Never mind my previous post. I envisioned digestion to be a much faster process.

Whaaaat? He was in her esophagus and then her stomach for the entire time when she went to the bathroom?

She had time to respond to Lina, show her a hand full of spit, and go "hastily" to the bathroom all while Tom is inside her?

Seems a bit superficial. Either Tom immediately went into her stomach and something acidic may have affected him. It wouldn't dissolve him right away, but he should have at least a somewhat major injury. Or, he puts up a struggle in her esophagus that she chokes up and couldn't even speak to her mother. Seemed like he went straight down immediately. And in that case, it's like a good 15 seconds in her stomach which is a lot.

Sure, I guess I'm a bit after these minor details, but I envisioned a totally different scenario. I thought that Janine would've been forced to vomit him up right there by the front door and have no time to go to that bathroom to cough him up. By looking at the last chapter, it seemed like Janine would either reveal Tom in her mouth, or keep him in her stomach for good. I found this vomiting him up later in the bathroom sequence some bs.

Also, remember when Tom pleasured Lina to a point where she was moaning in front of Janine? Well, couldn't Tom do that again right before they hugged? I feel like he could've made Janine expose her captive by some stimulation on his part.

Well, it was still an entertaining chapter no doubt. Janine showing no signs of a weakness and Tom is running out of options.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

As my parents (the Foxwoods gambling addicts) might say: "Long shots almost never pay off. And this was definitely WAY outside the 'almost' category."

I really really like where this is going. Tom is a freaking badass.

This twitch that we all witness is a sign that he was faking the whole damn time. I bet after all that time with giantesses has given him time to learn some new skills.

Like two chapters ago, Tom was already making a plan to escape. We never knew how, but this time, he is using Janine to get out. It looks like he is going to make Janine choke right there on the stairs and only her mother will see this becuase Francis is in the car.

Janine will probably say that she is choking on something and won't give Lina a hint that it's Tom. Or Janine immediately coughs up Tom, and Lina sees a slobbered Tom get spit out. Lina takes Tom, Janine goes with Francis and Janine's whole plan backfires with Francine taking Janine out of the house instead of Lina. Freaking perfect idea Tom!

I doubt Janine will let Tom go all the way down to her stomach. She wants Tom more than anyone else. She sacrificed so much to get him. Now is she going to let him die, heck no. She would rather embarras herself by vomiting in front of her mother than let Tom die inside her.

I can picture it. Tom twitches, she swallows, Janine's eyes light up like deer in headlights. Lina is thinking "wtf up with her now." Then Tom pops out of Janine's mouth. Lina is shocked. Then awkward silence. Janine decides if she should put Tom back in her panties. Lina then demands for Tom and threatens for almost killing him.

Then we have 3 endings, I believe. Then either Janine runs away to the car with Tom, and Lina chases her. Or Lina gets the best of Janine and convinces Janine to hand Tom over. Or, some deal happens where they schedule times to have their own fun with Tom.

It's a cliffhanger, but we know something big is going to happen next chapter. Let's see what happens. I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Yes! Swallowed! Now my only question is what does Janine do now? Panic and rush past her mother to the bathroom and vomit him up? Shrug her shoulders and get into daddys car? Starts feeling sick and vomits him up once they reach their destination? Guess he wasn't faking!

This chapter was weird, like the writing style changed a bit and I thought someone else wrote it. Either way, I liked it.

I like how you took it slow this chapter and made Tom just think for a second. Usually I'm all in favor of nonstop action, but his thoughts about his position and escape bring up many more possibilities for the future which I always enjoy.

When he describes being trapped in Jane's panty drawer, I thought it was cool that he remembered that it was her that made him began this journey.

I also liked his analysis of each giantess. Janine and Sam want to cruelly play with him, Lina, gently play, but Tess just wanted to keep him safe. I admire that way of Tom thinking so much that it feels almost unlike me. I like how he said that he couldn't trust Lina because she had her own agenda. It made me wonder if Lina is going to keep Tom with her at all costs and might even be 'controlling' like her daughter so she can keep Tom. Everyone getting naughty and dark. I like it.

I think Janine is jealous of Tess's beauty. Think about it. Tom is fancied by girls and women, and Tess has had her own marvelous looks. It must be the genes and Janine wants Tom not just for herself, but probably to make Tess feel bad too.

Always lacy panties, haha.

I don't think calling out for Francis would help. Janine would be like "this kid fucked your wife, so I'm punishing him". Then Francis might even agree or suggest some cruel torture methods. Tom should only call out for Lina or Tess.

Sure we know Janine is a genius. Lina is smart, as well as Tess. Tess is not an idiot and so is Tom. That's right, they are all freaking smart and outplaying each other. My point is that Tom is probably faking all this to make Janine concerned for him. He is probably a gymnast or contortionist of some sort. Nonetheless, I think this is a all an act created from Tom's brilliancy. This is the plan to escape, now it's time to execute it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Uh-oh! Tom ist kaput? :-(


*Insert "Taps" recording, here.*

Nice !

But I hope Tom will find a new way to contact his sister, she must be really worried

Damn! Shes ruthless! Toms gonna be a dead man at this rate!

Poor Tom! I wonder if he's beginning to feel Ms. Addison was gentler by comparison, yet? Ah, well. Maybe he'll think Janine was being gentle if he gets abducted by someone even nastier than her! *



*I only say that because I have a bad feeling that, while Janine is getting something to eat, Tom is going to be "maid" off with, yet again.