[Report This]Date: November 09 2015 1:01 PM Title: All Day Detention
Even more ironic than Tom's unintended pun? "Pandora" translates as "all-gift." So, it could be said that he's trapped in a gift box!*
*Similar to how Janine deliberately misinterpreted his presence, at her birthday party, as wanting to be one of her presents! ;-D
[Report This]Date: November 07 2015 5:35 PM Title: The Enchanted Forest
WHOA!!!! I guess it's true.
"Still waters..." and all that jazz!
Author's Response:
Still waters run, in her case very deep with a turbulent undertow
[Report This]Date: November 07 2015 4:58 PM Title: The Enchanted Forest
You know what the weirdest thing about this chapter was? I felt exactly as Tom did.
I didn't want to rub her feet. Not my thing. I agree, I just wanted a crack at her pussy. If he is also thinking what I'm thinking, he knows that if he pleases her good in her pussy, then she might be nice to him.
Then she did use him against her pussy, and like Janine and Sam, she brutally abused him. And what makes this interesting is that these women are taking the thing he loves (pussy) and making it a miserable place for him.
This is good, becuase I don't think Tom even likes Miss Addison, just pleasing women. However, Miss Addison is taking the one thing he likes and making it less enjoyable. After all she is disciplining him.
Next, I like what you did about her pinching Tom's penis. She emphasizes that it's not about him, and it's about her.
It sounds like some sort of giantess sexual slavery. Although it sounds erotic, it seems scary in Tom's case, becuase he has no idea is he will ever be rescued. While in possession of any of the past ladies, he had hope to be moved somewhere else.
Remember when I said I fancy giantess teachers, well, Miss Addison is now kind of a turn off. At first, she sounded exciting, now it seems like just a bad experience in general.
Perhaps, you wanted me to feel unattracted to her, just like how Tom is probably reconsidering his thoughts as well.
I think this is finally the woman that everyone has always wanted. The one who can wipe the smile off Tom's face. I think this is the one. His charms don't work on her, he can't escape on the lid, she brutally abuses him like Janine, he is already bleeding, she won't let him have pleasure. Yep, it's like Tess hired this woman to straighten Tom out. Lol.
Really, good stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I know for many readers Miss Addison is not perhaps what they want but I did need a foil. Some have indicated Tom is too comfortable in his situation. First Janine then Lina then Sam now Miss Addison each different. I think you're right that people want him back in Janine’s clutches and all I can say is have patience. I have tried to depict her as unwavering in her resolve to get him as well as demonstrating a very clever mind to achieve this goal. Patience. :)
[Report This]Date: November 05 2015 9:36 PM Title: Tom - Thursday
"Days and weeks to come?" Uh-oh! That's definitely not good! It means she does NOT intend to return him, to Tess, anytime soon.
Or, at least, not until he's been brainwashed worse than the Manchurian Candidate.
Author's Response:
I was thinking maybe a little Clockwork Orange :0
[Report This]Date: November 05 2015 9:27 PM Title: Tess & Sam
LOL! Charlie's Angels meet Sherlock Holmes, these three. A great chapter, full of very plausible character development!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Like Nancy Drew except gigantic and in a couple of cases, with ulterior motives
[Report This]Date: November 05 2015 8:00 PM Title: Tom - Thursday
These are my first impressions of the last 2 chapters. I will have a more detailed review later.
No way that Tess and Sam could've figure out that the music got some ones attention and also guessed Miss Addison just like that. Seems very unlikely.
Jane figured it out with Tatiana's help. Now she knows. Is she going to blackmail Miss Addison? Seems like it.
Miss Addison is beyond creepy now. She took him home, and looks like she is about to conduct experiments or some shit. Might even be a dominatrix. She is crazy now.
Miss Harwood seems like a future giantess in this story. Perhaps Tom can get a visit from her? I want them to meet. Miss Addison doesn't seem as sexy as I would've hoped for.
That's all I got for now. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Miss Harwood is exactly what you want her to be achingly hot still young and full of so much knowledge she could share. Whether or not she gets a Crack at Tom remains to be seen. Undecided at this time.
Date: November 05 2015 7:35 PM Title: Unexpected Company
Did you just add 2 chapters at once? I'm impressed amongst everything else you managed.
Author's Response:
Yes 2 chapters to try and get to the showdown sooner before I lose reader interest
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 9:23 PM Title: Unexpected Company
@ Tom Speedy: I think Ms. Addison is going to prove the hottest disciplinarian since Tiny Dan's Zavia Tavar Lahrenger.
