[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 1:25 PM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
Love the erotic-ness! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Things heat up next chapter. I think creating a little foreplay can help get the story smoldering some. Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 11:40 AM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
My heart is pounding as well! Unaware just has this sneaky, sexy and dangerous feeling that makes every move seem like a thrill.
Tom may be clever, but I think his lust for Janine is distracting him from his survival instincts.
Rarely does my heart rate increase while reading a story without sexual content. I have a feeling that that's about to change soon.
I can't for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom glad you're still along for the ride. It's about to get crazy...
Date: August 01 2015 9:10 AM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
And that Tom, is when she finds out a tiny man has been fondling her in her sleep! I would run if I were you.
By the way this: She was lying on her side, back to him, strands of her long unkempt golden hair strewn about the landscape, her weight creating a gravity well in the soft mattress
Gravity well is a very unique way to describe the scene. I like it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I appreciate the comments it helps me develop my writing voice. I thought defining her weight in those terms would convey a sense of size. My thanks for the recognition of it :)
[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 5:06 AM Title: Tess
Good.
But few emotions ... More tone in danger
Boobs, Ass, Fart
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm trying to found the emotional gravitas in the current of danger. There will be more bobs perhaps some assistance upcoming
[Report This]Date: July 30 2015 8:09 PM Title: Tess
I'm not sure if Tom is smarter than Tess. And that's impressive if that's true.
Tess is already brilliant. She played that lost eating decoy very well. She also did a good job on making Karolina and her maids stop looking on the ground by stating that she found the earring. Perfect execution!
Janine not into older men. She's already looking for a partner and feels awkward when thinking about Aedin. Perhaps Tom can fill that void.
So the party is finally over! Tom is alone with Janine, Karolina and their maids. (I hope their maids were only their for the party. Wouldn't want them becoming a distraction for Tom. Unless you got something in mind.)
I can't wait to see who finds Tom first. Will it be his lovely girlfriend Janine, or the sexy MILF Karolina? I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 30 2015 6:09 PM Title: Tess
Loved it. Keep it coming!
[Report This]Date: July 30 2015 5:44 PM Title: Tess
If only Tess had just lowered herself to thinking like him. But, now, it's Janine who's most likely to find him, first. And, it remains to be seen whether she'll be flattered...or Tom will be flattened.
[Report This]Date: July 30 2015 12:59 PM Title: The Adventures of Tom
So, if he starves to death as a result of waiting to see Janine au naturel, at least he'll die happy?
That must be why the Heaven of Giantess World is so _over-crowded_ with happy shrunken men playing harps.
Author's Response:
Playing harps amidst the crushed, mangled, digested, dismembered, eviscerated. Starving might not be that bad :S
Date: July 29 2015 2:50 PM Title: The Adventures of Tom
Awesome so far cant waite for him to be discovered. Also when will the contract be updated?
Author's Response:
Hey Brett533, thanks for the feedback on this story. I'm hoping to upate the Contract within the next few days! (The one I'm spinning my gears on right now is the companion story for the Contract-The Book :S)
[Report This]Date: July 29 2015 11:56 AM Title: The Adventures of Tom
Being in your girlfriend's room when you are just a few inches tall, yep, thats paradise.
What makes it more exciting? She has no idea!
Wow! Janinie over food and water! Now thats commitment! If it was me, I would go for food, becuase, well, you kind of need it. Well, time flies when you are having fun, and Tom definately is having fun.
The unaware scenes are great! First Tanita, and then the maid. I also get nervous at these encounters.
This is getting exciting!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you're still on board Tom, it's starting to get good now :)
[Report This]Date: July 27 2015 7:09 PM Title: The Party
Loving it! Can't wait to see what happens to Tom later on!
Author's Response:
Thanks GiantessLover122, hope you continue to enjoy as this tale unfolds!
[Report This]Date: July 27 2015 6:58 PM Title: The Party
Heck yeah! Now this is what I'm talking about!
Tom in a party with 12 hot girls and a hot mom. Not to mention his sister adding a bit more fun to the story as she tries to hide his presence.
Karolina? Hmm. I kinda like it. You said it was gonna be close to the ones I've mentioned and the closest was Carla. Well......I guess they are close.
I already like Karolina's behaviour. She is powerful and has authority and has command over the entire party. Not to mention that she is beautiful in Tom's opinion which makes her that much attractive to him.
Lucky Tom. Able to hear girls talk about how hot you are. That's when you know you are doing something right.
When Tess told Tom of her gift to Janine, my heart was pounding! I mean, that was freaking sexy! A miniature version of Tom, with a bow around his waist and dangled by a key chain! That sounds like some kinky ideas right there.
Tess tucked Tom into her purse and the she was "careful in how she closed it". So if Tess closed it, how did Tom get out? Could it be open from the inside, or was there still an opening for Tom to crawl out of? Might need some clarification on that.
I wonder why Tom got out of the purse? To explore the giant girls, or to see his favorite band play? Or both? It's interesting, becuase if he wants to see the concert, then he better climb something to get a good view. I wonder who is the tallest person in this house......? That person may be Tom's best choice.
