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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 12:39 PM Title: Search

Now that's quite a cliffhanger. I never seen Lina this way before. It makes me realize where Janine got her evil ways now. At first I thought it was Francis, but no, Lina probably inspired her, and it makes me wonder how much of Lina we do not know.

Poor Cassidy Lane. Why does it sound like she is going to get murdered? Probably the cold look of Lina in the phone call and by her intent of gaining info of the nurse. Very similar to Janine getting info on Miss Addidion. Like mother, like daughter.

In addition, Cassidy Lane has been given the impression of being nice, probably nicer than Lina now becuase of Lina's devious antics this chapter. By making Lina more evil, Cassidy Lane just seems nicer every second that goes by.

Looks like Jessica is out of the picture for the rest of the story. I have this feeling that we won't see a reappearance of her. Also, since Francis has more injuries, he probably is out of the story as well.

I think the most interesting thing that happened was when Janine started admitting her faults, Tess thinks Janine is bluffing her remorse, and Lina goes to comfort Janine and wants Tess to stop accusing Janine. Here, we see Lina going closer to Janine's side, and I think that is Janine's plan since she herself is in no condition to get Tom. This scene right here is important becuase it shows Janine admitting her mistakes(could be acting tho) and Lina trying to take over everything.

Tess came here for her brother, that's it. Not for Janine. Now Lina is taking that responsibility instead. Tess trusts Lina, but why was Lina so assertive in declaring that she herself wanted to find Tom? Does Lina want Tom for herself or for Tess? I think Lina is hiding something.

Another funny moment was when Lina elected herself to find Tom instead of Tess. It's funny becuase we know how slow and hesitant Tess is when finding things. She is clever, but not agressive. However, the Lindholm women are clever, and agressive at getting what they want.

Very interesting chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 12:36 PM Title: Search

Whoa! The shrunken manhunt is on!! If this were an Aaron Spelling TV show, it would probably be called "Tom's Angels."

Thanks for the exciting interlude. :-)

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2016 7:02 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Tom Speedy: I don't know, he's unconscious at the moment. So she wouldn't gain anything by faking concern. Not until he regains consciousness.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2016 4:24 PM Title: Lost and Found

@Duggernaut:

Believe me. I hope she'll be nice...for niceness' sake! But, I've had certain other hypotheses turned on their heads before (you fiendish plot twister, you).

Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2016 3:17 PM Title: Lost and Found

Another great chapter, can't wait to see what Cassidy has in store for Tom. I'm wondering is she'll be a gentle captor. Will keep, seduce, and use Tom, but in a gentle way.



Author's Response:

Thanks. We'll will learn more about cassidy's plans soon.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 8:20 PM Title: Tom's Story

@aaron,

That long shot sounds awesome.

@HectorVanDyne,

Good point. However, I think she is just trying to be nice to gain his trust so she can get what she wants. I think she has her own agenda to deal with Tom. It makes me suspicious.

Author's Response:

Can't someone just be nice for the sake of being nice? :)

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 9:44 AM Title: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: Because she's being gentle and botheredto check if he was alive and well. She's also not being mean in anyway. 



Author's Response:

There was some quote somewhere about still waters.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 7:14 AM Title: Lost and Found

I really hope Nurse Cassidy Lane turns out to be another Lina. Or when Tom comes to he tells her to get a message to the patient's mother who in turn would tell his sister just so that these people who care about him most won't worry. Or maybe you've got some sexy plans involving Cassidy and Lina becoming partners in crime(by hiding Tom) and in the bedroom. A long shot that sounds sexy as hell, lol.

aaron

Author's Response:

We shall see the type of giantess Cass makes for better or worse. Unfortunately for Lina her hubby is going to be around for a bit but maybe Cassidy s apt might make for a nice place to spend some uninterrupted time with Tom.  We'll see how it plays out.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 12:36 AM Title: Lost and Found

She SEEMS nicer, but I know you like to play with expectations so I'm not holding my breath for a gentle giantess.



Author's Response:

Not me, I'm innocent I tell ya. There will more about Cass soon. 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2016 10:42 PM Title: Lost and Found

Ok, so that really made the most sense that a nurse found him. Id have to imagine Cassidy is nice, she is a nurse after all and also, its really the most logical way Tom gets returned to Tess, and yes, it would be Tess, Im sure Tom knows he is putting his sister through all sorts of emotional hell, can't imagine him requesting Cassidy return him to Lina. 

 

Or, maybe, if Cassidy is indeed nice, Tom falls for her and asks her to bring him to Tess just to put her mind art ease and tells her he wants to stay with Cassidy.

