[Report This]Date: August 12 2017 7:54 AM Title: Homecoming
Home "coming" (lol!).
Love that title.
Author's Response:
Purely accidental... I swear ;)
[Report This]Date: August 11 2017 9:15 PM Title: Homecoming
Woo hoo! Party at Janine's place! Again!
It's really great to see these two get together fianally. Ya gotta love love. Super romantic and sexy...what a great scene.
Awesome payoff Duggernaut. Worth the wait.
pix
Author's Response:
After all the things that have happened in this story it harkens back to chapter one when Tom says he's fated to be with her well in her panties anyway
[Report This]Date: August 04 2017 4:20 AM Title: Back to Normal...
Hmm. I was thinking that since Tom is most likely going to have fun with Janine soon, the dream could have been about Miss Harwood.
If that was me, that's what the dream would be about. Miss Harwood is number one, then Janine is probably next. Lina and Cassidy are up there too. Not to mention that new woman on the plane earlier. But Miss Harwood is at the top for me, and I'm thinking that hopefully Tom gets a dream with Katie, or maybe meet her.
Well, I guess it makes since these two were sexting each other.
With the plane ride being so long, are Lina and Tom going to fuck on the plane? Lina explained how she couldn't go after him like she used to, it since Janine is not there, and they have nothing to do, I'm thinking why not.
Good point about being claustrophobic. When you are shrunk, there is all this space around you. Then as a normal person, you feel restricted, less freedom and it doesn't help to be on a small plane too.
That doctor wanted to "study" him some more. Yeah, we all know what she was thinking.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 7:22 PM Title: Back to Normal...
Whoa! I don't think there's ever been a Mile High Club with only a...single member. ;-)
Welcome back from summer vacation, Dug. And thanks for the arousing new chapter.
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 6:57 PM Title: Back to Normal...
Dang! I hope Tom hasn't joined the messed up for life club.
If dream Janine is like that, what is the real deal gonna deliver?
Good stuff Duggernaut. Thanks for sharing this.
pix
Date: August 02 2017 12:53 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory
This feels like a good climax, so I think the best thing to do now would be to write the denouement and epilogue. Anything else can go into a spin-off.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2017 1:39 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory
Whoa! Not so fast! While Tom may have grown back, I'm not ready for that. I want him tiny again. Hopefully someone created another version of Tom Sr's invention.
Also, we need a Katie Harwood reunion before this is all said and done. Hopefully, Tom gets tiny in her hands.
With Mrs. Green in the picture, I would love to hear more teases from her too. She should meet Miss Harwood and talk about Tom.
How is Tom Sr doing? Did he make a tiny portable shrink ray? While the story seems to be going to end on a good note, I also want it to end it on a sexy note as well. That's what I would envision how Tom's story would end.
We still need those 1000 reviews too. Maybe a few more chapters could achieve this goal. Sex sells, more fun with Tom and more people will love it. The question is how will the fun transition to the end.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 26 2017 10:28 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory
Whew! What a cliff-hanger!
I especially agree with that last sentence, whole-heartedly. The question is: will he get that sleep?
[Report This]Date: July 26 2017 7:08 PM Title: Back in Friendly Territory
Oh my gosh! I can't believe how relieved I am. Tom is restored and now we can see how he's grown as a person, yes I went there. But really, that's what it has always been about as I've read this. The characters have really made this piece and Tom's situation has been a fascinating catalyst for change and for revelation. I really want to see what happens now.
Awesome work Duggernaut.
pix
Date: July 22 2017 8:01 AM Title: Snatched
Very good long running story. Long time reader and this is my first post. I have a plot suggestion for the story. When Mrs. Green and Tom land at the airport they are intercepted by crooked airport security and customs agents who have been tipped off, and paid off by the Russians. Knowing that she is going to be detained for several hours, have her belongings confiscated and searched, stripped nude, and even cavity searched, Mrs. Green takes a drastic measure to smuggle Tom into the country. She takes out a minitature atmospheric diving suit puts Tom into it it and swallows him. Those diving suits can withstand extreme pressure and have enough air to last almost 2 days. She smuggles him back almost like a drug mule, by swallowing him and having him pass through her body. Meanwhile we get things from Tom's perspective as he goes on his "fantastic voyage" through her digestive system unharmed. He's been on, and inserted in, women's bodies, now he gets to go through one.
It's an interesting concept, Tom has been swallowed by women twice so far in the story, not staying in the stomach for long, and even anally inserted several times. With a scenario like this he can get swallowed, spent a long inside her, go through her, and not die, while being smuggled in on his way to freedom in the one place the bad guys can't check. The suit could also be used in later chapters for protection for kinky play since he would probably be allowed to keep it since it factor into the paid for expenses of retrieving him.
Author's Response:
A very very interesting concept...
[Report This]Date: July 18 2017 1:23 AM Title: Snatched
One of the hottest teasing chapters in this story!
This woman has perfect flirtation game! It's on point and relentless. She throws all these jokes/references and teases him all at the same time. I don't know any of these references, but they seem very clever to make Tom even feel outmatched.
Is this Mrs. Smith or Mrs. Green? Felt like 1 woman with 2 names. Maybe I missed soemthing? You changed the name halfway thru.
This woman talks dirty and I love how she was first making it clear that she wasn't interested in him, and then slowly shared her thoughts to Tom about maybe reconsidering. I love it when woman think about stuff like this. Either they say it aloud like this, or it's mentioned what they are thinking.
Even though it's been about 1 chapter, this woman is arguably my 2nd favorite giantess. She is basically a female version of Tom. She seems horny and makes teasing jokes that are great for flirting. And she talks dirty!
