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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2016 9:36 AM Title: Truly Hot for Teacher

English translation: Round 6-going-on-7???!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2016 9:35 AM Title: Truly Hot for Teacher

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Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2016 7:15 AM Title: Truly Hot for Teacher

please more!
this is great!

Tom Good job!
Cassidy let him keep as long as possible inside.
I'm curious how it looked from the perspective of Tom's of this event (orgasm Cassidy).
if the tom is very deep inside Cassidy?

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2016 9:08 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Ancient Relic: Except Tom's mother, as his mother, would have legal custody of Tom. Hell, maybe that's how she'll get involved in the story. Or at least, how Tom might agree to let her know. Unless Tess tells their mother before hand. 

 

Realistically, Lina benifits more if Tom's mother doesn't know. 



Author's Response:

The countdown is on. the only one who seems to benefit from Raphaella is Tess, well and Tom, maybe... 

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2016 8:25 PM Title: Tom's Story

Will we see Miss Addison again? I am wondering what her current state of mind is. She informed Tess about Janine taking Tom. So it seemed like she was concerned and maybe guilty since she did threaten to kill Tom when Janine blackmailed her.

She didn't seem like a bad person overall, so i wonder if she regretted making the threat. By the way, did Tom hear the threat? He hasn't brought it up. 



Author's Response:

I think the Miss Addison character may only be seen in passing. She had her chance and was outplayed.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2016 7:19 PM Title: Truly Hot for Teacher

Whoa! Part 6! This is amazing, and I love how it's not even repetitive. You introduce new sexy things into this relationship.

I love Cassidy in this chapter, asserting herself on Tom and forcing him inside her. Then she decided to keep him inside her while she cleaned up. Nice.

Also, Tom was great, making his presence felt and still got some tricks up in his sleeve.

Yes! Miss Harwood is coming! I love the description you gave in the beginning. I think most people needed a reminder of who she is since she was barely mentioned before.

Will Miss Harwood try Tom? Oh absolutely. Otherwise, what's the point of introducing Katie to Tom, so Tom can bang the teacher. (Or Miss Harwood will give him some tutoring.)

I just want them to meet asap! (Maybe next chapter!) I want to see Katie's reaction and her reaction to Tom being the guy that Cassidy has been with.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2016 7:12 AM Title: Best Friends Forever

P.S.---I'm hoping that she can keep Tom safe from his sister and mother. At least, a little longer.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2016 7:10 AM Title: Best Friends Forever

So, now it's going to be Miss Hardwood's turn? YES! Finally! :-)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 6:14 PM Title: Best Friends Forever

So I'm reading this and I'm thinking, "TomSpeedy in 3, 2, 1...". Then I check the reviews, and I see that down there. Now Tom gets to seduce yet another woman, while Janine, Serena and Lina all try to get him back.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 5:38 PM Title: Best Friends Forever

I just can't help it. I'm smiling so much that my cheeks hurt. I think I'm crying out of joy. I've been waiting for something like this and soon it will happen. The hot teacher is back!

First of all, there's a few typos, a big one at the end where you say "Bye the bye" instead of "By the way".

Second, Katie is perfect. In fact, I had a sexy teacher assistant named Katie so I always thought Katie was a sexy name.

Wow, it's amazing how you connected Miss Harwood to Casssidy. I would've never guessed that they were friends but then again, I keep forgetting that Cassidy is 28 and Miss Harwood is definately in that same age gap too.

When you mentioned yoga, I was about to drool in delight. I mean, yoga is like a gift to this world where most sexy women go these days. I thought Cassidy was going to take Tom with her to yoga, and Tom somehow ends up with Miss Harwood. Well, Miss Harwood coming to Cassidy's place is good too.

It's funny how Miss Harwood had an interest in Tom a while back and you could tell when she was talking to Tess that Miss Harwood was definately interested in Tom.

