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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 4:44 PM Title: Janine

Let me guess: she called Daddy-kins. Which means, he'll come; want to make love to the fully aroused Lina; and Janine will thereby have access to the one set of drawers she couldn't open. ;-)

Author's Response:

When the next installment comes, you're right on the money, daddy. Flush the prey out of the bush and wait. We've already established Janine's capable moriarty like intellect. Clever girl.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 8:11 PM Title: Tom

Lina is so sexy! I love how she toys with Tom and even mentions taking her back to Janine as punishment.

Lina might use this to her advantage and get what she wants since Tom fears going back to Janine. This was his warning, next time, Lina will punish him sexually, or she will hand him to Janine.

One thing that I wonder is how long until Tom doesn't like insertion. I mean, sure it is fun at first, but what if he's not careful or what if Lina is not careful. She might get carried away as well as Janine. I think Karolina should take more control over this situation and reduce Tom's control.

I think a sexier approach could be Lina "wanting" Tom in her panties, but Tom begins to reconsider his desires. Lina then says its for safety and Tom reluctantly obliges. While I like Janine's "You please me now! No mercy!" I also think Lina's "You must stay in my panties for your own good" is also awesome. Both women are in control but on different levels.

Some boob play with Lina could be nice too. It fits her caring personality. I love what you are doing with the mouth scenes, especially when she "cleans" him up. Overall, the focus on her panties is excellent.

I wonder how this run will turn out. Will it be like for a few minutes just so Lina can prove her point to Janine, or will she go for an hour jog or longer to make Tom suffer. (Well, I don't think Tom will suffer, but he might get a bit irritated, which is good because he should be punished for almost making Lina orgasm in from of her own daughter.) Or is Lina actually jogging to some place where she wants to spend time with Tom.

This ending was open ended, so many possibilities can happen soon.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lina is the ideal gentle giantess, but still quite capable of exerting control should she need. It was a 10 kilometer jog.

Reviewer: Shrinkstoryfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 6:29 PM Title: Tom

Thank you!!!! Tom is right where he should be while she jogs,,I'm a big fan of the panty entrapment :)  Can't wait for the next update to this story..



Author's Response:

Panty entrapment is awesome :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 4:43 PM Title: Tom

For some reason, this chapter has reminded me of the rock & roll classic, "Insatiable."

;-)

Author's Response:

When you mentioned insatiable my mind went Marilyn Chambers, my bad

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 6:28 AM Title: Misdirection

Alright! That explanation/coverup was spectacularly clever! :)
Lucky for Tom that Lina's such a quick thinker, otherwise his daft idea to hide and squirm in her panties  of all places would have been totally screwed xD

Of course I'm still waiting for Lina to become an impediment to Tom's ambitions, once he finally gets bored of playing around with her and starts missing home etc.
It wouldnt' surprise me if Lina becomes clingy enough to not wanna let Tom go home so easily ^_^; 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read review and praise on how to throw Janine off the trail. I wanted everyone to think oh oh jigs up and pull a quick one. That said the dynamic in the house is about to change.

Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 1:30 PM Title: Misdirection

Very good!

- Lina could have crushed Tom inadvertently stuck to a folder, it would be funny.

- Tom fainted breathless.

- Tom be fine, and Lina torture him in some way.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the props yeah wouldn't that have put a quick end to the story if Lina had crushed him with her vagina

Reviewer: Shrinkstoryfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 5:09 AM Title: Misdirection

Another Great chapter!!! I do have to wonder if Lina is going to actually go jogging with Tom in his current position? That would be pretty epic if I do say so myself but how ever this pans out I'm sure you won't disappoint.. You haven't so far :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review I will endeavor to not disappoint; )

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 9:57 PM Title: Lina

Correction, Max. He wanted to BE PRESENT FOR HER BIRTHDAY. NOT A BIRTHDAY PRESENT! Janine was simply and deliberately misinterpreting.

"That's my theory and I'm stickin' to it."

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 7:58 PM Title: Misdirection

Damn it, thought Lina was going to relent. This is where Janine should have been keeping Tom at all times, why the heck did she ever bother putting him in a glass. I almost want Janine to swallow Tom like she thought about for running away on her like this. 

 

Cary, if Tom didnt want to be a present, shouldnt have been in Janines room on her birthday molesting her breast. ;)



Author's Response:

Hang in there don't count Janine out yet she's not one to relent.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 4:29 PM Title: Misdirection

@Tom Speedy:

Oh, catfight scenes can be sexy, too! But, even they should be done in moderation...in order to avoid unintended yawns.

Too much of a good thing, and all that jazz.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 11:28 AM Title: Misdirection

@TomSpeedy: I thought sure this chapter was going to be ANYTHING but talk.

If you know what I mean. ;-)

Obviously, we were both wrong. Still it's kind of refreshing when both of those clichés can be deftly (I've ALWAYS wanted to use that word!) avoided.

Author's Response:

Very adroit use of deftly nicely done. Glad I was able to provide a fresh infusion to avoid the suspected mother and daughter union. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 11:23 AM Title: Misdirection

Maybe Tom wised up, at the last second. Realizing that even Janine isn't that egocentrically short-sighted that she would fail to put 2+2, together.

Author's Response:

Tom is am adolescent boy driven by impulse that circumvents logic and act on his baser instincts 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 10:44 AM Title: Misdirection

Wow! I just can't believe that happened. I thought this chapter was going to be the "talk" chapter where they discuss who gets Tom and stuff. (I'm glad that didn't happen.

