[Report This]Date: September 09 2015 10:41 PM Title: Tess
Let's just make something clear to everyone. Tom wants to spend time with a woman while he is tiny. That's why he left Tess, initially it was because of Janine, but that didn't work out the way he wanted. However, he rolls the dice again with Lina and this time gets his wish and his dream come true. This love that he is feeling now is why he left Tess and I don't see any reason for him to want to return to Tess as long as he is with Lina.
This is who Tom prefers: Lina>Tess>Sam>Janine.
The reason why I put Sam after Tess was because Sam has that same hunger in her eyes that Janine has. I'm not sure how horny she could be compared to Janine, but I'm sure Janine is breaking records for her cruelty so she is last in Tom's choice.
Lina wants someone to give her pleasure and someone to brighten her day. Tom provides the answer to both of her problems and Tom happily accepts his current position. We can see that in the last chapter when he opened his arms to Lina as she picked him up before bed.
Back to this chapter: Wow. You did a great job involving every main character into one chapter and no one suspected Lina to have Tom. You would think that after Tess saw Janine orgasm with Tom in the school hallway, that maybe when Lina paused on the stairs it was because of Tom. Then again, I love this little secret that Lina is holding from everyone. I don't want anyone else to know, yet.
I also am really appreciating how you are handling the Tess situation. I thought she would jeapordize the whole thing, but actually, Tess makes it more interesting and as you said, more realistic. They don't even believe that Lina could keep Tom hidden as well so they trust her, making her not a suspect. Perfect. After this visit, Tess and Sam are probably thinking that it probably wasn't actually Janine holding Tom hostage but rather he got lost or even worse. I'm sure Tess will return again, but now she has a lot to think about for the time being.
Same thing with Janine, she is pondering the same question. Where the hell is Tom? Is he in that closet that she locked up, did he die, did he leave the house, did her mom find him, is he living off scraps in the kitchen? So many possibilities. After all, Tom managed to escape from Janine. There's no doubt that Janine is probably thinking that Tom has found another way to live.
You want to know what the best part is? Karolina knows it all. Yep, she knows why she really paused on the stairs, she knows why Tess was there, and most of all, she knows why Janine is upset, and she is proud of it. I love her.
We need some perspective of Tom soon. Maybe some one on one action with Lina. This is great. The way she kept him in her panties during that whole episode and she managed to keep her composure just enough to convince the girls that there was nothing suspicious going on. I want a behind the scenes in that and I also wonder if Tom was even awake during that whole time? Or was he just moving in his sleep? Either way sounds hot. It's like a stealth mission, that's also very erotic.
Things are spicing up, I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
As long as I'm still on track for your original request, I'm glad you are enjoying.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2015 8:25 PM Title: Tess
Apparenty giantesslover missed the fact that Tom is enjoying his time with Lina and doing this willingly. Lina is the complete opposite of Janine and although his time with Lina has been titilating, I can't wait for Janine to get him back, because unlike carycomic, I find theres no such thing as too much of a devilish girl *weg*
Author's Response:
And Janine is oh so devilish, :)
Date: September 09 2015 5:54 PM Title: Tess
WTF? I thought that Lina was on Tom's side. This just keeps getting worse and worse. (For Tom. Not your story.)
Author's Response:
Tom is completely willing participant, Lina's is much more gentle than Janine
[Report This]Date: September 09 2015 5:18 PM Title: Tess
I kind of had a hunch that Tom would want to spend all the next day "in bed." And, he probably required little (if any) encouragement from Lina!
Either that; or, she's decided to "adopt" him...against his will.
Author's Response:
Again I'll reference your story about wishing :) from frying pan to slow cooker!
[Report This]Date: September 07 2015 4:03 PM Title: Pushing the Envelope
Perfect!
Eager to continue.
Karolina could turn in bed during night. Fart would be cool. Forget Tom in panties.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2015 7:12 PM Title: Sunday Morning
anal vore
Author's Response:
Unlikely with Lina but should Janine get her hands back on him it's a virtual guarantee! She is none too happy with tiny Tom
[Report This]Date: September 04 2015 1:01 PM Title: Pushing the Envelope
Make up your own "eating" puns, here.
Date: September 04 2015 5:05 AM Title: Tom's Story
This is nice, I always like the gentle giantess. If you want Tom to sleep with his giantess then I recomend the story Close on this sight the last 2 chapters. It is just more intement in my opinion. Let me know if he is going to do this sort of thing with his sister because it is kind of implied in it. This is just recomended have fun writing your story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review. The original request for this story came from TomSpeedy who asked for the daughter to be like Janine and the mother to be gentle. I think I would prefer gentle well most of the time :)
[Report This]Date: September 04 2015 1:07 AM Title: Pushing the Envelope
Wow! Just wow! This is by far the best chapter in the story in my opinion! That was hot! I did not expect them to be so intimate right away, but damn. That was incredible.
I think Karoline has now become the sexiest giantess in this story. I know it's only 1 chapter, but wow, look what happened in just this chapter: Tom licked, pleasured, then they had sex, then a bath, then he got food, then he got to sleep with her, literally, in her panties! Fantastic!
Now imagine 5 or more chapters of this....I can't! It's like a dream come true. I hope it never ends. I have a feeling that everyone will prefer Karolina soon, becuase we just saw a glimpse of her. Janine is that giantess you like to read about, but don't want to experience in real life. Karolina on the other hand seems gentle enough, and in real life, you want to spend time with this giantess.
Soda pop to red wine. Haha.
I just realized something. Janine never had feelings for Tom. She just saw him as a toy. She never said that he was cute, handsome, or gave him a compliment, really. When Tom pleasures Karolina, she is like "ah that's it", but with Janine, she is like "don't stop or I will crush you!"
