[Report This]Date: June 19 2017 8:53 PM Title: The Finder of Lost Sheep
Oh my freakin god! I love it! The scene where the master investigator gathers everyone together and lays out the case. Great!
You've made room in this story for so much fun stuff to happen. That's the reason it's been such a hit. It's great fun and a great story.
Thanks Duggernaut.
PixL8Ed
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2017 6:05 PM Title: The Finder of Lost Sheep
As to Jessica's indirect involvement with the abduction? I can't say I'm surprised. But, I'm most definitely surprised by the existence of this Oleysa!* Tatiana has a college-age older sister? Interesting plot twist!
*Or is it Olesya? You've got it spelled both ways.
Author's Response:
Olesya - thanks for the catch. I've fixed it! Olesya is Tatiana's cousin
[Report This]Date: June 19 2017 5:57 PM Title: The Finder of Lost Sheep
Hmmmm! That initial assessment of the situation will probably require infiltration of Tom's current place of false imprisonment by someone posing as a client with financially deep pockets. That, in turn, will necessitate some actual "interaction" with Tom. Purely to observe his state of well-being, of course! Followed, hopefully, by a whispered conversation with him.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2017 11:10 AM Title: Trans-Siberian Express
Alright, this appointment had a lot more to it. Even though it was short, Irina did a lot of interesting stuff.
The candle scene was classic. Some people love it when a woman hurts them, such as whipping or candle wax. I guess the wax doesn't have much damage compared as a whip, but it sure packs a punch.
I think I have been watching way too many giantess insertion videos. When Irina was shoving Tom in there, I saw the entire thing in my head. I love the internet.
I have a friend named Irina and I know her as an outgoing person who has her life under control. I wonder...... (no I'm not going to ask her.)
Even though I love all these sexy back to back chapters of fun, I miss the original sexy ladies. Especially Miss Harwood. I mean, I think she is my favorite giantess of all time, and I just want to see more of her. I can't stop thinking about her. Imagine if Katie's relative or soemthing showed up to play with Tom. If there was anyway to get back to Miss Harwood, I would love it. The things she will do to him..... mmhmm.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I know Miss Harwood holds a place in your psyche, and who knows, maybe we'll get to see Katie again...
[Report This]Date: June 13 2017 6:51 AM Title: Trans-Siberian Express
@pixl8ed: as the slang term "john" comes from the legalistic pseudonym "John Doe," I would imagine the feminine equivalent would be "jane" (for similar reasons).
Author's Response:
Thank you for providing clarification!
[Report This]Date: June 13 2017 5:35 AM Title: Trans-Siberian Express
Okay, this is getting strange (yeah, I know, what’s new) but where are they getting all these appointments? Wouldn’t you imagine there would be some need for secrecy? They’ve just committed an international kidnaping of a super rich kid, wouldn’t they be worried about that getting out? They might be “special clients” of some sort, who can be counted on to be discreet. But wealthy (what is the girl version of a “johns”) ...customers might be people you would only have limited leverage over. So that looks risky.
It could be these are all the women who financed the operation. I don’t think so, but that is the best possibility I can come up with at the moment.
A mystery in Tom’s story...who knew?
Great work, Duggernaut and thanks.
pix
Author's Response:
No worries, glad to continue as long it stays interesting
[Report This]Date: June 12 2017 8:32 PM Title: Trans-Siberian Express
"How do you say 'Deranged psycho' in Russian?"
I think it's "Craziski Beeyotchki!"
Which, btw, could also describe Natasha's boss, quite accurately.
Author's Response:
Natalya? Either way, yepski
[Report This]Date: June 09 2017 8:25 PM Title: Siberian Tiger
Btw: Happy 960th review!
Only 40 more to go till the Big 1-Triple-oh!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Crazy crazy numbers...
[Report This]Date: June 08 2017 5:28 PM Title: Siberian Tiger
@pixl8ed and vgiv: well said. Bravo!
[Report This]Date: June 07 2017 6:31 AM Title: Siberian Tiger
Well, @pete445 no, not really. No surprises, do dramatic character arcs, no interesting contrasts between characters, no laughs, no suspense, no cool variety in characters, no entertaining dialogue...and certainly no raunchy to sweet sex....
But,hey, in the reviews section, sometimes some smurf with nothing to contribute will show up and make snide comments...so there's that.
Author's Response:
Cheeky
Date: June 06 2017 9:24 PM Title: Meeting a Ghost
*yawns* does anything ever happen in this story?
Author's Response:
Like?
