Hey, first of all, glad you are back. I got worried for some time. Nonetheless, you are back.

First of all, I'm not quite sure if that's a showdown. I mean, sure it was two people having a verbal showdown, but I kinda expected it to be bigger. Then again, it would be probably more difficult to have a multi person showdown with multiple women.

Janine said a lot of cruel stuff. Always one step ahead she is. Of her mother, of Tess, and now Miss Addison.

I have no idea about half the things that Janine said, but it sounded scary, the way it sounded official.

So Tom is back with Janine. Miss Addison's adventure with Tom was short timed just like Tess and Sam.

Perhaps this is a good time to catch up on the Lindholm residence. Is the father still there? How long will he be there? Has Lina figured it out? What did Janine say that made Francis arrive? So many questions about that phone call earlier that I want to know!

Then we have Tess. She thinks it's Miss Addison too. Is this going to be a cat and mouse game? Will Tess ask Miss Addison about Tom too. Lol. Miss Addison will be freaked about how many girls know she had Tom.

Last of all, Miss Addison. What will she do? Will she kidnap another boy from school? (Ok, that won't happen, but I had to suggest it.) Will she report Janine of kidnapping? Or even better, will she call Lina? Now that could be interesting.

Next chapter could be anything and I am ready for it. I can't wait!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom, life sometimes gets in the way of writing and that causes some delay in providing updates. Janine is like Ilsa, She-Wolf of the SS and there was no way Miss Addison was prepared for her. I have moved Tom around a lot and fairly quickly to try and keep it interesting, but he may be in some trouble now she has her talons on him again, we'll see...

"You should never doubt what no one is sure of." ---Willy Wonka (Gene Wilder).

Not unless Sam, Tessa, and Jasmine have that showdown in the bathroom with Miss Addison. What could better climax could there be than a four-way free-for-all on the white tile floor of a girl's lav?

:-|

Wait! Let me rephrase that...

@ Tom Speedy:

And I predict that the showdown will involve Our Little Hero falling off his "perch" during some bathroom break. Only to be found by Tatiana and/or Astrid!

Tom or Michael should be tapped to the toilet seat or toilet bowl (just above the water) of the girl's/women's washroom. At school or at home. Best author I've ever read!

Author's Response:

Thaks for the review, we'll see which direction this story takes. As for Michael, he too is in over his head and who knows whether or not he's going to spend some time in the bowl. Thanks for the praise considering there are some wickedly talented authors sharing their tales on the site. Hope you continue to enjoy!

Even more ironic than Tom's unintended pun? "Pandora" translates as "all-gift." So, it could be said that he's trapped in a gift box!*

*Similar to how Janine deliberately misinterpreted his presence, at her birthday party, as wanting to be one of her presents! ;-D

You know what the weirdest thing about this chapter was? I felt exactly as Tom did.

I didn't want to rub her feet. Not my thing. I agree, I just wanted a crack at her pussy. If he is also thinking what I'm thinking, he knows that if he pleases her good in her pussy, then she might be nice to him.

Then she did use him against her pussy, and like Janine and Sam, she brutally abused him. And what makes this interesting is that these women are taking the thing he loves (pussy) and making it a miserable place for him.

This is good, becuase I don't think Tom even likes Miss Addison, just pleasing women. However, Miss Addison is taking the one thing he likes and making it less enjoyable. After all she is disciplining him.

Next, I like what you did about her pinching Tom's penis. She emphasizes that it's not about him, and it's about her.

It sounds like some sort of giantess sexual slavery. Although it sounds erotic, it seems scary in Tom's case, becuase he has no idea is he will ever be rescued. While in possession of any of the past ladies, he had hope to be moved somewhere else.

Remember when I said I fancy giantess teachers, well, Miss Addison is now kind of a turn off. At first, she sounded exciting, now it seems like just a bad experience in general.

Perhaps, you wanted me to feel unattracted to her, just like how Tom is probably reconsidering his thoughts as well.

I think this is finally the woman that everyone has always wanted. The one who can wipe the smile off Tom's face. I think this is the one. His charms don't work on her, he can't escape on the lid, she brutally abuses him like Janine, he is already bleeding, she won't let him have pleasure. Yep, it's like Tess hired this woman to straighten Tom out. Lol.

Really, good stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know for many readers Miss Addison is not perhaps what they want but I did need a foil. Some have indicated Tom is too comfortable in his situation. First Janine then Lina then Sam now Miss Addison each different. I think you're right that people want him back in Janine’s clutches and all I can say is have patience. I have tried to depict her as unwavering in her resolve to get him as well as demonstrating a very clever mind to achieve this goal. Patience. :)

LOL! Charlie's Angels meet Sherlock Holmes, these three. A great chapter, full of very plausible character development!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Like Nancy Drew except gigantic and in a couple of cases, with ulterior motives

Did you just add 2 chapters at once? I'm impressed amongst everything else you managed.

Author's Response:

Yes 2 chapters to try and get to the showdown sooner before I lose reader interest 

Hi there. 

I must admit, I do share the point of view of Cameron here. It's getting too long, and everytime we do think Janine will get him back, something happens, and he just gets away with everything he does so far.

I understand that the teacher will now show a bit of dominance, but there's now too many characters whereas lots of them deserved our attention, and didn't get it, or not enough, because there's always someone else coming to get Tom away. 

Can't wait for you to get our Janine back ! Or even Sam, or Tess, I don't know. Whatever you want :)

Anyway, despite what I just said, your writing is still really enjoyable. Please do keep up !