Only a good writer like yourself could pull this off.
I was 100% sure that Janine figured it out, but then you used some sort of misdirection thing that totally made Lina more crafty improving her rep and my approval of her. I didn't like how Lina was always so revealing about her time with Tom and how Janine knew how to keep it a secret like she was the expert. Lina should be the expert. And this just proved it.

Basically Lina just pulled the "you think he's in there? Well, here take a look" move. Lina couldn't tell Janine he want there, she had to show her so she could believe. "Seeing is believing."

I thought for sure Janine knew that her mom had Tom. Well, she thought that if did have Tom, he would be in her panties in front of her crotch. What Janine didn't know is that how deep Tom was in her vagina.

Janine was looking for a bulge, usually something she would see on herself as she would carry Tom in her panties. Lina exploited that thought by proving "hey, he's not in where you think he is". And Janine believed her. We also can't forget that Lina's pussy is probably much bigger than Janine's so it could hide Tom more easily that Janine could.

When Lina said "well you can help me then" and Janine said "help". That's when I bet things were turning around. See, when Janine heard that, she was thinking that her mother wanted help with orgasming with Tom and Janine was thinking "well this is weird." Then Lina exposed her crotch to Janine, making an effort to give Janine as much evidence as she needs to deny that Tom was never inside her. It also erases that deep inhale on the end of the last chapter.

Good move by Lina to use "Janine's school time" to make excuses over what she does while she is gone. Janine can't prove that wrong, she has no idea. Also, she can't deny her mother is beautiful so the workout makes sense.

Thank you Tom for not blowing this shit up. However, he practically blew it and Lina had to save his ass, literally. She just saved him from going back to Janine. I bet that toilet scene at the end is a sign for punishment. After all, he should be after that stunt he just pulled off. I think it's time for Lina to have a little more control over Tom. He wouldn't mind, because it's much better than serving Janine.

Haha, now Janine is playing to lying game to cover her interruption and curiosity. She was wondering about seeing the doctor. I have to give credit to her, the excuse is not bad. Both these women are playing their sneaky sides perfectly and this was a good clash.

Another good move by Karolina was once she figured out that Janine fell for her excuse, she decided to punish Janine with her own excuse. She used her sickness as a means to go outside the house and leave her with some privacy with Tom. Hmm. I would love to see a jogging scene with Lina and Tom. We know it's essential that Lina take Tom with her since Janine is going to search her mother's room.

Ok, so Janine believes that Tom is not on Lina's person. Now she is going to check her mother's room. When she discovers that Tom is not in her room, and not on Lina's person, then Janine probably would stop questioning Lina about Tom. At least for some time. Surely it will give Lina enough time to play with Tom until Janine gets suspicious again.

What a turnaround chapter! I thought Tom was caught. He should be punished now, but it's all good in the end.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom glad you're surprised. I definitely wanted to keep you off balance. Don't count literary Tom out yet (this story or the other) it is about to take a turn but you'll have to wait and see where this goes. As always thank you for your enthusiasm and support hope you're still delighting in this tale.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 12:38 PM Title: Lina

Actually, Max, Tom was an overly pushy party-crasher. Janine merely _assumed_ he was Tess' birthday gift to her. And, you know what they say about erroneous assumptions! ;-)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 9:39 PM Title: Lina

Lina is a bit of a hypocrite, after giving Janine that speach about respecting each others boundaries, here she is lying to her daughters face and stealing soemthing that belongs to her, yes "belongs", he was her birthday present. 

 

Wonder what the resolution will be though, will Lina relent and give him back, will they share or will Lina flat out refuse. Cant wait to find out!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 8:32 PM Title: Lina

Wow! Lina is on the verge of having what was referred to, in Dean Martin's "Matt Helm" movies, as a real B.I.G.O. (Bureau of International Government and Organization). And, in front of her own daughter, yet!

Looks like chapter 25 will be featuring a shrunken man-age a trois. ;-)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 7:48 PM Title: Lina

Wow, that was sexy!

One thing I didn't expect was Janine to find out so soon. (It felt soon to me.)

Wtf was Tom doing? It seemed like he wanted to get Janine's attention. The question is why. Did he want to show Janine that he found someone? Did he want to brag to Janine that he is happy and she is not? I'm not sure what was Tom's intentions, but it felt like he pleasured Lina a little too much. That conversation with Janine was like 10 seconds! I'm sure Tom could've waited, especially since he was in his favorite spot.

You did a great job describing Lina's activity in the bed. She locked the door, lied on her back and pulled the elastic to reveal Tom. I just loved that sequence of action!

Darn it Janine! Why did you have to interrupt the best part! Such an impatient girl. Man she is desperate to have Tom back.

Now these two have to have a long talk after this. Boy, what did Tom end up creating. I think Linda will punish him for this. Now that part I can't wait! But for this long talk, it can go in many directions. For the future of this story, I would like to see a back and forth action between the two as they both have their way with Tom. Janine may be cunning, but Karolina has the control. I can't for this debate! I'm rooting for Karolina!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2015 5:59 PM Title: Tess

"...Tess didn't get HIS brother back?"

Does Takuoni know something, about your upcoming chapters, that we don't?

Author's Response:

Um,no. Tess is definitely all girl.

Reviewer: takuoni Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2015 10:55 PM Title: Tess

Too bad Tess didn t get his brother back...

but hey he is very lucky anyway



Author's Response:

Not sure yet if Tess will get her brother back or if she does, in what condition.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2015 6:54 AM Title: Tess

And, with all due respect to Maximus, Tom might find Lina too much woman for him, even at normal-size!

So, there. :P

Author's Response:

Quite possibly, from a girl to a woman who has the experience of life to teach the naive Tom in ways he never could have imagined, we shall see how the dynamic shifts now that mother is involved and has access to resources far beyond Janine.

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