You know what the weirdest thing about this chapter was? I felt exactly as Tom did.

I didn't want to rub her feet. Not my thing. I agree, I just wanted a crack at her pussy. If he is also thinking what I'm thinking, he knows that if he pleases her good in her pussy, then she might be nice to him.

Then she did use him against her pussy, and like Janine and Sam, she brutally abused him. And what makes this interesting is that these women are taking the thing he loves (pussy) and making it a miserable place for him.

This is good, becuase I don't think Tom even likes Miss Addison, just pleasing women. However, Miss Addison is taking the one thing he likes and making it less enjoyable. After all she is disciplining him.

Next, I like what you did about her pinching Tom's penis. She emphasizes that it's not about him, and it's about her.

It sounds like some sort of giantess sexual slavery. Although it sounds erotic, it seems scary in Tom's case, becuase he has no idea is he will ever be rescued. While in possession of any of the past ladies, he had hope to be moved somewhere else.

Remember when I said I fancy giantess teachers, well, Miss Addison is now kind of a turn off. At first, she sounded exciting, now it seems like just a bad experience in general.

Perhaps, you wanted me to feel unattracted to her, just like how Tom is probably reconsidering his thoughts as well.

I think this is finally the woman that everyone has always wanted. The one who can wipe the smile off Tom's face. I think this is the one. His charms don't work on her, he can't escape on the lid, she brutally abuses him like Janine, he is already bleeding, she won't let him have pleasure. Yep, it's like Tess hired this woman to straighten Tom out. Lol.

Really, good stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know for many readers Miss Addison is not perhaps what they want but I did need a foil. Some have indicated Tom is too comfortable in his situation. First Janine then Lina then Sam now Miss Addison each different. I think you're right that people want him back in Janine’s clutches and all I can say is have patience. I have tried to depict her as unwavering in her resolve to get him as well as demonstrating a very clever mind to achieve this goal. Patience. :)

LOL! Charlie's Angels meet Sherlock Holmes, these three. A great chapter, full of very plausible character development!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Like Nancy Drew except gigantic and in a couple of cases, with ulterior motives

Did you just add 2 chapters at once? I'm impressed amongst everything else you managed.

Author's Response:

Yes 2 chapters to try and get to the showdown sooner before I lose reader interest 

People like sexy stuff. That's what Janine brought to the table. Lina had some of it, but it only lasted for a bit, and it seemed as though her actions were rushed becuase she had to hide Tom from Janine.

What made Janine sexy was her confidence and not showing any fear of anyone discovering her with Tom. She even let Tess feel her up and felt Tom stuck in her panties. Janine wasn't ashamed, she was proud that she did that and she enjoyed it in front of Tess.

That's what all the other giantesses are missing. The same type of sexual appeal that Janine had. Sam was heading in the right direction, but she had her fun only once, and now no one cares about her.

We feel for Tess, but since she is his sister, we don't expect sexual action there. But her character feels more important than Lina and is second to Janine as the most interesting giantess.

I'm not sure where you are going with this Miss Addison thing in how it connects to the story, but I will surely enjo her time with Tom. Perhaps, Janine or Lina have some sort of connection to Miss Addison.

Next up, the addition of characters. First, there's Tom and Tess. We know Janine is the target, so we expect a change. Then, (well, probably only I expected this), Lina gets hold of Tom. Her addition was good and it brought the gentleness back to the story and made Tom's dream come true. Then with Sam, we expected revenge from Sam to Tom. But after like 3 chapters, he is already gone to a new character which makes people feel disappointed, not becuase Tom is captured, but becuase it was not Janine.

I think this story might need more characters, becuase we don't want to settle too long on one person. Tom has to adjust and the best way is change. If he stays with one character, it becomes less interesting.

If you want to see a complicated multi character story, read Duggernaut's "Contract". It makes all his other stories more enjoyable. So to me, this story doesn't feel long at all.

Janine has built a rep that makes everyone wishing Tom could go back to her.

I also like how you keep making Tom use "his charm" to get women. If it worked for all these years in school, then why not now. I don't see why he should change it.

I want Tom to get back to Lina, but I approve of this teacher thing.

Nice third party scene. The old "if you didn't do it, and I didn't do it, then who did?" Scene. Love it. And Miss Addison was defiantely not expected.

With most stories, the middle always seems bad becuase the beginning was very strong and attractive and was like an advertisement. These awkward middle parts get settled in the end which makes the end more satisfying.

Good stuff, I can't wait for the next chapter!

See "Carrie's Science Project" @ Giantess City Index (Shrunken Man Stories).

@ Tom Speedy: I think Ms. Addison is going to prove the hottest disciplinarian since Tiny Dan's Zavia Tavar Lahrenger.

;-)

This is my favorite story currently on the site, and I must admit I'm not particularly keen on.the newest chapter, and it may begin to finally make my interest wane after 30+ chapters. Personally have no interest in the teacher twist. The idea doesn't appeal to me sexually or from an enjoyment perspective. With Tess, Janine, Sam and Lina, and the backseat stuff about fixing Tom's size its just one moving part too many. 

Additionally I feel like there's a lack of character development with Tom. He's too much of a silver tongued devil, you'd think after essentially torture at Janine's hands he wouldn't be so quick to make almost every single line of dialogue hitting on every giant woman he meets. You'd assume he'd actually be more wanting to get fixed. 

I just kind of feel like the story has stagnated and is drawing out and adding yet another character taking Tom is counter productive to flow.

I am liking Bang your head much more right now as the main charay

First of all, what just happened?

That was my reaction when Miss Addison decided to show up. I mean, of all people, her? Yes, I have always wanted a teacher to find him, but wow, this is defiantly a surprise.

You said "dragging him down to the office and exposing the situation to the headmistress" twice near the middle of the chapter.

Addison is a great name. Glad you chose it.

I just want everyone to know that Miss Addison is the teacher that scolded Tess and Janine earlier in the story. She is not a random teacher.

I think it's funny how Miss Addison was able to connect the dots and figure out that Tom is a naughty boy.

The vocabulary is strong in Miss Addison. Gives off a nice "well educated" background about her.

Wow, so she just put him in there and trapped him? Im already liking her. I doubt she would pass Lina's sexual demeanor, but let's hope she is in the same league as Ms. Mackenzie!

Oh boy, I can't wait for the next chapter!

At this point Tess is going to put Tom inside of herself just to keep him safe rather than sex.

Hmmm, not Tanitia you say. Maybe Tomspeedy guessed it, hes up Janines bum, heehee.

It was somedody who scared him, obvious choice is Janine but I think you are going to make us wait a little longer for Janine. Tell you this, if its not Janine, I think Tom is in even more danger than if it was.