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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 10:21 PM Title: Janine

Yes! Swallowed! Now my only question is what does Janine do now? Panic and rush past her mother to the bathroom and vomit him up? Shrug her shoulders and get into daddys car? Starts feeling sick and vomits him up once they reach their destination? Guess he wasn't faking!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 8:31 PM Title: Janine

Oh, shitsky! Now, he really _will be_ kaput! :-(

But, at least I got to be first reviewer, for once. :-)

Author's Response:

I updated twice yesterday and I think I might have deked TomSpeedy out letting you get the first shot at the review, :0

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 10:45 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday

This chapter was weird, like the writing style changed a bit and I thought someone else wrote it. Either way, I liked it.

I like how you took it slow this chapter and made Tom just think for a second. Usually I'm all in favor of nonstop action, but his thoughts about his position and escape bring up many more possibilities for the future which I always enjoy.

When he describes being trapped in Jane's panty drawer, I thought it was cool that he remembered that it was her that made him began this journey.

I also liked his analysis of each giantess. Janine and Sam want to cruelly play with him, Lina, gently play, but Tess just wanted to keep him safe. I admire that way of Tom thinking so much that it feels almost unlike me. I like how he said that he couldn't trust Lina because she had her own agenda. It made me wonder if Lina is going to keep Tom with her at all costs and might even be 'controlling' like her daughter so she can keep Tom. Everyone getting naughty and dark. I like it.

I think Janine is jealous of Tess's beauty. Think about it. Tom is fancied by girls and women, and Tess has had her own marvelous looks. It must be the genes and Janine wants Tom not just for herself, but probably to make Tess feel bad too.

Always lacy panties, haha.

I don't think calling out for Francis would help. Janine would be like "this kid fucked your wife, so I'm punishing him". Then Francis might even agree or suggest some cruel torture methods. Tom should only call out for Lina or Tess.

Sure we know Janine is a genius. Lina is smart, as well as Tess. Tess is not an idiot and so is Tom. That's right, they are all freaking smart and outplaying each other. My point is that Tom is probably faking all this to make Janine concerned for him. He is probably a gymnast or contortionist of some sort. Nonetheless, I think this is a all an act created from Tom's brilliancy. This is the plan to escape, now it's time to execute it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 9:43 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday

Oh well, if anything is broken, just duct tape it and and shove him down her panties so she can get on with her plan ;)

 

I like how such a simple act of pressing her hand down him could have such a devastating effect when all she was trying to do was imobilize him. Wonder if that will make her feel bad or awaken even something darker in her. My money is on the later.

 

Also wonder if you plan on anything sinister between Sam and Tom, little forshadowing there maybe? Would be an interesting twist, everyone thinking Janine is the threat but turns out Sam is the wolf in sheeps clothing.

 

Great work!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 8:20 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday

Uh-oh! Tom ist kaput? :-(


*Insert "Taps" recording, here.*

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2015 7:15 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday

So did she kill him? I don't think so or this story would end here, but if she hurt him badly maybe she'll treat him a little better from now on? Ah who am I kidding, I doubt Janine is gonna have any character development, she's too spoiled and seems to care so little about anyone else. More likely, she'll just toss him into a trash can and get on with her day. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, it looks like this story just got a little more interesting! I was getting tired of the "pass the dildo boy to the next girl" scenario you had going on, so I'm glad for a bit of a mixup!

Reviewer: takuoni Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2015 10:36 AM Title: Backdoor Man

Nice !

But I hope Tom will find a new way to contact his sister, she must be really worried

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 7:32 PM Title: Backdoor Man

Janine strikes me as the kind of hussy brazen enough to walk naked in front of everybody BUT her parents! ;-)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 4:55 PM Title: Backdoor Man

Damn! Shes ruthless! Toms gonna be a dead man at this rate!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 3:55 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Carycomic, I hope the maid doesn't get Tom. I like the dynamic duo of Janine and Lina as the main giantesses of Tom.

Besides, if the maid was there, Janine wouldn't be walking naked around the house.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 1:39 PM Title: Backdoor Man

Poor Tom! I wonder if he's beginning to feel Ms. Addison was gentler by comparison, yet? Ah, well. Maybe he'll think Janine was being gentle if he gets abducted by someone even nastier than her! *



*I only say that because I have a bad feeling that, while Janine is getting something to eat, Tom is going to be "maid" off with, yet again.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 12:51 PM Title: Backdoor Man

Wow, Tom went in all 3 holes this chapter! I think that's a first to happen all at once.

She "started over" by reinserting him into her vagina, and then took it to the next step by putting him inside her ass.

Her ass definately was well described as if struggled to open itself for Tom. I like how you described it like an animal ready to devour Tom. It had its own responses and did not want to open up for the large dildo.

For some reason, I don't think Janine enjoyed it as much as I would've expected. I think it was too tight for her, or perhaps painful. Her only pleasure seems to be just the thought of Tom in her ass. Maybe, next time she should just insert Tom inside her without the dildo so she won't feel much pain.

Good description with the "legs snapping". You know it's a big one when that happens.

Haha, she just straight up peed on him. I have to remember that this a giantess piss, so it must be like the force of a waterfall.

