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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 8:13 PM Title: Tess

Lucky pen tip. (What if a super tiny person was in that tip?) :)

I'm sure Tess would be a fascinating giantess. I just don't think her using Tom as a toy would be right for this story. Tess has to find someone or something new to play with.

Hmm, so Tess and Tom's mom will be showing up, huh. Well, the good news is that I can see a way to get Tom to Miss Harwood. Their mom would be strict about keep Tom with her and soon she will need a private tutor and Miss Harwood would be perfect for Tom. (I hope I'm right.)

Back to back chapters about two teenage girls thinking about Tom and getting horny. Next chapter might be another girl getting horny. Except this time it's probably a woman. (Lina or Cassidy.) a chapter for Lina thinking of Tom would be nice.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know. Interesting if the cap of the pen dud have someone ultra tiny or ant sized. Probably drown I suppose. We shall see what's next in store for our tiny protagonist suffice to say i know you will approve. Next chapter very soon

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 1:07 AM Title: Janine

Hm, it would be very difficult for Janine to get Tom. Everybody is going to suspect her if Tom disappears. The only chance is to manipulate somehow Tom so that he wants to go to her but I do not think she can succeed.
Therefore I do not think she is going to get him soon. I think important person will be Tom's mother. On one side she looks busy so she cannot take care of him herself. But on the other side she wants the best for her son. So she can give her son to anybody she believes it is the best for her son ;-) E.g. to some teacher (Miss Addison?) so that Tom can continue in his studies. But she also can decide to leave Tom by Cassidy to ensure he gets a medical attention he may need in his condition. I would prefer Cassidy or Lina and if the relationship evolves in D/s direction. 



Author's Response:

I have long maitained never ever count Janine out. Ever. Things are about to heat up soon enough

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2016 9:24 AM Title: Janine

Well, then, either Janine's pituitary system has literally been empowered by her time with Our Little Hero. Or, Duggernaut has simply (GASP!) goofed.

;-D

Author's Response:

Tom's discontent stems from the fact Janine is taller than her mother. Has been from the beginning of the story. It seems thematic that I've typically made children taller than their parental counterparts. I suppose I've modeled it after my own family. Dad 6'3" me 6'5" little brother 6'7". 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 6:56 PM Title: Janine

@TomSpeedy: Janine could be wearing high heels.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 6:55 PM Title: Janine

Yes, Janine, by all means; control your inner volcano. After all, there's nothing worse than premature eruption!

[Oh, come on. You had to know SOMEONE was going to use that joke!]

Seriously, though: Janine maybe underestimating her older sister. If she's anything like the other two Lindholm women, she's probably better at scheming than most non-Lindholms give her credit for. By that I mean, adept at luring others into a false sense of security. Of course, only the next chapter will answer that question, yay or nay. So, I'll see you at chapter 76.*

* "That's the spirit!" ;-)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 5:40 PM Title: Janine

Right now I think Lina's the most likely to win. If Serena does figure out how to give her legal custody of Tom, then I'm not sure what the others can do to fight that. That would also force Tom's mother to become aware of the situation, as she'd have to find out that she no longer has legal custody of her own son.



Author's Response:

So many possibilities...  ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 5:34 PM Title: Janine

I don't know why, but I just don't like how the younger Janine is taller than Jess and Lina. I feel like Lina should be the tallest and Jess should be next. I guess I just like older women to be taller, I guess.

Janine seriously thinks that Tom wants him becuase of that wink? Haha! I bet Tom's wink was more of a "Hey beautiful, remember me? Yeah, enjoy looking at me while you can princess." I'm pretty sure Tom doesn't want to go back with Janine. If she does get her hands on him, I bet Tom will fear for his life.

By healing, does that mean a part 5 of Cassidy vs Tom is coming up? Some healing from the pretty nurse always helps.

I'm really curious about Lina's thoughts on getting Tom back. We got a lot from Cassidy, Janine and Jess, but I want to know about Lina's strategy and how she will play with Tom.

If Tom is just going to stay with Cassidy, maybe a certain teacher can, let's say, pick him up and give him some private lessons. Hehe, since he won't be going to school for sometime. Unless, Cassidy hires some teacher to take Tom to school and that teacher can hide him you know where and give him detention everyday.

Ok, I just can't stop thinking of Miss Harwood. She is bound to make appearance soon, and I just can't help thinking about it.

While we wait for that, I prefect part 5 of fun is coming up next.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

We already know Tom is drawn to Janine. In the first chapter he states it's his destiny to wind up in her panties. There is certainly a bond there destructive as it may be. Eben if the wink was intended to tease he was sending her a message. The question is how does Cass feel about it?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2016 7:18 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

@TomSpeedy: Only in the strictest masochistic sense, though.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 4:46 PM Title: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: How has thongs been pleasant for?  He's been hurt by several of these women, especially Janine, it's why Tess wants to inform their mother and she's right to want to tell her.

 

The only people Tom has had mutually pleasant time with has been Cassidy and Tess's room mate. Technically Janine's mom, but now it seems she has sinister motives.



Author's Response:

You're right in that Tess’s conern for Tom is what'd prompting her to tell their mother. Tom's self destructive behavior is making it harder for her to keep him safe. At some point there has been some pleasure in each of his encunter but by the same token there has also been elements of pain. 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 4:37 PM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

I think they will not be able to hide it in front of mom. The school will contact her anyway asking why Tom is not in the school - especially Miss Addison who knows about Tom may try to revenge and contact Tom's mom asking why he is not in the school ;-)

Janine was always the most creative to get Tom. So I am curious what is her cunning plan to relief her 'physical ache of want between her thighs' :-)

Btw: it is admirable performance from you to be able to write two excellent stories in parallel. Thanks.

