therefore eliminating them interferring with Tom's situation.
Janine had such a struggle getting Tom from Lina but an easy time getting him from Tess and Sam. This tells me how smart the Lindholm family is and how sophisticated they are at being creative.
Boy, how will Tom escape from these two ever again. Cleverness chart: Janine>Lina>Tom>Sam>Tess. Dont get me wrong. Tess is clever, but I feel like everyone has used Tess or done something behind her back. Janine used Tess to get Tom, Lina used Tess to hide Tom, Tom used Tess to get to Janine, and Sam used Tess to get Tom. Poor Tess. She's going to explode in rage when she comes back to her room.
Now, we look on ahead and wonder what in the world Janine has in store for Tom. First off, she told him that she wanted him in the ass. Feels like that's going to be a gauruntee now. Secondly, Janine never wants Tom to escape this time, so her prison choice for Tom may not be a simple glass this time.
Things have changed drastically, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Next chapter, MIND BENDER!
Date: October 25 2015 1:54 PM Title: Tom's Story
Wow, all of chapters 33-35 reviews got deleted. Even my "bend my mind review got deleted".
I can't really repost my review because of its length and detail, both my review of the Janine chapter was mostly criticism of how she knows too much.
Such as: Tess and Sam's schedules. And Tess's bathroom sharing roommate. Not sure how Janine knows that so well. I love her confidence in her plan though.
Author's Response:
Remember Janine is like Professor Moriarty clever, scary, plus remember she is friends with Tatiana, Astrid, Sam, and Tess, so no surprise about the shared bathroom, :)
Date: October 25 2015 9:44 AM Title: Ground Rules
Wow, Janine found him quickly! Question is, when will Tom's condition be reversed? If, at all?
Author's Response:
Janine is like a circling great white shark with the scent of blood in her nostrils, relentless. Time just got away from Tom
Date: October 24 2015 7:09 PM Title: Tom's Story
Hello! You seen at Tom.s Story when put double chapter 33 andchapter 34 is absent?
Author's Response:
Thanks for bringing the glitch to my attention. Unfortunately when fixing it I also deleted some reviews. To those who wrote and lost those reviews my apologies such was not my intent. Please feel free to repost that would be great. I also realize this is not new material though my fix has put this story back atop the most recent list. Thanks for your patience.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2015 1:38 PM Title: Tom's Story
This story continues to entertain after 30 chapters and going strong. I did find the Janine chapters the most "interesting" as you never knew what the limit was to her games with Tom. Now she has had time to fantasize about him and I can't imagine what she might do if she gets her hands on him again. Maybe she'll perfect her harness for him so she can wear him under her garments and keep him "safe". Whatever, I'm sure it will be good.
Keep it going and thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks, FYI even Janine doesn't know her limits :O
Date: October 21 2015 9:18 PM Title: Tom's Story
My mind is ready. :)
Author's Response:
It will happen in a few chapters, we'll see if you can wait that long... ;)
[Report This]Date: October 15 2015 7:25 PM Title: Sam and Tom
Janines the only one in control of this little bugger, to everyone else he's like 007, charms the shit out of them.
I didnt even realize he was still naked, yeah, should get him some clothes, lol. In other sibling stories, the sexual tension is established early and you understand it to be that way, in this story though, youve creeated a real life rrelationship between sister and brother and it just comes across as weird. I know you had that scene between Tess and Janine but i took that as more sexual tension between the two of them and not Tess and Tom.
Looking forward to Tom meeting Miss Karma!
Author's Response:
I wanted to avoid the typical hot sister stereotype and develop a more true to life and honest dynamic thanks for noticing. Ton is certainly a smooth little operator but he will soon find all of his gifts may be of little use. :)
[Report This]Date: October 15 2015 4:12 PM Title: Sam and Tom
For some reason, I didn't like Tom's cocky behaviour with Lina. However, I find it amusing with Sam and Tess. Watching Sam and Tess get all tense makes it more fun to read.
I agree that they need to wipe that smile off Tom's face, but no I actually like that smile. It keeps him going and makes it more entertaining and the punishments he receives more justifiable. Tom is also instigating all the sexy stuff, and we all want to read about that so I think it's best to let Tom keep it up, for now.
Tess was gone for 5 minutes? Wtf was that? Did she just go to the bathroom and found what she needed? Like, the conversation felt so short between Sam and Tom. (Rereading the chapter makes it feel even shorter.)
