[Report This]Date: March 19 2016 9:14 AM Title: Serena and Lina
I knew it. I knew it! I KNEW IT!
:-)
Author's Response:
Yep
[Report This]Date: March 19 2016 4:51 AM Title: Serena and Lina
I knew Lina was my favorite for a reason, hahaha.
Really love how this story has progressed and cannot wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Lina's character continues to evolve and we get a deeper understanding of who she is and how Janine was shaped and like her youngest daughter she hasn't given up the notion of spending more time with Tom
[Report This]Date: March 18 2016 8:15 PM Title: Serena and Lina
I always wanted Tom to end up with Lina. But this...wow! I mean, she actually wants to take him under her wing.
I totally approve of this, don't get me wrong. I just expected more like a secret relationship instead.
Also, there is something sexy about the thought of Lina "owning" Tom. I mean, by law, he is forced to be with her since she is the one going to be "caring" for him. I bet Lina will take care of Tom just fine.
This is what Serena should be told. (Serena, Tom is just Janine's boyfriend, that's basically all that you need to know. His profile online shows his popularity among the women and that's probably why Cassidy knows him. Also, since Janine and Tom are in a relationship, it's why Lina has Tess's number, becuase Tess is more mature and responsible that Tom.) Can't Lina just say something like that.
If Lina decides that she is going to be the new caretaker of Tom, Miss Harwood could be the new teacher by law for him. What I mean, is that what if Miss Harwood is does some legal thing to be a teacher specialized to teach Tom everything from physical education to sex ed. :)
So many good ideas developing from this chapter. Especially about this "owning" Tom thing. Seriously, good word choice. I love how she used that term, it gives me other ideas.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you approve thigh there may be obstacles to see this through. We shall see what the lovely miss hall can discover to see if this is feasible
Date: March 18 2016 6:21 PM Title: Serena and Lina
God damn, this is heading in a fascinating direction. Tess is thinking about the shrinker, and now Lina wants to lay the legal foundation to own a shrunken person. If the two were to intersect...
Author's Response:
Sooo many ways to go but I have to be careful not to get lost in it. I have become tangled up in a couple of my other stories which need to be corrected before completing them.
Date: March 17 2016 6:37 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Author's Response:
I was thinking as Tom as a little pain in the ass.
Janine didn't seem to think so.
Date: March 17 2016 4:06 PM Title: Tom's Story
This story became* popular 4x as fast.
Date: March 17 2016 4:05 PM Title: Tom's Story
Hey Duggernaut,
I'm not sure if you saw Ancient Relic's past review (because you didn't respond to it) becuase he discovered that this story is in the top 10 for most read and favorited.
It's also worth mentioning that this is the only top ten story that is made in the last year, let alone that past 4 years. I mean, all the other top ten stories are created from 2012 and earlier. This story becuase popular 4x as fast!
Author's Response:
Hi Tom,
Yes I saw Ancient Relic's review about this story making it onto those lists. While it is very gratifying, I think we must also bear in mind that this site has had four additional years to broaden the membership base. there are a couple of stories with many more reads and far fewer words which is a testament to the tales crafted by those other talented authors. I am truly grateful readers find appeal in this story borne of your suggestion and guidelines. I am humbled to have it appear on those lists. Thanks Tom.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 11:52 PM Title: Tess and Janine
I actually do hope his mom finds him like this. It's about time she found out what happened to Tom.
Author's Response:
Could prove very interesting. We will see how this plays out.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 9:53 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Hmmmmmm! I wonder if this means Jessica's college sorority is going to get temporary custody of Little Tom?
Author's Response:
That could potentially prove fatal but in all the right ways especially if Janine’s description of her sister is accurate. Time will tell. Or ne I guess.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 8:39 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Darn, I was hoping all this sexy stuff would make you forget about their mom coming over. I just find her visit completely unnecessary and I have no idea where it will be going.
Tom is just aroused by the presence of all these young females. I bet that's why he is in a jolly mood.
Well, I hope Cassidy gets to keep Tom still, they make a great team.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Imagine yourself in Tom's place. Bet your smile would be from ear to ear. I'm glad you can't see where this is going means it will be fresh for you. Let us not forget about Cassidy's friend Selina. Wait have I introduced that character yet? Maybe.