All alone on a private jet. Mile high club anyone? This scene can easily lead to something erotic.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Sorry about the Mrs. Green/Mrs. Smith thing. I had origianlly had Hedy with a different last name, but changed it. I have since fixed it. Mrs. Green is very playful, thought you might like her!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2017 8:57 PM Title: Snatched
Miss Smith has some style. I like her even more now. She has a natural bit of curiousity and Tom didn't really give her the full Tom Treatment, but she didn't dive on him like (insert hungry cat reference here.)
Of course, story's not over yet...heh heh.
Nice stuff Duggernaut, we really get a look at Tom's level of fatigue without him really getting his victim on. He's the Rocky of living sex toys.
Thanks Duggernaut,
pix
[Report This]Date: July 17 2017 8:42 PM Title: Snatched
Next chapter: "The Vagina Dialogue."
Sorry! Couldn't resist. ;-D
[Report This]Date: July 06 2017 9:16 PM Title: Ekaterina
Hmm. I think this is the spy. Being a short woman may make others think she is no threat.
I think this woman pretended to be still and surprise! She knocked him out and is planning on escaping with him.
Her curiosity story to me is just an act. She wants Tom weak, vulnerable and for him to trust her.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 06 2017 9:15 PM Title: Ekaterina
To paraphrase the Go-Gos:
"Her lips are sealed."
[Report This]Date: July 06 2017 5:18 PM Title: Ekaterina
Ekaterina seems genuinely sweet. What a refeshing, surprising character.
I love body exploration, so of course I like her. And this the real deal. Tom's ability to look deeper at people makes for a lovely perspective of the whole encounter. Inspite of her vast physical adavantage he is moved to tenderness and .....
Wait! What happened? Hey! Oh my freakin god!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2017 9:10 PM Title: Tit for Tat
To paraphrase a certain old folk song:
"When will he ever learn? When will Tom eveeeeeeeer learn?"
Author's Response:
Probably not, but who knows...
[Report This]Date: June 24 2017 12:37 PM Title: Tit for Tat
I love this woman's authority. She has fun with Tom's words but also has the last word.
I can't believe he called her white meat!! Lol!
Not much else to say that struck me this chapter. It was a nice exposition-like chapter with good info.
I'm not sure but I think I'm starting to like Antastatia a bit more.
Author's Response:
Tom, if anything is a sassy little bugger, literally I guess.
[Report This]Date: June 24 2017 11:14 AM Title: Tit for Tat
Ya gotta wonder, is there some side effect to Tom Sr's gadget that makes the subject like super desirable. Knowing Grandpa, that was probably the original intent. Now he's just gotta find a way to make it work without the shrinking. Or maybe not.
Alright, we've been all set up for the battle of the century: Nasty Anastasia VS. Hedy H-Bomb Smith. Who will win and claim their tiny prize?
Of course it might be a mistake to just view Tom as a pawn in this game. He's gotten really good at this being tiny stuff. Also, he know's there are some impressive reasources being brought up on his side. He probably know's the smart move is to wait and watch and learn awhile, cuz help has got to be coming.
I kinda hope there's a nicer outcome for poor Natalya. She at least was nice to him and looks to be a victim in all this.
Super cool chapter Duggernaut, and a great, cheeky title by the way. Oh,wait, I should save "cheeky" for a chapter with more butts.
Thanks,
pix
Author's Response:
Grandpa is a bit of a horn dog, so maybe he did it on purpose, or maybe tom junior just has that je ne sais quoi, either way, he is certainly an X factor.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2017 1:26 AM Title: The Finder of Lost Sheep
"The finder of lost sheep." Usually this would be a good title, but it feels so lame compared to this brilliant chapter! I suggest a more exciting title: (Mission Tompossible!) (I think I mentioned this title before. Could be a great time to use it.)
Never would I thought that a chapter filled with dialogue would completely entrance me compared to some sexy chapter. This was brilliant writing! Felt like the script to a heist scene.
Speaking of writing, especially with so much dialogue, I could help but notice that there were at least 5 instances where you mentioned "inquired". Possibly six. I get that you were balancing the "asks, replied, shared" etc, but inquired is in that high vocabulary level and it stands out. I guess that's just my perspective.
Ok, how does Hedy know all of this? Did she find the Duggernaut notebook and is hiding the secrets? I feel like since we had no trace of how Antastasia got Tom, we are just willing to grasp onto any lead. Before Lina and Ella jump on this connection, I think they should verify this. Just becuase it sounds true, doesn't mean that it is.
Word of the day: Gigolo.
I never heard of it. First time hearing this word and I always wonder if there was a term for someone like this. I looked it up and found some interesting stuff. There is even a show based on this word!
Professional aquisitionalist to a thief. Here Duggernaut uses a character to explain what soemthing means to the audience. (I feel like I'm in a film class.) lol.
Haha! When Hedy was talking about her not just locating Tom, but also retrieving him, I couldn't help but think of those commercials that say they only monitor/locate problems but don't fix them.
Hedy should have said this:
"And the asset is....... Katie Harwood. With her cunning and stunning demeanor, Katie has been known for her art of seduction. She has posed as a famous lady within this close circle and is scheduled to meet with Tom soon. Since she has already met Tom, she won't be shocked at his small size like any other regular person. She will be focused on her mission and work efficiently, especially since I told her she can transport him by any means necessary. Katie is no ordinary teacher that you are all familiar with. She is a trained professional, as well as my friend. I trust her and you should trust her too. Perhaps, a reward for her services should be arranged. How should we show our gratitude to her?" Hedy looked at Lina and Ella. The two women looked at each other. Lina with a smirk and Ella shaking her head in disbelief. They knew what Katie wanted, they just didn't want to say it. "We will let you know." Lina replied to Hedy.
I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yep you've used Mission Tompossible before, but its okay. Glad you approve!