At least we know that Sam is into some crazy stuff. Man, I wish Lina had those thoughts. I would love to read about Lina's dreams. I thought she was too busy to even think about her love with Tom that her experience with him, wasn't that powerful. It was soothing to Tom, but I felt that she didn't have that same passion as Sam and Janine.
I think the most obvious solution is for Tess to let Sam take hold of Tom. Sam could play with him and even take him to school. Tess is playing the working mom role like she is juggling multiple activities at once. Sam could lighten that load and carry that burden that is Tom.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Remember this is your story and I've got an inclination of where to take this that will bend your mind. ;-)
Date: October 15 2015 4:01 PM Title: Sam and Tom
I'm with Carycomic, that was hilarious!
Author's Response:
Cocky cocky Tom. Pride goeth before the fall
[Report This]Date: October 15 2015 12:31 PM Title: Sam and Tom
"Want to see the helicopter?"
Still ROFLMAO.
Author's Response:
;-)
Date: October 15 2015 11:01 AM Title: Tom's Story
I also hope that this story is FAR from over:)
Author's Response:
There are still some plot twists coming but not sure how long this tale will be. We shall see
[Report This]Date: October 15 2015 10:47 AM Title: Tom's Story
I think Tess or someone should fart on him.. Either when he is trapped in the box with it or disposed in the back of her panties!! Farting teaches the tinies a lesson lol!! But so far so good! Add more booty and it will be an 11/10 lol I LOVE this story!! Add that ass gas hahaha
Author's Response:
I know you are a true dedicant to ass and gas. There will but play coming and I've another story in the works called Nasty as a request. The title says it all. Just going to wrap up a few stories before publishing anything new though.
[Report This]Date: October 13 2015 7:21 PM Title: Tess
Ok, Tom needs to be hurt, hes a smug bastard and a creeper. Looks like Sam is just going to give into him too, although she did have darker thoughts. I dont see her doing anything bad though because of her friendship with Tess.
Author's Response:
He is a bit of a perv in need of a serious comeuppance, don't worry though, karma can be a bitch
Date: October 13 2015 12:13 AM Title: Tess
Tess is really pissed off, but she still love her brother.
Maybe he could help to release all this stress... if you know what i mean :-)
Author's Response:
Lol, I think I get your drift, but she will need to simmer down before doing anything rash
Date: October 12 2015 11:50 PM Title: Tom's Story
Ha, so Tom was inside after all. He certainly wasted no time in sexing up Sam right away, no shame at all!
Author's Response:
Tom is like a raging hormone, or as he would say, "Living the dream," and eventually some dreams can spiral out of control and become a nightmare.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2015 9:03 PM Title: Tess
Duggernaut, I have a feeling that you forgot to even let us know that Tom was in the case last chapter. I think as you read the reviews, you were probably surprised at what everyone was talking about. Then you decided, hey, I did leave that part open to discussion, and it's distracting them.
Maybe I'm just used to your style, but after the first time I read it, I felt certain that Tom was in the case. It felt clear. Usually you leave clues that make me question whether something happened or not. However, if you did intend on creating doubt about the case, then bravo, because this was the best one yet.
Back to Tess. So Tess emotionally wants to beat the shit out of him, but physically she can't, because of sibling love. Sam on the other hand, doesn't care, he is a pervert and gets what is coming to him.
Careful Tom, she could be Janine 2.0. While Sam gets roughly 30 minutes with Tom, we will see what type of giantess she will be. I think it's fair to say she won't be as gentle as Lina and won't be as cruel as Janine. However, I think she is closer to Janine than to Lina.
I wonder how long Tess will keep Tom. Will Sam take him to class? What if a sexy teacher gets him!!!?? (I swear, if that teacher's name was Ms. Mackenzie, my heart would melt. I mean, it just connects beautifully with "Bang your head". That could be interesting.)
We also have to wonder if Janine knows, does she? Who is this Francis guy? When will he leave?
Then we have to wonder about Tom. Does Tom escape? Will he stick with Sam because of her sexual play? What will Tess do with Tom because we know sexy stuff won't happen between them.
So many burning questions that I want answers too! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
You are absolutely right, in my mind Tom was in the cqase the whole time but as i started going through the reviews, I was like, hey that would make for an interesting turn, but I've got a couple of twists of my own coming up pretty quickly, so...
Different school than Bang Your Head, though that school is the same as Anna's Awakening :O - Francis is Janine's daddy and we don't know how long he will be around or what Janine said to get him to come home, yet.
For every answer another question :)