[Report This]Date: February 10 2016 9:17 PM Title: One Thing Leads to Another
Resist! RESIST! Break the stereotype and don't let him have his way.
So glad I'm first reviewer, again. ;-)
[Report This]Date: February 09 2016 12:29 PM Title: Mi Casa et Su Casa
I'm loving where this story is going, I hope the nurse shove the little Tom in her vagina like Lina did, but let him inside there for a long time, since Tom didn't injured himself when he was inside Lina's vagina
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and the input. Cassidy's second round with Tom might be more aligned with your thoughts...:)
Date: February 07 2016 9:25 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Cary, there is very little of it, you could just close your eyes during those parts because Im sure you would LOVE the rest of it. ;)
But back to Jessica, I'll be happy even if its just her that gets a hold of Tom for a little one on one fun. I want to know what kind of giantess she is!
Date: February 06 2016 6:47 PM Title: Mi Casa et Su Casa
I haven't read "Michael's Story," Max. And, frankly, I'm never likely to as I'm unalterably opposed to representation of the I-word in giantess stories Or, at least, depiction of it among mere mortals!
That being said, I have no way to confirm or dispute your assessment. Therefore, only the next chapter will answer our respective questions with any satisfaction.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2016 12:42 PM Title: Mi Casa et Su Casa
I like Cassidy, nice character, I guess this means Ill have to endure some gentle action though, lol, can't always be rough I suppose :)
I have to concur with Cary, wonder if there will be some sorority action coming soon, Jess definitely wants him, whisked away to college perhaps. Not sure though, might parallel Michaels story too much.
Great stuff!
[Report This]Date: February 05 2016 10:31 PM Title: Mi Casa et Su Casa
While I like Carycomic's idea, I have seen people write about that movie way too many times now.
I like the Wonder Woman/atom combo. Also, the cat woman, shrunken robin or batman one. Even something like monsters vs aliens has some good stuff there.
I bet the movie scene won't even be covered that much. I bet it's what happens after the movie that we should look forward to.
I was thinking that Cassie falls asleep and Tom goes exploring. Cassidy pretends to be asleep as Tom pleasures her. Cassexy struggles to contain her excitement, but conceals it enough so Tom won't notice. Tom then gets out of Cassidy's pants and sleeps next to her. Cassidy falls asleep too.
Cassie wakes up and wonders where Tom is. She feels something between her legs and under her butt and thinks that Tom is naughty and decided to sleep under her. She reaches down and pulls out the tv remote. She laughs at herself and clears her eyes to look for Tom again.
She notices Tom next to her and he looks back st her smiling. He states that he can much better than a remote. Cassidy tells him that she knows what he did to her last night. Tom nervously chuckles and suggests that the remote gave her some interesting dreams. Cassidy denies such dreams and confirms Tom's deeds the night before by taking a long shift of him. She smiles a big smile, and Tom flashed his grin back at her.
Cassidy grabs Tom and takes him upstairs. She lets Tom pleasure her and decides to take him to work with her since Tom is feeling better.
Tom couldn't agree more, and the two have a lovely day.
That's my prediction.
Also, I still don't get why Tess smiled about suggesting Jess. I'm not sure why it's going to bring a smile to Tess's face. It still excites me though.
In addition, I agree with Tom. If I'm dating an 18 yr old and I hear about an older sister, I'm thinking if she is hot too. Typical Tom right now.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 05 2016 8:38 PM Title: Mi Casa et Su Casa
A move night, huh? They could make it a vintage sci-fi double bill. The original ATTACK OF THE FIFTY FOOT WOMAN. Followed by THE INCREDIBLE SHRINKING MAN!
Seriously, though: the only thing nicer than being first reviewer for this chapter is your--thus far--infallible posting of new chapters, in general. Bravo!!!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2016 4:04 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers
I saw you post Nefarious Nine and I assumed that that was the only story you uploaded yesterday. Turns out all 4 were uploaded. Now I'm late to the party.