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 10:49 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

I might have guessed this, in an earlier review. But, I think Janine will try to bribe Cassidy into coming to work for her...as Tom's "private" nurse. As for Mrs. Wentworth's alleged over-protectiveness? Tom might not be exaggerating, all that much. When it comes to injured only sons, some mothers can over-compensate faster than Donald Trump can say "George W. Bush _bought_ his first term as President!"

By the same token, Tess might not be exaggerating, either, when she claims that Mrs. Wentworth might make her the scapegoat. Indeed, Tess seems to be thinking like her mother, already! What with her half-serious consideration of betraying her brother's blind faith in her for his own "good." *

*I won't say "trust" as way too many people mistakenly think those two words are synonymous. Whereas, in truth, "faith" is what's offered automatically, if not unconditionally. While trust, like respect, has to be _earned_ before it's given.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 10:06 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

That makes sense, though the way he was refusing to let his mother know made it seem like he didn't like her, but i'm guessing that's not the case, he just wants his freedom.

Anyway, i do hope Tess tells their mother, especially since people are already planning on taking him away and they probably will need her help and i get the feeling their mother can come up with a better cover story for Tom's "absence".

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 1:46 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

Tom not wanting his mother to find out is starting to seem illogical at this point, especially since he probably would be safer then her. 

 

Plus their mother is a scientist, for all he knows she could probably find a way to reverse his condition if he knew.



Author's Response:

There is presumably no safer place for Tom. Tess knows it Cassidy knows it and even Tom knows it. But Tom also knows if he is with her all of the adventures he has been having will be at an end which is why he is protesting so strongly against it. Despite some of what hes been through he still wamts to play while waiting to get restored. Tom's mother is an Italian fashion model and his father is a businessman.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2016 7:19 PM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

Does this mean that Janine is going to bribe Cassidy for Tom?

I just can't see Cassidy giving Tom away like that. Cassidy is even jealous and taking money from her makes Cassidy look even worse. I don't think it will work out.

Yes, please don't tell their mother. The story is already so complicated.

Enough discussions and lets get to part 5. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  1. Janine wants Tom and she is exploring ways to make it happen. Can Cass be bribed?  Not sure. If Tom is still with Cassidy in the next few chapters there may yet be a part 5

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2016 5:28 PM Title: Cassidy's Apartment

Man! I just loved chapter 71, how Cassidy was on control of Tom and use him in a dominant but gentle way and Tom like it, like he was born to be her sex toy for all life, seriously Cassidy deserve to have Tom only for herself for now on, hope Tom stay for like a month or two "or even more time" in Cassidy's apartament so they can have fun all day like in the chapter 71 or chapter 65 when she shove him all the way in her vagina, I just hope Janine don't steal Tom from Cassidy, is not that I don't like Janine...but it's just that Tom and Cassidy are the best combination in my opinion ^^



Author's Response:

The consensus session to suggest Cassidy is the best fit for Tom but there are still others with am interest in having him. Should be interesting when things start heating up

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 1:18 PM Title: Serena and Lina

interesting
please more



Author's Response:

As you wish

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 9:36 AM Title: Serena and Lina

There is really something sexy about the idea Lina legally "owns" Tom.
Although it will be difficult since Tom has relatives (sister and mother). But who knows ;-).



Author's Response:

Guardianship may be possible but you're right Tom's immediate family may have something to say about it. Hence the lawyer ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 9:14 AM Title: Serena and Lina

I knew it. I knew it! I KNEW IT!

:-)

Author's Response:

Yep

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 4:51 AM Title: Serena and Lina

I knew Lina was my favorite for a reason, hahaha.
Really love how this story has progressed and cannot wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Lina's character continues to evolve and we get a deeper understanding of who she is and how Janine was shaped and like her youngest daughter she hasn't given up the notion of spending more time with Tom

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2016 8:15 PM Title: Serena and Lina

I always wanted Tom to end up with Lina. But this...wow! I mean, she actually wants to take him under her wing.

I totally approve of this, don't get me wrong. I just expected more like a secret relationship instead.

Also, there is something sexy about the thought of Lina "owning" Tom. I mean, by law, he is forced to be with her since she is the one going to be "caring" for him. I bet Lina will take care of Tom just fine.

This is what Serena should be told. (Serena, Tom is just Janine's boyfriend, that's basically all that you need to know. His profile online shows his popularity among the women and that's probably why Cassidy knows him. Also, since Janine and Tom are in a relationship, it's why Lina has Tess's number, becuase Tess is more mature and responsible that Tom.) Can't Lina just say something like that.

If Lina decides that she is going to be the new caretaker of Tom, Miss Harwood could be the new teacher by law for him. What I mean, is that what if Miss Harwood is does some legal thing to be a teacher specialized to teach Tom everything from physical education to sex ed. :)

So many good ideas developing from this chapter. Especially about this "owning" Tom thing. Seriously, good word choice. I love how she used that term, it gives me other ideas.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you approve thigh there may be obstacles to see this through. We shall see what the lovely miss hall can discover to see if this is feasible 

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