@ Tom Speedy: I think Ms. Addison is going to prove the hottest disciplinarian since Tiny Dan's Zavia Tavar Lahrenger.

;-)

OK! Congratulations; you fooled me. No way I could've anticipated one of his teachers. Let alone, a disciplinarian for whom Tom's imminent lessons in "order" will be as much forbidden pleasure as empowering punishment.

Hmmm, not Tanitia you say. Maybe Tomspeedy guessed it, hes up Janines bum, heehee.

It was somedody who scared him, obvious choice is Janine but I think you are going to make us wait a little longer for Janine. Tell you this, if its not Janine, I think Tom is in even more danger than if it was.

Supposition #1: Tatiana, being the daughter of a Russian Mob boss, would probably have access to all sorts of ex-KGB surveillance experts. And, if she was secretly obsessed with him even before he shrank, she might've had those same experts bug his family's home! Hence, she wouldn't have had to accidentally find him on the bathroom floor (or overhear him and Sam through an overly convenient air duct) to know of his new existence.

Supposition #2: Lina has sent Marta to bring him back to her. But, the latter will wind up double-crossing the former.

Sorry for the relapse into Tomspeedyitis.

Author's Response:

Attempting to extrapoloate potential avenues of the story are good, it helps me understand how well I'm leading the people reading or in some cases it allows me to see alternative possibilities I had not previously considered. However, nope to both, :P

Still going strong with this story mate! Very good, and an ominous mysterious twist which will probably get resolved in the following chapter writen in Tom's pov. Unless his abductor's wearing a mask or acts 'off screen' with him for a bit before the identity is revealed : d

Quite a mystery as to who could've found Tom and abudcted him like that. Were there any hints in earlier chapters to who this character might be and if they know about Tom?
^_^; 

Couldn't be Janine; too soon and too obvious.

Author's Response:

That would be too obvious - which would make it unexpected!

Very good!!!

Continues...

Just getting caught up on this, lots of good things happening! First off, loved the scene between Sam and Tom, one of my favorite scenarios is when the giantess gets lost in her passions with no regard for the tiny, steamy stuff! One of the best stories ever was the Plague with an epic scene where a tiny is found in the girls locker room where he is whisked away to the giantesses home where he perishes in the throws of passion. Obviously you couldnt go that far with Tom or no more story, lol but good job none the less!

Next Janine is a devilishly clever, Professor Moriarty inteligence indeed! Im not entirely sure who opened the box though, for some reason I am thinking Tanitia, could she have been in the bathroom and overheard Tess's conversation with Tom? But then why would Tom be afraid of her, he usually looks forward to new encounters? Maybe just something about her expression that sent chills down his spine, sometimes you just know you are in danger. Cant wait to find out if its Janine or someone eise!

Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Janine <33 Trouble <333

Got the biggest boner already lmao

Ok, now this is funny. I was expecting this long term situation with Sam and Tess, especially when they lay down the ground rules like the group meeting just started.

However, Janine just shows up and takes him. I mean, already?!!! Ha, I didn't expect it to be that fast but alright, Janine has always been sexier than both Sam and Tess and if being with Janine means a chance to get to Lina, then I'm all for it.

Good point about Tom's fears of Sam and how her sexual attitude reminded him of Janine. Initially, that was the effect I wanted Lina to give Tom, but I guess Tom saw her approach as gentle. First thing Sam did was insert him inside her. Definatley sounds like Janine, so it makes sense.

At the end, you might as well should've wrote Janine. I mean, who else would it be that gives him "a whole world of trouble". Yep. That's Janine. Then again, the use of pronouns does give a little more of a suspense feeling.

The most interesting part of this chapter is that these "ground rules" don't want Tom to wander around. When Tom is found to be absent, Tess and Sam will immediately think he wandered off. Janine couldn't have found a better opportunity. It was as if she was listening to the conversation earlier. Tess and Sam won't even think that Janine took Tom and they won't even look for him there, therefore eliminating them interferring with Tom's situation.

Janine had such a struggle getting Tom from Lina but an easy time getting him from Tess and Sam. This tells me how smart the Lindholm family is and how sophisticated they are at being creative.
Boy, how will Tom escape from these two ever again. Cleverness chart: Janine>Lina>Tom>Sam>Tess. Dont get me wrong. Tess is clever, but I feel like everyone has used Tess or done something behind her back. Janine used Tess to get Tom, Lina used Tess to hide Tom, Tom used Tess to get to Janine, and Sam used Tess to get Tom. Poor Tess. She's going to explode in rage when she comes back to her room.

Now, we look on ahead and wonder what in the world Janine has in store for Tom. First off, she told him that she wanted him in the ass. Feels like that's going to be a gauruntee now. Secondly, Janine never wants Tom to escape this time, so her prison choice for Tom may not be a simple glass this time.

Things have changed drastically, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Next chapter, MIND BENDER!