[Report This]Date: November 29 2015 9:04 PM Title: Lina
I have found this story to be quite fascinating, and looking forward to seeing how much longer Tom will have to survive before he can resume his normal size (if ever). And how many additional more female bodies he will have to endure, and to what degree.
Thanks, and keep it rolling!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review this story. Tom is atypical of my usual protagonists and for whatever reason this story is the one that's gotten the most interest. There are undoubted parallels between this story and another I'm working on at the moment called Michael's Story. Given recent developments in this tale things ahead for Tom go from him having fun with his tiny status to him just trying to survive.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2015 7:26 PM Title: Lina
Friday night with Janine Lindholm?! That's bound to remove the first two initials from TGIF.
Author's Response:
That Girl Is Frightening - TGIF. Gives a whole new meaning to long weekend.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2015 6:53 PM Title: Lina
Wow, just reading the thoughts of Lina gets me interested in this again. I really enjoy reading about her desires, especially her naughty thoughts about Tom. I'm glad she even thinks about him while she is with Francis.
Clever move by having Janine say that mom was feeling depressed and needed company. This also means that if Lina refused, then Francis will be more inclined to help. Clever girl Janine.
Tess is now 2 steps behind. She is not prepping a plan to get her brother, but she is still figuring out if Miss Addison even took Tom. Janine surely has brought time on her hands. She might even thank Miss Addision for being an obstacle to Tess.
I'm so glad you brought up Miss Harwood. If I know you, whenever you mention the name of a character, they are going to play a role later on. I hope this one becomes true! I want Tom in Miss Harwood's possession and for her to play with him in ways that will make every woman in this story jealous. (Same goes with Lina. I want these women to play with Tom like that.)
Man, Francis seems like he will be staying for a while. This doesn't mean that Linda won't see Tom, it just means that it will be challenging and who doesn't like a challenge? I bet Lina embraces them like her daughter.
I really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad to have recaptured your interest it does seem Tess is lagging somewhat. Janine is diabolical in her efforts setting mom up was fairly easy. Things look decidedly bleak for our protagonist
Date: November 26 2015 6:13 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Writteninthestars, I'm glad I'm not alone.
I can't even find the chat box to discuss this. I feel like popular stories like this one are the new chat boxes, haha.
I would not go that far that it is disgusting, but yes, I prefer the other layout much better. This new one seems more modern, but it seems to be missing lots of stuff, and I personally do not like the colors.
Yeah, I also hope a fix arrives soon.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2015 5:32 PM Title: Tom's Story
Anyone else dislike the new layout? Its so bad that I won't be making any new stories or adding to my ongoing ones. I explained why in a review on my story 'Little Devils'.
On another note, awesome chapter as always :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Please don't allow your dislike of the new format to deter you from continuing to share your stories. I doubt the site administration intended to make the change in the hoes of alienating anyone and hopefully they will use the feedback to help provide a superior site. Cheers.
Date: November 23 2015 9:59 PM Title: Tom's Story
This new website change is not the best skin in my opinion. Is there a way to change it?
Also, anyone know where is the chat box?
[Report This]Date: November 21 2015 9:28 PM Title: On the Road Again
Theres just something so hot about the way Janine handles Tom, I liked Sams treatment of him too but Janine just owns him. Can't wait to see what she has planned for him, she had to buy gatorade to keep herself hydrated, not good for Tom!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2015 5:13 PM Title: On the Road Again
Hmm. This chapter intrigues me. It was a well put chapter that showed a lot of things that I really wanted to see. It also has a lot of things to discuss. Let's begin.
First off, smart move by Janine to clean up Tom at the gas station. Before reading that part I was wondering if her parents would see her walking in with Tom in the container.
When she put Tom on the toilet seat, I thought she was going to let him take a piss too. I guess not. Maybe Tom takes a piss inside Janine. (That's sounds wrong, but who knows, Janine probably won't feel it within her secretions).
Ok, what up with the blue Gatorade? Any little detail in your stories have some importance later on. Is it a torture device for Tom, a pool for Tom, or just an excuse for her parents if they ask where she has been?
The collar is back! I'm glad there is no chain this time. The collar is enough to signify property and control. Janine is definately preparing something big with Tom soon.
Anyone else find it funny that Janine cleaned him up, then immediately rubs her vaginal fluid on him. She didn't really want him clean. She just wanted to remove Miss Addison's fluid off him.
The Dad seems pretty cool. Looks like a great, loving family. A bit too loving that Francis and Karolina are going to spend a lot of time together. Francis also likes Janine and he wants time to spend with her. Francis also bonds Janine and Lina. Not just Tom with their sexual play, but just family time and enjoying life. I can see it, and I right now I don't want it to be ruined. I could be wrong becuase I don't even know much about Francis.
