Close to 1000 reviews. The only story on this site to do so was one of the Titan stories before they were deleted. Exile I think.

The last two sentences saved this chapter.

After Tom's fantastic adventures with each women, I thought maybe we are going to get some foreign special in the mix. Unfortunately, it was the same tied up and fucked method that we have seen quite often.

The only new thing was the piss which I know that some people enjoy it so I wouldn't call it a bad thing. In fact, it's interesting. Tom never had that and with all these women, it seems like he will experience the entire spectrum.

Like I said, these last 2 sentences saved the chapter becuase that sex scene felt kinda stale to me. In addition, it felt like a minute long.

However, I love how Tom got washed up and it looks like another woman is about to use him. Is Tom being used as a sex slave by the minute? If yes, now this changes things. I have always wondered about a story where a tiny man has been used as part of a business like this. I never knew that this would be the story where I find it, but hey, it's looking good so far.

Tom is definately in for it this time. "1 by 1 the women come and go, thinking of Tom and not Michaelangelo."

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sorry you found it a little flat, hopefully the next one restores your faith.

Oh!  I like her.

Great bit of suspense building.  Hedy seems like a real intellectual juggernaut.  I really think this is a character I wouldn't like in real life, but can't take my eyes off in fiction.

Plus, I want her to save Tom.  Who knew?

You've done it again Duggernaut.

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I love a gts-story that throws in a little real-world science (and/or current events), every now and then.

Bravo! :-)

Ok, now that's super hot! Tom got kidnapped to be this wealthy woman's sexy toy! Damn! If my life was shit, and I ended up in that position I enjoy it.

Also, this woman, just seems sexy. The way she spoke English among the other women symbolized how special she was. Then her wealthy clothes showed that this was a big shot woman. Also, this woman likes him and just states that he is handsome out loud! In addition, she just strips casually, teasing Tom, right before she says she wants him to pleasure her! This is amazing!

In the middle of the chapter, you had a bunch of letters and numbers all jumbled up which looks like something you see in a word search game.

Forget the rescue, this woman knows the real deal and I would love to see that in action!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

That bunch of letters was actually supposed to be Russian. I'm glad you approve of the direction  this little tale is taking. Next chapter more about the mysterious Miss Smith then onto some fun stuff

Sounds like Serena would just love to have a tiny man to dominate.

Well now,this is a turn. 

Serena might be a mover and shaker,but this miss Smth seems like the type to get things done.  She might be walking out of where ever Tom is with him in her kevlar panties (it's the only way she could do it, of course) in a couple of chapters. Or at least have everyone who cares about him pointed in the right direction. 

It is rather impressive, the support network Tom has garnered.  We might see how much pressure they can bring to bear.  Only this time, it's not on Tom's tiny body.

Thanks again Dugger Fiend Naut.  Great work.

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Hedy Smith. More like Helly Sith. I bet this woman is responsible for Tom's kidnapping and she wants to get rid of all the people that know Tom. She might send an electronic memory eraser via a text message and once it's opened, the subject forgets about Tom.

Serena was in control of Lina so I wasn't worried about her. But this woman is a wild card and I don't trust her. Even if Lina told Serena to do anything necesssry, I doubt this was acceptable. Serena can't just tell random people about Tom.

How does Janine know all the people Tom has been with. She doesn't know about Sam, right? Also, what about the entire girl population who was told of Tom when they had voodoo dolls in their panties? I doubt Janine knows all their numbers.

Anything think it's been a while since Tom got to have some fun lately? Being passed from woman to woman, you would think he gets some action here and there.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Since we are freely discussing multiple works in the same review:  This has been a great phase for tiny heroes.  First Oliver show's the 'Megs up and now Tom has an escape plan in like 10 seconds.  He's really getting good at this.

I also have to note, based on Tom's observations of her, Natalya seems to be an object of Tom's compassion.  While I have to note that it's interesting that he can feel sympathy for someone with so much potential power over him, because he's so aclimated to being his size, it also speaks volumes about him as a human being.  Maybe he is becoming a better, more compassionate  person.

Loving the mysterious phase of the story.  Thanks Duggernaut.

Peace

Pix

English translation: you're going to sadistically keep me in suspense for the next week or so. Aren't you?

Author's Response:

Umm...yep