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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2016 6:35 PM Title: Teacher's Pet

He wanted to sow his wild oats with Ms. Harwood? Now, he's about to harvest the crop!

Author's Response:

Nicely played sir!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2016 6:26 PM Title: Teacher's Pet

I'm surprised Tom wasn't more afraid of that crop. I mean, at his size it could really do some damage.  Though by the end he can at least be sure she won't "spank" him with it.



Author's Response:

Wait for it...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 2:36 PM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

Grandpa: Tess, does anybody else know?

Tess: Janine Lindholm, Carolina Lindholm, Jessica Lindholm, Miss Addison, Sam, Cassidy Lane and Katie Harwood, all of whom have had sex with him at his current size, and a lawyer doesn't know about him but is now laying the legal foundation for de facto ownership of a shrunken person, and now I'm thinking about shrinking and effectively enslaving another man for my own sexual pleasure, and...Grandpa? Are you all right?



Author's Response:

Garndpa: Funny that you should ask that...

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 11:46 AM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

Amazing chapter!

Katie's attitude radiates kind of dominance (which I find very erotic). And although Tom is attracted to Katie he gets a little nervous when she expresses her power a bit - I like that moment very much!

So now she is going to use him as her sextoy. I hope she will have a lot of fun :-).And I am looking forward to every aspect of it. Growing erotic tension and then satisfying her sexual needs by dominating Tom and using him for her pleasure and amusement. And how Tom will be willing to serve her and at the same time he will be sometimes nervous. And how he will get sometimes a bit more as he would desire - but not too much - just to push his submissive buttons a bit further and extend his limits :-)

I think it would be appropriate if Tom is requested to stay respectful to his teacher and address her Miss Harwood instead of Katie ;) Even if she uses him as her ass-kandy; just his head exposed from her anus. (I just love that term you introduced in Michael story.)

I cannot wait how this continues. Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 8:24 AM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

more please!
amazing story!
Only there ..... he does not lose tom he he !!
the tom will be an adult it can successfully work as a gynecologist ?!




Author's Response:

We are still a ways from ending this tale I fear...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 7:15 AM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

You've got me panting with anticipation over the next chapter.

*Pant! Pant! Pant! Pant!*

And when's the last time anybody got two pairs of "pants" for free?

Author's Response:

You, my learned friend are a pant-a-loon!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2016 6:40 PM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

Oh my gosh! I'm crying tears of joy! This is really happening! Miss Harwood going to spend some time with Tom for the night?!! Yes! Thank you!

And let's just start with her attitude. I love it. It hints at dominance, something Janine always had, Cassidy kinda had and what Lina barely had. Also, I bet she is not as cruel as Janine which makes this completely sexy. I hope she is naughty, big time. I hope she uses her body to dominate him, educate him about the female body as a teacher and perhaps teach him some sexy yoga poses.

I also liked the little fear in Tom's eyes as Katie gets assertive. Also, his smile affects Katie, but doesn't seduce her like the other women. It's exactly what Miss Harwood said, his smile won't save him now.

I hope the intro will be like "Tom, you have been a very.....very.........very bad boy...(she smiles). And I'm gonna....(she starts stripping) teach you a lesson...in detention. And it won't last 1 hour. No, sweety. (She chuckles). Detention with me all night! (She pounces on Tom, and he gasps).

Seriously, doesn't that sound awesome. I e had my fair share of hot teachers, and I would say I would love to be in Tom's position right now.

Next we got the threesome coming up tomorrow. Duggernaut, you and I both know that this is what you did best in your first few stories. I hope it's what I think it is.

Whoa what? Miss Harwood talked to Tess that same day? You mean that chapter a while back was during the same day? Wow! That means Cassidy and Tom went at it like 7 times today. Amazing! (Maybe Katie might break that record.)

Man, do I love fancy women with big words. It gives off that feeling that she is special and Moss Harwood definatly is no joke. She is the real deal and I bet Tom is even intimidated by her.