You mentioned "a short distance off" twice with like 3 sentences. Nothing wrong except some may see it as redundant.
"An amused look on her face?" Was Lina really looking like that with that expression? Or was she playing along with Janine's experiment. I think there is something more than amusement she gave Janine.
Beautiful wordplay. "I got some cramming to do". Ok, this does not refer to her homework. Instead it seems like she meant she is going to cram Tom inside her all night and cram him in all her tight places.
I wouldn't say Janine has gotten any nicer. She is just prepping him for the night. She cleaned him up, and put him inside her. Usually girls don't immediately shove Tom inside them like that. Girls shove him in as the main event. For Janine, that's just the appetizer. Her main event will be more memorable to Tom. We can only wonder what that will be.
I really can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2015 12:07 PM Title: On the Road Again
Well, she's been (uncharacteristically) gentle with him, so far. Maybe she just plans to teach him a lesson _without_ seriously injuring him?
Date: November 18 2015 7:43 AM Title: Tom's Story
@Maximus: I'm anal-retentive! And proud of it! :P
Date: November 17 2015 10:05 PM Title: Tom's Story
Oh I agree with that, Wombo, he kind of reminds me of Peewee from Porkys, a sex crazed adolescent :)
Author's Response:
Um, weren't we all at that age?
Date: November 17 2015 9:01 PM Title: Tom's Story
@gadget,
The main character is supposed to represent me. Lol.
Author's Response:
This story was predicated by a request from Tom with parameters identified by him. It seems to have found an audience more so than any other my other offerings, so good show Tom!
Date: November 17 2015 8:59 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Maximus,
When Giantesslover said that Janine always wins, he meant that Janine kinda outplays everyone. No one has really outplayed Janine except Karolina one time.
Date: November 17 2015 8:58 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Maximus
Hey I never said the story was badly written, in fact it's one of my favorites on this site now that I've caught up on it. And I'm not saying EVERY character is lacking personality, just the main character, he feels a bit like a perverted dude camera to me, who sometimes goes entire chapters without uttering a word. Every other character though has a distinct personality. And you're right this story IS leaning more towards erotica than a simple story, again, nothing wrong with that. In fact my main story is mostly erotic and nothing else to be honest.
Date: November 17 2015 7:27 PM Title: Tom's Story
@ Maximus: At least even the boring authors can spell "twist" properly. ;-)
"Twits and turns?" Still lmao.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2015 2:16 PM Title: Alpha
Back where he belongs! She is a cunning little minx, phew, now Toms in trouble, he may never get out of her panties again. Of course, he may actually iike that unless he finds himself a little further south *weg*
Couple of rebuttals to some other reviews. First, not sure how Janine ALWAYS wins, she went 21 chapters without her little prize.
Second, disregard everything wombo said, the characters are great, each with distinctive personalities. And while this story has plenty of eroticism in it, its not an over abundance, its not like every chapter every scene there is sex. I wonder why some of you even come to a fetish site, too many stories around here bore me to tears, you have a great balance in yours, Duggernaught.
Hands down, one of the best contributors here. Stories are well written, have action, twits and turns and you give both gentle and violent fans something to enjoy, very well done.
Author's Response:
I did say have some patience. Thank you for the lofty praise regarding my contributions to this site, and for addressing Giantesslover122's question of why Janine seems to come out on top.
Date: November 17 2015 1:28 PM Title: Alpha
Decent story, this one kind of reminds me of some of wildcatman's works, particularly "The Decrement of Tom", I guess "Tom" being the same name in both stories is just because Tom referes to ThomThumb which is a popular shrunken man character. But anyway you're writing really reminds me of his works, in fact some of the criticisms I have of this story are the SAME I gave to him on many occasions. Namely, that your protagonist feels more like a camera that goes from woman to woman, set-piece to set-piece, rather than an actual character. But then again this story is more towards the side of pure erotica than a story with some sexyness in it, not that this is a bad thing mind you. Anyway, I'll be keeping up with this one, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
ThanK you for the feedback, I appreciate your input and will keep it in mind when continuing this or others stories. :)
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 10:34 PM Title: Alpha
@ Giantesslover122
Because "it's her birthday, and she'll win if she wants to. Win if she wants to; win if she wants to! If you were shrunken, too, she'd win over you."
"Doot-doot-doot-doot! DOOT!"
Date: November 16 2015 10:29 PM Title: Tom's Story
Now that was a twist I did not expect at all.
Author's Response:
Well that's good then, :)
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 7:03 PM Title: Alpha
Why does Janine always have to fucking win?
Author's Response:
Janine is amoral and ruthless which gives her a certain advantage because she is willing to do things that might gives others pause. The story is not done yet. :)