This new website change is not the best skin in my opinion. Is there a way to change it?

Also, anyone know where is the chat box?

Hmm. This chapter intrigues me. It was a well put chapter that showed a lot of things that I really wanted to see. It also has a lot of things to discuss. Let's begin.

First off, smart move by Janine to clean up Tom at the gas station. Before reading that part I was wondering if her parents would see her walking in with Tom in the container.

When she put Tom on the toilet seat, I thought she was going to let him take a piss too. I guess not. Maybe Tom takes a piss inside Janine. (That's sounds wrong, but who knows, Janine probably won't feel it within her secretions).

Ok, what up with the blue Gatorade? Any little detail in your stories have some importance later on. Is it a torture device for Tom, a pool for Tom, or just an excuse for her parents if they ask where she has been?

The collar is back! I'm glad there is no chain this time. The collar is enough to signify property and control. Janine is definately preparing something big with Tom soon.

Anyone else find it funny that Janine cleaned him up, then immediately rubs her vaginal fluid on him. She didn't really want him clean. She just wanted to remove Miss Addison's fluid off him.

The Dad seems pretty cool. Looks like a great, loving family. A bit too loving that Francis and Karolina are going to spend a lot of time together. Francis also likes Janine and he wants time to spend with her. Francis also bonds Janine and Lina. Not just Tom with their sexual play, but just family time and enjoying life. I can see it, and I right now I don't want it to be ruined. I could be wrong becuase I don't even know much about Francis.

You mentioned "a short distance off" twice with like 3 sentences. Nothing wrong except some may see it as redundant.

"An amused look on her face?" Was Lina really looking like that with that expression? Or was she playing along with Janine's experiment. I think there is something more than amusement she gave Janine.

Beautiful wordplay. "I got some cramming to do". Ok, this does not refer to her homework. Instead it seems like she meant she is going to cram Tom inside her all night and cram him in all her tight places.

I wouldn't say Janine has gotten any nicer. She is just prepping him for the night. She cleaned him up, and put him inside her. Usually girls don't immediately shove Tom inside them like that. Girls shove him in as the main event. For Janine, that's just the appetizer. Her main event will be more memorable to Tom. We can only wonder what that will be.

I really can't wait for the next chapter!

@Maximus: I'm anal-retentive! And proud of it! :P

@Maximus

Hey I never said the story was badly written, in fact it's one of my favorites on this site now that I've caught up on it. And I'm not saying EVERY character is lacking personality, just the main character, he feels a bit like a perverted dude camera to me, who sometimes goes entire chapters without uttering a word. Every other character though has a distinct personality. And you're right this story IS leaning more towards erotica than a simple story, again, nothing wrong with that. In fact my main story is mostly erotic and nothing else to be honest.

Decent story, this one kind of reminds me of some of wildcatman's works, particularly "The Decrement of Tom", I guess "Tom" being the same name in both stories is just because Tom referes to ThomThumb which is a popular shrunken man character. But anyway you're writing really reminds me of his works, in fact some of the criticisms I have of this story are the SAME I gave to him on many occasions. Namely, that your protagonist feels more like a camera that goes from woman to woman, set-piece to set-piece, rather than an actual character. But then again this story is more towards the side of pure erotica than a story with some sexyness in it, not that this is a bad thing mind you. Anyway, I'll be keeping up with this one, keep up the good work!

Now that was a twist I did not expect at all. 

Hey, first of all, glad you are back. I got worried for some time. Nonetheless, you are back.

First of all, I'm not quite sure if that's a showdown. I mean, sure it was two people having a verbal showdown, but I kinda expected it to be bigger. Then again, it would be probably more difficult to have a multi person showdown with multiple women.

Janine said a lot of cruel stuff. Always one step ahead she is. Of her mother, of Tess, and now Miss Addison.

I have no idea about half the things that Janine said, but it sounded scary, the way it sounded official.

So Tom is back with Janine. Miss Addison's adventure with Tom was short timed just like Tess and Sam.

Perhaps this is a good time to catch up on the Lindholm residence. Is the father still there? How long will he be there? Has Lina figured it out? What did Janine say that made Francis arrive? So many questions about that phone call earlier that I want to know!

Then we have Tess. She thinks it's Miss Addison too. Is this going to be a cat and mouse game? Will Tess ask Miss Addison about Tom too. Lol. Miss Addison will be freaked about how many girls know she had Tom.

Last of all, Miss Addison. What will she do? Will she kidnap another boy from school? (Ok, that won't happen, but I had to suggest it.) Will she report Janine of kidnapping? Or even better, will she call Lina? Now that could be interesting.

Next chapter could be anything and I am ready for it. I can't wait!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom, life sometimes gets in the way of writing and that causes some delay in providing updates. Janine is like Ilsa, She-Wolf of the SS and there was no way Miss Addison was prepared for her. I have moved Tom around a lot and fairly quickly to try and keep it interesting, but he may be in some trouble now she has her talons on him again, we'll see...

Well in that case, it would be a showdown. But I doubt all of them would be in the same bathroom at once.

So Mrs Adison huh, did not see that coming. I mean I knew Janine didnt swallow him but dang it, now you got me wanting her to have a snack.

I like how Adison is putting Tom in his place and how you added some descriptions of Toms discomfort. I noted that in the beginning of this story on how its more realistic to show Tom being a little worse for wear after what would be some uncomfortable situations. Good job!

This chapter seems like a setup for the next one.

Obviously, you mentioned "Next chapter-Showdown!" So I'm hyped about it.

My prediction: Jane, Tess, Sam, (Lina shows up, or even Miss Harwood shows up) all confront Miss Addison. Janine will feel her up becuase she is that desperate. Miss Addison mentions suspension but Janine brings up some blackmail. Tess is going "wtf no, he's mine". Janine fires back that Tom is her present and then all of a sudden the principal walks in. She orders them all to her office and after a bunch of the principal keeps Tom. Every woman disagrees, but the principal demands that everyone leaves. The principal looks at Tom and talks about how if she was younger, she would love to go out with him. Miss Harwood shows up with some good news for the principal and the principal decides to go out and celebrate tonight. She thanks Miss Harwood and decides to reward her with Tom. Miss Harwood gladly accepts and mixed emotions go through him. (Fear, arousal). Miss Harwood then seduces Tom and gets him to cum. Miss Harwood then asks for him to make her cum and puts him in her panties. Tom reluctantly accepts but claims that it is better than Miss Addison.

That is my version of the showdown.

Hope it happens! I can't wait for the next chapter!