One thing that I think is a bonus, is that Miss Harwood can sense emotions by voice. I bet she gets that with all the students she teaches. Imagine if she senses if the boys are looking at her in lust. She must know everything!

Speaking of knowing everything, if Miss Harwood gets her hands on Tom (I think she will), then I hope Miss Harwood is also sexually experienced as well. And I mean, she knows all the tricks, she is creative and uses tape in school a lot so she might get some kinky ideas.

I hope she is naughty. Not too gentle like Lina, not too cruel like Janine, or not too playful as Cassidy. Naughty seems like the dream. I want her to be controlling and teasing. I want to Tom be impressed this time. Usually Tom is impressing everyone, but let's have the teacher "teach" him how to please a women.

I could go on and on, but then this review would never end. I mean, first we have to see Miss Harwood's reaction to Tom. Will she be surprised, excited, applauding Cassidy, jealous of Cassidy?

I bet of all things, Katie will be curious. As a teacher, you got to know things and she definatly wants to know about Tom, inside and out. I bet she has a collection of sex toys and none have satisfied her...until Tom. :)

One thing I liked about Janine was that she used bondage a lot. Like she tied Tom up good many times. I hope Katie gets similar ideas but she isn't too sadistic about it. Instead, she could be teasing, like "Tom, the tiny bird, stuck and no where to go, and the Katie, the big Kat is slowly approaching her prey. Tom squirms to free himself to no avail. Katie lowers her tongue and wraps it around Tom, surround him in gooey saliva. Her tongue lifts him to her mouth and her lips close around his body gently sucking as her tongue drags him further inside her cavernous mouth. Her tongue pushes him back out through her lips and he slides out and immediately falls down onto her chest and slides right into her cleavage. She gives a playful squeeze with her boobs and decides to secure Tom with a tiny bra. She puts in on, and Tom is trapped between her boobs. Katie does some workout and soon she decides the bra is way too small to contain her magnificent breasts that she takes her bra off and Tom slides right down, past her flat stomach, and Miss Harwood surpresses a smile and opens her yoga pants and panties and let's Tom slide right inside. She lets the waistband go, and the tight panties and pants together press Tom against her sending shivers through Katie. Just noticing the time, she changes into some pantyhose, a tight skirt and a white shirt. She puts on her high heels and let's her hair down. She goes to school and Tom enjoys his position. They reach her desk and Tom usually is taken out and placed in her cleavage to see what the class is learning. However, this time Miss Harwood has other ideas. She decides to leave Tom inside her panties. After some time and the students start liking in, Tom realizes what's going on and starts squirming much to Miss Harwood's delight. She smiles and announces to the class "Today we will learn about the female reproductive system, from the outside and .....the inside." At the mention of 'inside', Miss Harwood turns toward the board facing away from the class, reaches down inside her panties and pushes Tom inside her. As she began teaching, she taught about the body parts, and Tom felt it around him. As she taught about the fluids, he can taste it. As she talked about the intense pressure inside, Tom can feel it. At the end of the class, Tom was drenched and Miss Harwood thanked the class for joining her today for that lesson. She was glad Tom got to learn too.

As you can see, I'm a big fan of giantess teachers. Miss Adison was like an insult to fantasy, but this is like a dream. Especially for Tom.

This is truly Tom's story!

Oh boy, I can't wait for then next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2016 12:40 PM Title: Cassidy and Tom

"AAAAAAAAAND, there goes the bell. Bringing an end to what could be the final round between these two."

Author's Response:

MMMMMMMMaybe, maybe not. :) As long as i can keep people guessing, that means i haven't fallen back into some old tired routine.

Reviewer: v10ftw Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2016 9:34 PM Title: Cassidy and Tom

Best story I've read! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the positive feedback! It is always great to know someone is enjoying the tale.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2016 5:22 PM Title: Cassidy and Tom

Part 5! Heck yeah!

I love the roleplay, but Cassidy stripped way too soon in my opinion. I would've loved her to use the uniform a bit more.

