Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2016 8:38 PM Title: Mi Casa et Su Casa

A move night, huh? They could make it a vintage sci-fi double bill. The original ATTACK OF THE FIFTY FOOT WOMAN. Followed by THE INCREDIBLE SHRINKING MAN!

Seriously, though: the only thing nicer than being first reviewer for this chapter is your--thus far--infallible posting of new chapters, in general. Bravo!!!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2016 12:43 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers

Hoo-boy! Over-cliched or not,Tom may wind up meeting Jessica's sorortiy sisters, yet! :-(

Author's Response:

A forest fire can start with a single match match...

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2016 10:00 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers

Ok, that whole conversation had me cringing, I mean, I'm not a mother and don't have a daughter but that seemed just a little too cavalier. But, then again, the Lindholm family isn't a normal family. ;)

 

I like how curious Jessica is getting, wonder what her inner Goddess is!

 

Clever of Lina explaining the problems that Tess will encounter trying to house her brother but one thing she doesn't know about is the grandfather and the possibility of Tom being regrown. What lengths will Lina go to then if she learns of that possibility. She's developed quite an obsession with little Tom. 

 

Author's Response:

The Lindholm's are certainly not your average run of the mill bunch. If Lina finds out there may be a possibility of restoration for Tom, will she become more aggressive in her desire? We shall see...

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2016 6:36 PM Title: Tess

Duggernaut, forgot to comment on your post about getting too involved. Its not. I like how you keep us guessing, never knowing if a character you introduce will play a big part or just misdirection. 

 

And its always curious to see what kind of Giantess they will be, like Jessica, most interested in her ;)

Really, the only 2 people to have Tom so far has been Lina and Janine. Sam played with him once, Addison had him briefly and now Cassidy. Doesnt seem to involved to me. I think the two main antagonists will continue to be Lina and Janine with 2 wild cards, Sam and Jessica, whom may surprise us. I don't think Cassidy is going to have an ongoing part in the story, just a hunch.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the input Maximus. My only intent is to try and keep this story engaging enough that readers enjoys reading it. i know in another of my stories, it exploded with characters and got all hazy and difficult to write.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2016 1:35 PM Title: Tess

Really love how you wrote the parts with Cassidy, adds a touch of realism to the story. Now you can get into how things unfold with Tom and Cassidy in a realistic manner after putting Toms family at ease. What that entails is anyones guess but looking forward to it! 

 

Although, not sure how long he will be with Cassidy, looks like Lina is planning a little kidnapping of her own, ha, little, get it get it.

 

And Jessica wants in on it now too! Find out what kind of giantess she is, quite the family they are :)

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2016 10:27 AM Title: Phoning Home

And, while there may not be many American woman named "Raphaella," the Italian version of the name (with two f's) has been around a long time. For example: Raffaella Carra (Italian singer/actress/hostess); Raffaella DiLaurentis (movie-producing daughter of the legendary Dino); and Raffaella Modugno (former "Miss Curvy Italy!").

Author's Response:

Thanks for the information. I chose the ph as opposed to ff just because.  We learn early Tom's mother is indeed Italian . Good job. Raphaella Spence is out of the UK. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2016 3:00 AM Title: Phoning Home

Now, as promised, my review post chapter fix.

First of all, Raphaella? I never heard of a woman named that. It's like they combined Raphael and Cinderella to make Raphaella.

Second, how did Raphaella's name pop up on Cassexy's phone? Shouldn't a number pop up instead?

Third, the way his mom keeps calling Tom a baby and tiny, I bet is making Cassisdy feel like she is taking care of a little baby. Trying to get him food, comfort, can't do anything on his own, and so on.

Next, is this whole mom incident necessary? The dilemmas and problems just keep piling up. A character gets introduced like every 3 chapters now. I envisioned this story to be just Tom, Janine and Lina. Now we got Tess's roommate, Miss Addison, the grandpa, Francis, Jessica, Cassidy, and now Tom's mom.

Now it feels like the "Adventures of Tom" with his many giantesses. He is just getting passed from one woman to the next. I wonder when it will return to the Lindholm house and Tom has to deal with the Janine/Lina duet. I miss that. Hopefully, Cassexy is the key for a reunion.

Since Raphaella mentioned having protection, does this imply that they are going to have some fun in the next few chapters? I hope so, even Tom's mom approves! Tom is 18 and Cassidy is 27. Boy, Tom keeps getting lucky.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hmm. Perhaps I am over complicating this story. It was mentioned a while ago and maybe it's time. Not sure. It was my intent to try and keep this interesting but if it's getting too involved... 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 7:56 PM Title: Phoning Home

"I wonder how I screwed them up?"

Sigmund Freud would probably venture the opinion that, due to all the impulsive trouble he had gotten himself into, recently, Tom subconsciously decided to reach out to his mother for help. Not too far-fetched as armchair theories go, I must admit.

"A boy's best friend...," and all that jazz.

P.S.---Nice to see I'm retroactively first reviewer of this chapter. :-)

Author's Response:

I don't know why it doubled up on my update. Weird. I think Freud might have a lot to say about some of the underlying psychological underpinnings in Tom's view of the world and how he interacts. I'm sure he could publish a treatise on psychosexual fixation in regards to some of the elements of the story. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2016 6:17 PM Title: Jess

First of all, this is the funniest chapter in the entire story. I kept smiling and laughing, then smiling again until it hurt a bit. The secret is out, everyone knows about Tom and it's hilarious watching this all enfold.

Second, I'm kinda surprised that you brought Jess back in, but I should've know that whenever you mention a character, they become a key role in a story later on. Still waiting in Miss Harwood to show up. :)

Janine doesn't even seem to regret anything as Tess told the story. I would love to hear the uncensored version that Janine has experienced with Tom. That should get some great reactions from Jess.

Jessica is now Jess. Now that's gonna confuse me soon since Tess is already a common name in this story. I wonder if Jess will now get some time with Tom since she now knows about him.

I admire how this chapter was setup. The way Jess was trying to put the pieces together takes skill becuase you have to exclude stuff that the rest of the characters already know.

Man, Lina felt embarrassed the whole time. It's like Jess had respect for her and then it just dropped as soon as Jess found out that Lina had sex with Tess's brother. Also, Lina's explanation was awesome. "It's Tom, there's se thing special about him" as if she recommends Jess to have a go with Tom to figure it out herself.

This chapter also felt like a showdown. Everyone is on the same page and everyone knows what each person did with Tom. I wish each lady shares their story of what they did with Tom. Sexy story time!

I really, really like this chapter. Even though, there was no sexual fun, this chapter was fun to read.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I wonder if Selene would make a good first name for Miss Harwood? Hmm...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2016 10:21 PM Title: Tom's Story

Well, in my ch. 51 review, I had 3 possibilities and only the 1st one was that Janine wasn't going to crash and it was just a scare. My other two involved her being injured becuase of a crash.

Author's Response:

I think presenting a variety of possibilities actually helps relay to me a number of threads some of which I had not considered. I love that you are invested in the story and that it has not become too one dimensional. I know several chapters back there was some discussion on how this story was losing depth.