;-)
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 7:06 PM Title: Unexpected Company
First of all, what just happened?
That was my reaction when Miss Addison decided to show up. I mean, of all people, her? Yes, I have always wanted a teacher to find him, but wow, this is defiantly a surprise.
You said "dragging him down to the office and exposing the situation to the headmistress" twice near the middle of the chapter.
Addison is a great name. Glad you chose it.
I just want everyone to know that Miss Addison is the teacher that scolded Tess and Janine earlier in the story. She is not a random teacher.
I think it's funny how Miss Addison was able to connect the dots and figure out that Tom is a naughty boy.
The vocabulary is strong in Miss Addison. Gives off a nice "well educated" background about her.
Wow, so she just put him in there and trapped him? Im already liking her. I doubt she would pass Lina's sexual demeanor, but let's hope she is in the same league as Ms. Mackenzie!
Oh boy, I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 5:58 PM Title: Unexpected Company
OK! Congratulations; you fooled me. No way I could've anticipated one of his teachers. Let alone, a disciplinarian for whom Tom's imminent lessons in "order" will be as much forbidden pleasure as empowering punishment.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 8:27 PM Title: Confrontation
Then, it's got to be Astrid.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 6:37 PM Title: Confrontation
Hmmm, not Tanitia you say. Maybe Tomspeedy guessed it, hes up Janines bum, heehee.
It was somedody who scared him, obvious choice is Janine but I think you are going to make us wait a little longer for Janine. Tell you this, if its not Janine, I think Tom is in even more danger than if it was.
Author's Response:
Another possibility no one has really thrown out there is maybe Janine swallowed him... :O
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 2:08 PM Title: Confrontation
Haha, Tess checked Janine pretty good, but not good enough. If we know Janine, he is probably in the back of her underwear, inside her vagina, or even inside her asshole.
I still think it is Janine. She is just straight up lying so the accusations don't go to her. Also, it makes Tess less likely to suspect Janine of taking him.
What ever happened to Tom, we at least know Janine is responsible whether she took him or not. (I'm pretty sure she did.)
This Tatiana thing is just a hoax for us to believe that there are more possibilities. Janine's plan is too clever. She went in, got Tom, got Titiana to get her access, and now Tom is hidden.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Muwahaha I know you cant wait, next chapter will answer what happened to Tom,
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 7:56 PM Title: Confrontation
Supposition #1: Tatiana, being the daughter of a Russian Mob boss, would probably have access to all sorts of ex-KGB surveillance experts. And, if she was secretly obsessed with him even before he shrank, she might've had those same experts bug his family's home! Hence, she wouldn't have had to accidentally find him on the bathroom floor (or overhear him and Sam through an overly convenient air duct) to know of his new existence.
Supposition #2: Lina has sent Marta to bring him back to her. But, the latter will wind up double-crossing the former.
Sorry for the relapse into Tomspeedyitis.
Author's Response:
Attempting to extrapoloate potential avenues of the story are good, it helps me understand how well I'm leading the people reading or in some cases it allows me to see alternative possibilities I had not previously considered. However, nope to both, :P
Date: October 28 2015 7:15 PM Title: Confrontation
Plot twists be like...
Author's Response:
Keep you guessing.
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 6:57 PM Title: Confrontation
Still going strong with this story mate! Very good, and an ominous mysterious twist which will probably get resolved in the following chapter writen in Tom's pov. Unless his abductor's wearing a mask or acts 'off screen' with him for a bit before the identity is revealed : d
Quite a mystery as to who could've found Tom and abudcted him like that. Were there any hints in earlier chapters to who this character might be and if they know about Tom?
^_^;
Author's Response:
Hmm, no overt clues per se. Here's my guess, - Colonel Mustard, in the library, with the candlesitck, joking! Next chapter will be the reveal, I promise
Date: October 28 2015 6:12 PM Title: Confrontation
SO it HAS to be an Ex-Girlfriend or something!
Author's Response:
Or something, :D
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 5:29 PM Title: Ground Rules
Couldn't be Janine; too soon and too obvious.
Author's Response:
That would be too obvious - which would make it unexpected!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 5:26 PM Title: Janine - Wednesday
I still say that Tatiana will find him, first.
Author's Response:
Nope
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 3:14 PM Title: Ground Rules
Very good!!!
Continues...
Author's Response:
Thank you