Janine is creaking sexy, but I think Tom needs a breather. Tom wanted to fulfil his dream, shrink himself and spend time with a tiny. It looks like he is finally able to fulfill it with Karolina. And the best part is that Karolina is on the same page as him.
Well, I don't think Janine can steal Tom during the night, haha. Karolina has got him tucked away in what I believe is the best spot to put him in. It gives both of them pleasure and hides him from Janine. Could there be a better solution? Nope. And that's why I love this relationship. I look forward to more. 22 chapters and it has come! Totally worth it!
I really, really, really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
You are absolutely right there is a huge difference between mother and daughter (as you requested) and how they interact with Tom.Janine will be like the terminator she won't just quit and will Lina always have him close enough to keep him safe?
Date: September 04 2015 12:47 AM Title: Tom's Story
Am I the only reviewer rooting for Karolina to keep Tom? Everyone seems to want Janine, Sam or Tess. No love for Karolina.
I think everyone loves those characters a lot but they haven't seen much of Karolina to like her compared to the girls. I think after these next few chapters, hopefully Karolina does things to Tom that will make everyone root for her.
Duggernaut, your writing is too good that every character you write about gets some love from everyone.
Now I'm putting my faith in Karolina to be the star character, so I can't wait to see what she has in store.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise Tom there are several incredibly talented writers on this site who's stories help me elevate my own.
Date: September 03 2015 11:51 PM Title: Back at the School
seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeex
[Report This]Date: September 03 2015 11:35 PM Title: Home for the Holidays
human dildo, vore, and anall 4 days :D
Date: September 03 2015 11:35 PM Title: Home for the Holidays
human dildo, vore, and anall 4 days :D
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 11:11 AM Title: Karolina
You forgot the rest of that quote (to Alman) from "Amok Time."
"It is not logical! But, it is still often...true."
[Report This]Date: September 01 2015 3:56 AM Title: Karolina
Well it's sure nice to see Tom get a brief reprive from his earlier days of 'torment'
Though I reckon he seems very much like a self-destructive protagonist, exposing himself like that but more importantly, refusing or denying a phone-call to his sister to come rescue him Xd
Eventually he or Lina is gonna go one action to far leading to circumstances where that Phone-call home may no longer be an option for him xD
Author's Response:
Hindsight is 20/20 and sometimes the wanting is better than the having...sometimes
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 8:41 PM Title: Karolina
i'm afraid Maximus and I will have to agree to permanently disagree. All of us readers, here, have an inner masochist we embrace to varying degrees. Otherwise, we wouldn't read these stories in the first place! But, there is _undeniably_ such a thing as too much of a good thing. And, that includes masochism!
Hence, to paraphrase Sean Connery at the end of HUNT FOR RED OCTOBER: "Sometimes, a little gentle giantess-interaction, every now and then, is a healthy thing."
And, to quote his favorite aphorism in THE UNTOUCHABLES: "Here endeth the lesson."
Author's Response:
"He pulls out a knife you pull put a gun. He put one of yours in the hospital you put one of his in the morgue. It's the Chicago way of doing business."
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 8:37 PM Title: Karolina
Yessssssssss!!!!!!
Finally!!!!
I love it! Nice and slow and the best part was the mention of her husband! We all know what's coming soon.
I rarely say this, but I don't want any super sexy stuff in the next chapter with Karoline (panties) (nipple play) (mouth play). I prefer more talk with Karolina. Let's develop this relationship a bit more. We could have cleavage, a kiss, and perhaps some sexy talk, and then in the later chapters she can escalate it a bit.
I agree that Tom should be passed back to Janine, but not yet! Maybe after 8 chapters of Karolina! Man, her words are just seductive even though the dialogue is not sexual at all.
So you went with the Karolina doing her own thing and Tom getting her attention. I like it, especial Lina's response.
Oh yeah, good move by nicknaming her to Lina. It rolls off my tongue better. Lina is easier to type than Karolina anyway. (I bet that's why u changed it.) Ha!
Peeping Tom! Beautiful! I didn't even expect that! Good one.
We start off sexy and gentle and finish off sexy and sort of gentle. (Of course we expect Karolina to get naughty soon, as she realizes what is in her possession).
I feel happy...............yep. I don't know why. The sexy stuff hasnt arrived but I just feel good about this chapter. That's the power of Karolina.
I really can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Told you :P I'm not done yet
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 7:43 PM Title: Karolina
Knew that was going to happen, was hoping it wouldn't and that Janine would get him back first but figured you'd have interaction between Lina and him. Not my cup of tea, I hate gentle but still very well written.
I'll just have to hope Janine is clever enough to get him back! Curious to see where you go with this, still have something cooking with Sam too I think.
Author's Response:
Janine is very clever and now motivated. We'll see if Sam gets a shot to play with tiny Tom.
Date: August 31 2015 6:35 PM Title: Karolina
Yay for Tom!
Author's Response:
For now...the eye of the storm
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 5:11 PM Title: Karolina
That was very well written and, in my opinion, exactly what Tom needed. Lina seems very understanding and wasn't mad he saw her change but seemed to take his compliments in stride. I really hope that we see more of her in future chapters. Even though I think she's neglected by her husband I don't think she'll abuse Tom sexually for her own gain, at least not with him all bruised up. How he fell asleep was very sweet and actually didn't seem sexual at all even though he is currently sleeping on her giant tits. The 'worst' thing I see her doing is pleasuring herself while he's asleep. At any rate I'm really interested to see what Lina has in store for Tom.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback on the writing Tom is the author of his own circumstances so we'll see how things develop between Lina and Tom as he embraces his new situation.