I really, really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I have almost scripted the next chapter for tom and Miss Harwood, I don't know if you're ready for it Tom. For some reason I went a little off track with our very sexy teacher....

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2016 7:38 AM Title: Katie

One shrunken horny teenager plus two tantric yogi giantesses equals...

...endless possibilities. ;-D

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2016 12:26 AM Title: Katie

This is sooo hot. Please provide the next chapter ASAP :-)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2016 5:29 PM Title: Katie

The suspense is killing me!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 9:15 AM Title: The Wind Up

P.S.---recruiting Jessica to spirit Tom away, to her college sorority house, might be one way to give Serena extra-time to come up with a viable plan of "custodial adoption."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 9:13 AM Title: The Wind Up

Well, at least you proved Tom Speedy's prediction to be half-wrong (lol!).

Seriously, though: I like how the Lindholms mother-and-daughter have formed an alliance of convenience. Correctly anticipating that Tess will break her promise to Tom for his own "good." And, I have to admit...

...I'm rooting for Lina and Janine.

Author's Response:

Each is formidible in her own right, together, oho

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 7:29 PM Title: The Wind Up

I never thought that this tale would go on so long! Not that I would ever object. For me, this is the perfect mix... a fascinating story with lots of sexually related activities.

Keep up the good work!

BTW: Is Michael's Story going to be similar in length?



Author's Response:

I'm too am surprised at the following this story has garnered, delightfully so. thanks for the props. As for Michael's Story, I am honestly unsure of how much further to take that story. Unfortunately one of my biggest weaknesses is I write myself into a corner and then loose focus on a story, (as evidenced by a half dozen unfinished sotires I still have.) That said, I still do have a few ideas for Michael yet.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 7:09 PM Title: The Wind Up

First of all, I was so dissapointed that this wasn't a Tom vs Miss Harwood chapter. I mean, you keep teasing me with this stuff. (I bet next chapter is like Katie driving and thinking about Cassidy and her boyfriend. Lol.)

Although I was initially dissapointed, it actually was pretty good overall.

Yay, Francis is going away so now Lina can come out and play!

Love the detail about Lina getting ready for her bath. Just these details show how elegant and worthy of a woman she is.

I also enjoyed how Lina was in charge of this scene and the conversation. She decided on the plan and refuted Janine's plans despite how successful Janine was in the past.

I can't wait for them both to go visit Tom. (I bet Cassidy will feel jealous of Lina's beauty too.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 12:37 PM Title: Tom's Story

@HectorVanDyne: Unless she (Tom's mom) turns out to be like the selfish mother in the Asukafan classic; CAMP CAMPERS.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2016 9:05 AM Title: Truly Hot for Teacher

She may forget where is the tom, or do not have time to pull it out?
She may wish to keep him inside yourself (a safe place)?

 

Reportedly say the small size ... it is bad? hehe

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2016 12:16 AM Title: Truly Hot for Teacher

Wow, what a story! I like how Cassidy is getting more dominant with her toy. She is beautifully creative always finding new ways to use him :-)
I also like very much that 'ignoring him' aspect. I mean, after her orgasm just leaving him there and relaxing or cleaning herslf while completely ignoring his discomfort. Which just emphasize her dominance :-) I am really looking forward to Miss Harwood. Cassidy and Miss Harwood could share Tom and dominate him together. I would love to see some light bondage scene when they use Tom. I can't wait how this continues. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2016 9:36 AM Title: Truly Hot for Teacher

English translation: Round 6-going-on-7???!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2016 9:35 AM Title: Truly Hot for Teacher

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Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2016 7:15 AM Title: Truly Hot for Teacher

please more!
this is great!

Tom Good job!
Cassidy let him keep as long as possible inside.
I'm curious how it looked from the perspective of Tom's of this event (orgasm Cassidy).
if the tom is very deep inside Cassidy?

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