Another great chapter. I think this is a good sequence of erotic torture to have Tom endure. Janine says it's enough this time. Tom better hope she is right.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2015 8:06 PM Title: Playtime

"Guess we'll just have to start over", haha, love her! Definitely my favorite current Giantess. When I heard the knock at her door I was like nooooooooo, go away Lina! I had no idea they were still there, Janine just couldn't wait for them to leave, such a naughty girl *weg*

Reviewer: cxwaves Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2015 9:19 PM Title: Playtime

Damn! This is getting better and better! :)))))

Thank you so much for the fast updates! Janine is really going for being the most cruel and sexy character in any gts story ever here.

Also as TomSpeedy said I really hope Tom is going to make her scream (and of coure I hope even more that she is going to make Tom scream ;)))))

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2015 7:44 PM Title: Playtime

WOW! And I thought Tiffany Billingsley-Croft was the most sadistic nympho-giantess I had ever read about, here.*


*Read FORMULA VERSION DOT ONE by B.C. Weir. A classic (if sadly incomplete) piece of gts-lore.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2015 6:24 PM Title: Playtime

Sexy chapter!

Once again, another great example of cruel and sexy.

We got to see some of these tools in action. The dildo, floss, and we got hints of the straw.

Turns out that the Gatorade was just for Janine's thirst after all. I thought she was going to use it for some torture, but not this time.

I like the use of furniture. Like the bed and the chair along with all these tools that Janine used. It's these little things that make these scenes memorable.

Close call with Lina. Does she know? If she does, she hasn't revealed her reaction.

So it's hide and seek with Lina. I remember when Lina had to hide Tom from Janine. Now it's the other way around. I wonder if Lina starts snooping around and traps Janine soon.

Start all over?!! Sweet! Another sex chapter! Hopefully Janine uses more tools too.

Now that her parents are gone, she might go the extreme now, mowing loudly and such. Let's see if Tom can make her scream.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: cxwaves Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2015 7:02 AM Title: Getting Reacquainted - Friday Night

HOLY SHIT!! I can't believe this is happening. I'm at least as horny as Janine right now. DAMN. If you add breath play as TomSpeedy implied i'll fucking explode lmao. I'm way too much into mean torture I guess ;)))

 

But that's why we love Janine, right?

 

Also its exactly what Tom deserves after all those chapters ~



Author's Response:

That just happened! Things just got real for silver tongued Tom, :O

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 9:55 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted - Friday Night

I love Janine! This is going to be a fun Friday night... for one of them.



Author's Response:

Yep, and she's had time to prepare...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 8:26 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted - Friday Night

"....keeping his eyes locked on the it was a long shot...?"

Super-LOL!

Okay, being serious now; that was a relatively fast update. And one that is much appreciated. I appreciate even more that, horny though she is and vindictive she might be, she's still being somewhat careful with him. Not wanting to fatally injure her living "birthday gift." Just scare him enough to accept that he's never going to see Sam or Tessa, again.

But, then, the question becomes: is that incontrovertible truth...or glorified self-delusion?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the edit, found it fixed it. We shall see what kind of restraint she is capable of in the chapters upcoming...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 6:08 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted - Friday Night

Highlight of this chapter: the new toys.

We know that when Tom wakes up, he is going to be tied to one of these things. We just don't know which one.

So first, there is a rubber dildo. She is probably going to put him on the tip by tying him to it and fucking him with it.

Second, the wax candle. This is just pure torture. Not sure how sexy this can be. Especially when that candle is lit, the flame is as big as his head.

Next, the dental floss. Basically to tie Tom up to stuff, or to Janine. Bondage for shrunken men.

Then there is the scotch tape. Similar to the floss, this might serve to tie Tom up and will hurt a lot when that tape is removed. Unlike the floss, the tape can trap Tom against a flat surface like a wall, or a floor, or Lina's favorite chair in the house. :)

The Popsicle sticks seem kinda self explanatory. She will use him like a Popsicle and tie him to an end of the stick and stick him inside her somewhere.

The bendy straw I think is the most interesting of the items. It can be some part of breath play. Does Tom's penis fit inside the straw? Does the straw fit in Tom's mouth. Is Janine going to make Tom suck stuff with the straw, make him breathe thru it? I'm really curious about this item.

In addition, we have the cling wrap. I'm guessing Janine will wrap up Tom just like with the floss and tape.

Next, the superglue sounds scary. I mean, that sounds like the ultimate sticky substance to torture Tom with. Where she will glue him? To what? and for how long?

Then there is the safety pin. Forget that it's a pin, it's a freaking needle. It might even serve Tom as a sword. This is one item not to mess with.

The lighter is to scare Tom. I doubt she will burn him. Also, it's for the candle as well. Won't be fun for Tom.

Finally, the blue Gatorade. Is this supposed to be a pool? Or a hot tube with the candle below it? It's Janine so it probably won't be that nice. More like a fish tank to keep her pet. Still not exactly sure what's it's purpose, but I guess we will soon.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sooo many things she can do. I've got to be careful to keep it fresh for this story, but then it's Janine and she makes it pretty easy to be inventive for her

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