Date: November 03 2015 2:23 AM Title: Tom's Story
@Carycomic, I'm not familiar with this "Tiny Dan's Zavia Tavar Lahrenger".
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 9:23 PM Title: Unexpected Company
@ Tom Speedy: I think Ms. Addison is going to prove the hottest disciplinarian since Tiny Dan's Zavia Tavar Lahrenger.
;-)
Date: November 02 2015 8:44 PM Title: Tom's Story
Sorry, jolt on bus made me accidentally hit submit.
Bang youheads main character feels fear and feels like more of a real person wheras Tom doesn't feel remotely real and feels totally fake now, which along with all the threads going on is drawing me away from this story.
Sorry if this review upset you, I did my best not to be rude and to be constructive. I'm just not one to really hold back my true thoughts
Author's Response:
Thank for the review and taking time to share your thoughts and feelings. I am somewhat dismayed that I have taken what gad been an enjoyable story for you and moved it in a direction that has left you dissatisfied. Many other reviewers have commented on how one dimensional Tom is and the ease with which he seems to manipulate the females he encounters (except perhaps Janine). The introduction of the teacher is to provide an opportunity to enhance Tom's character by putting him in the hands of someone unmoved by his slick words. Her motivation to take him will be revealed and it is not my intent to leave him with this character indefinitely though it could happen I suppose. I thoroughly appreciate that you've invested in this story and shared your disappointment straight from the hip. I hope I am able to restore the vitality of this tale that captivated your attention early on. Thanks.
I am almost ready to release another story following a similar foundation but much less forgiving. Gypsy Ire - Michael's Story
Date: November 02 2015 8:41 PM Title: Tom's Story
This is my favorite story currently on the site, and I must admit I'm not particularly keen on.the newest chapter, and it may begin to finally make my interest wane after 30+ chapters. Personally have no interest in the teacher twist. The idea doesn't appeal to me sexually or from an enjoyment perspective. With Tess, Janine, Sam and Lina, and the backseat stuff about fixing Tom's size its just one moving part too many.
Additionally I feel like there's a lack of character development with Tom. He's too much of a silver tongued devil, you'd think after essentially torture at Janine's hands he wouldn't be so quick to make almost every single line of dialogue hitting on every giant woman he meets. You'd assume he'd actually be more wanting to get fixed.
I just kind of feel like the story has stagnated and is drawing out and adding yet another character taking Tom is counter productive to flow.
I am liking Bang your head much more right now as the main charay
Date: November 02 2015 7:16 PM Title: Tom's Story
Lemme guess, this and the next chapter will bend my mind.
I say this because a giantess teacher has always been arguably my greatest fantasy.
The way, they have control over students and can "teach them a lesson" just sounds so sexy when you connect them together. Not to mention "detention" "tutoring" "after school help" "remedial lessons" "private lessons". So many examples where a giantess teacher can have her fun with a student alone.
Not just that, but when a teacher teaches and has a tiny pleasuring her and no one else can realize it just thrills me.
Miss Addison may have to close her "office hours" to students so she can have some more time with Tom.
My next question is how does Tom escape her? I mean, after Lina, Miss Addison seems like the next best giantess. I want her to teach Tom Anatomy 101 to him. So many possibilities! But for his escape, I'm not sure Tom can, especially since he underestimated her I the beginning. I think Tess or Janine have to get the hint soon. My guess is that Janine figures it out first.
But let's get the "disciplining" started!
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 7:06 PM Title: Unexpected Company
First of all, what just happened?
That was my reaction when Miss Addison decided to show up. I mean, of all people, her? Yes, I have always wanted a teacher to find him, but wow, this is defiantly a surprise.
You said "dragging him down to the office and exposing the situation to the headmistress" twice near the middle of the chapter.
Addison is a great name. Glad you chose it.
I just want everyone to know that Miss Addison is the teacher that scolded Tess and Janine earlier in the story. She is not a random teacher.
I think it's funny how Miss Addison was able to connect the dots and figure out that Tom is a naughty boy.
The vocabulary is strong in Miss Addison. Gives off a nice "well educated" background about her.
Wow, so she just put him in there and trapped him? Im already liking her. I doubt she would pass Lina's sexual demeanor, but let's hope she is in the same league as Ms. Mackenzie!
Oh boy, I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 5:58 PM Title: Unexpected Company
OK! Congratulations; you fooled me. No way I could've anticipated one of his teachers. Let alone, a disciplinarian for whom Tom's imminent lessons in "order" will be as much forbidden pleasure as empowering punishment.