Very creative with the sponge carved out to fit Tom.

Hmm. Judging by the phone call, I doubt there will be a part 6, but it's been a while since Tom has been with the other ladies. I think this is a good time to have Tom be moved somewhere else.

I hope the call is from Lina. She has been using the phone a lot lately. Perhaps, it's her way of secretly getting Tom back.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lol, oh Tom, ye of little faith. the next chapter is really going to fire you up my friend! 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2016 5:32 PM Title: Tess

The dam's cracking now. Tess is about to shrink one or more men, and if the others find out...



Author's Response:

Quite possibly which could lead to whole other story...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2016 9:35 AM Title: Tess

I don't know. I think Tess is fooling herself. Some people can hang onto a grudge like a pit bull with a T-bone steak!

No letting go, whatsoever.

Author's Response:

True but in the great karmic cycle Tom has been the one living on borrowed time and pulling Tess along in his wake. 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2016 9:17 AM Title: Tess

It was an interesting surprise Tess tried to imagine how would it be with a tiny person. I am curious if it affects her further behavior in this story :-) The plot is completely unpredictable now. I am curious who is going to get Tom. I would love to see kind of D/s relationship.
Tanks for excellent stories!



Author's Response:

You're welcome. I think there are elements of the d/s beginning to manifest much like we saw ages ago with the dynamic between Tom and Lina. Tess has experienced confusing feelings throughout the story but still sees Tom as her sibling. If she ever begins to objectify him who knows what might happen.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 8:13 PM Title: Tess

Lucky pen tip. (What if a super tiny person was in that tip?) :)

I'm sure Tess would be a fascinating giantess. I just don't think her using Tom as a toy would be right for this story. Tess has to find someone or something new to play with.

Hmm, so Tess and Tom's mom will be showing up, huh. Well, the good news is that I can see a way to get Tom to Miss Harwood. Their mom would be strict about keep Tom with her and soon she will need a private tutor and Miss Harwood would be perfect for Tom. (I hope I'm right.)

Back to back chapters about two teenage girls thinking about Tom and getting horny. Next chapter might be another girl getting horny. Except this time it's probably a woman. (Lina or Cassidy.) a chapter for Lina thinking of Tom would be nice.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know. Interesting if the cap of the pen dud have someone ultra tiny or ant sized. Probably drown I suppose. We shall see what's next in store for our tiny protagonist suffice to say i know you will approve. Next chapter very soon

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 1:07 AM Title: Janine

Hm, it would be very difficult for Janine to get Tom. Everybody is going to suspect her if Tom disappears. The only chance is to manipulate somehow Tom so that he wants to go to her but I do not think she can succeed.
Therefore I do not think she is going to get him soon. I think important person will be Tom's mother. On one side she looks busy so she cannot take care of him herself. But on the other side she wants the best for her son. So she can give her son to anybody she believes it is the best for her son ;-) E.g. to some teacher (Miss Addison?) so that Tom can continue in his studies. But she also can decide to leave Tom by Cassidy to ensure he gets a medical attention he may need in his condition. I would prefer Cassidy or Lina and if the relationship evolves in D/s direction. 



Author's Response:

I have long maitained never ever count Janine out. Ever. Things are about to heat up soon enough

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2016 9:24 AM Title: Janine

Well, then, either Janine's pituitary system has literally been empowered by her time with Our Little Hero. Or, Duggernaut has simply (GASP!) goofed.

;-D

Author's Response:

Tom's discontent stems from the fact Janine is taller than her mother. Has been from the beginning of the story. It seems thematic that I've typically made children taller than their parental counterparts. I suppose I've modeled it after my own family. Dad 6'3" me 6'5" little brother 6'7". 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 9:51 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Carycomic,

It's not about her high heels. When we first met Lina and Jess, they were both described to be shorter than Janine.

Author's Response:

Yep



Author's Response:

Yep

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