Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2015 7:55 PM Title: Janine

There goes the happy ending I was hoping for. But then again, i can't help but like this a bit more. Excited for what's to come!

Author's Response:

She got a happy ending

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 1:25 PM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory

Love the erotic-ness! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Things heat up next chapter. I think creating a little foreplay can help get the story smoldering some. Thanks for the review 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 9:10 AM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory

And that Tom, is when she finds out a tiny man has been fondling her in her sleep! I would run if I were you.

 

By the way this: She was lying on her side, back to him, strands of her long unkempt golden hair strewn about the landscape, her weight creating a gravity well in the soft mattress

Gravity well is a very unique way to describe the scene. I like it. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I appreciate the comments it helps me develop my writing voice. I thought defining her weight in those terms would convey a sense of size. My thanks for the recognition of it :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 8:09 PM Title: Tess

I'm not sure if Tom is smarter than Tess. And that's impressive if that's true.

Tess is already brilliant. She played that lost eating decoy very well. She also did a good job on making Karolina and her maids stop looking on the ground by stating that she found the earring. Perfect execution!

Janine not into older men. She's already looking for a partner and feels awkward when thinking about Aedin. Perhaps Tom can fill that void.

So the party is finally over! Tom is alone with Janine, Karolina and their maids. (I hope their maids were only their for the party. Wouldn't want them becoming a distraction for Tom. Unless you got something in mind.)

I can't wait to see who finds Tom first. Will it be his lovely girlfriend Janine, or the sexy MILF Karolina? I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 5:44 PM Title: Tess

If only Tess had just lowered herself to thinking like him. But, now, it's Janine who's most likely to find him, first. And, it remains to be seen whether she'll be flattered...or Tom will be flattened.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2015 6:53 PM Title: Tom's Story

Soon Tom will be discovered and all sorts of sexy things will happen! :)

Author's Response:

Soon :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2015 11:56 AM Title: The Adventures of Tom

Being in your girlfriend's room when you are just a few inches tall, yep, thats paradise.

What makes it more exciting? She has no idea!

Wow! Janinie over food and water! Now thats commitment! If it was me, I would go for food, becuase, well, you kind of need it. Well, time flies when you are having fun, and Tom definately is having fun.

The unaware scenes are great! First Tanita, and then the maid. I also get nervous at these encounters.

This is getting exciting!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you're still on board Tom, it's starting to get good now :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 6:58 PM Title: The Party

Heck yeah! Now this is what I'm talking about!

Tom in a party with 12 hot girls and a hot mom. Not to mention his sister adding a bit more fun to the story as she tries to hide his presence.

Karolina? Hmm. I kinda like it. You said it was gonna be close to the ones I've mentioned and the closest was Carla. Well......I guess they are close.

I already like Karolina's behaviour. She is powerful and has authority and has command over the entire party. Not to mention that she is beautiful in Tom's opinion which makes her that much attractive to him.

Lucky Tom. Able to hear girls talk about how hot you are. That's when you know you are doing something right.

When Tess told Tom of her gift to Janine, my heart was pounding! I mean, that was freaking sexy! A miniature version of Tom, with a bow around his waist and dangled by a key chain! That sounds like some kinky ideas right there.

Tess tucked Tom into her purse and the she was "careful in how she closed it". So if Tess closed it, how did Tom get out? Could it be open from the inside, or was there still an opening for Tom to crawl out of? Might need some clarification on that.

I wonder why Tom got out of the purse? To explore the giant girls, or to see his favorite band play? Or both? It's interesting, becuase if he wants to see the concert, then he better climb something to get a good view. I wonder who is the tallest person in this house......? That person may be Tom's best choice.

I'm so happy that the party has started! Karoline is better than I expected and Tess is doing a great job (attempt) at trying to control Tom. Also, now Tom is out on the run! Things will be really really interesting now, especially without the protection of Tess.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2015 7:20 AM Title: Back at the School

Very good!

Continues...

Author's Response:

Thank your for the kind words and for taking the time to share them with me. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2015 5:51 PM Title: Back at the School

Actually, if you believe those Japanese anime series, it's not gnomes who steal teenage girls' underpants. It's dirty little old men!

Well, that's what I've heard. I don't watch anime, myself. ;-D

Author's Response:

https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=underpants+gnomes+song

Not much into anime myself, my reference was South Park - don't know if the address above will link or not.