I'm still not exactly sure what happened during this chapter that we already didn't know.
A few chapters back, Lina asked for Cassidy's personal information. It's no surprise that Lina has it. I'm just surprised that that was the cliffhanger of the chapter. Is it a cliffhanger? I thought we already knew that.
What good does Cassidy's Lane's info do for Lina? Cassidy is nice enough that she can return Tom. Even Tess knows Cassidy's adress which means she is open to let them see Tom. I'm sure if Lina just wants Tom, she could just ask.
Also, we know Jess is curious about Tom. Lina just gave her more reasons to want Tom. Mostly sexual reasons and she talks like some prophecy witch. Inner goddess? I did not expect Lina to say all this stuff. I was expecting more like "Tom made me fall in love again ever since I set my eyes on Francis" or something touching like that.
The spiritual talk isn't really the best idea to convince a college aged daughter about something.
Yeah, it looks like Jess will have some time with Tom. I doubt he will be taken with her to college. Tom belongs in this town with Tess, Janine, and Lina.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi Tom, I got called away after the Nefarious 9 post and couldnt get back til later. This chapter was about tying up some ends and presenting Tom in a new light as the catalyst for awakening desire, hunger, power, etc. Jess is certainly getting the urge to find out for herself what all the fuss is about. It has yet to written, but it will unfold as it is meant to...
[Report This]Date: February 04 2016 12:43 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers
Hoo-boy! Over-cliched or not,Tom may wind up meeting Jessica's sorortiy sisters, yet! :-(
Author's Response:
A forest fire can start with a single match match...
Date: February 03 2016 10:32 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers
Yikes, Lina isn't as pacifist as I once thought, my impression of her has changed a lot with this chapter, I can kind of see where Janine gets it from, although I doubt she's as heartless as her daughter...
Author's Response:
Lina is definitely capable, but bound by a morality and scruples Janine has yet to develop. What might she have been like at eighteen?
[Report This]Date: February 03 2016 10:00 PM Title: Ruffled Feathers
Ok, that whole conversation had me cringing, I mean, I'm not a mother and don't have a daughter but that seemed just a little too cavalier. But, then again, the Lindholm family isn't a normal family. ;)
I like how curious Jessica is getting, wonder what her inner Goddess is!
Clever of Lina explaining the problems that Tess will encounter trying to house her brother but one thing she doesn't know about is the grandfather and the possibility of Tom being regrown. What lengths will Lina go to then if she learns of that possibility. She's developed quite an obsession with little Tom.
Author's Response:
The Lindholm's are certainly not your average run of the mill bunch. If Lina finds out there may be a possibility of restoration for Tom, will she become more aggressive in her desire? We shall see...
[Report This]Date: January 30 2016 6:39 PM Title: Tess
Who knows Tess? If it's "new and novel" enough, maybe even your brother's speedy namesake will love it! ;-)
Date: January 30 2016 6:36 PM Title: Tess
Duggernaut, forgot to comment on your post about getting too involved. Its not. I like how you keep us guessing, never knowing if a character you introduce will play a big part or just misdirection.
And its always curious to see what kind of Giantess they will be, like Jessica, most interested in her ;)
Really, the only 2 people to have Tom so far has been Lina and Janine. Sam played with him once, Addison had him briefly and now Cassidy. Doesnt seem to involved to me. I think the two main antagonists will continue to be Lina and Janine with 2 wild cards, Sam and Jessica, whom may surprise us. I don't think Cassidy is going to have an ongoing part in the story, just a hunch.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input Maximus. My only intent is to try and keep this story engaging enough that readers enjoys reading it. i know in another of my stories, it exploded with characters and got all hazy and difficult to write.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2016 5:14 PM Title: Tess
Wow, another update!
Since Tess already has the address and knows that Cassidy is a good person, why is Lina still doing this detective work? Is she doing something that is irrelevant to Cassidy or what? I'm curious about her intentions.