Date: November 02 2015 5:19 PM Title: Tom's Story
At this point Tess is going to put Tom inside of herself just to keep him safe rather than sex.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 8:27 PM Title: Confrontation
Then, it's got to be Astrid.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 6:37 PM Title: Confrontation
Hmmm, not Tanitia you say. Maybe Tomspeedy guessed it, hes up Janines bum, heehee.
It was somedody who scared him, obvious choice is Janine but I think you are going to make us wait a little longer for Janine. Tell you this, if its not Janine, I think Tom is in even more danger than if it was.
Author's Response:
Another possibility no one has really thrown out there is maybe Janine swallowed him... :O
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 2:08 PM Title: Confrontation
Haha, Tess checked Janine pretty good, but not good enough. If we know Janine, he is probably in the back of her underwear, inside her vagina, or even inside her asshole.
I still think it is Janine. She is just straight up lying so the accusations don't go to her. Also, it makes Tess less likely to suspect Janine of taking him.
What ever happened to Tom, we at least know Janine is responsible whether she took him or not. (I'm pretty sure she did.)
This Tatiana thing is just a hoax for us to believe that there are more possibilities. Janine's plan is too clever. She went in, got Tom, got Titiana to get her access, and now Tom is hidden.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Muwahaha I know you cant wait, next chapter will answer what happened to Tom,
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 7:56 PM Title: Confrontation
Supposition #1: Tatiana, being the daughter of a Russian Mob boss, would probably have access to all sorts of ex-KGB surveillance experts. And, if she was secretly obsessed with him even before he shrank, she might've had those same experts bug his family's home! Hence, she wouldn't have had to accidentally find him on the bathroom floor (or overhear him and Sam through an overly convenient air duct) to know of his new existence.
Supposition #2: Lina has sent Marta to bring him back to her. But, the latter will wind up double-crossing the former.
Sorry for the relapse into Tomspeedyitis.
Author's Response:
Attempting to extrapoloate potential avenues of the story are good, it helps me understand how well I'm leading the people reading or in some cases it allows me to see alternative possibilities I had not previously considered. However, nope to both, :P
Date: October 28 2015 7:15 PM Title: Confrontation
Plot twists be like...
Author's Response:
Keep you guessing.
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 6:57 PM Title: Confrontation
Still going strong with this story mate! Very good, and an ominous mysterious twist which will probably get resolved in the following chapter writen in Tom's pov. Unless his abductor's wearing a mask or acts 'off screen' with him for a bit before the identity is revealed : d
Quite a mystery as to who could've found Tom and abudcted him like that. Were there any hints in earlier chapters to who this character might be and if they know about Tom?
^_^;
Author's Response:
Hmm, no overt clues per se. Here's my guess, - Colonel Mustard, in the library, with the candlesitck, joking! Next chapter will be the reveal, I promise
Date: October 28 2015 6:12 PM Title: Confrontation
SO it HAS to be an Ex-Girlfriend or something!
Author's Response:
Or something, :D
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 5:29 PM Title: Ground Rules
Couldn't be Janine; too soon and too obvious.
Author's Response:
That would be too obvious - which would make it unexpected!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 5:26 PM Title: Janine - Wednesday
I still say that Tatiana will find him, first.
Author's Response:
Nope
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 3:14 PM Title: Ground Rules
Very good!!!
Continues...
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: October 27 2015 9:54 AM Title: Ground Rules
Oh oh! Janine is trouble indeed. Will Tess be able to save him???
Author's Response:
Only time will tell, and yes Janine is trouble with a capital T
[Report This]Date: October 26 2015 8:33 PM Title: Ground Rules
Just getting caught up on this, lots of good things happening! First off, loved the scene between Sam and Tom, one of my favorite scenarios is when the giantess gets lost in her passions with no regard for the tiny, steamy stuff! One of the best stories ever was the Plague with an epic scene where a tiny is found in the girls locker room where he is whisked away to the giantesses home where he perishes in the throws of passion. Obviously you couldnt go that far with Tom or no more story, lol but good job none the less!
Next Janine is a devilishly clever, Professor Moriarty inteligence indeed! Im not entirely sure who opened the box though, for some reason I am thinking Tanitia, could she have been in the bathroom and overheard Tess's conversation with Tom? But then why would Tom be afraid of her, he usually looks forward to new encounters? Maybe just something about her expression that sent chills down his spine, sometimes you just know you are in danger. Cant wait to find out if its Janine or someone eise!
Author's Response:
Thanks, i know you're pulling strongly for the Janine angle to teach Tom a little humility. As for Tatiana, nope. Next chapter will answer the question of who opened the box! :)