Date: March 16 2016 6:28 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Now there's the Janine we know and love! Unapologetic, scheming and self centered to the nth degree! Anyway, in my opinion Cassidy is the best girl for Tom's sake, she's gentle, sexy, but most importantly she's a nurse who can get him back in good health if something happens to him. From both a logical and relationship perspective, Cassidy is the best fit for Tom. But as things stand, I doubt it's gonna last much longer.
Author's Response:
Muwahaha we know what Janine is capable of while others might be fooled by her turning over a new leaf. Cassidy does seem very compatible with Tom but does she have the wherewithal to combat Janine? Time will tell.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 6:02 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Another great addition. I love how the story feels like it is building towards something. The lawyer seems pretty important, and I want to see where this takes us! I look everyday to see if you update!
Quick question about your other stories. Which are actively being updated and which are finished or dropped?
This time of year is quite crazy for my profession, so I don't know if I'll be updating anytime soon! Probably should have waited before posting the start to my story!
Author's Response:
Thanks beardless bard. I hope that I'm building toward another large event though what is still nebulous in my mind. Any story I've not identified as complete might still be added to though I cannot say with any degree of certainty. I still hope to add to each of them. Because of my two jobs and school my time has become very limited I am focusing my energies on Tom and Michael with peripheral attention to nefarious and Daffyd. I really want to get back into Mo's Story as well. Thanks for the inquiry and your own story. :)
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 1:03 PM Title: Cassidy and Tom
I absolutely love this chapter. I like Cassidy has feelings for Tom. I like how she said she was in control and then used him for her pleasure and then after orgasm she pushed him into her ass and relaxed (it was a great surprising moment). She was gently dominant and he obviously liked that. It would be great if it evolves to a D/s relationship whith Cassidy being more and more dominant gently pushing Tom's limits. I hope the story will continue with Cassidy and she will seek ways how to intensify her pleasure and amusement.
Author's Response:
Glad you approve. Cassidy is allowing herself to experience the moment. As she grows more and more comfortable who knows where she will take this
[Report This]Date: March 15 2016 12:51 PM Title: Cassidy and Tom
@Ancient Relic
GOOD ONE! X-D
For once, a pun of mine was purely and genuinely unintentional.
Author's Response:
I was thinking as Tom as a little pain in the ass.
Date: March 14 2016 6:05 PM Title: Cassidy and Tom
Perhaps, as part of some kind of weird-ass, precedent-setting custody suit!
With recent events in mind, there are a number of ways one could interpret "weird-ass".
Author's Response:
Weird ass? Ass-tounding!!!
Date: March 14 2016 11:29 AM Title: Home for the Holidays
So, once Cassidy and Tom have exhausted both themselves and all the possibilities, here's the line-up I _hope_ to see. Jessica; Serena; Ms. Harwood; and Tatiana. My reasoning?
Tess might figure that Tom is better off with Jess (the she-devil she doesn't know) rather than Janine (the she-devil she now knows _too_ well). Whereupon, Jess might introduce Tom to Serena at Lina's request. Perhaps, as part of some kind of weird-ass, precedent-setting custody suit! Then, Serena (possibly seeking to arrange for Tom's home-schooling at the Lindholm residence) shows him to Ms. Harwood, who will be granted custody of him for the time being. Only for Tatiana to stumble across him after one of Ms. Harwood's regular classes at the school!
These suggestions, of course, are purely off-the-cuff. And, thus, you are completely free to accept or decline them. I simply thank you for hearing me out.
Date: March 14 2016 4:22 AM Title: Cassidy and Tom
I think that it would not end quickly and knowledge of Tom Cassidy
Date: March 14 2016 4:08 AM Title: Cassidy and Tom
Please more!
Tom Cassidy and behave like lovers
I am jealous of Tom !!!!!!
Tom Cassidy knows very well that no one would be able to met
This is only called deep love !!!
Author's Response:
RIGHT!Tom seems to have found paradise with Cassidy.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2016 6:55 PM Title: Cassidy and Tom
WOW! I've lost track. Was that Round 4...or 5?
[Report This]Date: March 13 2016 6:31 PM Title: Cassidy and Tom
Yeah! Part 4! I knew it! Now we just need a part 5!
I love how Tom is competing with her dildo to bring Cassidy the most pleasure. Also, I like how Cassisdy and Tom are competing to see who is in charge of their magical sessions.
These chapters have been amazing, and I don't want it to end. I still think they should roleplay nurse and patient, but it's just a suggestion.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We shall see. Glad this meets with your approval thus far.