Why did Tess frown when she saw Cassidy? So what if she's beautiful? I don't get why it made her frown.
Tom said that some of his bruises were from Janine. Where did the other bruises come from? Miss Addison, the accident? I'm curious about that as well.
I'm pretty sure Tom wants to stay with Cassidy becuase she seems gentle like Lina, and as a bonus, there is no threat like Janine nearby.
Jessica really wants to see Tom. She's the only women who hasn't seen Tom yet. (Funny, how no men in this story saw Tom yet. I'd like to keep it this way.)
Will Cassidy be next on the Tom's to do list? Will Tom be Cassidy's next patient? Seems like we will find out soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 30 2016 1:35 PM Title: Tess
Really love how you wrote the parts with Cassidy, adds a touch of realism to the story. Now you can get into how things unfold with Tom and Cassidy in a realistic manner after putting Toms family at ease. What that entails is anyones guess but looking forward to it!
Although, not sure how long he will be with Cassidy, looks like Lina is planning a little kidnapping of her own, ha, little, get it get it.
And Jessica wants in on it now too! Find out what kind of giantess she is, quite the family they are :)
[Report This]Date: January 29 2016 9:22 PM Title: Phoning Home
It's probably a good thing that Tom had that phone call with his mother. I mean, it seems like she was already planning/thinking of visiting her kids, so it's better that Tom got a head's up.
I do wonder what her reaction will. Who knows? It might be a blessing in disguised for Tom. She does seem to love and care for her son, i think Tess might have given her too little credit in thinking she'd let him be a experimented on.
[Report This]Date: January 29 2016 10:27 AM Title: Phoning Home
And, while there may not be many American woman named "Raphaella," the Italian version of the name (with two f's) has been around a long time. For example: Raffaella Carra (Italian singer/actress/hostess); Raffaella DiLaurentis (movie-producing daughter of the legendary Dino); and Raffaella Modugno (former "Miss Curvy Italy!").
Author's Response:
Thanks for the information. I chose the ph as opposed to ff just because. We learn early Tom's mother is indeed Italian . Good job. Raphaella Spence is out of the UK.
Date: January 29 2016 10:18 AM Title: Phoning Home
Hence, the adverb "retroactively," Tom.
;-)
[Report This]Date: January 29 2016 3:00 AM Title: Phoning Home
Now, as promised, my review post chapter fix.
First of all, Raphaella? I never heard of a woman named that. It's like they combined Raphael and Cinderella to make Raphaella.
Second, how did Raphaella's name pop up on Cassexy's phone? Shouldn't a number pop up instead?
Third, the way his mom keeps calling Tom a baby and tiny, I bet is making Cassisdy feel like she is taking care of a little baby. Trying to get him food, comfort, can't do anything on his own, and so on.
Next, is this whole mom incident necessary? The dilemmas and problems just keep piling up. A character gets introduced like every 3 chapters now. I envisioned this story to be just Tom, Janine and Lina. Now we got Tess's roommate, Miss Addison, the grandpa, Francis, Jessica, Cassidy, and now Tom's mom.
Now it feels like the "Adventures of Tom" with his many giantesses. He is just getting passed from one woman to the next. I wonder when it will return to the Lindholm house and Tom has to deal with the Janine/Lina duet. I miss that. Hopefully, Cassexy is the key for a reunion.
Since Raphaella mentioned having protection, does this imply that they are going to have some fun in the next few chapters? I hope so, even Tom's mom approves! Tom is 18 and Cassidy is 27. Boy, Tom keeps getting lucky.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hmm. Perhaps I am over complicating this story. It was mentioned a while ago and maybe it's time. Not sure. It was my intent to try and keep this interesting but if it's getting too involved...
Date: January 29 2016 2:35 AM Title: Phoning Home
@Carycomic,
Ha! Actually I was first this time, but Duggernaut had an issue where 2 chapters of chapter 58 were posted, and when he solved it, my review was deleted along with it.