[Report This]Date: June 06 2017 4:31 PM Title: Siberian Tiger
The last two sentences saved this chapter.
After Tom's fantastic adventures with each women, I thought maybe we are going to get some foreign special in the mix. Unfortunately, it was the same tied up and fucked method that we have seen quite often.
The only new thing was the piss which I know that some people enjoy it so I wouldn't call it a bad thing. In fact, it's interesting. Tom never had that and with all these women, it seems like he will experience the entire spectrum.
Like I said, these last 2 sentences saved the chapter becuase that sex scene felt kinda stale to me. In addition, it felt like a minute long.
However, I love how Tom got washed up and it looks like another woman is about to use him. Is Tom being used as a sex slave by the minute? If yes, now this changes things. I have always wondered about a story where a tiny man has been used as part of a business like this. I never knew that this would be the story where I find it, but hey, it's looking good so far.
Tom is definately in for it this time. "1 by 1 the women come and go, thinking of Tom and not Michaelangelo."
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Sorry you found it a little flat, hopefully the next one restores your faith.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2017 6:35 AM Title: Siberian Tiger
Hmmmmm! After looking at an old World Book map, I have to wonder. Could this operation be located in Murmansk (just across the Russo-Norwegian border)?
Author's Response:
Hmm, kind of an odd question, I'm not sure I understand the reference...
[Report This]Date: May 31 2017 10:45 PM Title: Meeting a Ghost
Oh! I like her.
Great bit of suspense building. Hedy seems like a real intellectual juggernaut. I really think this is a character I wouldn't like in real life, but can't take my eyes off in fiction.
Plus, I want her to save Tom. Who knew?
You've done it again Duggernaut.
pix
[Report This]Date: May 31 2017 7:40 PM Title: Meeting a Ghost
I don't seem to care much of this Hedy Smith. She does her job well, but I don't think she knows the urgency of the situation. Checking out Tom's room seems to be a waste of time.
There should be surveillance, fingerprints, or some other clue, than what we already know that has been found already in Tom's room.
So Tom's grandpa is like Edison? Their family is that famous? I guess that explains why the teachers actually care about Tom rather than just what his tiny body can provide.
Speaking of teachers, I still get dreams of these teachers and the weird part is that they are not playing with Tom, they are playing with me. It's oddly erotic and every second is kidnapped, I'm hoping that Miss Harwood has some sort of connection soon with Tom. Otherwise, I think she will find me, shrink me, and keep me. (I love it.)
Basically Hedy Smith is a good field agent and has begun analyzing Tom's disappearance.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 31 2017 5:44 PM Title: Meeting a Ghost
I love a gts-story that throws in a little real-world science (and/or current events), every now and then.
Bravo! :-)
[Report This]Date: May 24 2017 6:32 AM Title: Fish Bowl
Hmmm...some kind of experiment?
Tom has been "used" before and come out okay. I hope he can gain info that can help him....it's good that he knows he's being watched. He can use that to feed them fake info.
How did Tom go from being such a dumass to being a compelling character?
Great stuff Duggernaut.
Author's Response:
How's this for some.cosmic irony. For Tom to grow up he needed to be shrunk? Deep.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2017 12:41 AM Title: Fish Bowl
Ok, now that's super hot! Tom got kidnapped to be this wealthy woman's sexy toy! Damn! If my life was shit, and I ended up in that position I enjoy it.
Also, this woman, just seems sexy. The way she spoke English among the other women symbolized how special she was. Then her wealthy clothes showed that this was a big shot woman. Also, this woman likes him and just states that he is handsome out loud! In addition, she just strips casually, teasing Tom, right before she says she wants him to pleasure her! This is amazing!
In the middle of the chapter, you had a bunch of letters and numbers all jumbled up which looks like something you see in a word search game.
Forget the rescue, this woman knows the real deal and I would love to see that in action!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
That bunch of letters was actually supposed to be Russian. I'm glad you approve of the direction this little tale is taking. Next chapter more about the mysterious Miss Smith then onto some fun stuff
[Report This]Date: May 23 2017 7:16 PM Title: Fish Bowl
Little Miss Hornacova certainly seems to be taking her time. So, I guess not all Slavic women like to go "Russian" into sex.
Author's Response:
Funny I got the while.mother Russia thing stuck in my head otherwise I'd try for some witty comeback or other. Nope nothing rhymes with Turkmenistan
Date: May 18 2017 6:01 AM Title: Bloodhound
Sounds like Serena would just love to have a tiny man to dominate.