 

Of course, it won't matter in the end, Janine is sure to figure out what happened and get her little prize back ;)

 



Author's Response:

I thought it was the most plausible tact. Who knows yet what her motivations are. How will Tom respond?  How bad is he hurt?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2016 9:57 PM Title: Lost and Found

I don't know why everyone thinks she is going to be nice. Her curiousness like a school girl is just out of utter fascination for Tom and her smile at the end of the chapter gave me a feeling that she is going to be evil.

Sure, as a nurse she will most likely take care of him, but this time it's an exception and we can't tell how she will treat him.

I thought she would return him to Janine soon, but it looks like she is going to keep him for a while. I bet Tom is tired of answering all these questions.

My next thought is...how is Tom going to get back with the main characters? It has to be the result of convincing Cassidy to return him. Ohhhh. I think this is a way for Cassidy to return him to Lina. Tom will tell Cassidy to return him to Lina and not to Janine. He will tell her about Janine's cruel tactics and so on. It makes sense now.

This crash is like an escape valve for Tom to get away for Janine. Well, it was also Janine's fault for her reckless driving. Or...... Maybe Tom started the whole crash by drving Janine crazy. Haha! Perhaps Tom is the genius!

Cassidy gives us a nice impression, but her intense interest in Tom makes me think otherwise. Imagine she is like a psychopath who will dissect Tom and analyze him. (I hope not.)

I hope she is very nice like how everyone else is predicting. I also hope she gives him a show.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

There are so many ways to play this. Could she be obsessed or simply curious? Is she lulling him into a false sense of security? Or is she genuinely concerned for his well being. All will become clear not next chapter but the one after that...maybe

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2016 8:29 PM Title: Lost and Found

Cassidy sounds fabulous. Especially, as she sounds like she might be the gentlest giantess, since Tiny Dann's Lexie, to ever encounter a shrunken man!

But, of course, sounds (like appearances) can be deceiving.

Author's Response:

Don't you think our poor little protagonist deserves someone nice? The scars Janine makes transcend the flesh and perhaps he's wisened up some. But... he is Tom after all...

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2016 5:53 PM Title: Lost and Found

She seems nice enough. Though this won't help Tess and the others and they will end up fearing the worse.



Author's Response:

Cass has dedicated her life to helping others she couldn't possibly be mean. Could she?

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 12:39 AM Title: Tom's Story

@Duggernaut: I thought as much, especially since Addison decided to inform Tess after Janine too Tom again. I am curious how that conversation went. 

 

And yes, i am a fan of Tom and Lina together. They really seem to enjoy each others company. Though Addison was fun too in her own way, especially because of her attitude and vocabulary. 



Author's Response:

Lina was a nice match for Tom as their relationship developed. Miss Addison was bull dozed by Janine but Lina is another matter altogether 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 8:54 AM Title: 911

I think that no one knows where tom is
 

 

please more



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 7:49 AM Title: 911

If it turns out he _was_ found by a nurse, let us not forget who was the _very first_ to make that guess. back in the reviews of chapter 51? ;-)

Author's Response:

Duly noted.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 5:13 AM Title: Tom's Story

@HectorVanDyne,

I'm glad I'm not the only rooting for Lina to find Tom.

@Alethia1000,

You may be on to something. Perhaps a nurse or whomever put the catheter inside Janine has accidentally pushed Tom further inside Janine's vagina so deep that she can't even feel him inside her. The catheter may have even knocked Tom unconscious and if he doesn't move then Janine can't notice his presence as easily.

In addition, Janine's critical condition results in her feeling all sorts of things on her body such as pains and wires attached to her. Furthermore, when Janine called out Tom, maybe it was directed toward Lina to check her vagina. Sure, that may sound weird and risky, but I bet Janine just wants to know if Tom is alive and letting Lina know wouldn't be that bad.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 1:36 AM Title: Tom's Story

I have a question about miss Addison. Would she have threatened to kill Tom had it been Tessa that confronted her instead of Janine.  I mean since Tess would have probably not turned the the discussion hostile(unless she thinks Addison has harmed Tom) and wouldn't have blackmailed her (which seemed to be what made Addison make that threat). 

 

Because i got the impression things only escalated because of Janine.



Author's Response:

Janine deliberately bulldozed Miss Addison into a corner to establish dominance. Tess would have tried to either use a more diplomatic approach or clandestine avenue. The discussion would certainly have been different between Tess and the teacher, probably without blackmail or death threats.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 1:28 AM Title: Tom's Story

Looks like karma got Janine. Unfortunately, it seems Tom might have become collateral damage. 

 

Still, i'm hopping this leads to a reunion with Lina at least.



Author's Response:

TomSpeedy is in the same corner and right now Tom's fate is unknown, but never lose hope, anything could happen!

Reviewer: Alethia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2016 10:31 PM Title: 911

I think Tom must be in Janine's vagina. 



Author's Response:

Very Clever thought considering the narrative was directly everyone to think externally. I'm not saying that's where he is or isn't, but I do appreciate the the ingenuity of the thinking, ;)

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