I'm so happy that the party has started! Karoline is better than I expected and Tess is doing a great job (attempt) at trying to control Tom. Also, now Tom is out on the run! Things will be really really interesting now, especially without the protection of Tess.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 27 2015 5:23 PM Title: The Party
To paraphrase that old sing-song warning: "He'll be SAAAAAAW-RHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!"
*Phonetically misspelled similar to the semi-ebonic version of "sweet."
Author's Response:
The idiom 'be careful what you wish for' seems to spring to mind
[Report This]Date: July 25 2015 7:20 AM Title: Back at the School
Very good!
Continues...
Author's Response:
Thank your for the kind words and for taking the time to share them with me. :)
[Report This]Date: July 24 2015 5:53 PM Title: Back at the School
P.S.---I hope Samira turns out to practice belly dancing in her spare time.
Author's Response:
Mmm, might be interesting, Dance of the Seven Veils and all.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2015 5:51 PM Title: Back at the School
Actually, if you believe those Japanese anime series, it's not gnomes who steal teenage girls' underpants. It's dirty little old men!
Well, that's what I've heard. I don't watch anime, myself. ;-D
Author's Response:
https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=underpants+gnomes+song
Not much into anime myself, my reference was South Park - don't know if the address above will link or not.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2015 9:21 PM Title: Back at the School
Hmm. This story has a greater number of reviewers compared to your other stories. Maybe it's becuase it's a fresh topic. I don't know, but I like it. Interesting to see what others think of it.
Back to chapter 5.
I'm amazed at how Tom kept his composure after that compact ride in her sister's shirt. He was all giddy. I thought he would be grumpy.
A phone keeps you busy for some time but not forever. Tom got so bored, he went for Sam's underwear. Haha. Perhaps he has been thinking of girls too much; especially Janine.
Speaking of girls, I can't wait for that all girls party coming up! And a dozen girls!??! Wow! That should be fun. There's a lot of room for error if Tess makes a mistake there.
When Tess said "crazy stupid idea", I thought of the movie "Crazy Stupid Love" and in this story, that love is quite crazy and could be seen as stupid. I, however, think it's a brilliant idea to smuggle him in there.
What I wonder is if Tom is gonna jump off Tess right once they enter Janine's house, or if Tess will let Tom go in a safe place? Either way seems like a good idea, becuase there will be plenty of time to have fun, as well as find Janine.
If Tom wants to spend time alone with Janine, he has to wait for everyone to leave the party including Tess.
The question now is, will Tess allow Tom to stay in Janine's house? I hope so, becuase I think this is his only opportunity to get into her house.
Great transition from the plane to Tess's place and now to the party all in one chapter. Now the real fun begins!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom, get ready because it's about to get interesting, :)
Date: July 23 2015 7:37 PM Title: Back at the School
i really like the story so far, please keep it coming, id like to see more of the interaction with tess and tom, i think it would be cool for tom to mistakingly take tess's underwear into his box and get caught by tess, responce could be you like underwear so much lets see how you like a day inside them etc.
Author's Response:
Thanks BigJames, the story is starting to take on a life of its own, not sure how i want to play the dynamic between Tess and Tom yet.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2015 12:30 PM Title: Holiday's End
Don't do it, Tess. Otherwise, you might as well start taking banjo lessons!
"Doot-doo-DOOT-Doo-doot-doo-DOOT-doo-Doot."
Author's Response:
Only time will tell, da-da-dum-da-dum. Sibling realtionships can be perplexing under the best of circumstances, we'll see where this goes, not really sure yet.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2015 8:22 PM Title: Holiday's End
(I'm playing into character.) Tom's thoughts:
I didn't plan on some sister fun, but I guess I can let it slide. After all, she did save my life.
If this wasn't my sister, I would've loved to be staying in her panties. I really hope my sister doesn't do what I think she is gonna do. Any girl but her.
Back to TomSpeedy:
Why is Tom's mother's name Raphaella? It reminds of the ninja turtle. Lol.
I like the name Tess, and Janine. I hope you have a good name for Janine's mother. I hope her name is one of the following: Carla, Lisa, Mary, Rachel, Rebecca, (Or Selene.) I've always liked the name Seleine from your other stories. Also, Selena is a nice name too. Surprise me. :)
Man, I remember that chest bursting creature from Aliens. That was crazy! I never saw it coming. So, Was Tom really about to burst like that? That must be a lot of pressure in her bra. Other people might notice a bulge if it's that ready to burst.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Tom is just antagonizing his sister to be a bratty brother. Her body is responding automatically to the stimulus, the complication is how the stimulus is occuring. you'll meet Janine's mother soon enough, the name is close to one you've listed coincidentally. No Tom wasn't going to burst out, being he's too tiny and wouldn't be able to tear through the fabric, however Tess is on heightened alert fearing they will be detected. Again, i know I've been meandering around the story line you requested, but I hope I am still on track and you're enjoying it. cheers.